短文改错专题讲义 2023届高考英语二轮复习(含答案)

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短文改错专题三大错误类型
1.词法错误:
冠词三类 →误用或缺失
n.→C. / U.
n.单复数
名词所有格中“ ’s ”的误置
prep. →误用或缺失→refer to A as B
与其他词语搭配的错误
v.→ v.时态、语态错误
易混淆v.的用法错误
v.的第三人称单数错误
v.的非谓语形式
v.的句型搭配
adj.&adv. → adj. ←→ adv.
adj. / adv. 比较级或最高级
adj.修饰n., adv.修饰v.(“副动”)
带-ly的adv.与不带-ly的adv.
上下文该用比较级而未用或误用的“暗中比较”
conj. → ( though不与but连用;so不与because连用)
pron. → 形容词性物主代词与名词性代词的误用
关系代词、连用代词的误用
代词主格与代词宾格的误用
代词单数与代词复数的误用
各不定代词之间的误用
反身代词与代词之间的误用
反身代词与代词宾格之间的误用
代词的指代错误
词义、词类混淆
2.句法错误:
二态(时态&语态)
非谓语v.误用
复合引导词的误用
主谓不一致
3.篇章错误:
指代错误,衔接错误,上下文语义矛盾
2022-2015 全国各地高考卷-短文改错汇编
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,共15分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的工方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误;2. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词;
只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
2022年全国甲卷
My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school. He showed me how his medical instruments was used. I felt so closely to him. However, after I went to high school, somehow I become distant from him. I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my friends too late. The disagreement was too sharp that neither he nor I knew what to settle it. One day, he talked with me or hoped to mend our relations. With the efforts made by all sides, we began to understand each other better.
2022年全国乙卷
We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.
2021年全国甲卷
Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are: Who will you go in times of trouble Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they're of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust mostly.
2021年全国乙卷
I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What's most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That's our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!
Passage 1 (2020·全国Ⅰ)
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove. I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished.
Passage 2 (2020·全国Ⅱ)
Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
Passage 3 (2020·全国Ⅲ)
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.
But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.
Passage 1 (2018·全国Ⅰ)
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
Passage 2 (2018·全国Ⅱ)
When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
Passage 3 (2018·全国Ⅲ)
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.
Passage 1 (2017·全国Ⅰ)
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
Passage 2 (2017·全国Ⅱ)
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!
Passage 3 (2017·全国Ⅲ)
When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kings of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
Passage 1 (2016·全国Ⅰ)
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big,but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some People even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.
Passage 2 (2016·全国Ⅱ)
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
Passage 3 (2016·全国Ⅲ)
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However,my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I ever felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last,I will be on my own,but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
Passage 4 (2016·四川)
It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job,so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house,and then went on shopping. When he came back,I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritest. At dinner,we said to her,“Happy Mother’s Day!”Mom was grateful and moving.
Passage 5 (2016·浙江)
When I was a very young children,my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day,we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat,my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!
My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
Passage 6 (2015·新课标全国Ⅰ)
When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so,we'll live to regret it.
Passage 7 (2015·新课标全国Ⅱ)
One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later,Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
Passage 8 (2015·四川)
Hi, Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time wasting activity! In fact,I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do If you are me,would you talk to him
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
Passage 9 (2015·陕西)
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party,my coach,with a biscuit in his mouth,asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
Passage 10 (2015·浙江)
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left hand side of the class,I could easy see the football field. In the mornings,it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.
Keys:
2022年全国甲卷
【答案】1.去掉my
2.was→were
3.closely→close
4.become→became
5.talk前面加to
6.stay→staying
7.too→so
8.what→how
9.or→and
10.all→both
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文,介绍了作者在成长过程中和父亲之间关系的变化及处理分歧的过程。
【详解】1.考查短语。句意:当我不上学时,我的爸爸经常带我去他的医院。off school为固定短语,表示“不在上学时”,school前面不加任何限定词。故将my去掉。
2.考查主谓一致。句意:他向我展示他的医疗器械是如何使用的。主语instruments为复数形式,全文为一般过去时,be动词用复数形式were。故将was改为were。
3.考查形容词。句意:我对他感觉如此亲近。felt为系动词,后面用形容词作表语,表示“亲近的”,closely为副词,此处用close。故将closely改为close。
4.考查动词时态。句意:然而,在我上了高中之后,不知怎么的,我开始疏远他。全文用一般过去时,动词become应改为过去式became。故将become改为became。
5.考查短语。句意:我不愿意和他交谈,经常违反他让我不要在外面待到很晚的规定。be willing to do意思为:愿意做,为固定短语。故在talk前面加to。
6.考查非谓语动词。句意同上。of为介词,后面的动词stay用动名词形式staying作宾语。故将stay改为staying。
7.考查状语从句。句意:这分歧如此尖锐,以至于他和我都不知道如何解决它。固定句型“so…that…”译为“如此……以至于……”引导结果状语从句。故将too改为so。
8.考查副词。句意同上。此处为“疑问副词+不定式”结构来做动词knew的宾语。结合句意,此处表达“如何解决它”,settle it为动宾关系,此处缺少方式状语,用how。故将what改为how。
9.考查并列连词。句意:一天,他和我交谈,并且希望修补我们的关系。根据语境,“talked with me”与“hoped to mend our relations”为顺承、递进关系,用and连接。故将or改为and。
10.考查限定词。句意:在两方的努力下,我们开始更好地理解对方。结合语境可知,此处表示作者和父亲双方,用both修饰sides,表示两方,all用于三者及以上。故将all改为both。
2022年全国乙卷
【答案】1. greatly → great
2. lives → live
3. 在because后加of
4. Whether → If 或Whether → When
5. they → you
6. cause → causing
7. 去掉have后的been
8. what → which
9. were → are
10. bicycle → bicycles
【解析】
【导语】这是一篇议论文。作者表述了骑自行车这项运动可以带来的好处。
【详解】1.考查形容词。句意: 我们都知道骑自行车是一项很好的运动。需用形容词作定语修饰名词exercise。故将greatly改为great。
2.考查主谓一致。句意:医生告诉我,寿命最长的人是舞蹈家和骑自行车的人。people是集合名词,谓语动词用复数。故将lives改为live。
3.考查介词。句意:也许是因为新鲜空气、流畅的运动和锻炼的结合。because表示“因为”,后面接从句,短语because of表示“因为”,后面接名词、代词、动名词等作宾语,the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise是名词短语。故在because后加of。
4.考查状语从句连接词。句意:当你骑自行车的时候你是不用汽油的。由句意可知,该句阐述的是一个事实,需用if或when引导;位于句首,注意首字母大写。故将Whether改为If或改为When。
5.考查代词。句意:所以你不会制造出二氧化碳,也不会造成空气污染。根据前一句中的人称you可知,这里假设“你”骑自行车,前后人称应保持一致。故将they改为you。
6.考查非谓语动词。句意:所以你不会制造出二氧化碳,也不会造成空气污染。本句时态为现在进行时,连词and连接两个并列的现在分词,构成进行时。故将cause改为causing。
7.考查语态。句意:看看汽车是如何占领我们的城市的。主语cars与动词take over之间是主谓关系,应用主动语态。故去掉have后的been。
8.考查定语从句关系词。句意:它们经常高速行驶,这可能会危及我们的生命。分析句子结构可知,逗号后是非限制性定语从句,先行词为前面的一句话,在从句中做主语,应用which 引导。故将what改为which。
9.考查时态。句意:还有交通堵塞。根据上下文时态可知,本句应用一般现在时。故将were改为are。
10.考查名词。句意:如果用自行车代替汽车,我们的城市将变得更好。bicycle为可数名词,由句中的cars和句意可知,此处应用复数形式。故将bicycle改为bicycles。
2021年高考真题
1.2021年全国甲卷
【文章大意】本文主要讲解了老师要求我们填写的一份调查问卷的结果介绍。
1.考查主谓一致。主语为one of the questions,表示问题中的一个,是单数意义,谓语动词应为单数,故are改为is。
2. 考查介词。go是不及物动词, 遇到问题转向某人应该是go to sb. 故go后加to。
3. 考查名词的单复数。主语为Many students , "their friend or classmates " 中or前后一致,故前面应该把friend 改为friends。
4. 考查固定搭配。turn to sb. For help表示想某人寻求帮助,故turn后面去掉out。
5. 考查代词。a little代指不可数名词,a few 代指可数名词。在这里指少部分的学生, 可数名词,故把little 改为few。
6. 考查代词。On one's own表示靠自己。这里省略主语students, 主语相当于Only a little students, 其后应该是their。故our改为their。
7. 考查非谓语动词。dislike doing sth. 表示不喜欢做某事。故talk 改为talking。
8. 考查动词的时态。前后的句子都是一般现在时,此处没有明显的过去的时间状语,故此处应该是一般现在时。故把 kept 改为keep。
9.考查状语从句连词。根据句意应该是(每)当遇到困难的时候,我们应该向最信任的人求助。where 改为when或whenever。
10. 考查形容词。此处表示最信任的人。 mostly表示 "主要地;通常" most表示(程度)最大。故mostly 改为most。
2021年全国乙卷
2020-1第一节
Today I tried cooking a dish myself. I like eating tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with . After that I poured oil into a pan and turned the stove, I waited patiently the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way,” my mom tried to stop but failed. She was right. It didn't tum out as I had wished.
2020-2:
短文改错
Thank you for your letter, really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m you’ll have a good time. Actually, I to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer . Then I can spare some time to learn it again, that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with learning kung fu in China. See you .
2020-3:
短文改错
My mom is really with the health of everyone in our . In order to make all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have bowl of egg soup while I to eat an apple. My dad like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.
But insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food is provided by Mom with appreciation.
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and animals. Last winter when I went again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of . They also had a small pond they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by the fish. I felt that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return every two years, he agreed.
When I was little, night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all in the sitting room. As kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to them, my parents would not let me. They would say to that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just . Everyone was silent, to see who would be called upon to read his her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done homework but I was shy. I was afraid to speak in front of a group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that leaning from textbooks, and as well." , I raised my hand.