2023年高考英语二轮复习读后续写高分突破
写作素材:
动作描写
①Stanley got in line behind Zero.
斯坦利排在泽罗的后面。
②Igor expelled saliva as he spoke.
伊戈尔一边说,一边吐出口水。
③Tom made room as Stanley sat down.
斯坦利坐下时,汤姆腾出地方来。
④He stopped writing as he became aware that somebody was reading over his shoulder.
当他意识到有人在他身后阅读时,他停止了写作。
⑤Magnet helped Stanley to his feet.
马涅特扶着斯坦利站了起来。
⑥Stanley was half asleep as he got in line for breakfast, but the sight of Mr Sir awakened him.
斯坦利在排队吃早饭的时候还处于半睡半醒的状态,但一看见西尔先生,他就醒了。
⑦Kate struggled to her feet.
凯特挣扎着站起来。
⑧Stand straight. Raise your chin.
站直。抬起你的下巴。
⑨His knees crumpled beneath him.
他一下子瘫倒在地。
⑩He kept an eye out for Zero, but Zero didn't come back.
他留意着泽罗,但泽罗没有回来。
心理描写
①What worried him the most was the thought of his parents not knowing what happened to him, not knowing whether he was dead or alive.
他最担心的是他的父母不知道他发生了什么事,不知道他是死是活。
②An even crazier idea kept popping into his head.
一个更疯狂的想法不断地出现在他的脑海里。
③Two nights later, Stanley lay awake staring up at the star-filled sky. He was too happy to fall asleep.
两天后,斯坦利醒着躺在床上,望着满天繁星。他高兴得无法人眠。
④They walked for what seemed like a very long time, and still never came across. They became anxious.
他们走了很长一段时间,仍然没有找到。他们开始焦急起来。
⑤A wave of terror rushed over him when he saw.
当他看到时,一阵恐惧涌上心头。
⑥The fear made him dizzy. He took a breath, summoned his courage,
and continued.
他吓得头晕目眩。他吸了口气,鼓起勇气,继续(说)下去。
⑦He heard his own heart heat.
他听到自己的心在发热。
⑧He felt the scream explode inside him.
他感到那声尖叫在他心里爆发了。
⑨Stanley could hear his heart beat. Each beat told him he was still alive, at least for one more second.
斯坦利能听到自己的心跳。每一次心跳都告诉他自己还活着,至少还能再活一秒钟。
⑩He felt as if he was walking in a dream, not quite able to comprehend what was going on around him.
他觉得自己好像在梦中行走,不太明白周围发生的事情。
环境描写
①Stanley had a poster of him hanging on the wall of his bedroom.
斯坦利把他的一张海报挂在卧室的墙上。
②The lake was so full of holes and mounds that it reminded Stanley of pictures he'd seen of the moon.
湖水中满是洞,石堆成山,它提醒着斯坦利他曾看到过这样的月亮。
③The sun had only just come up over the horizon, but he already could feel its hot rays against his face.
太阳刚从地平线升起,但他已经能感觉到热阳光照在脸上。
④The sun wasn't yet up, but its rays arced over the horizon and brought light to the sky.
太阳还没有升起来,但它的光芒在地平线上划出一道弧线,照亮了天空。
⑤It was especially beautiful in the spring, when the peach trees, which lined the shore, bloomed with pink and rose-colored blossoms.
这是特别美丽的春天,岸边的桃树盛开粉红色和玫瑰色的花朵。
⑥The air became unbearably humid. Stanley was drenched in sweat. Beads of moisture ran down the handle of his shovel. It was almost as if the temperature had gotten so hot that the air itself was sweating. A loud boom of thunder echoed across the empty lake.
空气变得难以忍受的潮湿。斯坦利被汗水湿透了,汗珠从他的铁锹柄上滚落下来,似乎温度变得如此之高以至于空气本身也在出汗。雷声在空旷的湖面上回荡。
⑦The peak looked to him exactly like a giant fist, with the thumb sticking straight up.
在他看来,山峰就像一个巨大的拳头,大拇指竖直向上。
⑧The storm moved off farther west, along with any hope of rain.
暴风雨连同下雨的希望一起向西移动。
⑨The boat lay upside down, half buried in the dirt.
船倒挂着,一半埋在泥土里。
⑩It was as if they had been walking across the flat bottom of a giant frying pan, and now they had to somehow climb up out of it.
这就好像他们一直在一个巨大的煎锅的底部行走,现在他们必须想办法爬出来。
Patches of weeds dotted the mountainside.
一片片野草点缀着山坡。
He was in a field of greenish white flowers that seemed to extend all the way around.
他站在一片绿白花的田野里,这些花似乎向四周伸展开去。
The sun cut through the cloud, and Stanley felt its rays beating down on him. But soon more clouds filled the sky, shading Stanley.
太阳穿过云层,斯坦利感到阳光正照射在他身上。但很快更多的乌云布满天空,把斯坦利遮挡住了。
人物描写
①Stanley weighed three times as much as the other boy.
斯坦利的体重是那个男孩的三倍。
②Once he started a project he would work on it for years, often going days without sleep.
一旦他开始做一个项目,他就会工作好几年,经常是几天不睡觉。
③Elya blushed when Myra entered the room.
迈拉进屋时,艾莉亚脸红了。
④His clothes were soaked with sweat.
他的衣服被汗水湿透了。
⑤His throat felt as if it was coated with sandpaper.
他觉得嗓子像被砂纸磨了一样。
⑥Even the people looked broken, with their worn-out bodies sprawled over the various chairs and sofas.
就连那些人看起来也很疲惫,他们疲惫的身体躺在各种椅子和沙发上。
⑦Every muscle and joint in his body ached as he tried to get out of bed.
当他试图下床时,身体的每一块肌肉和关节都在疼痛。
⑧Now he had such a huge smile that it almost seemed too big for his face, like the smile on a jack-o'-lantern.
现在,他笑得那么灿烂,几乎超出了他的脸面,就像南瓜灯上的笑容。
⑨Zero's mouth was shut tight. As he glared at Mr Pendanski, his dark eyes seemed to expand.
泽罗的嘴紧闭着。当他瞪着潘当斯基先生时,他的黑眼睛似乎睁大了。
⑩If he jerked too quickly, he felt a throbbing pain just above his neck where Zigzag's shovel had hit him.
如果他用力太快,就会感到脖子上方之字形铁锹打到的地方一阵刺痛。
掌握写作思路
1.通读全文,把握脉络
对于试卷所提供的文章,我们在通读的时候,需要将有助于理清文章脉络的词、短语或句子进行勾画。这是非常关键的一步,因为大部分所提供的材料都是记叙文。梳理勾画的目的一是要弄清谁(who)、在什么时间(when)、什么地点(where)、通过什么方式(how)、做了什么事(what),另外一个目的是在我们续写的时候可以适当呼应前文。
2.分析续写所提供的两句话
分析的目的是看是否有新的线索出现,或者是否有与旧的线索呼应的部分。
3.已知推未知
所谓已知是指续写时所提供的每段的首句话。所谓未知就是指我们需要续写的内容。推论的方法如下
第一段第一句顺推第二句(根据所给的人物要么描写语言、动作,要么描写心理、表情等等)
第二段第一句逆推第一段尾句过渡句第二段第一句顺推第二句(根据所给的人物要么描写语言、动作,要么描写心理、表情等等)
第二段尾句总结或感慨
4.完善关系链
所以,现在我们的任务就是将我们所推论出来的句子进行关系链的完善。这个过程可以是动作链的完善,也可以是心理历程的
领会题型
读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式,旨在考查语言综合运用能力。读后续写-给出前文,写后文。理论上来说,前文用于阅读输入信息,信息经过大脑思维转换后,形成对前文的理解。理解一定是建立在确定主旨大意,明确前文作者态度和关键信息的前提下,在大脑中建立一个对前文的理解框架和概括,在此基础上,继续建立顺序思维,确定接下来如何安排继续可能或者应该出现的内容。续写部分内容不仅要求词汇和语言框架的准确使用、语言的润色等,更重要的是,要明白应该如何整理续写内容,以使得其和前文统一连贯并能够表述完整的信息。续写是读和写的统一,之间穿插了对阅读能力、概括能力、思维转化能力、语言领悟能力、语言组织能力、创造性思维能力以及对上下文逻辑关系等的考查。
高质量地完成读后续写最重要的是要大量阅读,形成一定的阅读思维能力。沉淀思维,归纳信息,梳理脉络,转换思维,那么阅读的思维能力注定会迅速提升。理解续写前文的内容是这一题型的最关键部分,否则后面的续写就不会有任何形成思维的信息输人,也就谈不上输出了1多读,多思维,多沉淀,多拓展,这是应对读后续写的重要环节!
熟悉题型特点
读后续写的阅读材料一般以350同以内的记叙文和夹叙夹议文为主,偶有少量议论文。要求在此文的后面续写150词左右的英文与前文构成一个完整的故事。一般来说,记叙文浅显易懂,但故事情节多曲折动人,故事线索的逻辑性也较强。要求续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局。续写时要抓住故事的叙事线索,依据原文的写作思路续写文章,并适当发散。写作要求是在读懂原文的基础上,在规定时间内展开合理的想象,并运用所学的英语知识完成续写。续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已经给出。
续写部分要有创新性,不是原文的抄写或胡编乱造,同时,还要带有原文色彩。
续写一般分为两类:半开放性续写和完全开放性续写。半开放性续写要求务必根据文章的逻辑推理续写。完全开放性续写则要求依据文章的思路自由发挥。续写时要尽可能与原文的中心思想和语言风格保持一致。
读后续写不是随心所欲地写,而是要在所给段落开头的帮助下完成续写部分。其中,段落开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似,在某种程度上引导写作思路向某个方面发展,所续写部分不能脱离各自的段落开头语另起炉灶,要在其基础上进行拓展发挥。
读后续写要求读写并重,需要对给定材料精确理解,这样所续写部分才不至于偏离主题,就这方面而言,读后续写有点类似阅读理解题中对文章后续发展的推断,如:What would happen next
续写部分的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的,可根据自己对原文材料的理解,对文章的结尾做出不同的诠释。
【写作语料】
动作描写(一)
①Stanley got in line behind Zero.
斯坦利排在泽罗的后面。
②Igor expelled saliva as he spoke.
伊戈尔一边说,一边吐出口水。
③Tom made room as Stanley sat down.
斯坦利坐下时,汤姆腾出地方来。
④He stopped writing as he became aware that somebody was reading over his shoulder.
当他意识到有人在他身后阅读时,他停止了写作。
⑤Magnet helped Stanley to his feet.
马涅特扶着斯坦利站了起来。
⑥Stanley was half asleep as he got in line for breakfast, but the sight of Mr Sir awakened him.
斯坦利在排队吃早饭的时候还处于半睡半醒的状态,但一看见西尔先生,他就醒了。
⑦Kate struggled to her feet.
凯特挣扎着站起来。
⑧Stand straight. Raise your chin.
站直。抬起你的下巴。
⑨His knees crumpled beneath him.
他一下子瘫倒在地。
⑩He kept an eye out for Zero, but Zero didn't come back.
他留意着泽罗,但泽罗没有回来。
心理描写(一)
①What worried him the most was the thought of his parents not knowing what happened to him, not knowing whether he was dead or alive.
他最担心的是他的父母不知道他发生了什么事,不知道他是死是活。
②An even crazier idea kept popping into his head.
一个更疯狂的想法不断地出现在他的脑海里。
③Two nights later, Stanley lay awake staring up at the star-filled sky. He was too happy to fall asleep.
两天后,斯坦利醒着躺在床上,望着满天繁星。他高兴得无法人眠。
④They walked for what seemed like a very long time, and still never came across. They became anxious.
他们走了很长一段时间,仍然没有找到。他们开始焦急起来。
⑤A wave of terror rushed over him when he saw.
当他看到时,一阵恐惧涌上心头。
⑥The fear made him dizzy. He took a breath, summoned his courage,
and continued.
他吓得头晕目眩。他吸了口气,鼓起勇气,继续(说)下去。
⑦He heard his own heart heat.
他听到自己的心在发热。
⑧He felt the scream explode inside him.
他感到那声尖叫在他心里爆发了。
⑨Stanley could hear his heart beat. Each beat told him he was still alive, at least for one more second.
斯坦利能听到自己的心跳。每一次心跳都告诉他自己还活着,至少还能再活一秒钟。
⑩He felt as if he was walking in a dream, not quite able to comprehend what was going on around him.
他觉得自己好像在梦中行走,不太明白周围发生的事情。
环境描写
①Stanley had a poster of him hanging on the wall of his bedroom.
斯坦利把他的一张海报挂在卧室的墙上。
②The lake was so full of holes and mounds that it reminded Stanley of pictures he'd seen of the moon.
湖水中满是洞,石堆成山,它提醒着斯坦利他曾看到过这样的月亮。
③The sun had only just come up over the horizon, but he already could feel its hot rays against his face.
太阳刚从地平线升起,但他已经能感觉到热阳光照在脸上。
④The sun wasn't yet up, but its rays arced over the horizon and brought light to the sky.
太阳还没有升起来,但它的光芒在地平线上划出一道弧线,照亮了天空。
⑤It was especially beautiful in the spring, when the peach trees, which lined the shore, bloomed with pink and rose-colored blossoms.
这是特别美丽的春天,岸边的桃树盛开粉红色和玫瑰色的花朵。
⑥The air became unbearably humid. Stanley was drenched in sweat. Beads of moisture ran down the handle of his shovel. It was almost as if the temperature had gotten so hot that the air itself was sweating. A loud boom of thunder echoed across the empty lake.
空气变得难以忍受的潮湿。斯坦利被汗水湿透了,汗珠从他的铁锹柄上滚落下来,似乎温度变得如此之高以至于空气本身也在出汗。雷声在空旷的湖面上回荡。
⑦The peak looked to him exactly like a giant fist, with the thumb sticking straight up.
在他看来,山峰就像一个巨大的拳头,大拇指竖直向上。
⑧The storm moved off farther west, along with any hope of rain.
暴风雨连同下雨的希望一起向西移动。
⑨The boat lay upside down, half buried in the dirt.
船倒挂着,一半埋在泥土里。
⑩It was as if they had been walking across the flat bottom of a giant frying pan, and now they had to somehow climb up out of it.
这就好像他们一直在一个巨大的煎锅的底部行走,现在他们必须想办法爬出来。
Patches of weeds dotted the mountainside.
一片片野草点缀着山坡。
He was in a field of greenish white flowers that seemed to extend all the way around.
他站在一片绿白花的田野里,这些花似乎向四周伸展开去。
The sun cut through the cloud, and Stanley felt its rays beating down on him. But soon more clouds filled the sky, shading Stanley.
太阳穿过云层,斯坦利感到阳光正照射在他身上。但很快更多的乌云布满天空,把斯坦利遮挡住了。
人物描写
①Stanley weighed three times as much as the other boy.
斯坦利的体重是那个男孩的三倍。
②Once he started a project he would work on it for years, often going days without sleep.
一旦他开始做一个项目,他就会工作好几年,经常是几天不睡觉。
③Elya blushed when Myra entered the room.
迈拉进屋时,艾莉亚脸红了。
④His clothes were soaked with sweat.
他的衣服被汗水湿透了。
⑤His throat felt as if it was coated with sandpaper.
他觉得嗓子像被砂纸磨了一样。
⑥Even the people looked broken, with their worn-out bodies sprawled over the various chairs and sofas.
就连那些人看起来也很疲惫,他们疲惫的身体躺在各种椅子和沙发上。
⑦Every muscle and joint in his body ached as he tried to get out of bed.
当他试图下床时,身体的每一块肌肉和关节都在疼痛。
⑧Now he had such a huge smile that it almost seemed too big for his face, like the smile on a jack-o'-lantern.
现在,他笑得那么灿烂,几乎超出了他的脸面,就像南瓜灯上的笑容。
⑨Zero's mouth was shut tight. As he glared at Mr Pendanski, his dark eyes seemed to expand.
泽罗的嘴紧闭着。当他瞪着潘当斯基先生时,他的黑眼睛似乎睁大了。
⑩If he jerked too quickly, he felt a throbbing pain just above his neck where Zigzag's shovel had hit him.
如果他用力太快,就会感到脖子上方之字形铁锹打到的地方一阵刺痛。
写作示例:
A
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2022·T8联考)
A Run to Remember
Thirteen can be a challenging age. Not only did I have to adapt to my changing body, I also had to deal with my parents' bitter divorce, a new family and the upsetting move from my country home to a crowded suburb.
When we moved, my beloved companion, a small brown pony(小马),had to be sold. Feeling helpless and alone, I couldn't eat or sleep, and I cried all of the time. I missed my family, my home and my pony. Finally, my father, realizing how much I missed my pony, purchased an old red horse for me at a local market.
My horse, Cowboy, was without a doubt the ugliest horse in the world. He was pigeon-toed and knock-kneed. But I didn't care about his faults. I loved him beyond all reasons.
I joined a riding club and faced rude comments and mean snickers about Cowboy's looks. I never let on how I felt, but deep down inside, my heart was breaking. The other members rode beautiful registered horses.
When Cowboy and I entered the events where the horse is judged on appearance, we were quickly out of the game. I finally realized that my only chance to compete would be in the timed-speed events. I chose barrel racing(绕桶赛),an event in which a horse and its rider attempt to complete a triangular pattern around three barrels in the fastest time.
One girl named Becky rode a big brown horse in the race events. She always won the blue ribbons. Needless to say, she didn't feel threatened when I competed against her at the next show. She didn't need to. I came in next to last.
The bitter memory of Becky's smirks(得意的笑)made me determined to beat her. For the whole next month, I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena(运动场地)。We practiced for hours in the hot sun and then I would walk Cowboy home. On the way home I would be so tired; those five miles seemed twice as long.
All of our hard work didn't make me feel confident by the time the show came. I sat at the gate and sweated it out while I watched Becky and her horse charge through the pattern of barrels, finishing the course with ease.
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My turn finally came.
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No cheers filled the air when I finished my show.
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写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。作者十三岁时,生活上遇到了很大的变故,父亲给作者买了一匹新的小马,希望作者重新振作起来。在赛马比赛时,Becky(贝基)经常获胜,这让作者很不开心。作者带着自己的小马驹Cowboy(牛仔)坚持训练,希望击败Becky.在这次比赛中,作者的努力能否得到回报?面对结果,作者
收获了什么?
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My turn finally came. As I urged Cowboy forward, he stumbled, and almost fell, much to the delight of the other riders. I jammed my hat down on my head, stroked Cowboy's big red neck and entered the arena. At the signal, we dashed toward the first barrel, quickly whipped around it and with perfect precision rounded the second and thundered on to the third. We tore around the final curve and shot for the finish line.
No cheers filled the air when I finished my show. The end of our run was met with surprised silence. With the sound of my heart pounding in my ears, I heard the announcer call our time. Cowboy and I had beaten Becky and her proud fancy horse! I gained much more than a blue ribbon that day. At thirteen, I realized that I'd always come out a winner if I wanted something badly enough to work for it. I can be the master of my own destiny.
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(2022·山东师大附中高三摸底考试)Paula is a 55-year-old woman living in New Jersey. She lives a happy life without concern for financial or social problems and she constantly shares laughs with her family and friends. About ten years ago, her husband Michael gave her a gold ring with a diamond in it on their 20th wedding anniversary. She cherished it very much and wore it every day.
Having been married for almost 30 years, Paula had everything set for herself, and knew that her life in New Jersey was a thrilling one. One day, Paula was in the bathroom cleaning everything up, from the sink to the floor. She wanted to keep her house clean and beautiful. As soon as Paula finished washing the bathtub, she moved on to the part she feared most: the toilet. Wanting to get it out of the way, she quickly cleaned the inside of the toilet with a brush, and flushed(冲走) the soap away. After finishing, she felt there was something wrong, but she couldn't think of what it was.
Paula's heart skipped a beat when she noticed that her left ring finger felt a bit lighter. She slowly looked down at her ring finger, hoping that her treasured anniversary gift was still on it. She was frightened to see that it was lost. She didn't notice that she flushed it down the toilet.
Paula said, “I must have flushed it down. It had been a little big on my finger, because it was winter time and my hands were smaller. I felt so bad about it. Sad and embarrassed,"
She couldn't believe that she just let thousands of dollars go down the drain(下水道),literally, She searched the bathroom and even the house, hoping that she just dropped if somewhere and forgot about it. She even took apart the toilet and searched the inside pipes with a flashlight, but in vain. Paula had no idea how to explain this to her husband. To buy the ring, Michael worked extra hard before the anniversary, so to tell him the bad news wan unimaginable for Paula.
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She softly knocked on the door to their bedroom.________________________________________________
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写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。Paula(保拉)弄丢了丈夫Michael(迈克尔)努力赚钱给她买的戒指,怎么也找不到,很可能掉进马桶里了。Paula 该怎么告诉 Michael 这个坏消息?Michael会有什么反应?
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She softly knocked on the door to their bedroom. When she came in, she saw Michael reading his favorite book on the bed. Visibly sweaty and nervous, Paula said that she had bad news to tell him. Michael was worried, but listened. With her eyes looking away from embarrassment, Paula cried and told her husband the ring was flushed down the toilet. Paula had mentally prepared herself for what could possibly be the toughest conversation with her husband ever. But Michael was quiet through the entire explanation, and this put Paula off.
After finishing her explanation, Paula wiped away her tears and waited for Michael to say something. She thought he would get mad at her. However, Michael's face didn't show any anger. Suddenly, he interrupted the silence by giving her a hug. Paula was completely shocked by Michael's reaction to the situation. After all, she lost the ring he had given her to celebrate their anniversary. Michael told Paula that he would buy her another ring, exactly like the one she lost. Paula felt greatly moved.
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(2022·武汉市部分学校高三质量检测)The easy way out isn't always easiest. I learned that lesson when I decided to treat my father to a special meal. I glanced through the cookbook and chose a menu which included homemade bread. Knowing the bread would take time, I started on it as soon as he left for work.
As I was not experienced in cooking, I thought if a dozen was good, two dozen would be better, so I doubled everything. As Dad loved oranges, I also opened a can of orange and poured it all into the bowl. Soon there was sticky dough(面团) covered with ugly yellowish marks. Realizing I had been defeated, I put the dough in the rubbish bin outside so I wouldn't have to face him laughing at my work.
I went on preparing the rest of the meal, and, when Dad got home, we sat down to Cornish chicken with rice. He tried to enjoy the meal but seemed disturbed. Twice he got up and went outside, saying he thought he heard a noise. The third time he left, I went to the windows to see what he was doing.
Looking out, I saw Dad standing about three feet from the rubbish bin, holding the lid up with a stick and looking into the container. When I came out of the house, he dropped the stick and explained that there was something alive in the rubbish bin. Picking up the stick again, he held the lid up enough for me to see. I felt cold. But I stepped closer and looked harder.
Without doubt it was my work. The hot sun had caused the dough to double in size and the fermenting yeast(酵母) made the surface shake and sigh as though it were breathing. I had to admit what the “living thing" was
and why it was there. I don't know who was more embarrassed by the whole thing, Dad or me.
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My dad tapped me gently on the shoulder, and we went inside._____________________________________
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写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。作者觉得做面包是很简单的事情,但是有一天给爸爸做面包时弄砸了,他把面团扔进垃圾桶,结果天气热面团在垃圾桶里发酵,发出来的声音让作者很尴尬。爸爸会和作者说什么呢?三个月后的聚会,又会发生什么?
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My dad tapped me gently on the shoulder, and we went inside. Sitting back to our Cornish chicken, Dad, smilingly, updated me on recent events at his work without a mere mention of the crazy dough wildly dancing outside, which served wonderfully as a gentle embarrassment reliever. However, while doing the dishes after dinner, Dad said to me with firmness in his voice, “You don't have to be an expert to make bread, but you do have to do your research before taking actions. There is no such thing as an easy way out.” And that was the starting point of my journey with making the perfect bread.
At a party three months later, everyone wanted to try my bread. The rest of the night slipped away, filled with inquiries about my secret recipe. Yet, hardly was there a different answer other than,“ Beauty comes from balance and patience.” To be frank, that was exactly what Id learnt during my numerous experiments. An amazing loaf of bread required suitable balance of ingredients to mix as well as enormous patience of waiting for the dough to rise. Countless were my failures to make tasty bread, every single moment of it was cherished. Along the journey, I've developed from the man whose dough sighs in a dustbin to the man whose bread makes your taste but dance.
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(2022·山东省肥城市高三第一次摸底考试)I was in my room, unwilling to head to the community theatre with “my brother" Henry. He was just adopted by my parents recently. I was not in the mood for being onstage with him.
“Kirstie, come here," my mom called. Following her voice, I found her outside the bathroom, holding a wet book. She gave the book a shake. “Henry's book was in the bathtub. Did you put it there ” She glared at me, something she never did before Henry came to our home. I didn't wet his book on purpose. Tears of hurt clouded my eyes. Worse still, she promised to buy him a new copy. My heart ached. Henry was stealing my mother's love. He was ruining my life.
Meanwhile, Henry was just nearby, absorbed in working on a complicated rope knot(绳结) as usual. Why did a boy like him do the girly work Far from manly!
Soon, it was time to have to set off to the community theatre. As Henry walked ahead of us to the car, my mom took me aside and said in a low voice, “It's the first time for Henry to be onstage. Be kind to him, Honey.” I nodded but sighed. Being kind didn't use to be hard. But after Henry moved in, everything felt different. The theatre used to be a special place for my parents and me. With Henry involved, it didn't seem so special any more.
Finally, it was our stage time. My heart beat wildly. I forgot my annoyance at Henry for a while. As we kids lined up, ready to act out our short play, I realized how loosely I had tied the drawstring(束带) on my skirt. Sure enough, my skirt began to drop. Laughter from the audience could be heard, and even though I was wearing shorts under my skirt, I could feel my face burst into flames. However, my hands were full. If only someone could help me out!
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Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment. ___________________________________________________
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Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment. He immediately came to my aid. He pulled up my skirt and skillfully tied the drawstring with a beautiful knot. Seeing what Henry did for me, something deep in my mind began to change. It seemed as if my cold heart began to melt slowly and my annoyance at him gradually gave way to guilt. I regretted having treated him as a stranger. While my mind was wandering, our performance time came. It turned out a great success, thunderous applause filling the whole theatre.
After the performance, I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully. “Thanks,” I said with a grateful smile on my face. I had to admit that but for his timely help, I would have been extremely embarrassed. Without his knotting skill, the performance would have been quite different. “Knot a problem. You are my sister," he grinned innocently, saying humorously. Surrounded by the cheerful atmosphere, I felt a flood of warmth of a big family. Maybe it wouldn't be so bad to have a new person in my corner of the world after all.
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(2022·江苏省泰州市高三第一次调研考试)When my son Mike begged us to adopt the black-and-white cat, Daisy, we already had Pepper, a seven-year-old gray cat. We couldn't resist our nine-year-old's request. The kitty came home with us that day.
Daisy was naughty. She loved being around the boy and his friends, hanging out in the basement where they played video games or watched television. Sometimes, she explored the basement, jumping up on the bar, going into the small bathroom, and nosing around the laundry room. She'd travel the areas as if on a quest. Then, just when the boys would be at the height of their video game, she'd jump up in front of the screen, disrupting their play. She climbed on their backs, going from shoulder to shoulder.
One evening, our sons, Joe and Mike, were in the basement watching TV when I heard, “Mom! There's a snake in the window well.”
“A snake How do you know ” I stood at the head of the stairs to the basement, listening.
“It's near the window. We can hear it. There's a strange sound. Listen!”
Grabbing a flashlight and a plastic grocery bag, I headed downstairs to capture the snake. I climbed onto a chair near the window well, turned on the flashlight and looked cautiously through the curtain, I saw nothing but a few spider webs. I listened. Suddenly, a loud sound came from the ceiling. Something was in the ventilation duct(通风管道)。The sound grew louder and more frequent. I paused.
What was making the noise Could it be a snake like the boys suspected Pepper had killed a few snakes and brought them home to show us. I told myself that, if it were a snake, it was probably harmless since rattle-snakes aren't common in Omaha, Nebraska, If seemed too noisy to be a snake.
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It was apparent that the boys would be no help.__________________________________________________
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写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。儿子Micheal(迈克尔)收养了小猫 Daisy(黛西),她经常和儿子们一起玩耍。有一天儿子说地下室有蛇,大家能脱离危险吗?地下室的蛇是怎么回事呢?
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It was apparent that the boys would be no help. Sitting in the sofa, Joe had drawn a blanket up to his shoulders and Mike stared at me wide-eyed. I took a deep breath and pointed the flashlight toward the spot where I'd heard the sound. The sound grew louder and more intense as I aimed the flashlight toward the window well. My heart raced as the “snake” was close. By the light of the flashlight, I saw something moving.
At the sight of it, I relaxed immediately. When I saw a little white and black paw reached down, I called. “Daisy!" She'd seen the light and followed it, making her way to the window well. The boys jumped up from the sofa and ran over to me to have a closer look. It turned out that naughty Daisy got lost in the ventilation duet while exploring. We all laughed at the scare she'd given us. And that may be a little punishment for her naughtiness.
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(2022·广东省深圳市六校高三第一次联考)One Saturday morning, Jeremy woke up to a quiet house. Usually Mom was awake making breakfast and cleaning the kitchen, but not today. At the sound of his mom coughing, Jeremy knocked on her bedroom door and asked with great concern, “Mom, are you OK ”“Honey,” Mom said weakly. “I have a terrible cold. You can have cereal(燕麦) for breakfast and watch cartoons. I'm going to stay in bed.”
Jeremy poured some cereal into a bowl and ate the pieces dry. Mom must feel very bad if she was staying in bed all day. How could Jeremy help First, he wiped up the crumbs of cereal he left on the kitchen counter. He also put away the cereal box neatly, so the kitchen looked just as it did when he woke up. But what else could he do Jeremy thought. Saturday was the day when mom did laundry. Jeremy loved to watch the clothes spinning in the machine. That should be fun! He ran to his room to get the laundry basket, inside which there was his mother's favorite white dress, among other clothes and a pair of red socks,
Jeremy opened the door to the washer and put the clothing inside. He had watched Mom do laundry lots of times, so he knew where to find the washing powder and how to pour it into the machine, Finally, he closed the door and pressed the big button that said “START." Jeremy looked through the round glass window. Water was pouring in, and the machine was starting to spin, making his clothing tumble around. That was easy!
Jeremy watched cartoons until he heard the washing machine beep. That meant the washing was done. Jeremy opened the door to take out the damp clothes, He took out a few at a time and moved them into the dryer. Everything seemed clean, and Jeremy felt proud. Then he pulled out a pink dress.
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But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket.___________________________________
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写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。妈妈生病了,Jeremy(杰里米)打算帮妈妈洗衣服,把所有衣服都放进洗衣机里洗了。为什么洗完之后裙子会变成粉色?妈妈的裙子被染色了,接下来会发生什么呢?
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But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket. “Where did it come from ” Jeremy wondered, reaching into the washer to take out more clothes. Then much to his astonishment, he pulled out two T-shirts, both in light pink. Realizing there was something wrong, Jeremy stood frozen, his heart sinking. While racking his brain for reasons, he caught sight of the red socks, and it suddenly occurred to him that they must be to blame for the accident. With no means of handling the situation, Jeremy was in such a panic that he even thought of hiding the dress from his mom. “That isn't a positive approach to the problem,” he reminded himself. Finally, he decided to dry and fold the laundry before telling his mom everything.
Holding the neatly folded pink dress, Jeremy nervously knocked at his mom's bedroom door again. After what seemed like ages, he came to the bedside, his head drooping. Sensing his son's unease, his mother inquired with concern what was wrong. “ Sorry mom, I shouldn't have ruined your favorite dress.” Jeremy apologized. Stuttering out the mistake he had made, he was ready to get a good scolding for his wrongdoing. Realizing what's going on, mom smiled understandingly at Jeremy,“ Never mind, dear. I know you meant to help.” Then mom held the dress up before her and said in an approving tone,“ You know what I think it looks nice.” At this Jeremy beamed with relief, making a silent vow to be more careful in helping his mom out next time.
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(2022·湖南省长沙长郡中学高三月考)It was a rainy November morning. Overcome with anger I knew if I didn't leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. As rain came down in sheets, Joe offered to take me to work. I struggled into my jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and ignored him.
He insisted and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers and the dirty dishes still on the table. “Don't you have enough to do I can take care of myself.” I stormed out, not even kissing him goodbye. Joe shouted after me not to take the shortcut(捷径)。
Joe and I had been eagerly looking forward to our retirement when a heart attack that past spring forced him to leave his job earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills mounted we realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over the housework.
The new arrangement was a disaster. Exhausted after a day of full work, all I wanted was a hot home cooked meal and a good night's sleep. However, what greeted me at the table was a microwave package. Sometimes he would serve oatmeal(燕麦片)for several nights in a row. One night when I dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover Joe had turned our white sheets blue. He told me he had found out how to save on water, soap and electricity. He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was just the secret.
Ten minutes later, ignoring Joe's warning I turned off the main route(道路),I thought it hadn't rained enough to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner water rushed across my path. After a few feet, the car got stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldn't risk walking in this. Almost 20 minutes passed, the car began to shake. I got frightened to death when I heard three long honks(喇叭声)。
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Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.________________________________
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写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。丈夫提前退休,辛苦工作的作者在下雨天还是不得不去上班赚钱养家。雨越下越大,作者又和丈夫闹了别扭,作者看到了货车的灯光,会是丈夫来帮助作者吗?作者最后能安全到家吗?
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Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. It was Joe! I couldn't help bursting into tears. Joe shouted to me not to be frightened. Then he threw a thick rope so that I could hang on to it and walk straight toward him. I opened the door, grabbed it and inched out. However, a sudden fall left me in the rushing water. I struggled to my feet, only to find a branch blocking the way right in front of me.
I screamed that I couldn't make it. Joe, however, remained calm! He urged me to take one step at a time and assured me I could make it. I moved forward slowly and cautiously before I fell into his arms. Sobbing against his chest, I apologized that I shouldn't have taken the shortcut. Joe patted me saying his primary concern was my safety. Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework.
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(2022·湖南省长沙雅礼中学高三摸底考试)It was somewhere between spring and summer. My mom and I were driving through the countryside. Back then I was 13 years old and always felt unhappy with Mom. But little did I know that this trip was going to be a special one.
A pot of flowers sat in the back seat, whose heavenly scent filled the car. Suddenly, in the middle of nowhere, my mom pulled over. “What are you doing ” I cried, fearing that the car had broken down and we'd be stuck there, so far from home. But that wasn't the case. My mom hopped out(快速跳出来) of the car, grabbing the flowers from the back seat. “It’ll just be a minute,” she called back through the open windows.
My eyes impatiently skimmed the edge of the road before settling on a little sign showing that it was a nursing home. I looked back to the building, somewhat annoyed, as my mom reappeared-empty-handed.
Before she started the car, curiosity drove me to ask, “Do you know someone there ” She shook her head. “Then what did you do with the flowers ” She smiled slightly, “I gave them to the receptionist ( 前台接待员)。”“What ” She laughed at my confusion. “I told the receptionist to give the flowers to whoever needed them, especially who hasn't gotten any in a while.”
I kept silent for a moment. Not long after we continued our driving, I spoke again, “Did you leave your name ” To this she answered instantly, “No. Leaving flowers there for someone who will appreciate them makes me feel good, which is enough of a thank for me.”
Suddenly, still thinking about Mom's deeds, I heard something burst loudly. It was our car that broke down! Nothing could be worse, because neither my mom nor I understood how to repair it, and we didn't know where the garage was. It also seemed impossible to wait for any passer-by, since we had seen so few along the way.
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写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。妈妈带着年幼的作者开车去养老院,给老人们送了花还不留名字,这让作者感到很奇怪。突然,车抛锚了。妈妈和作者回去养老院求助,善良的他们会得到什么帮助呢?回家的路上,作者看见了一朵花,接下来又会发生什么?
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We were worrying about what could be done. But after waiting in vain for a considerable time, Mom and I decided to walk back the road to the nursing home and seek help. God knows how far we had driven! When we arrived, the receptionist was surprised, but warmly helped us contact the garage. There, the old men who had received the flowers were excited to meet us, talking about how great that day was. It amazed us what random actions of kindness could mean to the people who received it. While we were laughing and talking merrily, the garage got our car repaired.
As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road. I paced quickly into the flower shop, where a bunch of flowers glowing red in full bloom caught my eye. Having witnessed the effect of kindness, I decided to send Mom the sweet flowers. Soon, the heavenly scent filled the car again. Mom tried to conceal her excitement, but the glittering tears failed her. Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my occasional anger towards her, I actually felt proud of her. This was the trip of my life.
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(2022·重庆实验外国语学校高三摸底考试)Bales left the pavement of Base Road and stepped onto snow-covered Jewell Trail. She planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshire's Mount Washington State Park. She had packed for almost every emergency and intended to walk alone.
She'd checked the weather forecast posted by the Mount Washington Observatory before she left. Based on her experience, Bales knew that her hike was realistic. Besides, she had two emergency plans and extra layers of clothing to better adjust her body temperature as conditions changed.
The hike up the lower part of Jewell Trail was pleasant. Bales felt excited as she walked up into snowy paths. The sun shone through the trees and cast a shadow over her smiling face. Less than an hour later, loads of dark clouds had replaced the sunshine, and snow covered the surrounding trees.
She still smiled. However, the weather was showing its teeth. Bales added even more layers to shelter herself from the cold winds and thick fog. She made her way across the snow-covered ridge(山脊)toward Mount Washington and began to think about calling it a day. Suddenly, she noticed something: a single set of footprints in the snow ahead of her, which had been made by a pair of sneakers-typically not the type for hiking.
Meanwhile, Bales was getting colder, even though she was moving fast and generating some body heat. With strong gusts of wind screaming and attacking her back and left side, she decided to abandon her plan. The only thing, however, kept her on the trail was the sneaker tracks in the snow.
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写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。Bales(贝尔斯)打算去徒步旅行,准备好装备后就出发了。但是不一会,下起了大雪,路上有着一排运动鞋的脚印,很可能有人需要帮助。受冻的Bales是跟着运动鞋的脚印还是为了安全回去呢?她能营救出穿运动鞋的人吗?
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Bales faced a dilemma about whether to follow the tracks or not. If she chose to follow the tracks, she'd add time and risk to her hiking. But the tracks ahead suggested someone might be in danger. She couldn't let this go. She called out into the frozen fog,“ Is anybody out there Do you need help ” The strong winds carried her voice away. Then she walked cautiously in the direction of the tracks. She rounded a corner and spotted a man sitting motionlessly.
Her searching now turned into rescuing the man. She approached him instantly and found he was suffering from frostbite on his feet. Without any hesitation, she covered his body with warm clothes, and then poured him some sugary drink. The wind roared over and they would die soon if they didn't get out of there. She supported the man and inched along the trail. With great efforts, Bales managed to save the man's life. Exhausted, she felt that it was all worth it.
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(2022·江苏省如皋市高三调研)COVID-19 made “social distance” a big problem for 2020 and forced us to adapt in new and often creative ways. My super-social teenage daughters adapted by talking to their friends on video chat; school campuses closed but adapted with online classes.
However, social distance with my parents added an extra challenge. We'd recently moved them (very old) into the house across the street from us. It was wonderful to have them so close, but once COVID-19 arrived, everything changed.
How could we care for and interact with my parents but keep social distance at the same time I could buy their groceries, and leave them on their doorstep-that would be easy. But meeting their social needs was another matter. They did not use computers or smartphones, so there had to be another way to connect with them. After much thought, my daughters decided we could reach out with beautiful cards, letters and pictures...and one of our dogs could deliver them!
We'd read in the news that although animals could be carriers of the virus, the likelihood was low, so we felt excited about the prospect of our new delivery method, The question wan, which dog wan bent suited for the job We considered each one carefully: Tootsie, Stevie or Stuffy, we decided to give Tootsie the first shot at it. We tied a small package loosely over her head and sent her toward my parents' door. Holding our breath, we watched as she approached the house.
Suddenly, she turned left, made a beeline for a large dirt patch(小块土地),shook the package from her neck, and started to bury it, but stopped by our shouts of dismay.
Little Stevie was up next. He had more focus; surely he could do the job. With the package affixed to his back, we set him on course. Stevie looked strong going in. He ran toward the door and nearly made it, but then a lizard(蜥蜴) ran in front of him. Chasing lizards is Stevie's favorite pas- time, so we knew all bets were off. Sure enough, Stevie chased that lizard all over the yard and then went running down the street. I watched with disappointment as my daughters disappeared after him.
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Later, we were ready for a final go-Stuffy.______________________________________________________
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Stuffy received treats (healthy carrots) and seemed truly proud of himself. ____________________________
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写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。在新冠疫情的影响下,人们的出行受到限制,作者用家中的狗来为大家做些善事。Stuffy(史达非)能帮大家做什么呢?Stuffy又会得到什么奖励呢?
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Later, we were ready for a final go-Stuffy, The vet had recently told us that he needed to go on a diet. He was our last choice. But Stuffy loved to chase his ball, so maybe there was hope. We tied him up with the package and walked him across the street. My daughter threw a ball toward my parents' front door, and Stuffy bounded along the path. My parents opened their door just as Stuffy reached the threshold, and they successfully removed the package from his back as we all cheered and jumped up and down for Stuffy. Mission accomplished!
Stuffy received treats (healthy carrots) and seemed truly proud of himself. He did well and we enjoyed it so much that he continued to deliver cards, pictures and little items to my parents every day. We called him our Ding Dong Doggy, even though we have yet to teach him to ring the doorbell. Meanwhile, we were grateful that Stuffy made it possible for us to adapt to the new situation and bond with our parents in a creative way. As Stuffy lost its weight due to the rigorous exercise, we all joked running errands at this special time created an all-win situation.