Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are? SectionB 3a-3b 课件(共22张PPT)

(共22张PPT)
Could you please tell me where the restrooms are
Writing
Section B 3a-3b
Imagine you are going on a short study vacation at a school in an English-speaking country.
What would you like to know before you go
Write a polite letter to the school asking for the information you want to know.
Why am I writing this passage
What kind of passage should it be
Who am I writing to
What should I write about
A polite letter.
Maybe a teacher.
a letter of inquiry
咨询信
I should ask for some information I want to know.
Step 1. Read the requirements carefully(仔细审题).
Circle / Underline the key information (圈划重点):
Imagine you are going on a short study vacation at a school in an English-speaking country.
What would you like to know before you go
Write a polite letter to the school asking for the information you want to know.
Step 2. Draw an outline of the whole passage
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
greeting
self-introduction
explain the reason why you write the letter
ask for information
thank the person for helping you
Imagine you are going on a short study vacation at a school in an English-speaking country.
What would you like to know before you go
Write a polite letter to the school asking for the information you want to know.
Step 2. Draw an outline of the whole passage
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
greeting
self-introduction
explain the reason why you write the letter
ask for information
thank the person for helping you
ask for information
Para. 2
Imagine you are going on a short study vacation at a school in an English-speaking country.
What would you like to know before you go
Write a polite letter to the school asking for the information you want to know.
Step 3. Brainstorm (头脑风暴)
What other information do you want to know
A. What courses can I study there
C. Where will I stay
B. What activities can I do at school
D. Is there any place to have fun outside the school
Which question is inappropriate (不合适) to ask in this letter
D. What time should I go to school and what time does school end every day
E. Where can I have meals in school
F. Is it convenient for me to get to school from other parts of the city
......
问题恰当合理
Could you please tell me
what course I can study there
A. What courses can I study there
C. Where will I stay
B. What activities can I do at school
D. What time should I go to school and what time does school end
every day
E. Where can I have meals in school
F. Is it convenient for me to get to school from other parts of the city
Could you please tell me what course I can study there
I wonder ..../ Do you know ... / Please tell me ....
May I have more information about...
I wonder what activities I can do at school.
Do you know where I will stay
Please tell me what time I should go to school and what time school ends.
May I have more information about where I can have meals
Please tell me if/whether it is convenient for me to get to....
问题恰当合理
语言礼貌得体
A. What courses can I study there
C. Where will I stay
B. What activities can I do at school
D. What time should I go to school and what time does school end
every day
E. Where can I have meals in school
F. Is it convenient for me to get to school from other parts of the city
问题恰当合理
Could you please tell me what course I can study there
I wonder what activities I can do at school.
Do you know where I will stay
Please tell me what time I should go to school and what time school ends.
May I have more information about where I can have meals
Please tell me if/whether it is convenient for me to get to....
语言礼貌得体
Could you please tell me what course I can study there I wonder what activities I can do at school. Do you know where I will stay Please tell me what time I should go to school and what time school ends. May I have more information about where I can have meals Please tell me whether it is convenient for me to get to school from other parts of the city.
I wonder ..../ Do you know ... / Please tell me ....
May I have more information about...
还缺少什么
语句衔接过渡
问题恰当合理
语言礼貌得体
Could you please tell me what course I can study there I wonder what activities I can do at school. Do you know where I will stay Please tell me what time I should go to school and what time school ends. May I have more information about where I can have meals Please tell me whether it is convenient for me to get to school from other parts of the city.
语句衔接过渡
Firstly, ...
First of all, ...
To begin with, ...
Next, ...
Then, ...
And I also ...
Besides, ...
What’s more, ...
Moreover, ...
Furthermore, ...
In addition, ...
Additionally,...
Lastly, ...
At last, ...
Finally, ...
Last but not least, ...
问题恰当合理
语言礼貌得体
Firstly, could you please tell me what course I can study there And I also wonder what activities I can do at school. Moreover, do you know where I will stay In addition, please tell me what time I should go to school and what time school ends. What’s more, may I have more information about where I can have meals Last but not least, please tell me whether it is convenient for me to get to school from other parts of the city.
语句衔接过渡
可否再进一步提升？
目前有何不足？
问题恰当合理
语言礼貌得体
Firstly, could you please tell me what course I can study there And I also wonder what activities I can do at school. Moreover, do you know where I will stay In addition, please tell me what time I should go to school and what time school ends. What’s more, may I have more information about where I can have meals Last but not least, please tell me whether it is convenient for me to get to school from other parts of the city.
语句衔接过渡
问题太多，每个问题一句话，
像白开水——平铺直叙，平平无奇
问题恰当合理
语言礼貌得体
Firstly, could you please tell me what course I can study there And I also wonder what activities I can do at school.
语句衔接过渡
适当删减
Firstly, could you please tell me what course I can study there I’m quite interested in the culture of your country so I really want to attend a class about it.
补充信息（细节、原因等）、详略得当
问题恰当合理
语言礼貌得体
Moreover, do you know where I will stay In addition, please tell me what time I should go to school and what time school ends. What’s more, may I have more information about where I can have meals Last but not least, please tell me whether it is convenient for me to get to school from other parts of the city.
语句衔接过渡
适当删减
Moreover, do you know where I will stay and what time the school starts
If I live far away from the school, I need to arrange my time properly(恰当地安排我的时间) so I won’t arrive late for class. And if that is the case, please also tell me whether there is a way to get to school conveniently since I am not familiar with(对...不熟悉) the traffic condition.
、补充细节、加强信息之间的内在联系
问题恰当合理
语言礼貌得体
Firstly, could you please tell me what course I can study there I’m quite interested in the culture of your country so I really want to attend a class about it. Moreover, do you know where I will stay and what time the school starts If I live far away from the school, I need to arrange my time properly(恰当地安排我的时间) so I won’t arrive late for class. And if that is the case, please also tell me whether there is a way to get to school conveniently since I am not familiar with(对...不熟悉) the traffic condition.
语句衔接过渡
适当删减、加强信息之间的内在联系、详略得当
问题恰当合理
语言礼貌得体
语句衔接过渡
适当删减、加强信息之间的内在联系、详略得当
总结： Step 4. Polish(打磨)
Imagine you are going on a short study vacation at a school in an English-speaking country.
What would you like to know before you go
Write a polite letter to the school asking for the information you want to know.
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
greeting
self-introduction
explain the reason why you write the letter
ask for information
thank the person for helping you
Imagine you are going on a short study vacation at a school in an English-speaking country.
What would you like to know before you go
Write a polite letter to the school asking for the information you want to know.
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
greeting
self-introduction
explain the reason why you write the letter
ask for information
thank the person for helping you
Imagine you are going on a short study vacation at a school in an English-speaking country.
What would you like to know before you go
Write a polite letter to the school asking for the information you want to know.
Para. 1
greeting
self-introduction
explain the reason why you write the letter
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from China. It’s a great opportunity(机会) for me to go on a short study vacation at your school this summer, so I’m writing to ask about some related(相关的) information.
Imagine you are going on a short study vacation at a school in an English-speaking country.
What would you like to know before you go
Write a polite letter to the school asking for the information you want to know.
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
greeting
self-introduction
explain the reason why you write the letter
ask for information
thank the person for helping you
Imagine you are going on a short study vacation at a school in an English-speaking country.
What would you like to know before you go
Write a polite letter to the school asking for the information you want to know.
Thank you so much for answering my questions. Look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Para. 3
thank the person for helping you
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from China. It’s a great opportunity(机会) for me to go on a short study vacation at your school this summer, so I’m writing to ask about some related(相关的) information.
Firstly, could you please tell me what course I can study there I’m quite interested in the culture of your country so I really want to attend a class about it. Moreover, do you know where I will stay and what time the school starts If I live far away from the school, I need to arrange my time properly(恰当地安排我的时间) so I won’t arrive late for class. And if that is the case, please also tell me whether there is a way to get to school conveniently since I am not familiar with(对...不熟悉) the traffic condition.
Thank you so much for answering my questions. Look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Review: basic elements
审好题干：
整理提纲：
构成框架、打磨语言
圈画重点信息，找准文章定位
头脑风暴 拓展思维
content structure language handwriting
通读检查、仔细誊抄
内容 结构 语言 书写
文章体裁、人物关系、语篇用途等
与主题相关的所有信息
筛选合适恰当的信息
建立信息间逻辑关系
运用连词巧妙衔接过渡
词汇、语法正确
语言得体恰当
句式多样、高级
内容、结构层面
语言层面
书写、卷面
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