2023届高考英语二轮复习备考:读后续写独家破解与篇章练习3 讲义（含答案）
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读后续写专练题组汇编（三）
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上一期我们已经探讨了大致读后续写的23+方法技巧了，让我们今天从句子的改写的角度来认识让我们读后续写持续加分！
1. She shother a meaningful look.
--《秘密花园》（Secret Garden）她向他意味深长地看了一眼。
2. Beli’s diamond eyes locked on toher.
--《奥斯卡·瓦奥短暂而奇妙的一生》贝利钻石般的眼睛紧盯着她。
3. Mary felt her heartrace.
玛丽感到她的心跳加速。
4. A great silence surroundedthem.
--《 歌剧魅影The Phantom of the Opera 》周围一片寂静。
5. His name hadcompletely slipped frommy memory.
---《Wuthering Heights》他的名字，我竟忘得一干二净。
6. Hestormed out and slammed the door shut.
他怒气冲冲地跑了出去，把门重重地关上。
7. We were merrily drivingon the highway when suddenly one tyre burst.
我们正在高速路上欢快地开着车突然一个轮胎爆胎了。
8. Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart bumpingnearly out of her chest.
Jenny慢慢走到讲台，腿发抖，心都快跳出来了。
9. She choked and her eyes brimmed with tears.
她喉咙哽咽，眼里满是泪水。
10.The moment he finished his speech in a magnetic voice, a wave of applauseerupted from the audience.
他用磁性的嗓音完成了演讲，观众席中一阵掌声。
11. He stood leaning against the wall, unable to speak.
他靠着墙站着，说不出话来。（表达伤心）
12. She hugged them to her chest, and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile.
她把它们紧紧地抱在胸前，终于抬起头来，泪流满面地微笑着。
13. He gave a jumpin the air, twirled, ran a few steps, stopped, looked all around, sniffed the smells of afternoon, and then set off walking down through the orchard.
他先是蹦了一下，原地转了几圈，再跑上几步，又停了下来，四下望了望，嗅了嗅午后暖洋洋的空气，然后一路跑进了果园。（开心的场景）
14. Even as I was digging into my pocketto get out my revolver, I made a running step back.
当我在口袋里掏出左轮手枪的时候，我后退了一步。（描写恐惧）
15. Alice started to her feet, for it flashed across her mindthat she had never before seen such a rabbit, and burning with curiosity, she ran across the field after it.
爱丽丝跳了起来，因为她突然想到她从来没见过这样的兔子。她好奇地穿过田野，追赶那只兔子。
16. We got into his car anddrove up the road, stopped a few houses down from the tree.
我们上了车，开上道路，然后停在了离这棵树有些距离的地方。
17. Abel was quick. Good Lord, he was fast. The ringleader had made a dash for it, trying to climb overa hall. Abel grabbed him, pulled him down and dragged him back.
Abel 跑的很快。这个元凶往前冲，试图反爬过大厅。但是Abel抓住他，把他拉下来并且拖了回去。
18. In between sobsI told her the story.
在哭的时候，告诉她这个故事.
19. I ran back home, smiling and skipping along.
我蹦蹦跳跳地笑着跑回家
20. Abel slammed his foot on the gas and shot up ontothe grass and straight toward the bottom of the tree.
Able 在汽油上用力踩了一下，然后飞快的踏上草坪直直地朝树底下走去。
21. Her pulses beat fast, and the bloodwarmed and relaxed every inch of her body.
她的心跳加快，热血温暖了身体的每个部位，使她感觉到身心完全地放松了
22. She arose at length and opened the door to her sister’s request.
她最终站起来，在她姐姐的请求下开了门
23. The waiter watched him go down the street, a very old man walking unsteadily but with dignity.
那个侍者瞅着他顺着大街走去，这个年纪大的人走起路来虽然脚步不稳，却很神气。
心理描写
1. The last word went like a bulletto my heart.
最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。
2. A ripple of sadnesswelled up inside him.
他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤
3. He felt the warmth surging throughhis body.
他感到身体里涌动着一股暖流。
4.The loneliness and grief comes in waves.
孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头。
5.So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
她是如此羞愧以至于脸如充血般发烫。
6.Her eyesmisted over as she immersed herself in their good memories.
当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆时，双眼蒙上了一层水雾。
7.Her brain quickenedand all her senses were alert.
她的大脑快速运转，所有的感官都处于戒备状态。
8. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horrorand my palms were sweating.
一看到那只凶猛的狼，我就被深深地恐惧感所控制,手心出汗.
9. When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement.
当主持人宣布她获奖时，她激动得心砰砰跳。
10. Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave, surrounding her like a foul stench.
她的愤怒像潮水一样席卷了她，像恶臭的气味将她包围。
11. “Here!” Alice jumped up,forgetting how large she had grown, and knocked over a basketful of apples just picked from the tree.
“在这儿！”爱丽丝激动地一跃，忘记了自己已经长得很大了，结果撞翻了一大篮刚摘的苹果。
12. She thought of the flowers glittering in the sunshine and the mountains turning rosy in the setting sun. And every night she cried into her pillow as though her heart would break into pieces.
她想起了阳光里闪耀的花儿，落日下慢慢变成玫瑰色的山脉。每一个夜晚，她把头埋在枕头里哭，肝肠寸断。
13. “In no way will I go back to that hell-like place. Never will anything to do with her disturb me any more.” heroared in his heart like a lion.
他在心里怒吼着：“我绝不回到那个鬼地方。我要忘却一切和她有关的人与事。”
14. “I’m up here,” said a cross little voice above them. “My head hurts.” Mowgli, still in a temper, came sliding down a tree trunk.
“我在上面呢。”他们头上传来微弱的声音。“我头疼”毛克利说，他从树上滑了下来，还生着气。
15. Tears welled up in Mowgli’s eyes as the memory of running wildly in the flowering field with Baloo and Bagheera sparkled into his mind. Would he ever see them again
想到和巴洛和巴格希拉在开满鲜花的田野里疯跑的那些日子，毛克利的泪水夺眶而出。他还能见到他们吗？
外貌描写
1. Indeed, his sunburnt face and arms and his slim, strong bodyare just like those of millions of Chinese farmers, for whom he has struggled for the past five decades.
2. The tramp, a poor, homeless man with a moustache, wore large trousers, worn-out shoes and a small round black hat.
神态描写
1. 关于“笑”的表达：
--The smile froze on her lips. 她脸上的笑容僵住了。
--In spite of his disappointment, he managed a weak smile. 他还是勉强露出一丝淡淡的微笑。
--Alee became happy now and a gentle smile spread over her face. 整张脸洋溢着温和的微笑。
--His face split into a wide smile. 他的脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容。
2. 有关“看”的表达：
He didn’t shout, and he just glared at me silently. 他只是默默怒视着我。
He gazed at the ...., unbelievable. 他难以置信地盯着..看。
He turned to her with a frightened air. 他害怕地看着他。
He was glaring down at me again, his black eyes full of disgust.
他又盯着我看，黑眼睛里充满了厌恶。
Her eyes were glued to the screen. 她目不转睛地盯着屏幕。
He give a glimpse of...from the corner of his eye. 他用眼睛的余角瞥了一眼。
3. With tears streaming down her face, words failed her .
眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。
【光说不练，假把式，来看一下一下5道读后续写，注意，要用上以上我们积累的句子哦！】
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Yesterday a heat wave hit the town. “It’s too hot! Let’s go for a swim after we finish our chores (家务活) at home!” Joseph complained to his little brother, Loren. As the boys walked toward the Little Colorado River, they saw Sam and Frank, who ran to join them. “Swimming’s just what we need to cool off!” Sam said, kicking a rock.
“Sure it is,” Frank agreed. Then he looked at the field they were passing. There were many round watermelons in Farmer Davis’s patch (小块地). “Hey, Joseph” Frank said, “do you have the courage to climb over that fence and get us a ripe (成熟的) watermelon ”
“I don’t know. ” Joseph said.
Loren looked uncomfortable. “I don’t think that’s a good idea.”
“Come on,” Frank said, pushing Joseph toward the fence. “No one will ever know.”
Then Frank started to climb the wooden fence. Joseph felt bad but climbed the fence and jumped with Frank into the watermelon patch.
Joseph took the closest melon and raced back to the fence. The other boys laughed and took turns carrying the heavy melon as they ran to the river. Finally they broke open the watermelon. The sticky sweet juice was delicious! But Joseph regretted what they had done and wished he hadn’t taken the melon.
On the walk home, they finished off the last piece of the melon just as they passed the watermelon patch again. Joseph lowered his head quickly when he saw Farmer Davis in the field. He waved at the boys, who quickly threw the melon rinds (皮) to the side of the road. Davis looked upset as the boys hurried by. Joseph felt terrible. It was wrong to take the watermelon. He knew he had to tell Farmer Davis what they had done and ask for forgiveness (宽恕).
That evening Farmer Davis visited Joseph and Loren at their house. “One of my biggest watermelons went missing,” he said, “I was wondering if you boys happened to see anyone in my field as you passed by today.”
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Joseph looked at his shoes and said in a low voice.
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Farmer Davis thought for a minute.
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【第一篇解析与写作指导】
Joseph looked at his shoes and said in a low voice. “We were with some other boys, and I took a watermelon from your field. We took it to the river and all of us ate it together.” Farmer Davis said sadly, “Taking a melon that you didn’t grow is stealing.” “I’m really sorry,” Joseph said. “I don’t have any money, but I could do some chores to repay you.” “I ate some too,” Loren said. “I’ll give you a hand.”
Farmer David thought for a minute. “Come by my field tomorrow morning. I think I can find some work for you.” That night Joseph regretted having taken something that didn’t belong to him. He decided next time someone asked him to do such things, he’d have the courage to say no. Thinking of this, he felt a little comfortable because he could do something to make up for his mistake. The next morning he would go to David’s field and do whatever chores Davis asked him to do. And he wouldn’t complain about the extra work — or the heat
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在很热的一天，约瑟夫和弗兰克偷偷地吃掉了农夫戴维斯的地里的一个西瓜，农夫戴维斯去约瑟夫和罗兰家做客，问他们俩是否有看到人拿走了西瓜。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“约瑟夫看了看他的鞋子，低声说。”可知，第一段可描写约瑟夫向农夫戴维斯承认自己偷了他的西瓜。
②由第二段首句内容“农夫大卫想了一会儿。”可知，第二段可描写约瑟夫想到可以通过干活来弥补自己的错误时的感想。
2.续写线索：拿——吃——道歉——弥补
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拿：take/get
②吃：eat/have
③道歉：be sorry/apologize
④弥补：make up for/compensate for
情绪类
①悲伤地：sadly/woefully
②后悔：regret/repent
【点睛】[高分句型1]Farmer Davis said sadly, “Taking a melon that you didn’t grow is stealing.”（由连接词that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]That night Joseph regretted having taken something that didn’t belong to him.（由连接词that引导的定语从句）
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为150左右。
Snow began to fall across the Apennines Mountain in January and lasted for days. From his home in the suburbs, Matrone watched the weather with concern. He and his wife, Cicioni, had planned an overnight getaway to the hotel halfway up the mountain. But now he wondered whether they should go. After phoning the hotel, they decided to make the trip. When they finally arrived six hours later, they were both cold and exhausted. They checked into their room and went to bed early.
As they awoke the next day, they discovered that their difficulty had worsened overnight. The cars in the parking lot were invisible. The phone and power lines were down. Many people were digging their cars.
With a dozen vehicles freed by noon, the guests set off down the driveway. But when they reached the main road, the path was blocked by a six-foot-high wall of snow. Matrone climbed out of his car and there was no road in sight. “We're trapped! he told his wife. So they had no choice but to make their way back to the hotel.
As it was getting dark, they managed to be back. That was when the snow on the mountain began to slide. They heard the avalanche（雪崩）before they saw it. The avalanche gathered speed and size, grabbing anything in its way down the mountain and tearing the hotel from its foundation. When the avalanche came to a stop, those caught inside the hotel were left buried in the icy rocks and ruins.
注意：续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1
When Matrone came to himself, he was stuck in the darkness.
Paragraph 2
It was not until the next morning that the rescuers finally arrived.
【第二篇解析与写作指导】
【答案】Paragraph 1
When Matrone came to himself, he was stuck in the darkness. Lying on his stomach, he realized with horror that he was under оmеth ng hеаvу аnd соuldn't mоvе аt аll. "С с оn ! С с оn !" hе саllеd, but thеrе wа по rе роn е. Не соuld hеаr nоth ng оf what was happening at the surface. The whole world was dead still. What he had to face was a terrible reality—they were buried alive. Despair washed over him. He asked himself again and again, "Who is going to save us "
Paragraph 2
It was not until the next morning that the rescuers finally arrived. Without any hesitation they got down to detecting the remains of the hotel and they were delighted to discover there was sign of life beneath. With great efforts they removed the thick snow and began cutting the roof. Then they carefully lowered themselves through the hole they'd made. Suddenly, they heard someone crying for help in a weak voice. It was Matrone. Later all the survivors were rescued including Matrone's wife. The couple felt really lucky to be still alive!
【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，Matrone和妻子С с оn 计划在半山腰的旅馆过夜，然而一觉起来，天气恶化，想要回家，发现路被堵了，只好返回酒店，但因雪崩，他们和其他旅客一起被埋在冰冷的岩石和废墟中。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当Matrone苏醒过来时，他被困在黑暗中。本段应该写Matrone发现了自己被埋的处境，内心十分惊恐绝望，希望有人来救他。第二段开头是：直到第二天早上，救援人员才终于赶到。本段应该写救援人员终于赶到，发现生命迹象，如何费力地把被埋人员和Matrone救了出来，所有幸存者都获救了，包括Matrone的妻子，这对夫妻很幸运。
续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：wash over，get down to doing sth.，be delighted to do sth.等高级词汇；非谓语动词结构Lying on his stomach，主语从句What he had to face，定语从句the hole they'd made（省略关系代词that/which的定语从句）等高级句式。
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a doctor, so I love my job. I always have, but I feel particularly proud to do it at the moment. With COVID-19 sweeping through Wuhan, people are avoiding hospitals as possible they can. However, pregnant women still need to come into the hospital. Babies still need to be born.
Right now, it is even scarier for these women, as they have to come in on their own, often feeling frightened. Their families are separated from them due to safety measures. We’ve always provided physical support, but now we are doing so on a different level — we also have to keep them company and offer emotional support. Unfortunately, some of the women have caught corona-virus, and being at the hospital puts me at risk. Personally, I feel protected because we have full personal protective equipment, which we wear all through our 13-hour shifts. You don’t know if someone is carrying corona-virus or not.
I didn’t want to put my family in danger by bringing the virus home and possibly passing it on to them. As a single parent to my children, Xiaohua, 12 years old, and Xiaoyong, 9, I realized I had to make a very tough decision about my family’s safety when the country went into lockdown. Giving up work wasn’t an option for me. I wanted to be able to look after the women who were feeling poorly and very scared, but I could not leave my little angels behind either.
At this point, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband for the time being and leave me to my hospital duties. I thought it was a great idea, so we set a date for her to pick them up. When I explained the situation to my angels and told them they needed to stay with their aunt for a while, they both seemed upset, but agreed to go. On the day I saw them off, they kept looking back at me until they were too far to be seen.
注意：
1、续写词数应为150左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill.
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A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday.
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【第三篇解析与写作指导】
【答案】One possible version
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill. We had to work double shifts and my life was dedicated to nothing but work. Every day I came back home completely exhausted and fell asleep. As soon as I woke up, I needed to go to the hospital. I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding. However, it troubled me that I didn’t have time for my own kids. Xiaoyong was going to celebrate his birthday soon. I had to do something to make up for him.
A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday. I made a video call to them from the hospital. I greeted them on the screen with my mask and goggles on, they recognized me at once, shouting excitedly. I took the phone to the hall where my coworkers sang “Happy Birthday, Xiaoyong!” They also encouraged him to be strong, and a grin appeared on his face. My children’s understanding and my coworker’s support gave me a warm feeling, and I believe nothing could ever truly separate me and my beloved ones. We are sure to win.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一位有两个孩子的单亲母亲，也是一位助产士，在新冠疫情期间，在工作和家人之间难以抉择，最后选择去医院工作，把孩子交给前夫照顾。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“之后，我的工作量增加了，因为我的一些同事生病了。”可知，第一段可描写作者在医院的工作越来越忙，没时间照顾孩子，作者想要在孩子生日的时候弥补孩子。
②由第二段首句内容“一周后，到了小勇的生日。”可知，第二段可描写作者和同事一起在医院祝孩子生日快乐，孩子很开兴。
2.续写线索：工作——烦恼——弥补——庆生——鼓励——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①致力于：was dedicated to / was devoted to
②回家：came back home / returned home
③打视频电话：made a video call / video-called
情绪类
①烦恼：trouble / worry
②兴奋地：excitedly / with excitement
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding. (由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. However, it troubled me that I didn’t have time for my own kids. (由that引导主语从句)
4．阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Long ago in Ethiopia（埃塞俄比亚） a woman named Leeya married a man who had a son. Try as Leeya might, she could not seem to spark a connection with（建立关系） the child. After several months of this, Leeya didn't know what to do.
Now in Leeya's village there was a medicine man, a healer. After Leeya came up to the healer's hut, she introduced herself and cried." 'Make me a potion （药剂）. Anything! Whatever it takes to get this child to respond to me."
The medicine man looked her in the eye and said. " This is not the same as fixing a broken bone. There is a potion that will change the child's behavior toward you. But you must bring me a whisker （胡须）from a live lion. ” Such a thing is not possible! How could she get a whisker from a live lion
The next day, she left the house. Leeya went to a place where a lion was known to live. She walked up to a safe distance, set a bowl of meat down on the grass, stepped away quickly and hid herself carefully. A lion indeed lived there, and watching her away, approached the bowl to enjoy the meat.
Every day, she did this and so did the lion. Until one morning the lion was sitting next to the empty bowl when she arrived, waiting for her. This time she sat and petted its thick fur. " Actually," she thought, it is a rather friendly creature, when you get to know it. ” Finally she quickly cut off a whisker, careful not to hurt the lion in any way. "Thank you, my gentle friend," she said.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Quickly, she ran to the medicine man's hut.
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"What have you done !" Leeya cried. "What it took for me to get that!"
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【第四篇解析与写作指导】
【答案】Paragraph l:
Quickly, she ran to the medicine man's hut. Holding the whisker tight in her hand, she cried, "I have it! I have the lion's whisker!". The healer asked her how she did it. She explained the steps and handed him the whisker with pride. The healer looked at it with care. Then he walked over to the fire and threw it in, where it burned up right away to a crisp.
Paragraph 2:
"What have you done !" Leeya cried. "What it took for me to get that!" "Leeya," said the old doctor softly, "you don't need the whisker. Tell me whether this child is really more dangerous than a lion. If a wild beast will respond to your patience and loving care, don't you think a child who misses his mother will, too " Leeya was shocked, but she thought maybe by the time she got back home, she knew what she could do.
【分析】本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了一位母亲因为无法和孩子产生共鸣，她向药师寻求帮助。药师让她设法去找到活狮子的胡须。这位母亲凭借自己的耐心弄到了活狮子的胡须。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她飞快地跑向药师的小屋。”可知，第一段可描写那位母亲将狮子的胡须给药师，并且告诉药师自己是怎么好不容易才得到狮子胡须的。结果药师将狮子胡须扔进火里烧了。
②由第二段首句内容“‘你做了什么 !’Leeya哭了。‘我付出了多大的代价才得到它!’”可知，第二段可描写药师告诉她如果凶猛的狮子对她的耐心和关心都能作出反应，那么她的孩子怎么会对母亲的耐心和爱心没有反应呢？这位母亲明白了自己该怎么做了。
2.续写线索：孩子和母亲没有共鸣——向药师寻求帮助——设法弄到活狮子胡须——药师烧胡须——母亲明白该怎么做
3.词汇激活
行为类
①把……递给某人：hand sb. sth./ hand sth. to sb.
②对……作出回应：respond to / make response to
情绪类
①哭了起来：cry/ burst into tears / burst out crying
②感到惊讶的：be shocked/ be in shock / be amazed
③骄傲地：with proud/ proudly
【点睛】[高分句型1]Holding the whisker tight in her hand, she cried, "I have it! I have the lion's whisker!". （现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] If a wild beast will respond to your patience and loving care, don't you think a child who misses his mother will, too （if引导条件状语从句）
5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Neesha, an 8-year-old golden retriever, is a lucky dog. After spending a fortnight on her own without food or real shelter, the tough dog was accidentally spotted by a couple, who in spite of the cold weather, were hiking the range and came across her.
Two weeks earlier, Neesha’s owners had taken her and their other dog, a German shepherd named Harley, for some outdoor exercise. Frightened by a deer, both dogs ram away. Harley found his way back to the parking lot the next day, but Neesha did not.
The family made a thorough search. They left a laundry basket of unwashed clothing near the spot where they’d last seen Neesha in the hope that she’d head straight towards the familiar smell marker. They even turned to the Internet for help in finding Neesha—but there was still no sign of her.
“We posted our experience on social media. Then a weekend later, we were still looking for her. We were starting to give up hope,” said the pet’s owner Erina O’Shea Goetelen told The Irish Times.
Eventually, the family began to accept that Neesha might not be coming home. “We just thought she is 8, and it’s been two weeks. There was no way she could survive.“
Doctors Ciara Nolan and Jean Francois Bonnet must truly be crazy hikers. They braved the elements on the freezing day when the couple decided to reach one of Wicklow’s peaks. As they neared the top, Nolan was shocked to see a dog shaking in the snow.
“She was frightened, freezing cold. She didn’t have enough energy to bark or stand, ”Bonnet said in an interview. “We tried to get her to walk, but she couldn’t stand. So we covered her with our spare clothes and gave her some food.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Bonnet lifted Neesha onto his back for the long path down the mountain.
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Neesha’s owners could hardly believe it when they learned their dog had been found alive.
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【第五篇解析与写作指导】
【答案】Bonnet lifted Neesha onto his back for the long path down the mountain. After the dog and the man fell several times, Bonnet thought of a good way to hold Neesha. He wrapped her in a scarf. As soon as they reached level ground, the couple took the dog to an animal rescue shelter. The dog lost a great deal of weight and was very weak, but surprisingly except for a few cuts and scrapes, the tough dog was in good condition. The couple contacted her owner via the information on the Internet.
Neesha’s owners could hardly believe it when they learned their dog had been found alive. “We had thought we would have lost her forever and were very sad. But now, we are so relieved and happy,“ Erina said. “Thousands of words can’t express our gratitude to them for their great efforts to bring Neesha back home. “They are so nice. Neesha is really a lucky dog,” said the excited woman. A random act of love may make the world a warmer place.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了8岁的金毛Neesha是一只幸运的狗。一天，Neesha跟着主人去户外锻炼，因被一只鹿惊吓跑丢了。在没有食物也没有真正的栖身之所的情况下，Neesha独自生活了两周，在奄奄一息的时候，被两位爬山的医生发现。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Bonnet把Neesha背在背上，沿着长长的山路往山下走去。”可知，第一段可描写两位医生如何把Neesha带下山以及他们如何安置Neesha。
②由第二段首句内容“当Neesha的主人得知他们的狗还活着时，他们简直不敢相信。”可知，第二段可描写Neesha的主人在获悉Neesha获救之后的感受以及对医生夫妇的感激之情。
2.续写线索：用围巾裹——到收容所——联系主人——主人感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①裹：wrap/bind
②联系：contact/get in touch with
③表达：express/show/convey
情绪类
①高兴：happy/delighted
②激动：excited/thrilled
【点睛】[高分句型1] As soon as they reached level ground, the couple took the dog to an animal rescue shelter.(由As soon as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] We had thought we would have lost her forever and were very sad. (由that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)
读后续写专练题组汇编（三）
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上一期我们已经探讨了大致读后续写的23+方法技巧了，让我们今天从句子的改写的角度来认识让我们读后续写持续加分！
1. She shother a meaningful look.
--《秘密花园》（Secret Garden）她向他意味深长地看了一眼。
2. Beli’s diamond eyes locked on toher.
--《奥斯卡·瓦奥短暂而奇妙的一生》贝利钻石般的眼睛紧盯着她。
3. Mary felt her heartrace.
玛丽感到她的心跳加速。
4. A great silence surroundedthem.
--《 歌剧魅影The Phantom of the Opera 》周围一片寂静。
5. His name hadcompletely slipped frommy memory.
---《Wuthering Heights》他的名字，我竟忘得一干二净。
6. Hestormed out and slammed the door shut.
他怒气冲冲地跑了出去，把门重重地关上。
7. We were merrily drivingon the highway when suddenly one tyre burst.
我们正在高速路上欢快地开着车突然一个轮胎爆胎了。
8. Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart bumpingnearly out of her chest.
Jenny慢慢走到讲台，腿发抖，心都快跳出来了。
9. She choked and her eyes brimmed with tears.
她喉咙哽咽，眼里满是泪水。
10.The moment he finished his speech in a magnetic voice, a wave of applauseerupted from the audience.
他用磁性的嗓音完成了演讲，观众席中一阵掌声。
11. He stood leaning against the wall, unable to speak.
他靠着墙站着，说不出话来。（表达伤心）
12. She hugged them to her chest, and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile.
她把它们紧紧地抱在胸前，终于抬起头来，泪流满面地微笑着。
13. He gave a jumpin the air, twirled, ran a few steps, stopped, looked all around, sniffed the smells of afternoon, and then set off walking down through the orchard.
他先是蹦了一下，原地转了几圈，再跑上几步，又停了下来，四下望了望，嗅了嗅午后暖洋洋的空气，然后一路跑进了果园。（开心的场景）
14. Even as I was digging into my pocketto get out my revolver, I made a running step back.
当我在口袋里掏出左轮手枪的时候，我后退了一步。（描写恐惧）
15. Alice started to her feet, for it flashed across her mindthat she had never before seen such a rabbit, and burning with curiosity, she ran across the field after it.
爱丽丝跳了起来，因为她突然想到她从来没见过这样的兔子。她好奇地穿过田野，追赶那只兔子。
16. We got into his car anddrove up the road, stopped a few houses down from the tree.
我们上了车，开上道路，然后停在了离这棵树有些距离的地方。
17. Abel was quick. Good Lord, he was fast. The ringleader had made a dash for it, trying to climb overa hall. Abel grabbed him, pulled him down and dragged him back.
Abel 跑的很快。这个元凶往前冲，试图反爬过大厅。但是Abel抓住他，把他拉下来并且拖了回去。
18. In between sobsI told her the story.
在哭的时候，告诉她这个故事.
19. I ran back home, smiling and skipping along.
我蹦蹦跳跳地笑着跑回家
20. Abel slammed his foot on the gas and shot up ontothe grass and straight toward the bottom of the tree.
Able 在汽油上用力踩了一下，然后飞快的踏上草坪直直地朝树底下走去。
21. Her pulses beat fast, and the bloodwarmed and relaxed every inch of her body.
她的心跳加快，热血温暖了身体的每个部位，使她感觉到身心完全地放松了
22. She arose at length and opened the door to her sister’s request.
她最终站起来，在她姐姐的请求下开了门
23. The waiter watched him go down the street, a very old man walking unsteadily but with dignity.
那个侍者瞅着他顺着大街走去，这个年纪大的人走起路来虽然脚步不稳，却很神气。
心理描写
1. The last word went like a bulletto my heart.
最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。
2. A ripple of sadnesswelled up inside him.
他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤
3. He felt the warmth surging throughhis body.
他感到身体里涌动着一股暖流。
4.The loneliness and grief comes in waves.
孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头。
5.So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
她是如此羞愧以至于脸如充血般发烫。
6.Her eyesmisted over as she immersed herself in their good memories.
当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆时，双眼蒙上了一层水雾。
7.Her brain quickenedand all her senses were alert.
她的大脑快速运转，所有的感官都处于戒备状态。
8. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horrorand my palms were sweating.
一看到那只凶猛的狼，我就被深深地恐惧感所控制,手心出汗.
9. When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement.
当主持人宣布她获奖时，她激动得心砰砰跳。
10. Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave, surrounding her like a foul stench.
她的愤怒像潮水一样席卷了她，像恶臭的气味将她包围。
11. “Here!” Alice jumped up,forgetting how large she had grown, and knocked over a basketful of apples just picked from the tree.
“在这儿！”爱丽丝激动地一跃，忘记了自己已经长得很大了，结果撞翻了一大篮刚摘的苹果。
12. She thought of the flowers glittering in the sunshine and the mountains turning rosy in the setting sun. And every night she cried into her pillow as though her heart would break into pieces.
她想起了阳光里闪耀的花儿，落日下慢慢变成玫瑰色的山脉。每一个夜晚，她把头埋在枕头里哭，肝肠寸断。
13. “In no way will I go back to that hell-like place. Never will anything to do with her disturb me any more.” heroared in his heart like a lion.
他在心里怒吼着：“我绝不回到那个鬼地方。我要忘却一切和她有关的人与事。”
14. “I’m up here,” said a cross little voice above them. “My head hurts.” Mowgli, still in a temper, came sliding down a tree trunk.
“我在上面呢。”他们头上传来微弱的声音。“我头疼”毛克利说，他从树上滑了下来，还生着气。
15. Tears welled up in Mowgli’s eyes as the memory of running wildly in the flowering field with Baloo and Bagheera sparkled into his mind. Would he ever see them again
想到和巴洛和巴格希拉在开满鲜花的田野里疯跑的那些日子，毛克利的泪水夺眶而出。他还能见到他们吗？
外貌描写
1. Indeed, his sunburnt face and arms and his slim, strong bodyare just like those of millions of Chinese farmers, for whom he has struggled for the past five decades.
2. The tramp, a poor, homeless man with a moustache, wore large trousers, worn-out shoes and a small round black hat.
神态描写
1. 关于“笑”的表达：
--The smile froze on her lips. 她脸上的笑容僵住了。
--In spite of his disappointment, he managed a weak smile. 他还是勉强露出一丝淡淡的微笑。
--Alee became happy now and a gentle smile spread over her face. 整张脸洋溢着温和的微笑。
--His face split into a wide smile. 他的脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容。
2. 有关“看”的表达：
He didn’t shout, and he just glared at me silently. 他只是默默怒视着我。
He gazed at the ...., unbelievable. 他难以置信地盯着..看。
He turned to her with a frightened air. 他害怕地看着他。
He was glaring down at me again, his black eyes full of disgust.
他又盯着我看，黑眼睛里充满了厌恶。
Her eyes were glued to the screen. 她目不转睛地盯着屏幕。
He give a glimpse of...from the corner of his eye. 他用眼睛的余角瞥了一眼。
3. With tears streaming down her face, words failed her .
眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。
【光说不练，假把式，来看一下一下5道读后续写，注意，要用上以上我们积累的句子哦！】
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Yesterday a heat wave hit the town. “It’s too hot! Let’s go for a swim after we finish our chores (家务活) at home!” Joseph complained to his little brother, Loren. As the boys walked toward the Little Colorado River, they saw Sam and Frank, who ran to join them. “Swimming’s just what we need to cool off!” Sam said, kicking a rock.
“Sure it is,” Frank agreed. Then he looked at the field they were passing. There were many round watermelons in Farmer Davis’s patch (小块地). “Hey, Joseph” Frank said, “do you have the courage to climb over that fence and get us a ripe (成熟的) watermelon ”
“I don’t know. ” Joseph said.
Loren looked uncomfortable. “I don’t think that’s a good idea.”
“Come on,” Frank said, pushing Joseph toward the fence. “No one will ever know.”
Then Frank started to climb the wooden fence. Joseph felt bad but climbed the fence and jumped with Frank into the watermelon patch.
Joseph took the closest melon and raced back to the fence. The other boys laughed and took turns carrying the heavy melon as they ran to the river. Finally they broke open the watermelon. The sticky sweet juice was delicious! But Joseph regretted what they had done and wished he hadn’t taken the melon.
On the walk home, they finished off the last piece of the melon just as they passed the watermelon patch again. Joseph lowered his head quickly when he saw Farmer Davis in the field. He waved at the boys, who quickly threw the melon rinds (皮) to the side of the road. Davis looked upset as the boys hurried by. Joseph felt terrible. It was wrong to take the watermelon. He knew he had to tell Farmer Davis what they had done and ask for forgiveness (宽恕).
That evening Farmer Davis visited Joseph and Loren at their house. “One of my biggest watermelons went missing,” he said, “I was wondering if you boys happened to see anyone in my field as you passed by today.”
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Joseph looked at his shoes and said in a low voice.
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Farmer Davis thought for a minute.
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【第一篇解析与写作指导】
Joseph looked at his shoes and said in a low voice. “We were with some other boys, and I took a watermelon from your field. We took it to the river and all of us ate it together.” Farmer Davis said sadly, “Taking a melon that you didn’t grow is stealing.” “I’m really sorry,” Joseph said. “I don’t have any money, but I could do some chores to repay you.” “I ate some too,” Loren said. “I’ll give you a hand.”
Farmer David thought for a minute. “Come by my field tomorrow morning. I think I can find some work for you.” That night Joseph regretted having taken something that didn’t belong to him. He decided next time someone asked him to do such things, he’d have the courage to say no. Thinking of this, he felt a little comfortable because he could do something to make up for his mistake. The next morning he would go to David’s field and do whatever chores Davis asked him to do. And he wouldn’t complain about the extra work — or the heat
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在很热的一天，约瑟夫和弗兰克偷偷地吃掉了农夫戴维斯的地里的一个西瓜，农夫戴维斯去约瑟夫和罗兰家做客，问他们俩是否有看到人拿走了西瓜。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“约瑟夫看了看他的鞋子，低声说。”可知，第一段可描写约瑟夫向农夫戴维斯承认自己偷了他的西瓜。
②由第二段首句内容“农夫大卫想了一会儿。”可知，第二段可描写约瑟夫想到可以通过干活来弥补自己的错误时的感想。
2.续写线索：拿——吃——道歉——弥补
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拿：take/get
②吃：eat/have
③道歉：be sorry/apologize
④弥补：make up for/compensate for
情绪类
①悲伤地：sadly/woefully
②后悔：regret/repent
【点睛】[高分句型1]Farmer Davis said sadly, “Taking a melon that you didn’t grow is stealing.”（由连接词that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]That night Joseph regretted having taken something that didn’t belong to him.（由连接词that引导的定语从句）
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为150左右。
Snow began to fall across the Apennines Mountain in January and lasted for days. From his home in the suburbs, Matrone watched the weather with concern. He and his wife, Cicioni, had planned an overnight getaway to the hotel halfway up the mountain. But now he wondered whether they should go. After phoning the hotel, they decided to make the trip. When they finally arrived six hours later, they were both cold and exhausted. They checked into their room and went to bed early.
As they awoke the next day, they discovered that their difficulty had worsened overnight. The cars in the parking lot were invisible. The phone and power lines were down. Many people were digging their cars.
With a dozen vehicles freed by noon, the guests set off down the driveway. But when they reached the main road, the path was blocked by a six-foot-high wall of snow. Matrone climbed out of his car and there was no road in sight. “We're trapped! he told his wife. So they had no choice but to make their way back to the hotel.
As it was getting dark, they managed to be back. That was when the snow on the mountain began to slide. They heard the avalanche（雪崩）before they saw it. The avalanche gathered speed and size, grabbing anything in its way down the mountain and tearing the hotel from its foundation. When the avalanche came to a stop, those caught inside the hotel were left buried in the icy rocks and ruins.
注意：续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1
When Matrone came to himself, he was stuck in the darkness.
Paragraph 2
It was not until the next morning that the rescuers finally arrived.
【第二篇解析与写作指导】
【答案】Paragraph 1
When Matrone came to himself, he was stuck in the darkness. Lying on his stomach, he realized with horror that he was under оmеth ng hеаvу аnd соuldn't mоvе аt аll. "С с оn ! С с оn !" hе саllеd, but thеrе wа по rе роn е. Не соuld hеаr nоth ng оf what was happening at the surface. The whole world was dead still. What he had to face was a terrible reality—they were buried alive. Despair washed over him. He asked himself again and again, "Who is going to save us "
Paragraph 2
It was not until the next morning that the rescuers finally arrived. Without any hesitation they got down to detecting the remains of the hotel and they were delighted to discover there was sign of life beneath. With great efforts they removed the thick snow and began cutting the roof. Then they carefully lowered themselves through the hole they'd made. Suddenly, they heard someone crying for help in a weak voice. It was Matrone. Later all the survivors were rescued including Matrone's wife. The couple felt really lucky to be still alive!
【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，Matrone和妻子С с оn 计划在半山腰的旅馆过夜，然而一觉起来，天气恶化，想要回家，发现路被堵了，只好返回酒店，但因雪崩，他们和其他旅客一起被埋在冰冷的岩石和废墟中。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当Matrone苏醒过来时，他被困在黑暗中。本段应该写Matrone发现了自己被埋的处境，内心十分惊恐绝望，希望有人来救他。第二段开头是：直到第二天早上，救援人员才终于赶到。本段应该写救援人员终于赶到，发现生命迹象，如何费力地把被埋人员和Matrone救了出来，所有幸存者都获救了，包括Matrone的妻子，这对夫妻很幸运。
续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：wash over，get down to doing sth.，be delighted to do sth.等高级词汇；非谓语动词结构Lying on his stomach，主语从句What he had to face，定语从句the hole they'd made（省略关系代词that/which的定语从句）等高级句式。
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a doctor, so I love my job. I always have, but I feel particularly proud to do it at the moment. With COVID-19 sweeping through Wuhan, people are avoiding hospitals as possible they can. However, pregnant women still need to come into the hospital. Babies still need to be born.
Right now, it is even scarier for these women, as they have to come in on their own, often feeling frightened. Their families are separated from them due to safety measures. We’ve always provided physical support, but now we are doing so on a different level — we also have to keep them company and offer emotional support. Unfortunately, some of the women have caught corona-virus, and being at the hospital puts me at risk. Personally, I feel protected because we have full personal protective equipment, which we wear all through our 13-hour shifts. You don’t know if someone is carrying corona-virus or not.
I didn’t want to put my family in danger by bringing the virus home and possibly passing it on to them. As a single parent to my children, Xiaohua, 12 years old, and Xiaoyong, 9, I realized I had to make a very tough decision about my family’s safety when the country went into lockdown. Giving up work wasn’t an option for me. I wanted to be able to look after the women who were feeling poorly and very scared, but I could not leave my little angels behind either.
At this point, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband for the time being and leave me to my hospital duties. I thought it was a great idea, so we set a date for her to pick them up. When I explained the situation to my angels and told them they needed to stay with their aunt for a while, they both seemed upset, but agreed to go. On the day I saw them off, they kept looking back at me until they were too far to be seen.
注意：
1、续写词数应为150左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill.
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A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday.
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【第三篇解析与写作指导】
【答案】One possible version
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill. We had to work double shifts and my life was dedicated to nothing but work. Every day I came back home completely exhausted and fell asleep. As soon as I woke up, I needed to go to the hospital. I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding. However, it troubled me that I didn’t have time for my own kids. Xiaoyong was going to celebrate his birthday soon. I had to do something to make up for him.
A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday. I made a video call to them from the hospital. I greeted them on the screen with my mask and goggles on, they recognized me at once, shouting excitedly. I took the phone to the hall where my coworkers sang “Happy Birthday, Xiaoyong!” They also encouraged him to be strong, and a grin appeared on his face. My children’s understanding and my coworker’s support gave me a warm feeling, and I believe nothing could ever truly separate me and my beloved ones. We are sure to win.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一位有两个孩子的单亲母亲，也是一位助产士，在新冠疫情期间，在工作和家人之间难以抉择，最后选择去医院工作，把孩子交给前夫照顾。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“之后，我的工作量增加了，因为我的一些同事生病了。”可知，第一段可描写作者在医院的工作越来越忙，没时间照顾孩子，作者想要在孩子生日的时候弥补孩子。
②由第二段首句内容“一周后，到了小勇的生日。”可知，第二段可描写作者和同事一起在医院祝孩子生日快乐，孩子很开兴。
2.续写线索：工作——烦恼——弥补——庆生——鼓励——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①致力于：was dedicated to / was devoted to
②回家：came back home / returned home
③打视频电话：made a video call / video-called
情绪类
①烦恼：trouble / worry
②兴奋地：excitedly / with excitement
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding. (由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. However, it troubled me that I didn’t have time for my own kids. (由that引导主语从句)
4．阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Long ago in Ethiopia（埃塞俄比亚） a woman named Leeya married a man who had a son. Try as Leeya might, she could not seem to spark a connection with（建立关系） the child. After several months of this, Leeya didn't know what to do.
Now in Leeya's village there was a medicine man, a healer. After Leeya came up to the healer's hut, she introduced herself and cried." 'Make me a potion （药剂）. Anything! Whatever it takes to get this child to respond to me."
The medicine man looked her in the eye and said. " This is not the same as fixing a broken bone. There is a potion that will change the child's behavior toward you. But you must bring me a whisker （胡须）from a live lion. ” Such a thing is not possible! How could she get a whisker from a live lion
The next day, she left the house. Leeya went to a place where a lion was known to live. She walked up to a safe distance, set a bowl of meat down on the grass, stepped away quickly and hid herself carefully. A lion indeed lived there, and watching her away, approached the bowl to enjoy the meat.
Every day, she did this and so did the lion. Until one morning the lion was sitting next to the empty bowl when she arrived, waiting for her. This time she sat and petted its thick fur. " Actually," she thought, it is a rather friendly creature, when you get to know it. ” Finally she quickly cut off a whisker, careful not to hurt the lion in any way. "Thank you, my gentle friend," she said.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Quickly, she ran to the medicine man's hut.
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"What have you done !" Leeya cried. "What it took for me to get that!"
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【第四篇解析与写作指导】
【答案】Paragraph l:
Quickly, she ran to the medicine man's hut. Holding the whisker tight in her hand, she cried, "I have it! I have the lion's whisker!". The healer asked her how she did it. She explained the steps and handed him the whisker with pride. The healer looked at it with care. Then he walked over to the fire and threw it in, where it burned up right away to a crisp.
Paragraph 2:
"What have you done !" Leeya cried. "What it took for me to get that!" "Leeya," said the old doctor softly, "you don't need the whisker. Tell me whether this child is really more dangerous than a lion. If a wild beast will respond to your patience and loving care, don't you think a child who misses his mother will, too " Leeya was shocked, but she thought maybe by the time she got back home, she knew what she could do.
【分析】本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了一位母亲因为无法和孩子产生共鸣，她向药师寻求帮助。药师让她设法去找到活狮子的胡须。这位母亲凭借自己的耐心弄到了活狮子的胡须。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她飞快地跑向药师的小屋。”可知，第一段可描写那位母亲将狮子的胡须给药师，并且告诉药师自己是怎么好不容易才得到狮子胡须的。结果药师将狮子胡须扔进火里烧了。
②由第二段首句内容“‘你做了什么 !’Leeya哭了。‘我付出了多大的代价才得到它!’”可知，第二段可描写药师告诉她如果凶猛的狮子对她的耐心和关心都能作出反应，那么她的孩子怎么会对母亲的耐心和爱心没有反应呢？这位母亲明白了自己该怎么做了。
2.续写线索：孩子和母亲没有共鸣——向药师寻求帮助——设法弄到活狮子胡须——药师烧胡须——母亲明白该怎么做
3.词汇激活
行为类
①把……递给某人：hand sb. sth./ hand sth. to sb.
②对……作出回应：respond to / make response to
情绪类
①哭了起来：cry/ burst into tears / burst out crying
②感到惊讶的：be shocked/ be in shock / be amazed
③骄傲地：with proud/ proudly
【点睛】[高分句型1]Holding the whisker tight in her hand, she cried, "I have it! I have the lion's whisker!". （现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] If a wild beast will respond to your patience and loving care, don't you think a child who misses his mother will, too （if引导条件状语从句）
5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Neesha, an 8-year-old golden retriever, is a lucky dog. After spending a fortnight on her own without food or real shelter, the tough dog was accidentally spotted by a couple, who in spite of the cold weather, were hiking the range and came across her.
Two weeks earlier, Neesha’s owners had taken her and their other dog, a German shepherd named Harley, for some outdoor exercise. Frightened by a deer, both dogs ram away. Harley found his way back to the parking lot the next day, but Neesha did not.
The family made a thorough search. They left a laundry basket of unwashed clothing near the spot where they’d last seen Neesha in the hope that she’d head straight towards the familiar smell marker. They even turned to the Internet for help in finding Neesha—but there was still no sign of her.
“We posted our experience on social media. Then a weekend later, we were still looking for her. We were starting to give up hope,” said the pet’s owner Erina O’Shea Goetelen told The Irish Times.
Eventually, the family began to accept that Neesha might not be coming home. “We just thought she is 8, and it’s been two weeks. There was no way she could survive.“
Doctors Ciara Nolan and Jean Francois Bonnet must truly be crazy hikers. They braved the elements on the freezing day when the couple decided to reach one of Wicklow’s peaks. As they neared the top, Nolan was shocked to see a dog shaking in the snow.
“She was frightened, freezing cold. She didn’t have enough energy to bark or stand, ”Bonnet said in an interview. “We tried to get her to walk, but she couldn’t stand. So we covered her with our spare clothes and gave her some food.”
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Bonnet lifted Neesha onto his back for the long path down the mountain.
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Neesha’s owners could hardly believe it when they learned their dog had been found alive.
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【第五篇解析与写作指导】
【答案】Bonnet lifted Neesha onto his back for the long path down the mountain. After the dog and the man fell several times, Bonnet thought of a good way to hold Neesha. He wrapped her in a scarf. As soon as they reached level ground, the couple took the dog to an animal rescue shelter. The dog lost a great deal of weight and was very weak, but surprisingly except for a few cuts and scrapes, the tough dog was in good condition. The couple contacted her owner via the information on the Internet.
Neesha’s owners could hardly believe it when they learned their dog had been found alive. “We had thought we would have lost her forever and were very sad. But now, we are so relieved and happy,“ Erina said. “Thousands of words can’t express our gratitude to them for their great efforts to bring Neesha back home. “They are so nice. Neesha is really a lucky dog,” said the excited woman. A random act of love may make the world a warmer place.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了8岁的金毛Neesha是一只幸运的狗。一天，Neesha跟着主人去户外锻炼，因被一只鹿惊吓跑丢了。在没有食物也没有真正的栖身之所的情况下，Neesha独自生活了两周，在奄奄一息的时候，被两位爬山的医生发现。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Bonnet把Neesha背在背上，沿着长长的山路往山下走去。”可知，第一段可描写两位医生如何把Neesha带下山以及他们如何安置Neesha。
②由第二段首句内容“当Neesha的主人得知他们的狗还活着时，他们简直不敢相信。”可知，第二段可描写Neesha的主人在获悉Neesha获救之后的感受以及对医生夫妇的感激之情。
2.续写线索：用围巾裹——到收容所——联系主人——主人感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①裹：wrap/bind
②联系：contact/get in touch with
③表达：express/show/convey
情绪类
①高兴：happy/delighted
②激动：excited/thrilled
【点睛】[高分句型1] As soon as they reached level ground, the couple took the dog to an animal rescue shelter.(由As soon as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] We had thought we would have lost her forever and were very sad. (由that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)