中考专区二轮专题初中英语作文课件(共45张PPT)

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初中英语写作
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1. We have a computer class one week a time.
→We have a computer class once a week.
2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers.
→You can see many flowers if you go to our school.
3. There have 100 books.
→ There are 100 books.
4. I study very happy.
→ I study very happily.
5. I usually swimming there.
→ I usually swim there.
6. Our school wall beside has many trees.
→There are many trees beside our school wall.
7. Several hours after, he was surprised.
→Several hours later, he was surprised.
8. He had to asked the other one.
→He had to ask the other one.
9. He thought he speak well.
He thought he spoke well.
10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .
Mr. Li is from Beijing .
遣词
造句
谋篇
遣词
培养英语思维---词的搭配
大雨
大桥
大楼
大错
大写
大病
大地震
heavy rain
long bridge
tall building
serious / terrible mistake
capital letter
serious illness
major earthquake
遣词 造句 谋篇
词性
成功
（n.） success
（v.） succeed
（adj.） successful
（adv.） successfully
请判断：
I will never forget his brave and honest.
bravery
honesty
一词多义
share --- ？
--- happy and sad moments
--- common hobby
--- housework
--- I share your feeling.
有同样的感情、经历等）
有着共同的…
分担…
理解
词汇升级
表示“好”的词有哪些？
good
excellent
wonderful
fantastic
awesome
perfect
can not be better
请翻译：良师益友
好的；优良的
极好的 优秀的
极好的
极好的
棒极了的
完美的
再好不过了
词汇全面升级
见到名词：
1.上形容词
She is always wearing a smile.

2. 上定从
She is always wearing beautiful smile
→
beautiful / pleasant
that makes people around her feel comfortable.
见到动词 --- 上副词
I agree.
I completely / partly / hardly agree.
He always shares his study methods with us.
He always shares his practical study methods
with us selflessly.
见到形容词、副词
1. 升级
a good teacher and great friend
an excellent teacher and wonderful friend
2. 变比较级
try hard try harder
fresh air fresher air
造句
英语和汉语，到底像不像？
英语“进化论”
This is a tiger！！！
This is a big tiger！！！
This is a tiger on the grass！！！
This is a tiger
that I saw before！！！
This is a tiger running to the school.
英语“进化论"
This is a tiger.
This is a big tiger.
This is a tiger on the grass.
This is a tiger that I saw before.
This is a tiger running to the school.
英语语法“入门级”基本规律
主干成分：
汉语和英语基本一致；
英语中有若干固定句型
修饰成分：
汉语多“前修”，而英语…
较短修饰成分放在被修饰词前面；
较长修饰成分放在被修饰词后面。
把握英语句子，关键在于把握
“较长修饰成分”
英语中的三种“较长修饰成分”
介词短语
从句
非谓语动词短语
6种主干句型：
主谓： I come.
主谓宾： I love you.
主谓宾宾： I give you my heart.
主谓宾补： You make me your friend.
主系表： You were my everything.
There be 句型：There is a girl dancing in the room.
请翻译：
我爱你。
I love you.
我 在心中 爱你。
I love you in my heart.
请翻译：
这是一朵花。
This is a flower.
这是一朵 在公园里的 花。
This is a flower in the park.
这是一朵 美丽的 花。
This is a beautiful flower.
【造句五步法】
中文→完整的中文→简单的中文→英文→升级
【例1】今天来了很多人
→今天，很多人来了。
Today，so many people have come.
【例2】
你妈对你好。
心法：“这句话到底是什么意思呢？”
你妈妈关心你。Your mom cares about you.
→你妈妈爱你。Your mom loves you.
There is no doubt that your mom loves you.
【写作文真正的难点】
1、想到简单的内容；
2、造出完整的句子；
3、“合情合理”的逻辑。
句的表达 --- 注意汉英差异
一、状语
e.g. 她一周有三个下午在一家百货公司做兼职。
She does a part time job
in a department store
three afternoons a week.
遣词 造句 谋篇
who + do + what
how 方式
why 原因 目的
when 时间
where 地点
遣词 造句 谋篇
一级补充
二级补充
你将在爷爷奶奶家度过暑假，至少写出你将要做的
三件事。
参考词汇：
summer; grandparents;
1.relax oneself;
2.housework;
3.visit; old friends and relatives
1. relax
I will relax myself.
方式 -- by doing: I will relax myself by swimming.
地点:I will relax myself by swimming
in a beautiful lake near my grandparents’ house.
时间:I will relax myself by swimming in a
beautiful lake near my grandparents’house
when the weather is fine.
原因:because …
2. housework
I will do some housework for my grandparents.
原因 :I will do some housework for my grandparents because they used to look after me.
时间:I will do some housework for my grandparents because they used to look after me when I was a
little kid.
感情:I will do some housework for my grandparents because they used to look after me when I was a
little kid and I am so thankful to them.
目的:in order to do / that …
3. visit, old friends and relatives
I will visit my old friends and relatives.
目的:I will visit my old friends and relatives
in order to deepen our friendship.
二、定语 ---“的”
汉：常常是前置定语
英：前置和后置定语
1.介词短语作后置定语
（我们学校的）所有学生
all the students （in our school）
（英国人的）日常生活
everyday lives （of the British）
2. 动词不定式作后置定语
（玩/放松的）时间
time （to play / relax）
（当一个音乐家的）计划
the plan （to be a musician）
（供人休息的）安静场所
（a quiet） place （for people to rest)
3.分词、定语从句等作后置定语
（坐在我旁边的）女孩儿
the girl（sitting beside me）
（被扔进池塘里的）石头
a rock （thrown into a pond )
（我曾经生活的）村庄
the village（where I lived）
（我昨晚吃的）某样东西
something（that I ate last night）
三：简单句 VS 复合句 / 并列句”
I couldn’t learn Math well.
Just then, my teacher came to help me.
I couldn’t learn Math well until my
teacher, Mr. Lee came to help me.
Lin Hao is a student.
He is nine years old.
Lin Hao is a student who is nine years old.
谋篇
句的表达 --- 注意汉英差异
一、状语
e.g. 她一周有三个下午在一家百货公司做兼职。
She does a part time job
in a department store
three afternoons a week.
遣词 造句 谋篇
第一档：(15 - 13分)
　完全符合题目要求，
观点正确, 要点齐全。
句式多样，词汇丰富。
语言准确，语意连贯，
表达清楚，具有逻辑性。
第二档：(12~9分)
基本符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全。
语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。
语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
第三档：(8~5分)
部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。
语法结构和词汇错误较多，
语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。
第四档：(4~0分)
与题目有关内容不多，
只是简单拼凑词语，
所写内容难以理解