(共15张PPT)
Unit 4 Problems and advice
第5课时 Writing
目录
01
写作乐园
02
课堂练习
写作乐园
话题四 问题与建议
【短文写作】
如今,一些中学生缺少感恩的心,对待周围的人很冷漠,其行为和观念令人担忧。请你根据下面的内容要点,以“Learn to express thanks”为主题,用英语写一篇演讲稿,阐述问题并提出建议。80词左右。
要点:1. 阐述问题(如感恩意识薄弱);
2. 提出建议(如感恩父母、老师、朋友等);
3. 进行总结。
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening!
【写作指导】
此篇作文以感恩为中心,主要内容是建议中学生要学会感恩父母、老师和朋友。
在写作过程中要明确以下几点:
1. 作文材料是要求“你”写一篇演讲稿,但实际讲稿中的人称应为“我们”。此为审题后的第一步:确立文体和人称;
2. 写作时注意不要遗漏要点,应简述问题并提出建议。此为审题后的第二步:分列要点,谨防漏点;
3. 从审题可判断,本文应用一般现在时态写作,注意动词时态的正确书写。此为审题后的第三步:确立时态,注意动词的正确书写形式;
4. 演讲稿中需建议中学生感恩三类人,要灵活运用所学的关于给予建议的各类句型、连词等知识,避免文章枯燥乏味。
【范文赏析】
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find that most middle school students seem to lack the sense of gratitude. They take eating well and wearing fashionable clothes for granted.
As middle school students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to
school. And we should express thanks to our hard-working teachers who teach us things new and interesting. Besides, our friends always give us encouragement and help.
In a word, we are lucky in everything. So we should learn to express thanks.
In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study hard in order to make our world more beautiful.
Thank you for your listening!
一、翻译句子
1. 你能给我一些建议吗?(give … some advice)
___________________________________________________2. 朋友应该随时准备要互相帮助。(be ready to help)
___________________________________________________
3. 我建议你应该和你的同学沟通。(communicate with)
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
课堂练习
Can you give me some advice
Friends should always be ready to help each other.
I suggest that you should communicate with your classmates.
4. 我们需要学会彼此和睦相处。(get on well with)
___________________________________________________5. 你为什么不向老师或父母求助呢?(ask … for help)
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
We need to learn to get on well with each other.
Why don’t you / Why not ask your teachers or parents for help
二、书面表达
假设你是林涛,你的笔友Sam在学校和同学发生了一些矛盾。现在他来信,请你给他一些关于怎样与他人相处和自我保护的建议。请你根据下面的内容要点给他写一封回信。
要点:1. 提出关于与他人相处的建议(至少两点);
2. 提出关于自我保护的建议(至少两点);
3. 表达你对Sam的关心。
要求:1. 80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数内;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4. 标点正确,书面整洁。
Dear Sam,
How is it going I’m happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves._______________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
First, we should study how to listen to others. We could be quiet when others are talking with you. Just listen carefully, and then you can describe your opinions. Second, we should also be ready to help each other. Helping others will improve the relationships with your friends. In order to
protect ourselves, please don’t make friends on the Internet. It’s not safe and you can’t tell the truth from the false by yourself. Besides, we can ask teachers and parents
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
for help when we are in trouble.
I understand why you are worried that you have some problems with your friends, since friendship also plays an important role in your daily life. Please take the advice I give you above. Hope you will deal with it soon.
THANKS!