2023届高考英语作文备考高分短文续写攻略讲义（含答案）
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短文续写
高分短文续写:
读后续写不需要情节多么有趣或动人，而是需要和原文逻辑融洽，你不是自圆自说，而是帮助原文作者“圆”，并让人感到自然,而不是突儿做作,至于什么科幻，肯定不行
情节尽可能简洁，不要拖泥带水，一般就是续写一个到两个solution的组合:譬如别人的安慰让我镇定下来,然后耐心等待，不一会救援人物出现，脱险结束，总共核心情节就三句而已,中间无非就是感情的变化
三、情节既然很简洁，那么就必须有一定的细节描写积累，否则巧妇难为无米之炊.
这样写，并非是让思维限制了,实际上,好莱坞制作电影基本如此的:危险出现、反派眼看就要成功、超级英雄出现、成功挽救，中间夹杂着老掉牙的爱情和美女,但是有谁说这就是个固定模式而感到厌倦呢 没有,照样观众被感动得一塌糊涂的
实际上大部分的完形和鸡汤文阅读内容模式都是一个套路模式的，只是换了人物的名称而已.
四、读后续写的续写内容，命题角度来看都会围绕“Conflict & Solution”展开.结合历年考查的题材来看，题材主要关于:迷路系列(自己不知道该怎么办)、脱险系列(情况非常紧急，要快速反应了)、争吵系列(解开心结的)
解决方案基本是以下途径:
encouragement(某人的鼓励的话)
2.comfort(某人的安慰)
3.inspiration(突然灵机一动)
4.effort(自已的努力训练)
5.calm(冷静思考)
6.kindness(某人的善良)
7.courage(勇敢做起来)
8.love（爱心,不过这个需要和 move，patience结合，爱只是底子，还需要感化和耐心等待)
9.help(准确说是及时帮助)
当然这个解决方案 ( solution)可能是以上多种组合，譬如先平静下来(calm),然后有了勇气(courage),最后有了动力(inspiration)
比如某一年的熊口脱险:先calm下来,然后灵机一动想出办法,最后救援人员及时赶到;
话题不能过于专业化等，因此看似话题很广，但其实细细分类，还是有迹可循的。这就为我们平时备考提供了线索。各个冲突并非孤立的，而是相互交织，解决方法也是如此:
Conflict and Emotion: 三冲突
Solution and Emotion: 四途径
这样划分后，我们就比较方便去针对性进行训练。下面且以高考真题为例进行说明:
卷别
Conflict Solution
高分续写的文章，写作模版: .
(1)第一句展现情绪:面对矛盾，本能反应
(2)第二句补充细节:进一步解释描写主人公的反应
(3)第三句试图改变:个人的努力或借助外界
(4)第四句黄天不负:自己的努力失败了，或者说自己的努力只是部分上的解决了问题
(5)第五句再度失望:问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
(6)第六句再次转机:突然有了一个想法
(7) 第七句皆大欢喜:过了一段时间;事情有了最后的转折
(8)第八句首尾呼应:总结前文,升华主题
例子:
(浙江高考2016年10月)
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom，“I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom！”she cried.“Help！”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
Paragraph 1：
But the helicopter didn’t come back again, and the day became darker. __________________
Paragraph 2：
Jane woke up at the daybreak. __________________________________________________
夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子 独白离开，迷路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次搜救但没有看见她，她感到很失望。
Paragraph 1：
But the helicopter didn’t come back again, and the day became darker. ______________
A wave of terror swept over her. 一阵恐惧向她席卷而来
(纯粹描写面对矛盾的本能反应)
Her heart pounding fiercely and her palms sweating ,an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.她的心猛烈地跳动并且掌心出汗，内心的声音告诉她，必须要找个安全的地方
(进一步地解释描述主人公的反应，此处可加语言或者心理描写凑字数)
Tired and terrified as she was ,Jane plucked her courage to feel the way.虽然又累又怕，Jane鼓起勇气摸索着前进
(开始努力解决问题，情节推进)
Luckily,it didn’t take long before she found a cave.幸运的是，不多久她就找到了一个洞穴
(失败了，或者是部分地解决了问题，情节推进)
Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of hope,saying to herself,”Tomorrow is another day.”
宽慰地舒了一口气，她感到了一丝希望，自言自语道“明天是新的一天”
(纯粹描写，每当发生一个事情，或者主人公做过了一个事情都要描写这个事件对于主人公带来的情绪上的影响)
With that ,she went to sleep,in whose dream her husband kept her company.
(情节推进，最后一句一定要和第二段的开头句子相联系，这里是夫妻吵架，那要埋上夫妻吵架的次要矛盾最终得到解决的伏笔)
Paragraph 2
Jane woke up at the daybreak____________________________
Hungry and disappointed,she found not any helicopter overhead,at a loss what to do.她又饿又失望，她也没发现头顶有直升机，她不知道该怎么办
(纯粹描写，问题还是没有彻底解决，再一次描写主人公的本能反应)
It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first.她突然想到应该先找一个大的开阔地
(情节推进，突然有了想法或者奇妙的巧合)
Having gobbling down some blackberries,she can’t wait to set off.狼吞虎咽了些黑莓，她立刻就出发了
(情节推进，再次开始自己开始努力，或者是借者其他人的帮助开始努力)
After what seemed a century,such an area did come into sight.在好似一个世纪那么长的时间之后，这样的地方映入眼帘
(情节推进，肯定会有最美好的意外发生的)
Her face brightened up.她的脸亮了起来
(纯粹描写，意外发生之后，主人公的反应)
What a coincidence it is that meanwhile ,a helicopter was flying towards her.多么巧，同时有一架直升机朝她飞过来
(情节推进，巧合借着发生，最终矛盾被解决)
Upon its landing ,out dashed her husband who hugged Jane tightly,tears welling up in their eyes.直升飞机刚一落地，她的丈夫就冲了出来，紧紧地拥抱着Jane,彼此都是热泪盈眶
(情节推进，次要矛盾被解决，大团圆结局)
It was at that moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise.这一刻，他们决定了不再吵架要学会妥协让步
(感悟升华)
矛盾：主要矛盾，Jane迷路了
解决办法：被直升机找到
总共的情节，Jane找了个洞睡了一觉，然后找到了一个开阔地，等到了直升飞机和丈夫团聚了
情感上的变化:恐惧--紧张--镇定--宽慰---失望，迷茫--充满希望--欣喜--激动--感恩
高分续写的文章，句式中需要出现的元素
非谓语动词做定语或状语;
2.双黄蛋句式; (从句套从句)
3.头轻脚重，介短状往后靠;
4.形 容词短语作定语;
5.定语从句和表语从句;
6. what和it句型;
7.倒装句;
8.强调句;
9.宾语从句和状语从句;
10.感叹句(和虚拟省略)
01. Noticing Susan's unhappiness, Rose secretly suggested making a crown with flowers to please her.（推进情节）
看到了Susan的不悦,Rose悄悄地建议用花做一顶帽子来取悦她。
1非谓语动词，做主动伴随
2第一个主人公的情绪表达，在第二个人的眼里是怎么样的，紧跟其后的是第二个人的反应
3模块:做着.....某人做了....
02. As the family walked to the door to leave, the mother came running back, gave me a hug and whispered,“Thanks for being our angels today."(推进情节)
1状语从句，时间
2对于细节展开想象，先有中文想到，后有英语写到。你能看到的，你能得到的，以及所有的本能反应)。
动作细化描写，能避免无话可说
3模版二当某人做某事的时候，某人做了，做了，and做了。
4润色:两处非谓语，一处引号
03. Feeling familiar with the voice, she turned round and saw. （推进情节）
1.语法上和模板例句1相同，但此处是说主语自己的情感
04. A small smile may make a big difference.（感悟升华）
物作主语，偏拟人化的用法
05. It was this unique experience that made me understand no matter what difficulty we may face, we mustn't give up our hope.（感悟升华）
1.强调句套宾语从句+状语从句
2应用场景:用于对于某件事情大彻大悟(尾声)，用于某件事情带给人的感受，或
者用于感情升华，总结发言
3强调句，宾语从句(宾从前半句是让步状语从句+定语从句，宾语从句的后半句是
让步状语从句得主旬)
06. What happened today made me realize that forgiveness is a kind of virtue.（感悟升华）
1 what引导的主语从句和动词之后的宾语从句
2总结陈词的位置，总结两次小矛盾小高潮的收获或者心得。
3模版四: 主语从句+谓语动词+宾语从句
润色:在主语从句里添加副词或者介短，做时间或地点状语一细节被放大
07. She explained that her mother was badly ill last night, which contributed to her
fault.（推进情节）
1模版五:主谓+宾从.，非限定语从句
2形容词，副词，介词短语统统属于润色 字数不够，不要抱怨
4细节延展，自己编出来的
08. I will treasure/value our friendship forever.（感悟升华）
简单句用来表达感叹
用在最后一段的最后一句，或是引号里作为对话
09. Jennifer' s sleepy eyes opened wide and her face wore a smile that brightened up the whole room.（纯粹描写）
模版六:简单句and简单句，并且在任意简单句里增加一个宾从或者定从
使用语境:细节描写，用在一次小冲突后的某人表现，或者是完满解决了之后的
某人表现
10 Standing beside the empty road, they looked into the sky, feeling the precious peace from within. （纯粹描写）
1模版八:非谓语，主谓宾，非谓语
11 He was overwhelmed with joy,singing and dancing in the rain.（纯粹描写）
1短文续写中的情绪表达，多半是有动作来传递
2非谓语动词的叠加，烘托了情感氛围
12 Encouraged by the teacher' s words, Lucy raised her hand, whispering," I volunteer.（推进情节）
模版八:非谓语，主谓宾，非谓语
13 With his arms dropping, Beibei sat beside the pool, wondering whether he was white or black.（纯粹描写）
模版九: with+名词 +韭谓语(主伴doing，被伴done),主谓宾，非谓语
14 Seeing the helicopter, Jane felt as if it had been comforting her with its thunderous noise,“Your waiting pays off”（纯粹描写）
1非谓语，主谓(宾从)
2时态的混合使用
过去完成进行时
3对话，恰当的时候运用，能够完善细节
15 During the exam, so nervous was I that my mind went blank.（情节推动）
1模版七:状语(介短),倒装句(so形容词be主语that句子)
2用在强调某人的情绪状态，细节展现
3使用的时候注意时态:相邻两句话，时态般是一致
常见表示心情的说法
困惑
迷茫at a loss
头脑空白 mind went blank
迷惑不解be puzzled /confused
皱着眉头a frown stood on her face
感动
一股暖流涌上心头a warm current rose in her heart
眼泪夺眶而出tears welled up in her eyes
感到流泪be moved to tears
心被融化heart melted
特别感动be touched /moved profoundly
惊讶
震惊astonished
张大嘴巴with her mouth wide open
惊呆了be numb with shock
惊讶in astonishment
让她惊讶的是to her amazement/astonishment
难过
难过的depressed
沮丧的discouraged
眼睛湿润eyes were wet
低着头dead drooping
把头埋在手里hid her face in her hands
沉浸在悲伤中be immersed in sorrow / be overcome with sorrow
心情不好in low spirits
泪流满面tears rolled down her cheeks
沉浸在悲伤的海洋中floated in an ocean of sadness
骄傲
骄傲的proud
充满了自豪感burst with pride
紧张
焦躁的、不安的anxious，restless
踱来踱去paced up and down
坐立不安got ants in her pants
心跳很快heart beat wildly
手心出汗palms got sweaty
开心.
高兴delighted/ cheerful I joyful
让她高兴的是to her delight，狂 喜be wild with joy
精神高涨的in high 1 cherful spirits
面带微笑wore a shining smile心情好in good mood
愤怒
感到愤怒felt furious
脸气得通红flushed with anger
怒气冲天anger boiled over sb
怒视某人glared at sb
气得跺脚stamped her feet in anger
害怕
害怕地in panic
恐惧地in terror
感到害怕crept over sb
因害怕而哽咽choked with fear
其他
坚定的神色a determined look .
坚定的眼神determined eyes
心不在焉absent-minded
后悔be trapped in regret
动作类高频词汇
笑
开怀大笑smiled broadly
朝他笑flashed a smile at him
表情变明亮face lighted up
破涕为笑broke into a smile
面露喜色a wide smile appeared on her face
喜极而泣shed tears of joy
脸上绽放笑容face broadened into a smile
哭
眼含泪水tears sprang to her eyes
泪流满面tears broke free
流下幸福的泪水shed tears of happiness
大哭wept her eye's out
擦去泪水wiped the tears from her eye's
悲痛欲绝cried her heart out
看
看到某物She caught sight of sth/ Sth caught her eyes
怒视glared at目光落在eyes fell on sth
目不转睛she can't take her eyes off sth
吃
咀嚼chewed
吞swallowed
尝taste
咬bit
说
脱口而出blurt out
哭着说said through tears
尖叫scream
耳语whisper into her ears
好奇地问ask with curiosity
自言白语talk to herself
安慰comforted
大喊let out a cry
腿部动作
拖着疲劳的双腿dragged her legs
冲进rushed/dashed into
追逐chased after
前往headed for
加快脚步quickened her steps
头部动作
抬头raised her head
高抬着头held her head high
低头lowered her head
点头nodded her head
摇头shook her head
转头turned her head around
陷入深思be lost in thought
手部动作
紧紧拥抱hugged tightly
投人怀抱thrown herself into his arms
挥舞手臂wave her arms
用手指着pointed at
形容词作状语
表示原因
1. Depressed and helpless, she burst into tears.沮丧和无助，她哭了起来.
2. Curious to know what was happening inside she pushed the door open and slipped into
the house.她好奇地想知道里面发生了什么，推开门，溜进了屋子.，
表结果
She finally made it to the top of the mountain, hungry but excited.
她终于到了山顶，饿了但很兴奋。
She was encouraged by the teacher's smile, full of confidence in her plan.
她被老师的微笑所鼓舞，对她的计划充满信心。
表伴随
1. Deep in thought，she sat still against the door.她沉思着,一动不动地坐在门边.
2. Lost in the forest, she lay under a tree, full of fear and despair. 迷失在森林里，她躺在
一棵树下，充满了恐惧和绝望.
典型例题1
It was dark and freezing cold outside though it was four o'clock in the afternoon. The wind kept blowing. At that time, the bell rang loudly, and everybody packed their schoolbags and got ready to go home. The teacher dismissed the students, and they walked orderly to the school gate.
David was in Class One, Grade Seven. His mother would come and pick him up from school but today she was absent. David wondered what had happened, but he was not worried at mil. It usually took only ten minutes for his mother to get to school by riding an electric bike. David saw his best companion, Tommy, who was his deskmate. Tommy was waiting patiently for his mother as well. They began to talk freely and happily. David congratulated Tommy on his excellent performance in the last math exam. At the same time, Tommy thanked David, without whose help he couldn't have made such rapid progress. Five minutes later. Tommy's mother picked up Tommy and they said goodbye to each other.
David had to put up with his moments of solitude. He had no choice but to wait until his mother came into his sight. However, half an hour passed, and there was no sign that his mother would come. David was determined to walk home.
On his way home, David could hardly see any passers-by. The trees shook with the wind and the leaves fell from them without making any noise. David was lost in thinking what was wrong with his mother. Some terrible thoughts jumped out of his mind, "Maybe an accident happened to her. Maybe she got hurt by some robbers. Maybe she was seriously ill. ” Little David burst into tears and quickened his step. He did not dare to think over the results. What he could do was pray for the safety of his mother and wish everything was all right.
Time slipped away like an arrow. In the short distance, it was his beautiful house with a garden. “This must be the worst experience in my life," David thought to himself and felt scared.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
David stood in front of the door and opened it hurriedly.
Suddenly, there was a knock on the door and came a familiar voice.
David stood in front of the door and opened it hurriedly.
Feeling very anxious,David turned on the light without hesitation,calling out”Mom，Mom”.But there was no reply.A great fear seized his heart.”Where is my mom ” saying to himself,he opened every door to look for his mother.Still,he couldn’t find her anywhere.There was no doubt that his mother was not at home right now.So nervous was he that he began to make a phone call to his mother.It was so hard for him to control his nervous emotion.
Suddenly, there was a knock on the door and came a familiar voice.
With his heart filled with expectation,David ran to open the door.It was his mother.David was overwhelmed with joy,singing ,dancing and kissing his mother joyfully.His mother came in wearing a big smile,gave David a hug and explained”I just want you to be independent.And I followed you along the way.You made it.I am proud of you.David hugged his mother tightly,making a promise that he would never worry her and learn to become more independent.
情节：在家找没有找到，后来妈妈主动出现
情绪：担心焦急---恐惧---极度紧张---看到希望---兴奋---感恩
练习一
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees.“We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper. ”I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.
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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.”Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.
练习2
During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
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When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. I told her I hadn’t had lunch because I’d been waiting here for help for nearly three hours. The girl said they didn’t have lunch either. She suggested to her parents that we have lunch together. Their truck happened to have some food and some things for the picnic. So we ate together in a vacant lot by the side of the road. During that time, I told about what had happened to me and how I felt. They shared interesting stories about their lives in Mexico and on fruit farms. After lunch, the girl’s mother put a paper bag of fruit in my jeep. I showed my gratitude again and we said goodbye to each other.
After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag. There are some delicate fruits in the paper bag. I was surprised to find the money I had quietly left them. At the same time, there was a note written by a girl, which read “We are very happy to be able to help you. We have encountered many difficulties and been disappointed. But we met a lot of helpful people, which made us feel very warm. To help others with one’s own ability is also a kind of lifting a finger. The beauty of life comes from these lifting a finger. I hope you have a good life and a happy mood.” This made me very moved, and I would try my best to help more people in the future to make our world more beautiful and warmer.
练习3
It was lunchtime，Jerry，David，Tom，and I went to the dining hall to have lunch．I glanced across the busy cafeteria and saw the new student，Jack．He was holding his plate and waiting in lines．
David noticed him too．“Why’s the new kid dressed like the headmaster ”he asked．Tom and Jimmy laughed．
“Jack’s coo1．He’s in my English and history classes，”I said．However，I kept the truth that Jack and I had become friends when we worked on a project together．We discovered that we were both enthusiastic readers something I would never admit to Jerry，David．Tom．
I saw that Jack was walking toward us．“Don’t do it，”I thought，but in seconds he was at our table．My friends raised their eyebrows．Jerry，David，Tom piled their backpacks on the table and chairs so that there was no space left for another person to sit down．David said．“I don’t think we have room．”
This awkward situation froze the air．I could feel Jack looking at me，but I stared at my lunch as if it contained precious pearls of wisdom instead of rice and beans．After a long，uncomfortable pause，Jack left．I should have spoken up for him，but I couldn’t walk away from my three friends，could I
Jack didn’t speak to me after that meeting．He was soon hanging around with another group of kids．A few months later，I saw an announcement about Jack being chosen to be president of the school book club．I was happy for Jack’s achievements，but I realized I had made a big mistake when I said nothing at the lunch table that day．Why was I so afraid that my friends might find out that I like to read
As I stared at the announcement．I knew I needed to apologize to Jack-even if he did not want to become my friend again．I thought that my three friends would not agree．I also thought that I risked losing them as well．However，I knew that I would lose myself if I did nothing．
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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As the dismissal bell rang，I gathered up my books，took a deep breath，and went to find Jack．
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Jack nodded，and then mentioned my three friends．
As the dismissal bell rang，I gathered up my books，took a deep breath，and went to find Jack．A wave of uncertainty overwhelmed me．On the way to Jack’s classroom．I felt several butterflies still fluttering in my heart．However，urged by the strong desire to be a member of the reading club，I quickened my paces spontaneously．The classroom door opened．Here came Jack．Looking into his eyes，I made an apology，explaining that I wanted to join the school book club．
Jack nodded and then mentioned my three friends．With hesitation，I had no idea how to answer him．Seeing through my mind，Jack smiled and put forward a good idea．The next day，we were having lunch when Jack approached，holding a notice to recruit new members，saying that if someone wanted to join the club，he must take three other students to form a group．To my surprise，my friends were also interested in the book club．In a flash，Jack and I beamed to each other．
练习4
Having held the interschool storytelling championship for the past two years, I was the shining star of my school. When it came to choosing the right candidate to participate in such competitions, I was always the first choice. Naturally, I was once again selected to represent my school in the approaching contest this year.
Upon hearing the fact that I was chosen again, my classmates and friends acknowledged that I would undoubtedly emerge as the champion again. Consequently, I became conceited. I was so proud that I neglected the importance of practicing for the contest.
A week before the contest, my teacher Ms. Sara asked, “Selena, would you like to stand in front of the class to rehearse for the contest ” She had tutored me in the past two competitions and knew how important practice was. “Just imagine you are on the stage in the presence of the audience,” she added.
“I’m sorry, Ms. Sara,” I replied. “I have a bit of a sore throat.”
This was usually the lie I would tell whenever my teacher requested me to practice in front of the class. I always found excuses to avoid doing it because I believed that I was the best and therefore the practice was unnecessary. On one occasion, I even told Ms. Sara not to worry too much as I was well prepared for the contest. In fact, I did everything but practice my script. I only managed to glance briefly through the story the day before the contest. As the best storyteller among the students of the local secondary schools, I was too vain to practice and expected everything to be fine.
The contest was being held in the local community hall. On the day of the contest, the hall was packed. My school teachers and principal were there along with many of my classmates and schoolmates. I was the eighth contestant out of twenty in total. Those who spoke before me did extremely well. On seeing their fascinating and outstanding performance, I began to lose confidence in myself. My palms sweated heavily and I started to feel nervous.
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Soon, it was my turn to talk.__________________________________________________
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Finally, results were announced after the contest. _________________________________
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Soon, it was my turn to talk. Facing the crowd, I found myself suffering from stage fright. I spoke in an expressionless voice and even stuttered a few times as I forgot parts of the story. My legs trembled and so did my voice. On seeing my terrible performance, the judges shook their heads. The supporters from my school looked at me in disappointment. I have never been so embarrassed in my life. In the end, I walked off the stage, my eyes filled with tears.
Finally, results were announced after the contest. I didn’t win any prizes—not even a consolation one. It was not surprising at all. I felt ashamed when I faced my classmates and of course, Ms. Sara. I regretted underestimating my opponents and overestimating myself. My vanity had cost me the championship. I now regretted being so arrogant. I had learned my lesson well and finally understood the meaning of the two sayings, “Pride goes before a fall.” and “Practice makes perfect.”
高分短文续写:
读后续写不需要情节多么有趣或动人，而是需要和原文逻辑融洽，你不是自圆自说，而是帮助原文作者“圆”，并让人感到自然,而不是突儿做作,至于什么科幻，肯定不行
情节尽可能简洁，不要拖泥带水，一般就是续写一个到两个solution的组合:譬如别人的安慰让我镇定下来,然后耐心等待，不一会救援人物出现，脱险结束，总共核心情节就三句而已,中间无非就是感情的变化
三、情节既然很简洁，那么就必须有一定的细节描写积累，否则巧妇难为无米之炊.
这样写，并非是让思维限制了,实际上,好莱坞制作电影基本如此的:危险出现、反派眼看就要成功、超级英雄出现、成功挽救，中间夹杂着老掉牙的爱情和美女,但是有谁说这就是个固定模式而感到厌倦呢 没有,照样观众被感动得一塌糊涂的
实际上大部分的完形和鸡汤文阅读内容模式都是一个套路模式的，只是换了人物的名称而已.
四、读后续写的续写内容，命题角度来看都会围绕“Conflict & Solution”展开.结合历年考查的题材来看，题材主要关于:迷路系列(自己不知道该怎么办)、脱险系列(情况非常紧急，要快速反应了)、争吵系列(解开心结的)
解决方案基本是以下途径:
encouragement(某人的鼓励的话)
2.comfort(某人的安慰)
3.inspiration(突然灵机一动)
4.effort(自已的努力训练)
5.calm(冷静思考)
6.kindness(某人的善良)
7.courage(勇敢做起来)
8.love（爱心,不过这个需要和 move，patience结合，爱只是底子，还需要感化和耐心等待)
9.help(准确说是及时帮助)
当然这个解决方案 ( solution)可能是以上多种组合，譬如先平静下来(calm),然后有了勇气(courage),最后有了动力(inspiration)
比如某一年的熊口脱险:先calm下来,然后灵机一动想出办法,最后救援人员及时赶到;
话题不能过于专业化等，因此看似话题很广，但其实细细分类，还是有迹可循的。这就为我们平时备考提供了线索。各个冲突并非孤立的，而是相互交织，解决方法也是如此:
Conflict and Emotion: 三冲突
Solution and Emotion: 四途径
这样划分后，我们就比较方便去针对性进行训练。下面且以高考真题为例进行说明:
卷别
Conflict Solution
高分续写的文章，写作模版: .
(1)第一句展现情绪:面对矛盾，本能反应
(2)第二句补充细节:进一步解释描写主人公的反应
(3)第三句试图改变:个人的努力或借助外界
(4)第四句黄天不负:自己的努力失败了，或者说自己的努力只是部分上的解决了问题
(5)第五句再度失望:问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
(6)第六句再次转机:突然有了一个想法
(7) 第七句皆大欢喜:过了一段时间;事情有了最后的转折
(8)第八句首尾呼应:总结前文,升华主题
例子:
(浙江高考2016年10月)
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom，“I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom！”she cried.“Help！”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
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But the helicopter didn’t come back again, and the day became darker. __________________
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Jane woke up at the daybreak. __________________________________________________
夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子 独白离开，迷路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次搜救但没有看见她，她感到很失望。
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But the helicopter didn’t come back again, and the day became darker. ______________
A wave of terror swept over her. 一阵恐惧向她席卷而来
(纯粹描写面对矛盾的本能反应)
Her heart pounding fiercely and her palms sweating ,an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.她的心猛烈地跳动并且掌心出汗，内心的声音告诉她，必须要找个安全的地方
(进一步地解释描述主人公的反应，此处可加语言或者心理描写凑字数)
Tired and terrified as she was ,Jane plucked her courage to feel the way.虽然又累又怕，Jane鼓起勇气摸索着前进
(开始努力解决问题，情节推进)
Luckily,it didn’t take long before she found a cave.幸运的是，不多久她就找到了一个洞穴
(失败了，或者是部分地解决了问题，情节推进)
Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of hope,saying to herself,”Tomorrow is another day.”
宽慰地舒了一口气，她感到了一丝希望，自言自语道“明天是新的一天”
(纯粹描写，每当发生一个事情，或者主人公做过了一个事情都要描写这个事件对于主人公带来的情绪上的影响)
With that ,she went to sleep,in whose dream her husband kept her company.
(情节推进，最后一句一定要和第二段的开头句子相联系，这里是夫妻吵架，那要埋上夫妻吵架的次要矛盾最终得到解决的伏笔)
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Jane woke up at the daybreak____________________________
Hungry and disappointed,she found not any helicopter overhead,at a loss what to do.她又饿又失望，她也没发现头顶有直升机，她不知道该怎么办
(纯粹描写，问题还是没有彻底解决，再一次描写主人公的本能反应)
It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first.她突然想到应该先找一个大的开阔地
(情节推进，突然有了想法或者奇妙的巧合)
Having gobbling down some blackberries,she can’t wait to set off.狼吞虎咽了些黑莓，她立刻就出发了
(情节推进，再次开始自己开始努力，或者是借者其他人的帮助开始努力)
After what seemed a century,such an area did come into sight.在好似一个世纪那么长的时间之后，这样的地方映入眼帘
(情节推进，肯定会有最美好的意外发生的)
Her face brightened up.她的脸亮了起来
(纯粹描写，意外发生之后，主人公的反应)
What a coincidence it is that meanwhile ,a helicopter was flying towards her.多么巧，同时有一架直升机朝她飞过来
(情节推进，巧合借着发生，最终矛盾被解决)
Upon its landing ,out dashed her husband who hugged Jane tightly,tears welling up in their eyes.直升飞机刚一落地，她的丈夫就冲了出来，紧紧地拥抱着Jane,彼此都是热泪盈眶
(情节推进，次要矛盾被解决，大团圆结局)
It was at that moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise.这一刻，他们决定了不再吵架要学会妥协让步
(感悟升华)
矛盾：主要矛盾，Jane迷路了
解决办法：被直升机找到
总共的情节，Jane找了个洞睡了一觉，然后找到了一个开阔地，等到了直升飞机和丈夫团聚了
情感上的变化:恐惧--紧张--镇定--宽慰---失望，迷茫--充满希望--欣喜--激动--感恩
高分续写的文章，句式中需要出现的元素
非谓语动词做定语或状语;
2.双黄蛋句式; (从句套从句)
3.头轻脚重，介短状往后靠;
4.形 容词短语作定语;
5.定语从句和表语从句;
6. what和it句型;
7.倒装句;
8.强调句;
9.宾语从句和状语从句;
10.感叹句(和虚拟省略)
01. Noticing Susan's unhappiness, Rose secretly suggested making a crown with flowers to please her.（推进情节）
看到了Susan的不悦,Rose悄悄地建议用花做一顶帽子来取悦她。
1非谓语动词，做主动伴随
2第一个主人公的情绪表达，在第二个人的眼里是怎么样的，紧跟其后的是第二个人的反应
3模块:做着.....某人做了....
02. As the family walked to the door to leave, the mother came running back, gave me a hug and whispered,“Thanks for being our angels today."(推进情节)
1状语从句，时间
2对于细节展开想象，先有中文想到，后有英语写到。你能看到的，你能得到的，以及所有的本能反应)。
动作细化描写，能避免无话可说
3模版二当某人做某事的时候，某人做了，做了，and做了。
4润色:两处非谓语，一处引号
03. Feeling familiar with the voice, she turned round and saw. （推进情节）
1.语法上和模板例句1相同，但此处是说主语自己的情感
04. A small smile may make a big difference.（感悟升华）
物作主语，偏拟人化的用法
05. It was this unique experience that made me understand no matter what difficulty we may face, we mustn't give up our hope.（感悟升华）
1.强调句套宾语从句+状语从句
2应用场景:用于对于某件事情大彻大悟(尾声)，用于某件事情带给人的感受，或
者用于感情升华，总结发言
3强调句，宾语从句(宾从前半句是让步状语从句+定语从句，宾语从句的后半句是
让步状语从句得主旬)
06. What happened today made me realize that forgiveness is a kind of virtue.（感悟升华）
1 what引导的主语从句和动词之后的宾语从句
2总结陈词的位置，总结两次小矛盾小高潮的收获或者心得。
3模版四: 主语从句+谓语动词+宾语从句
润色:在主语从句里添加副词或者介短，做时间或地点状语一细节被放大
07. She explained that her mother was badly ill last night, which contributed to her
fault.（推进情节）
1模版五:主谓+宾从.，非限定语从句
2形容词，副词，介词短语统统属于润色 字数不够，不要抱怨
4细节延展，自己编出来的
08. I will treasure/value our friendship forever.（感悟升华）
简单句用来表达感叹
用在最后一段的最后一句，或是引号里作为对话
09. Jennifer' s sleepy eyes opened wide and her face wore a smile that brightened up the whole room.（纯粹描写）
模版六:简单句and简单句，并且在任意简单句里增加一个宾从或者定从
使用语境:细节描写，用在一次小冲突后的某人表现，或者是完满解决了之后的
某人表现
10 Standing beside the empty road, they looked into the sky, feeling the precious peace from within. （纯粹描写）
1模版八:非谓语，主谓宾，非谓语
11 He was overwhelmed with joy,singing and dancing in the rain.（纯粹描写）
1短文续写中的情绪表达，多半是有动作来传递
2非谓语动词的叠加，烘托了情感氛围
12 Encouraged by the teacher' s words, Lucy raised her hand, whispering," I volunteer.（推进情节）
模版八:非谓语，主谓宾，非谓语
13 With his arms dropping, Beibei sat beside the pool, wondering whether he was white or black.（纯粹描写）
模版九: with+名词 +韭谓语(主伴doing，被伴done),主谓宾，非谓语
14 Seeing the helicopter, Jane felt as if it had been comforting her with its thunderous noise,“Your waiting pays off”（纯粹描写）
1非谓语，主谓(宾从)
2时态的混合使用
过去完成进行时
3对话，恰当的时候运用，能够完善细节
15 During the exam, so nervous was I that my mind went blank.（情节推动）
1模版七:状语(介短),倒装句(so形容词be主语that句子)
2用在强调某人的情绪状态，细节展现
3使用的时候注意时态:相邻两句话，时态般是一致
常见表示心情的说法
困惑
迷茫at a loss
头脑空白 mind went blank
迷惑不解be puzzled /confused
皱着眉头a frown stood on her face
感动
一股暖流涌上心头a warm current rose in her heart
眼泪夺眶而出tears welled up in her eyes
感到流泪be moved to tears
心被融化heart melted
特别感动be touched /moved profoundly
惊讶
震惊astonished
张大嘴巴with her mouth wide open
惊呆了be numb with shock
惊讶in astonishment
让她惊讶的是to her amazement/astonishment
难过
难过的depressed
沮丧的discouraged
眼睛湿润eyes were wet
低着头dead drooping
把头埋在手里hid her face in her hands
沉浸在悲伤中be immersed in sorrow / be overcome with sorrow
心情不好in low spirits
泪流满面tears rolled down her cheeks
沉浸在悲伤的海洋中floated in an ocean of sadness
骄傲
骄傲的proud
充满了自豪感burst with pride
紧张
焦躁的、不安的anxious，restless
踱来踱去paced up and down
坐立不安got ants in her pants
心跳很快heart beat wildly
手心出汗palms got sweaty
开心.
高兴delighted/ cheerful I joyful
让她高兴的是to her delight，狂 喜be wild with joy
精神高涨的in high 1 cherful spirits
面带微笑wore a shining smile心情好in good mood
愤怒
感到愤怒felt furious
脸气得通红flushed with anger
怒气冲天anger boiled over sb
怒视某人glared at sb
气得跺脚stamped her feet in anger
害怕
害怕地in panic
恐惧地in terror
感到害怕crept over sb
因害怕而哽咽choked with fear
其他
坚定的神色a determined look .
坚定的眼神determined eyes
心不在焉absent-minded
后悔be trapped in regret
动作类高频词汇
笑
开怀大笑smiled broadly
朝他笑flashed a smile at him
表情变明亮face lighted up
破涕为笑broke into a smile
面露喜色a wide smile appeared on her face
喜极而泣shed tears of joy
脸上绽放笑容face broadened into a smile
哭
眼含泪水tears sprang to her eyes
泪流满面tears broke free
流下幸福的泪水shed tears of happiness
大哭wept her eye's out
擦去泪水wiped the tears from her eye's
悲痛欲绝cried her heart out
看
看到某物She caught sight of sth/ Sth caught her eyes
怒视glared at目光落在eyes fell on sth
目不转睛she can't take her eyes off sth
吃
咀嚼chewed
吞swallowed
尝taste
咬bit
说
脱口而出blurt out
哭着说said through tears
尖叫scream
耳语whisper into her ears
好奇地问ask with curiosity
自言白语talk to herself
安慰comforted
大喊let out a cry
腿部动作
拖着疲劳的双腿dragged her legs
冲进rushed/dashed into
追逐chased after
前往headed for
加快脚步quickened her steps
头部动作
抬头raised her head
高抬着头held her head high
低头lowered her head
点头nodded her head
摇头shook her head
转头turned her head around
陷入深思be lost in thought
手部动作
紧紧拥抱hugged tightly
投人怀抱thrown herself into his arms
挥舞手臂wave her arms
用手指着pointed at
形容词作状语
表示原因
1. Depressed and helpless, she burst into tears.沮丧和无助，她哭了起来.
2. Curious to know what was happening inside she pushed the door open and slipped into
the house.她好奇地想知道里面发生了什么，推开门，溜进了屋子.，
表结果
She finally made it to the top of the mountain, hungry but excited.
她终于到了山顶，饿了但很兴奋。
She was encouraged by the teacher's smile, full of confidence in her plan.
她被老师的微笑所鼓舞，对她的计划充满信心。
表伴随
1. Deep in thought，she sat still against the door.她沉思着,一动不动地坐在门边.
2. Lost in the forest, she lay under a tree, full of fear and despair. 迷失在森林里，她躺在
一棵树下，充满了恐惧和绝望.
典型例题1
It was dark and freezing cold outside though it was four o'clock in the afternoon. The wind kept blowing. At that time, the bell rang loudly, and everybody packed their schoolbags and got ready to go home. The teacher dismissed the students, and they walked orderly to the school gate.
David was in Class One, Grade Seven. His mother would come and pick him up from school but today she was absent. David wondered what had happened, but he was not worried at mil. It usually took only ten minutes for his mother to get to school by riding an electric bike. David saw his best companion, Tommy, who was his deskmate. Tommy was waiting patiently for his mother as well. They began to talk freely and happily. David congratulated Tommy on his excellent performance in the last math exam. At the same time, Tommy thanked David, without whose help he couldn't have made such rapid progress. Five minutes later. Tommy's mother picked up Tommy and they said goodbye to each other.
David had to put up with his moments of solitude. He had no choice but to wait until his mother came into his sight. However, half an hour passed, and there was no sign that his mother would come. David was determined to walk home.
On his way home, David could hardly see any passers-by. The trees shook with the wind and the leaves fell from them without making any noise. David was lost in thinking what was wrong with his mother. Some terrible thoughts jumped out of his mind, "Maybe an accident happened to her. Maybe she got hurt by some robbers. Maybe she was seriously ill. ” Little David burst into tears and quickened his step. He did not dare to think over the results. What he could do was pray for the safety of his mother and wish everything was all right.
Time slipped away like an arrow. In the short distance, it was his beautiful house with a garden. “This must be the worst experience in my life," David thought to himself and felt scared.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
David stood in front of the door and opened it hurriedly.
Suddenly, there was a knock on the door and came a familiar voice.
David stood in front of the door and opened it hurriedly.
Feeling very anxious,David turned on the light without hesitation,calling out”Mom，Mom”.But there was no reply.A great fear seized his heart.”Where is my mom ” saying to himself,he opened every door to look for his mother.Still,he couldn’t find her anywhere.There was no doubt that his mother was not at home right now.So nervous was he that he began to make a phone call to his mother.It was so hard for him to control his nervous emotion.
Suddenly, there was a knock on the door and came a familiar voice.
With his heart filled with expectation,David ran to open the door.It was his mother.David was overwhelmed with joy,singing ,dancing and kissing his mother joyfully.His mother came in wearing a big smile,gave David a hug and explained”I just want you to be independent.And I followed you along the way.You made it.I am proud of you.David hugged his mother tightly,making a promise that he would never worry her and learn to become more independent.
情节：在家找没有找到，后来妈妈主动出现
情绪：担心焦急---恐惧---极度紧张---看到希望---兴奋---感恩
练习一
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees.“We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper. ”I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.
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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.”Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.
练习2
During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
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When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. I told her I hadn’t had lunch because I’d been waiting here for help for nearly three hours. The girl said they didn’t have lunch either. She suggested to her parents that we have lunch together. Their truck happened to have some food and some things for the picnic. So we ate together in a vacant lot by the side of the road. During that time, I told about what had happened to me and how I felt. They shared interesting stories about their lives in Mexico and on fruit farms. After lunch, the girl’s mother put a paper bag of fruit in my jeep. I showed my gratitude again and we said goodbye to each other.
After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag. There are some delicate fruits in the paper bag. I was surprised to find the money I had quietly left them. At the same time, there was a note written by a girl, which read “We are very happy to be able to help you. We have encountered many difficulties and been disappointed. But we met a lot of helpful people, which made us feel very warm. To help others with one’s own ability is also a kind of lifting a finger. The beauty of life comes from these lifting a finger. I hope you have a good life and a happy mood.” This made me very moved, and I would try my best to help more people in the future to make our world more beautiful and warmer.
练习3
It was lunchtime，Jerry，David，Tom，and I went to the dining hall to have lunch．I glanced across the busy cafeteria and saw the new student，Jack．He was holding his plate and waiting in lines．
David noticed him too．“Why’s the new kid dressed like the headmaster ”he asked．Tom and Jimmy laughed．
“Jack’s coo1．He’s in my English and history classes，”I said．However，I kept the truth that Jack and I had become friends when we worked on a project together．We discovered that we were both enthusiastic readers something I would never admit to Jerry，David．Tom．
I saw that Jack was walking toward us．“Don’t do it，”I thought，but in seconds he was at our table．My friends raised their eyebrows．Jerry，David，Tom piled their backpacks on the table and chairs so that there was no space left for another person to sit down．David said．“I don’t think we have room．”
This awkward situation froze the air．I could feel Jack looking at me，but I stared at my lunch as if it contained precious pearls of wisdom instead of rice and beans．After a long，uncomfortable pause，Jack left．I should have spoken up for him，but I couldn’t walk away from my three friends，could I
Jack didn’t speak to me after that meeting．He was soon hanging around with another group of kids．A few months later，I saw an announcement about Jack being chosen to be president of the school book club．I was happy for Jack’s achievements，but I realized I had made a big mistake when I said nothing at the lunch table that day．Why was I so afraid that my friends might find out that I like to read
As I stared at the announcement．I knew I needed to apologize to Jack-even if he did not want to become my friend again．I thought that my three friends would not agree．I also thought that I risked losing them as well．However，I knew that I would lose myself if I did nothing．
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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As the dismissal bell rang，I gathered up my books，took a deep breath，and went to find Jack．
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Jack nodded，and then mentioned my three friends．
As the dismissal bell rang，I gathered up my books，took a deep breath，and went to find Jack．A wave of uncertainty overwhelmed me．On the way to Jack’s classroom．I felt several butterflies still fluttering in my heart．However，urged by the strong desire to be a member of the reading club，I quickened my paces spontaneously．The classroom door opened．Here came Jack．Looking into his eyes，I made an apology，explaining that I wanted to join the school book club．
Jack nodded and then mentioned my three friends．With hesitation，I had no idea how to answer him．Seeing through my mind，Jack smiled and put forward a good idea．The next day，we were having lunch when Jack approached，holding a notice to recruit new members，saying that if someone wanted to join the club，he must take three other students to form a group．To my surprise，my friends were also interested in the book club．In a flash，Jack and I beamed to each other．
练习4
Having held the interschool storytelling championship for the past two years, I was the shining star of my school. When it came to choosing the right candidate to participate in such competitions, I was always the first choice. Naturally, I was once again selected to represent my school in the approaching contest this year.
Upon hearing the fact that I was chosen again, my classmates and friends acknowledged that I would undoubtedly emerge as the champion again. Consequently, I became conceited. I was so proud that I neglected the importance of practicing for the contest.
A week before the contest, my teacher Ms. Sara asked, “Selena, would you like to stand in front of the class to rehearse for the contest ” She had tutored me in the past two competitions and knew how important practice was. “Just imagine you are on the stage in the presence of the audience,” she added.
“I’m sorry, Ms. Sara,” I replied. “I have a bit of a sore throat.”
This was usually the lie I would tell whenever my teacher requested me to practice in front of the class. I always found excuses to avoid doing it because I believed that I was the best and therefore the practice was unnecessary. On one occasion, I even told Ms. Sara not to worry too much as I was well prepared for the contest. In fact, I did everything but practice my script. I only managed to glance briefly through the story the day before the contest. As the best storyteller among the students of the local secondary schools, I was too vain to practice and expected everything to be fine.
The contest was being held in the local community hall. On the day of the contest, the hall was packed. My school teachers and principal were there along with many of my classmates and schoolmates. I was the eighth contestant out of twenty in total. Those who spoke before me did extremely well. On seeing their fascinating and outstanding performance, I began to lose confidence in myself. My palms sweated heavily and I started to feel nervous.
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Soon, it was my turn to talk.__________________________________________________
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Finally, results were announced after the contest. _________________________________
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Soon, it was my turn to talk. Facing the crowd, I found myself suffering from stage fright. I spoke in an expressionless voice and even stuttered a few times as I forgot parts of the story. My legs trembled and so did my voice. On seeing my terrible performance, the judges shook their heads. The supporters from my school looked at me in disappointment. I have never been so embarrassed in my life. In the end, I walked off the stage, my eyes filled with tears.
Finally, results were announced after the contest. I didn’t win any prizes—not even a consolation one. It was not surprising at all. I felt ashamed when I faced my classmates and of course, Ms. Sara. I regretted underestimating my opponents and overestimating myself. My vanity had cost me the championship. I now regretted being so arrogant. I had learned my lesson well and finally understood the meaning of the two sayings, “Pride goes before a fall.” and “Practice makes perfect.”