Unit 2 Great minds 第5课时 Writing课件(共16张PPT)

(共16张PPT)
Unit 2 Great minds
第5课时 Writing
目录
01
写作乐园
02
课堂练习
写作乐园
话题二 人物事迹描写
【短文写作】
假设你有一位美国的笔友，请你根据下面的内容要点写一篇短文，向他介绍曾进入美国NBA球队的中国球员易建联的相关情况。80词左右。
要点：1. 介绍易建联的出生时间(1987.10.12)、地点(广东省)以及外表；
2. 阐述易建联的人生经历；
3. 介绍易建联的兴趣爱好。
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【写作指导】
此篇作文以名人事迹为中心，主要内容是介绍人物及其重要事件。
在写作过程中要明确以下两点：
1. 写人与事的文章常常有较多的年代痕迹，注意根据提示或图表写出简单的段落；
2. 注意文章中不同时态的变化，适当运用有把握的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。
【范文赏析】
As we know, Yi Jianlian is a famous basketball player who comes from Guangdong, China. Let me share something about Yi Jianlian with you.
Yi Jianlian was born on 27 October, 1987. And he is 2. 13 metres tall. This handsome boy became a college student in 2003. He is good at playing basketball. Luckily, he was chosen to play for the National Basketball Team in 2004. Three years
later, he became a member of Bucks in NBA. To our excitement, he was the second Chinese player in NBA after Yao Ming. In his spare time, he is fond of listening to pop music and playing computer games.
In a word, Yi Jianlian is such an excellent basketball player that all of Chinese are proud of him.
一、翻译句子
1. 我想要告诉你一些关于钟南山的信息。(tell sth. about sb.)
___________________________________________________2. 他于1936年10月出生于江苏南京。(be born in)
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课堂练习
I would like to tell you something about Zhong Nanshan.
Zhong Nanshan was born in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province in October, 1936.
3. 他曾经在深圳求学。他毕业于深圳市高级中学。(graduate from)
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4. 他带领他的团队走向成功。(lead sb. to)
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He used to study in Shenzhen. He graduated from Shenzhen Senior High School.
He led his team to success.
5. 毫无疑问，钟南山是世界上最成功的医生之一。(there is no doubt that … )
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There is no doubt that Zhong Nanshan is one of the most successful doctors in the world.
二、书面表达
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信想向你了解抗疫英雄钟南山院士的情况，请你根据下面的内容要点写一封回信。
要点：1. 基本情况：1936年10月出生于江苏南京，父母都是医生；兴趣爱好：喜爱运动；
2. 杰出成就：2021年11月被授予“共和国勋章”；
3. 介绍钟南山院士的抗疫经历(至少两个)；
4. 你对钟南山院士的评价。
提示词：共和国勋章 the Medal of the Republic
要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Jack,
Zhong Nanshan is a real hero in the fight against COVID-19. Now let me tell you something about him.__________
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Zhong Nanshan was born in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province in October, 1936. It’s said that both of his parents were doctors. Zhong Nanshan has been interested in sports since he was very young. Although he is more than 80 years old, he seldom rests and works hard to help as many
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patients as possible. As we know, he was awarded the Medal of the Republic in November, 2021 because of his great achievements and efforts. Zhong Nanshan is one of the most responsible and professional doctors in China. For example, he took an active part in the fight against SARS. What’s more, when COVID-19 broke out in 2020, he led thousands of medical workers to the front line in Wuhan.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you have some more questions about him, don’t hesitate to let me know.Look forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
In my opinion, there is no doubt that Zhong Nanshan is one of the most successful doctors in the world. As a Chinese, I’m really proud of him.
THANKS!