(共15张PPT)
Unit 6 Caring for your health
第5课时 Writing
目录
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写作乐园
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课堂练习
写作乐园
话题十四 给朋友的一封邮件
【短文写作】
目前,九年级的学生学习任务繁重,容易产生焦虑情绪。你的朋友Simon以前性格开朗,最近因感觉九年级功课压力大而变得少言寡语,与同学沟通困难。他在英语学习方面也有困难,而且考前紧张失眠。此外,他因父母让他放弃他喜爱的篮球活动而与父母吵架。假设你是Joe,请根据
Simon的问题,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,帮他找到解决方案。80词左右。
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【写作指导】
在写作过程中要明确以下几点:
1. 作文要求是写一封电子邮件,要注意电子邮件的格式;
2. 内容上要注意语气和措辞,给出合理的意见和建议,同时要给予鼓励和支持,让对方能真正解决问题。
【范文赏析】
Dear Simon,
I’m sorry to hear that you have had so much trouble since you got into Grade 9. I’m writing to give you some help.
You used to be outgoing and now you don’t want to express yourself because of the stress from study. And you don’t get along well with your classmates. I think you should communicate with your classmates often. As for your English study, why not take notes in class and practise more after class
Learn to relax!Take a long walk before the exam. You love basketball but your parents asked you to stop it because they want you to pay more attention to your study. If I were you, I’d talk with them instead of arguing with them. I hope what I said could help you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Joe
一、翻译句子
1. 很多人晚上熬夜,这使得他们在工作时间感到疲劳。(stay up late)
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课堂练习
Many people stay up late at night, which makes them feel tired during working hours.
2. 除非你保持均衡的饮食,否则体重将会增加。(keep a balanced diet)
___________________________________________________3. 做运动是放松的好方法。(do sports)
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4. 骑自行车可以帮助我们强身健体。(build up)
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Unless you keep a balanced diet, you will put on weight.
Doing sports is a good way to get relaxed.
Riding bicycles can help us build up our body.
5. 我们应该养成制订学习计划的习惯,平衡好学习和娱乐。(form a habit of …)
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We should form a habit of making plans for our study and keep a good balance between study and entertainment.
二、 书面表达
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们来说是非常重要的。你认为我们应该如何养成健康的生活习惯 请你根据下面的内容要点写一篇短文来给出你的建议。
要点:1. 关于作息的建议;
2. 关于饮食的建议;
3. 关于运动的建议;
4. 补充其他建议。
要求:1. 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数内;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4. 标点正确,书面整洁。
I think healthy habits are very important to us. _________
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Here are some ways to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink more water and less soft drinks. Third, we should do more
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exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
THANKS!