牛津深圳版九年级上册 Module 4 Unit 8 Surprise endings 第5课时 Writing 课件 (共15张PPT)

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Unit 8 Surprise endings
第5课时 Writing
目录
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写作乐园
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课堂练习
写作乐园
话题八 最珍贵的礼物
【短文写作】
请你根据下面的内容要点，以“The most valuable gift”为题，写一篇关于你收到的最珍贵的礼物的英语短文。80词左右
要点：1. 介绍你的礼物是什么，是谁送的以及送礼的时间；
2. 送你礼物的原因；
3. 这份礼物对你的重要性。
【写作指导】
此篇作文以礼物为中心，主要内容是描写你曾经收到过的最珍贵的礼物。
在写作过程中要明确以下几点：
1. 结合本单元所学的语法内容，我们要学会运用丰富的短语来描述自己的礼物以及表达丰富的情感；
2. 结合话题内容，要写清楚你最珍贵的礼物是什么，谁在什么时候送给你的，为什么会送给你，以及这件礼物对于你而言有着什么样的重要意义；
3. 作为一篇描述性文章，你可以通过讲故事的方式来串联文章，使之生动、有真实感；也可以直接简单地描述你的礼物，然后描述礼物带给你的变化或者对你产生的影响。
【范文赏析】
The most valuable gift
The most valuable gift I have ever received is the book The Old Man and the Sea from my mother.
I received it on my 13th birthday. I was so surprised to get it. I was so happy too. I just failed to pass the exam some days ago and I felt really upset those days. My mother wanted to
encourage me to be strong and not to give up. I finished reading the book the next day. I learnt a lot from the book and I understood my mother’s love to me. From then on, I never give up. I keep trying my best. So I consider it the most valuable gift.
一、翻译句子
1. 去年你送给我的相册是我收到的最珍贵的礼物。(send sth. to sb. )
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2. 你送我的这本书正是我所需要的。(what I need)
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课堂练习
The photo album you sent to me last year is the most valuable gift I have ever received.
The book you gave me is just what I needed.
3. 多亏了这本书，我学到了很多新的知识。(thanks to)
___________________________________________________4. 我很期待你来中国时和你一起参观故宫。(look forward to)
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Thanks to this book, I learn a lot of new knowledge.
I look forward to visiting the Forbidden City with you when you come to China.
5. 我想邀请你来北京过暑假。(invite sb. to)
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I’d like to invite you to Beijing for the summer holiday.
二、书面表达
假如你是李明，你收到了Jack寄给你的生日礼物，请你根据下面的内容要点，给Jack写一封信表达你的感谢。
要点：1. 表达感谢；
2. 说明原因；
3. 发出邀请。
要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Jack,
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I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you for the birthday gift you sent to me.
The English dictionary is just what I need! My English spelling is very poor and I always make mistakes whenever I write, but now thanks to your present, I can look up the words in the dictionary when I am not sure about the spelling. I’m sure that my English will be improved a lot
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
with this valuable gift. What’s more, the dictionary you sent to me is easy to carry. It really helps me a lot.
I hope you are well and I look forward to seeing you in China next month. If you pay a visit to China, I want to invite you to stay in my home and I’m going to show you around my hometown.
THANKS!