牛津深圳版九年级下册 Module 2 Unit 4 Natural disasters 第5课时 Writing 课件 (共16张PPT)

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Unit 4 Natural disasters
第5课时 Writing
目录
01
写作乐园
02
课堂练习
写作乐园
话题十二 倡议书
【短文写作】
前几天一场台风袭击了沿海一个贫穷地区，造成了1人死亡、2人失踪和数以万计的人无家可归。请你根据下面的内容要点，写一封英语公开信，呼吁同学们帮助这些灾民。80词左右。
要点：1. 先说明发生了什么事；
2. 再谈谈产生了什么影响；
3. 最后谈谈我们该做些什么去帮助这些灾民。
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【写作指导】
此篇作文以描述发生过的灾难为中心，主要内容是号召大家对受灾地区进行援助,写作需说明发生的是一件什么事，这件事造成了怎样的影响，我们应该做些什么来帮助受灾地的居民重建家园。
在写作过程中要明确以下几点：
1. 首先要把握好时态。在描述已经发生的事件时，应使用一般过去时；在描述其现在的影响和呼吁大家捐助时，应使用一般现在时；
2. 注意时间的表达以及连接词的恰当运用，使文章的表达更加流畅。
【范文赏析】
Dear fellow students,
Some days ago, a strong typhoon hit a poor area by the sea. One person was killed and two people were missing. The typhoon has made thousands of people homeless.
Because their houses were destroyed, they have nowhere to go. The people there also don’t have enough food, clean
water or clothes. What’s more, they need much medicine to keep away from disease.
It is time for us to give a hand. We can help them by organizing some activities to raise money. It is important to take action as soon as possible.
These people need our help. Join us and help them rebuild their homes!
一、翻译句子
1. 这些自然灾害对人类造成了很大的伤害。(do harm to)
___________________________________________________2. 是时候让我们采取行动去保护我们的星球了。(It is time to …)
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课堂练习
These natural disasters do great harm to humans.
It is time for us to take action to protect our planet.
3. 我们必须停止砍伐树木和捕猎动物。(stop doing …)
___________________________________________________4. 如果我们不做这些，我们将没有地方可以生存。(live in)
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5. 我们应该尽可能地去节约能量。(try one’s best to …)
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We must stop cutting down trees and hunting animals.
If we don’t do these， we will have nowhere to live in.
We must try our best to save energy.
二、书面表达
每年的6月5日为世界环境日。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的内容要点，以 “Air pollution” 为题写一篇短文向你们学校的英语报社投稿。
要点：1. 空气污染的源头；
2. 建议人们选择绿色出行方式；
3. 其他改进措施(至少补充一至两点)。
要求：1. 80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
Air pollution
Nowadays, people do a lot of bad things to pollute the air.
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On the one hand， many factories put harmful gases into the air， which results in greenhouse effect. On the other hand， the air is seriously polluted because of the waste gas caused by cars. What’s worse， a large number of trees are cut down， making it more difficult to take in the polluted air.
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Therefore， it’s important for us to take proper action to protect the environment. First， we should choose other ways to go to school and work， such as riding bikes and going out on foot. Second， we should be aware of the great importance of protecting the environment and do what we can do in our daily life. For example， we can plant more and more trees so that we can make the air
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cleaner. Third， we should stop factories from producing harmful gases.
If we try our best， our hard work will make a difference on the environment.
THANKS!