2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错
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[2013·新课标II]短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
1.【答案】of---去掉
2. 【答案】have—having
3. 【答案】that—which
4. 【答案】becomes—became
5. 【答案】在day前加the
6. 【答案】interesting---interestingly
7. 【答案】by---with/to
8. 【答案】drank---drunk
9. 【答案】cup—cups
【答案】grow-growth
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第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that 76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about 77._____________
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____________
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79.____________
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80.____________
protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81.____________
health ,we should take good care our water resources 82.____________
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____________
not careful protect our environment the last drops 84.____________
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85.____________
I am ∧worker at the tap water company. I find that 76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about 77.______are____
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____appears_
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79._____or_____
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80.__Unfortunately_
protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81.___ √_____
health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources 82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____if_____
not careful protect our environment the last drops 84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错1
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[2013·新课标I] 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing
old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me
now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard
that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself
apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even
scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.
However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing
hold
old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me
passed
now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard
well/clearly shoulders
that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself
to/ into him
apart from others in our small town, ∧he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even
and
scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.
when
However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
Ever
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There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That 76.________
was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I 77.________
once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except 78.________
one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted. 79.________
It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had 80.________
her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked 81.________
us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for 82.________
an outing. She didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for 83.________
school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well 84.________
because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on. 85.________
76. 去掉her 77. whenever → when 78. to → with 79. well ∧ as
80. of → for 81. √ 82. 去掉第二个 to 83. them → us
84. until → before 85. can → could
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错10
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At Chinese New Year, my family and I have a very busy 76._____________
time. Two days before New Year’s Day, I went out with my 77. ____________
friends from school to the seafood restaurant in Pudong. 78. ____________
It was the noisiest restaurant I had ever been to, and the 79. ____________
food was delicious. After that, we went to shopping for new 80. ____________
clothes and found lots bargains. I visited my old teacher, 81. ____________
Mr. Smith. To my surprised, he said he didn’t find Chinese 82. ____________
New Year very excited. He was not even wearing new clothes! 83. ____________
Because we have so many tests this week, so I have to 84. ____________
start studying hard again now. I wish the holiday were long! 85. ____________
书面表达 （满分30分）
61. bunch 62. praise 63. permission 64. blame 65. consideration
66. differs 67. familiar 68. relief 69. delivered 70. gradually
71. misled 72. length 73. promoting 74.appointed 75. annoyed
76. have改为had
77. 此行无错。
78. the改为a。
79. and改为but。
80. 去掉to/shopping 改为shop。
81. lots 后加of。
82. surprised 改为surprise。
83. excited改为exciting。
84. 去掉第二个so。
85. long改为longer。
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?I was a high school student then, from low-income 76. __________
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. __________
first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. __________
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. __________
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. __________
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. __________
my homework. And I came to understand that was not 82. __________
easy to earn money, and knowledge could change 83. __________
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. __________
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. __________
I was a high school student then, from∧ low-income 76. ____a______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. ___had ____
first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. ____去掉one___
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. ____feeling______
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. ___hard_______
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. ____too______
my homework. And I came to understand that∧ was not 82. ____it______
easy to earn money, and∧ knowledge could change 83. ___that ____
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. ____√______
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. ___than____
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错11
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There were a football game on TV last Saturday evening. 86. ___________
The game was among a Spanish team and an Italian team. 87. ___________
I sat in the front of the TV at 7 o’clock, when the game just 88. ___________
began. An hour later, my wife came in to join in me. She 89. ___________
seemed absent-minded while she was watching game. 90. ___________
As the time clock showed one minute, forty-two seconds leaving 91. ___________
in the game, she began cheering excited, “Come on --- get going!” 92. ___________
Since she has never been a football fan, I looked at her 93. ___________
with surprise and asked which team she was cheering for. 94. ___________
“Neither,” she replied, “I’m cheering the time clock on.” 95. ___________
86. were—was 87. among—between 88. 去掉第一个the 89. 去掉第二个in 90. game 前加the 91. leaving—left 92. excited—excitedly 93. has—had 94. with—in 95. 正确
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With the development of the society, the earth is 86. ___________
being damaged by people who are seeking comfortable 87. ___________
at all cost. The sky is no longer blue. The air is no 88. ___________
longer fresh. The rivers are no longer clean.
Many animals and plants are disappearing the earth. 89. ___________
And the size of deserts are growing rapidly every 90. ___________
year. Our planet has been seriously polluted. 91. ___________
We all know what we have only one home. 92. ___________
If we continue pollute it, the earth will turn out to be 93. ___________
a planet which is fit for us to live on. To save the 94. ___________
earth means save ourselves. Let’s take action without 95. ___________
any delay.
短文改错
With the development of the society, the earth is 86. the
being damaged by people who are seeking comfortable 87. comfort
at all cost. The sky is no longer blue. The air is no 88. costs
longer fresh. The rivers are no longer clean.
Many animals and plants are disappearing ∧the earth. 89. from
And the size of deserts are growing rapidly every 90. is
year. Our planet has been seriously polluted. 91. √
We all know what we have only one home. 92. that
If we continue pollute it, the earth will turn out to be 93. polluting
a planet which is fit for us to live on. To save the 94. unfit
earth mean ∧save ourselves. Let’s take action without 95. to
any delay.
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错12
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Li Ming , who has been working as postman for 76．
two years , always wears a suit of green uniforms . 77．
He worked with care as well as with effort . He 78．
serves for the people heart and soul . Every day he 79．
gets up early to deliver newspapers or magazines . 80．
He is so careful and he has never been wrong . 81．
One day he had to send a dead letter and it happened 82．
to be raining hardly outside . But he set out immediately , 83．
He had asked nearly everybody in the district after 84．
he tried to hand the letter to the right person . 85．
76．postman→∧ a postman 77．uniforms →uniform
78．worked→works 79．for 删去
80．or →and 81．and →that
82．√ 83．hardly→hard
84．after→before 85．tried→managed
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My husband 96-year-old grandmother came to live 76. __________
with us for many years of independence. We did 77. _________
all the thing we could to make her feel comfortable 78. __________
in our home, including giving her the private line for 79. __________
her bedroom. One evening we are having a party 80. _________
while the phone rang. It was telephone operator, 81. _________
that asked, “Do you have a grandmother upstairs?” 82. _________
“Yes,” my husband replied. “Well,” the 83. __________
operator again continued,“She can't remember. 84. _________
your phone number, and she like a cup of tea. 85. __________
短文改错： 76.husband→husband’s 77.for→after 78.thing→things
79.the→a 80.are→were 81.while→when
82.that→who 83.√ 84.去掉again
85.she∧would
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错13
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With the development of the society, the earth is 86. ___________
being damaged by people who are seeking comfortable 87. ___________
at all cost. The sky is no longer blue. The air is no 88. ___________
longer fresh. The rivers are no longer clean.
Many animals and plants are disappearing the earth. 89. ___________
And the size of deserts are growing rapidly every 90. ___________
year. Our planet has been seriously polluted. 91. ___________
We all know what we have only one home. 92. ___________
If we continue pollute it, the earth will turn out to be 93. ___________
a planet which is fit for us to live on. To save the 94. ___________
earth means save ourselves. Let’s take action without 95. ___________
any delay.
With the development of the society, the earth is 86. the
being damaged by people who are seeking comfortable 87. comfort
at all cost. The sky is no longer blue. The air is no 88. costs
longer fresh. The rivers are no longer clean.
Many animals and plants are disappearing ∧the earth. 89. from
And the size of deserts are growing rapidly every 90. is
year. Our planet has been seriously polluted. 91. √
We all know what we have only one home. 92. that
If we continue pollute it, the earth will turn out to be 93. polluting
a planet which is fit for us to live on. To save the 94. unfit
earth mean ∧save ourselves. Let’s take action without 95. to
any delay.
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I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our 76 ________
topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety 77 ________
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To 78 ________
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our 79 ________
surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like, 80 ________
some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in 81 ________
rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 82 ________
their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through 83 ________
our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention 84 ________
to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect. 85 ________
76. 去掉第二个in. 77. 正确.
78. showed—showing 或showed---which showed.
79. surprised—surprise. 80. 去掉the 81. in---into 82. had---have.
83. ways—way 84. what—that或去掉what. 85. protect后加it.
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错14
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I am worker at the tap water company. I find that 76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about 77._____________
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____________
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79.____________
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80.____________
protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81.____________
health ,we should take good care our water resources 82.____________
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____________
not careful protect our environment the last drops 84.____________
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85.____________
改错:
I am ∧worker at the tap water company. I find that 76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about 77.______are____
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____appears_
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79._____or_____
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80.__Unfortunately_
protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81.___ √_____
health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources 82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____if_____
not careful protect our environment the last drops 84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them
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When we feel sad or happily, a good cry is almost 76.
impossible to resist. But do you know why we cry? 77.
Experts have found that tear contain some chemicals 78.
like hormone. When one is feeling stressed, it set free, 79.
tears will come down. So crying is a way of get 80.
rid of the stress and you will often feel better before a 81.
good cry. Of course sex has nothing to do to crying. 82.
Women cry more often just because of they have more 83.
of this hormone than men. But next time you feel like 84.
bursting into tears, go ahead. It won't good to your health. 85.
76．happily → happy。feel后用形容词作表语。
77．√
78．tear → tears。动词contain为复数形式，主语也应为复数形式。
79．it后加is。此处应用被动语态。
80．get → getting。of为介词，后面应接动名词作宾语。
81．before → after。哭后的感觉比哭前好。
82．to → with。
83．去掉of。从句不可用because of而应用because来引导。
84．But → So。分析语境逻辑可知，此处不表转折关系。
85．won't → will．
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错15
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One day Mrs. Smith went shopping. Since she came back 76.
home, she said to her husband, “I saw beautiful dress in 77.
a shop this morning. It costs fifty pounds.” “Fifty pounds to 78.
a cotton dress?That is very much!” But every evening Mrs. 79.
Smith spoke only the dress, and at last, after a week, 80.
her husband said, “Oh, buy the dress!” She was very happy. 81.
But the next day evening, when Mr. Smith returned home and 82.
asking, “Have you got the dress?”, she said, “No.” “Why not?” 83.
he said. “Well, it is still in the window of the shop in a 84.
week. I think, nobody else want this dress, so I don’t 85.
want it either!”
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A person’s age no longer tells you something about 76. ________
his social position, marriage or healthy. There’s no longer 77. ________
a particular year which one goes to school or goes to 78. ________
work or gets married or start a family. The social clock 79. ________
that kept us on time and told us when go to school, get 80. ________
a job, or stop working isn’t as strong as it was used to be. 81. ________
It doesn’t surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university 82. ________
president or a 35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old 83. ________
man who has become a father for the first time. What we 84. _______
all know, public’s ideas are changing nowadays. 85. ________
76. something → anything 77. healthy → health 78. which → when
（或 year∧ in） 79. start → starts 80. when∧ to 81. was
82．√ 83.or ∧ a 84. What →As 85. public’s → public
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错17
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I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76.
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77.
at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78.
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79.
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80.
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool 81.
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82.
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any 83.
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84.
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories 85.
are as sweet as ever before .
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76. yet
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77. were
at ∧early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78. an
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79. ourselves
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80. helpless
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool 81. swim
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82. treated
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any 83. √
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84. others
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories 85. since
are as sweet as ever before .
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Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over
76. _______
the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since
77. _______
long ago , many adults and children called their friends together
78. _______
to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people
79. _______
like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words,
80. _______
they help to keep people strong and feel good . When people are
81. _______
playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities
82. _______
for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy.
83. _______
Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American
84. _______
big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.
85. _______
76. and －but 77. woman－women 78. called前加had 79. play- playing
80． 正确 81. feel-feeling 82. how-why 83. make-makes
84.去掉the 85. sell-buy
第一部分: 听力（共两节，满分30分）
第一节（共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分）
1. What will the weather be like tomorrow?
A. A bit cold. B. Slightly hotter. C. Partly windy.
2. How does the man feel about his work?
A. Bored. B. Excited. C. Unsatisfied.
3. What is the man’s opinion of the exam?
A. The exam questions were too easy.
B. The questions had little to do with the book.
C. He couldn’t finish the questions within the given time.
4. Where is Jack now?
A. At home. B. In the hospital. C. At the office.
5. How old is the man speaker?
A. 49. B. 45. C. 41
第二节(共15小题；每小题1. 5分, 满分22. 5分)
请听第6段材料, 回答第6至7题。
6. What happened to Tina’s bat?
A. It was stolen. B. It was broken. C. It was lost.
7. What does Tina ask Andrew to do tomorrow?
A. To bring the book and the
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错19
My wife and I go to the theatre whenever we
have time. But before we buy ticket, we would 76. __________
like to know whether the play is good and bad. 77. __________
When a new play open, we usually read the 78. __________
reviews on our local newspapers to get information 79. __________
about it. Last week a new comedy opened at the 80. __________
theatre. The newspaper story said it was very amused, 81. __________
so we decided to go on the Saturday night. It took 82. __________
my wife a long time to make her mind what to wear 83. __________
and we left a little later. By the time we got there, 84. __________
the first act already begun. We were sorry we missed 85. __________
part of the play, because the rest of it was very funny.
76.ticket 改为tickets 77. and改为or 78.open改为opens79. on改in 80. √
81. amused 改amusing 82. 去掉the 83.make后加up84. later改late 85. act后加had
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Today I attended a meeting holding by our school 76．___________
At the meeting more than thirty students praised 77．___________
For our happiness, Bruce, monitor of our class, 78．___________
who was among them . We all felt proud of him． 79．____________
Then the headmaster gave them a talk. He wanted 80．___________
us to learn these model students and hoped that 81．___________
more and more students will be praised at the 82．___________
next school meeting. I was great encouraged and 83．___________
made up my mind to work harder. Next week 84．___________
there will be an English exam. I’ll try to get good mark. 85．___________
76．holding→ held 77．praised前加were 78．For→ To 79．去掉who 80．them→ us 81．Learn后加from 82 .will→ would 83. great→ greatly 84．√ 85． mark→ marks
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错2
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[2013·新课标I] 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing
old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me
now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard
that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself
apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even
scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.
However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing
hold
old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me
passed
now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard
well/clearly shoulders
that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself
to/ into him
apart from others in our small town, ∧he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even
and
scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.
when
However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
Ever
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As students, we have classes from early morning
till late afternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break 76. _____
between class is definitely important, even necessary. 77. _____
Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. 78. ______
During the ten-minute break we did something to get 79. ______
rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest, 80. ______
instead of getting even tired. So don’t do anything that 81. _______
will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. 82. ______
I usually do some simple exercises. Sometime I have a free chat 83. ______
with my classmates or just take a walk during the break. 84. ______
When the new class begins, I feel freshly again. 85. ______
take---taking. 77.class—classes. 78.or—and. 79. did—do. 80. real---a real
81. tired—more tired. 82. pleased—pleasing. 83. Sometime—Sometimes.
84. 正确。 85. freshly---fresh.
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错20
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【2013浙江卷】
短文改错
1.【答案】far去掉。
2.【答案】move---moved。
3.【答案】other---another。
4.【答案】classmate---classmates。
5.【答案】or---and。
6.【答案】bad---worse。
7.【答案】is后添加the/my。
8.【答案】tiring---tired。
9.【答案】sleep---asleep。
10.【答案】is---are。
.
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I think it is going to take us about five days to get the 76. __________
nearest village. If the both of us are fit, the woman can carry 77. __________
15kg and the man can carry 20kg- -don't forget that the 78. __________
packs are going to be light every day as we eat and drink. 79. __________
We are going to travel at night in desert ( using blankets) 80. __________
for warmth and sleep in turns during the day. 81. __________
On the mountains we are going to travel during the day 82. __________
and sleep at night. Before we begin walking in the first day, 83. __________
we are going to eat, and have a good drink water. We hope 84. __________
we shall not meet with much more difficulties than we expect. 85. __________
76．在get后加to或改get为reach 77．去掉第—个the 78．RIGHT
79．light→lighter 80．desert前加the 81．turns→turn
82．On→In 83．in→on 84．drink后加of 85．much→many或去掉much
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Dear classmates ,
Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English . I often 76．
read English aloud and try learn something important by 77．
hearts , which helps me remember it easily and form 78．
the good habit of thinking in English . I listen to a lot and 79．
talk with others in English . In this way , I was improved 80．
my spoken English . I keep a diary in English every day but 81．
my writing English is becoming better and better . I also try 82．
my best to master the necessary grammar . With this means , 83．
I can express myself in English correct . That’s the way I 84．
have been learning English . I hope it will be useful to you 85．
That’s all . Thank you .
Yours ,
Wang Gang
76. why→how 77.try后加to 78. hearts → heart 79. 去掉to
80. was→have 81. but → and 82. writing→written 83. With→By 84. correct→correctly 85. 正确
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错4
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【2013·陕西卷】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
（第二段）第一句go→went。
第二句ours→our。
第三句so去掉。
第四句Before→After。
第四句impatiently→impatient。
第五句中and→but。
第六句were→was。
第六句中and ∧fish-a。
第七句minute→minutes。
第八句Felt→Feeling。
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I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our 76 ________
topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety 77 ________
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To 78 ________
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our 79 ________
surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like, 80 ________
some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in 81 ________
rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 82 ________
their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through 83 ________
our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention 84 ________
to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect. 85 ________
76. 去掉第二个in. 77. 正确.
78. showed—showing 或showed---which showed.
79. surprised—surprise. 80. 去掉the 81. in---into 82. had---have.
83. ways—way 84. what—that或去掉what. 85. protect后加it.
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错5
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【2013·四川卷】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均公限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her
copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was
angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would
need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she
punish me?
61. 【答案】difficulty--- difficult
62. 【答案】hardly--- hard。
63. 【答案】asking--- asked.
64. 【答案】第二个to去掉。
65. 【答案】think--- thinking.
66. 【答案】all---both.
【答案】same前加the.
【答案】tests--- test.
【答案】so---or.
70. 【答案】does---did.
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In England, afternoon tea, taken between four or five, 76_________
is the most informal meal of the day. If you are a friend 77_________
of the family, you may drop for tea without 78_________
been invited. Very often it is not served at a table. 79_________
The member and visitors take tea in the sitting room. 80__________
Each person had a cup and saucer, a spoon and a 81 __________
small plate for bread-and-butter and cake. On the way, 82___________
do not help you to cake first; bread-and butter first, 83__________
then cake if there is any. Other piece of advice is: do not put 84__________
more than one piece of bread or cake at same time. 85___________
76, or----and 77.right 78.drop ----drop in 79.been---being
80.member----members 81.had----has 82.On ----By 83.you---yourself
84.Other---Another 85.at ---at the
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One day I happened to find a chatting room in
my QQ，there people were chatting in English．I tried
to chat with some of them．T0 my surprised，I found
the oral English of some junior students were better
than me．I asked them for advice and they told me
to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I
would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ．
Day by day I learned from many useful words and
expressions．With time went by．I found that I could
even communicate some college students freely．
76.√ 77.there-where 78.surprised-surprise 79.were-was 80.me-mine 81.But-So 82.praltise-prsltising 83.from 84.with-Aswent-going 85.with
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Now I have taken more than ten years at school. As 63. ________
a child，I regarded my school a beautiful garden. I 64. ________
went to school happily and excitedly with a small bag.
Time flew very fast. Now I’m studying at a senior 65. ________
middle school. Every day morning I go to school early. 66. ________
In the evening， I do a lot of exercises， just like a farmer 67. ________
working hard， expect a good harvest. During breaks 68. ________
between class， I often go out to enjoy myself. I’m 69. ________
sure I’ll never forget wonderful time I spent at school. 70. ________
63.taken→been 64.school后加as 65.flew→flies 66.去掉day
67.√ 68. expect→expecting 69. class→classes 70. wonderful后加the
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错7
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Dear sir,
Thank you very much for your letter. I pleased to hear 76._____________
about your holiday and the people you meet in Rome. It 77. _____________
sounded great fun and how I wish I could have been with 78. _____________
you. Thank you also for the stamps you sent them to me 79._____________
for my collection. Most of them were those what I had 80. _____________
been expecting for long. You said by your letter that 81. _____________
you wish to have some photos of me. Sorry to tell you, 82. _____________
I have little photos good enough to send to others. 83. _____________
Yet I will send you a photo of your family. Please 84. _____________
write soon and tell me what you are getting on with 85. _____________
your college life.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Jason
短文改错：76.I后加am 77. meet→met 78.√ 79.去掉them 80.what→that或去掉those
81. by→in 82.wish→wished 83.little→few 84.your→my 84.what→how
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There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That 76.________
was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I 77.________
once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except 78.________
one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted. 79.________
It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had 80.________
her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked 81.________
us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for 82.________
an outing. She didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for 83.________
school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well 84.________
because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on. 85.________
76. 去掉her 77. whenever → when 78. to → with 79. well ∧ as
80. of → for 81. √ 82. 去掉第二个 to 83. them → us
84. until → before 85. can → could
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My cousin Xiao Hong and I went on trip to my uncle’s 76. _____________
last Sunday. We were riding along a hillside then suddenly 77. _____________
some big stones were rolled down and knocked us off our bikes. 78. _____________
Xiao Hong’s legs got serious hurt and so did mine. We 79. _____________
couldn’t move a bit. Fortunately, I saw some farmers ahead. 80. ____________
Waving our hand, we cried for help like crazy. On hearing 81. ____________
us, they run to the spot as fast as they could. Thanks to 82_____________
their help, we were all sent to a nearby hospital and received 83. _____________
medical treatment in time. Although we do not know about their 84. _____________
names, we fell they like our dear big brothers and sisters. 85. _____________
76.on︿ a 77. then →when 78 were去掉 79 serious → seriously 80.正确 81. hand→hands 82.run→ran 83.all→both 84.about 去掉 85.they︿are
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One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as 76．_______________
the telephone rang. I went to answer immediately. 77．_______________
She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking 78．_______________
on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the 79．_______________
kitchen. The room full of smoke and beef was badly 80．_______________
burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the 81．_______________
windows, and then went out of the house. With my 82．_______________
surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I 83．_______________
was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it 84．_______________
was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 85．_______________
76．as→When 77．answer后加it 78．She→It 79．a→the 80． room后加was
81．opening→opened 82．With→To 83．√ 84．去掉about 85．which→that
2014届高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错9
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Choose what to eat is no longer as easy as it once was. Our eating habits 1.
have changed , as have our way of life. And the fuel we need for our 2.
body is also different. Tradition diets often have too much fat and too 3.
much calories for the 21st-century person. If we want to keep up with the 4.
high pace of modern life, we had better to learn to make the right choices 5.
about what and how we eat. Because we have so much to choose, many 6.
companies offer advice about what we should eat. It’s good if we spend our 7.
time and money in buying food and keep a balanced diet. Instead of eating 8.
expensive diet or going on unhealthy diets, we can simply try to eat little 9.
sugar and take more exercise. I hope that everyone keeps a good health. 10.
答案及解析
Choose 改为 Choosing 。动名词作主语
have 改为has 。倒装句中助动词取决于后面的主语
3.Tradition 改为Traditional
4.much 改为many 。calories 是calorie （卡路里）的复数
5.better 后面的to去掉。 had better do sth 最好做某事
6.choose 后面加from
7.正确
8.keep 改为keeping 。keeping 和前面的buying构成介词in的宾语
9.little改为 less 。 less 和后面的more构成对应关系
10.a去掉 。 health 是不可数， keep good health 保持身体健康
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Which we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important 1.
for us to form into healthy eating habits. However, bad habits are still very 2.
common among we students . Some of us often go to school without 3.
breakfast .Some like to have snacks; some others are particular with food; 4.
and still some eat or drink too many.All these bad habits will be bad for our health
5.
To keep fit, we should have various health diets, which generally 6.
include proper amount of fish, meat, vegetable, fruit as well as main food. 7.
Beside, we had better have meal regularly. 8.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up 9.
a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy study better. 10.
答案及解析：
which改为as ， 非限制定语从句放于句首用as，再说as we all know 众所周知
into去掉， form healthyeating habits 养成健康的饮食习惯
we 改为us
with改为about ，be particular about为固定词组
many改为much
health改为 healthy
vegetable改为vegetables ，vegetable是可数名词
Beside 改为Besides ， Beside 是在…旁边，而Besides是“除此之外”
正确
study 前面加to表目的
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Once upon a time there was a farmer worked hard in the fields 1.
every day. One day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a 2.
bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lie by the trump. He picked it 3.
up and found that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to him,“Since it 4.
is so easy get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all day 5.
long?” He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreamed for 6.
more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolish and returned 7.
to his fields, he found that all his crops are dead. This story tells that 8.
we should wait for unexpected gains by trusting to chance and luck. 9.
Or, we should not hope to get reward without hard work. 10.
答案及解析
1. worked 前面加who，这里因该是who引导的定语从句修饰前面的farmer
2. 正确
3. lie 改为lying
4. him 改为 himself
5. get前面加to ， 这里用不定式做真正的主语
6. dreamed 改为dreaming ，用动名词做伴随状语
7. foolish 改为foolishness
8. are 改为were ，时态要前后一致
9. should 后面加not
10. reward 改为rewards
