牛津深圳版九年级上册 Module 1 Unit 1 Wise men in history 第5课时 Writing 课件 (共17张PPT)

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Unit 1 Wise men in history
第5课时 Writing
目录
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写作乐园
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课堂练习
写作乐园
话题一 名人事迹介绍
【短文写作】
请你根据下面的内容要点，以“The first Chinese to space”为题写一篇短文，介绍我国执行首次载人飞行任务的航天英雄杨利伟。80词左右。
要点：1. 说明杨利伟出生的时间(1965年)及地点(辽宁省)；
2. 介绍杨利伟的生平事迹和伟大成就；
3. 你对杨利伟的评价。
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【写作指导】
此篇作文以介绍名人事迹为中心，主要内容是介绍人物生平及相关事迹。写作时要根据内容提示介绍杨利伟的生活及事迹。在介绍的时候要注意内容的衔接，以使行文流畅，可作适当发挥。
在写作过程中要明确以下几点：
1. 由本单元所学语法内容决定我们要学会运用常用的基本句型来介绍人物生平及事迹，同时，这类文章的时态多为过去时。注意句子中动词过去式的正确书写和使用;
2. 结合话题内容，把事情叙述清楚，而且条理要清晰。可以按时间顺序理清思路;
3. 介绍名人事迹，评价性语言必不可少，个人的观点也尤为重要，所以我们在作文末尾应给出总结性评价。
【范文赏析】
The first Chinese to space
Yang Liwei, China’s first spaceman, was born in Liaoning Province in 1965. He became a pilot in Chinese Air Force in 1987. He has spent 5 years training to become a spaceman.
Yang Liwei was sent into space at 9 a.m. on15 October, 2003， by China’s Shenzhou V spacecraft, which orbited the Earth 14 times. He came back to the Earth after a 21-hour trip
to space. He landed safely at 6:28 a.m. the next day, making China the third country successfully sending a person into space.In space, he recorded everything he saw and showed China’s national flag to the world.
We are all proud of Yang Liwei, our space hero.
一、翻译句子
1.我想要把我最好的朋友介绍给你。(introduce … to … )
___________________________________________________2.我的好朋友不仅高大威猛而且还擅长体育运动。(not only … but also … )
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课堂练习
I want to introduce my best friend to you.
My good friend is not only tall and strong but also good at sports.
3.我们很喜欢他因为他总是乐于助人。(be ready to do sth. )
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4.他是一个随和的人，他跟他的同学们相处得很好。(get on / along well with)
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We all like him very much because he is always ready to help others.
He is an easy-going person, and he gets on / along well with his classmates.
5.他的梦想是长大后成为一名伟大的艺术家。(dream to be)
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He dreams to be a great artist when he grows up.
二、书面表达
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请你根据下面的内容要点，用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学程东介绍给他。
要点：1. 介绍程东的年龄与外表；
2. 介绍程东的兴趣爱好与性格；
3. 说明程东的理想。
要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Jack,
How is everything going Now I’m writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you._______________________
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Chen Dong is a 15-year-old boy. He has a round face, black hair and bright eyes. He is not only tall but also strong. He is an active student who has a lot of hobbies like swimming, playing ball games and singing. What’s more, he has a talent in English learning.
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Chen Dong is easy to get on well with others. He always tells jokes so that all the classmates like such a humorous and funny boy. Besides, Chen Dong is warm-hearted and ready to help people around him.His dream is to be an English teacher because he wants to help more people to learn English well.
I’m sure you’d like to have such a person as your friend.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
THANKS!