人教版（2019） 必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Life 写作训练课件 （10张）

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人教2019版必修第一册Unit 1写作训练波峰李树果9/27/2022Mr Lee9/27/2022Mr Lee假定你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说由于刚进入高中还不能适应新环境，她不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你给她回一封信，内容包括：1.向Jenny表示问候和安慰。2.针对她的问题提出建议：(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；(2)遇到困难时，互相帮助。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯第一步 谋篇9/27/2022Mr Lee明确体裁话题1.指出问题所在2.提出摆脱困境、适应环境的建议3.给出祝愿首段：引出问题中段：就事说事，根据具体情况给出恰当建议尾段：表达自己的愿望一般现在时；第二人称为主建议信；如何适应环境确定时态人称布局文章框架列出核心要点第二步 遣词9/27/2022Mr Lee1.感觉不好2.进入高中3.面临同样的问题4.太担心…5. V.邀请feel badenter high schoolface the same problemworry too much about...invite9/27/2022Mr Lee6.参加take part in7. n.活动activity8.相互理解understand each other9.与…沟通communicate with10.处于困境中in trouble第三步 造句9/27/2022Mr Lee1.你进入高中后情绪低落。（主系表；介词短语）You feel bad after entering high school.2.你的同学们也面临着同样的问题。（主谓宾；现在进行时)Your classmates are also facing the same problem.3.你不必太担心。（主谓状）You don't have to worry too much about it.9/27/2022Mr Lee4.尽力邀请你的同学们一起参加一些活动。（祈使句)Try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together.5.这些活动有助于你们相互理解。（主谓宾补；一般将来时)These activities will help you understand each other.6.帮助有困难的同学。（祈使句；定语从句)Help students who are in trouble.第四步 升级9/27/2022Mr Lee1.用因果结构合并句2和句3。Your classmates are also facing the same problem , so you don't have to worry too much about it.2.用定语从句合并句4和句5。Try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together , which will help you understand each other.第五步 写摹背诵9/27/2022Mr LeeDear Jenny,I am sorry to hear you feel bad after entering high school . As far as I know , your classmates are also facing the same problem , so you don't have to worry too much about it . Here are some suggestions to help you.9/27/2022Mr LeeFirst, try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together , which will help you understand each other better by communicating with them.Besides , help students who are in trouble .I do hope you will find my suggestions useful .Yours sincerely ,Li Hua