中考英语冲刺-作文课件(共27张PPT)

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中考英语作文快速提分
英语作文有多难？
难于上青天？！
初三学生英语作文调查问卷
1 :你的英语作文得分通常是：
A. ≥18 B.15~17 C.10~13 D.5~10 E.<10
2：你觉得英语作文
A. 难 B.还好 C.简单 D.很难 E.很简单
3：你最常用的句子有哪些？
As we all know，
It is +adj.+ for sb+ to do sth
if 条件句
I think...
so…that…
4：你最常用到的形容词有哪些？
beautiful wonderful good happy important
easy popular careful
5：你最常用的动词有哪些？
think learn help have be like love make
watch read know get play see
6：你最常用的的逻辑词是哪些？
优秀：Therefore, because, although, however, further more, In a word
中等：because , but, if, or , and, so , first, next , after ,then
7：你的作文中用到过名言警句吗？如果有，用过哪些？
有：Failure is the mother of success.
Good medicine tastes bad.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
Practice makes perfect.
Where there is a will , there is a way.
All roads lead to Rome.
8：你希望获得写作中哪些方面的帮助？
优秀：句型、易错点、结构
中等：句型、词汇、逻辑
稍差：句型、
内容：扣分制（8分）
1.记叙文：6w+时态
2.议论文：分清要求写的是How？还是Why？
语言：扣分制（8分）
1.拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。
2. 语法：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。
3.标点：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。
4.大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。
5.词数：50-59词之间者,每少5个词扣0.5分，词不成句不给分。
组织结构（4分）
8+8+3~4
8+7+2~3
7+7+1~2
6+6+0.5~1.5
6+5+0
分值分布
作文表达：
在娱乐和获取信息的方式多种多样的今天,我们还有必要阅读吗 书本会消失在人类历史发展的长河吗
开头第1句：开门见山，表明观点。
There’s no doubt that be one of the +a.最高级+n.复数+状语（毫无疑问…）
e.g. There’s no doubt that reading is one of the mostimportant things in the world.
There is no denying that + S. + V . (不可否认.... )
e.g. There is no denying that reading is one of the mostimportant things in the world.
第2句：简单明了，引出话题。
1.不用说…… It goes without saying that …
eg：It goes without saying that there is no end to learning
2. 我认为，In my opinion，
= From my point of view，
eg:From my point of view，reading can never disappear even though the society has developed so fast in recent years.
3. 我个人认为，As far as I am concerned, reading can never disappear with the fast development of society.
逻辑清晰，层次渐进。
正文
逻辑 过渡词
⑴排序关系 first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least,
⑵并列关系 and; too; as well as; along with; together with...
⑶举例关系 for example; for instance; like; such as，
⑷转折关系 but; however; while; though; on the contrary，
⑸因果关系 because; since; thanks to;
as a result ; thus; therefore，
⑹归纳总结 in a word; in short; to sum up; in conclusion,
⑺递进关系 as a consequence;what’s worse; worse still; furthermore；moreover；in addition
观点1，另辟蹊径。
First of all, 观点1（ ving 作主语）. 展开
First of all, reading gives us some places to go when we have to stay where we are. The more pages you read, the harder it is to shut the book.
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观点2，升华高度
What’s more, 观点2 （被动语态）. 展开
eg: What’s more,it's generally considered that reading do a lot of benefit to our students. it not only can make our after-school life more meaningful , but also it can expand our horizons. As a result, with reading more, we would grow into a better person.
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1
前后照应
万能呼应
结尾
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结尾第一句：To sum up, only by doing can we…
第二句：if everyone tries his best to do sth, the world
will become much more peaceful and harmonious.
化妆篇
技巧1：妙用形容词
技巧2：妙用副词
技巧3：妙用动词
技巧4：被动语态
技巧5： 妙用从句
技巧6：名言警句
技巧7：学霸句型
技巧1：妙用形容词
勤奋的 hard-working—diligent
聪明的clever—intelligent
重要的important—essential
美丽的beautiful—attractive
开心的happy—delightful
有害的bad—be harmful to
有意义的meaningful
独立的independent
有责任的responsible
有效果的effective
有效率的efficient
技巧2：妙用副词
几乎almost
尤其especially
立即immediately
宁静地peacefully
完全地completely
耐心地patiently
有效果地effectively
令我惊讶的是To my surprise
技巧3：妙用动词
知道know—come to realize/understand
解决solve—deal with
给give—provide with
提高improve—make progress
期待expect—look forward to doing sth.
能够can—be able to do sth
满意satisfy—be satisfied with
使用use—make full use of
扮演act—play an important part in
注意focus—pay attention to doing sth
做到succeed in doing sth
采取措施take measures to do sth
技巧4：被动语态
Some shop owners use Christmas songs during the festive season to make us more careless with our money.
=Christmas songs are used to make us more careless with our money during the festive season.
技巧5：妙用从句
He interviewed some neighbors of hers in order to get information.
= He interviewed some neighbors of hers so that he can get information.
He was so excited that he realized his father arranged this for him.
健康：One apple a day, keeps the doctor away.
一天一苹果，医生远离我。
友情：A fiend in need is a friend in deed.
患难见真情。
学习：Never too old to learn.
活到老，学到老。
毅力：Practice makes perfect.
熟能生巧。
方法：All roads lead to Rome.
条条道路通罗马。
As an old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.
有志者，事竟成。
.”
技巧6：格言警句
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1.妙用插入语
Luckily, in fact，,as I see it, ,for example,
,however, , which is so essential for us,
技巧7：学霸句型
2.妙用同位语
He himself ...
They themselves should ...
We students should concentrate on...
We teenagers must do...
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3.妙用倒装句
Only by doing…can we do sth
4.主语从句
What I have learnt is that nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
What attract me most is that
5.定语从句
He is the most honest person that I have ever seen.
补妆:修改瑕疵
拼写正确
动词时态
名词单复
标点无误
书写美观
The Way to Keep Healthy
It's important for us to be healthy in our life. We can't study or work well without a healthy body.
There're many ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should keep taking exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school, we can spend an hour playing ball games. If we live in a high-rise, we can walk upstairs or downstairs. Secondly, we should have a balanced diet. Finally, we must remember: Early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise.
Thank you!