Unit10 Connections Period Five Writing Workshop 学案（含答案）

UNIT 10 CONFLICTION
Period Five Writing Workshop
课前自主预习
重点单词
appeal vi. __________ vi.&vt. _________
Key: vi. 有吸引力 vi.&vt. 呼吁，恳请；上诉
重点词块
1.of all ages__________ 2.a wide range of__________
3.一组__________ 4.在.....举行__________
5.a large number of __________ 6.be well received by__________
7.a brief lead__________ 8.准时__________
Keys: 1.老老少少的；古往今来的 2. 大范围的；许多种不同的 3.a group of 4. be held on/in 5.大量的；很多 6.受到很好的欢迎 7.简短的开头 8.on time
重点句式
课堂新知讲练
词汇拓讲
1.appeal vi. 有吸引力 vi.&vt. 呼吁，恳请；上诉
(P18)The acts appealing to children were particularly popular.
【翻译】吸引孩子们的活动尤其受欢迎。
【用法详解】
appeal vi. 有吸引力 vi.&vt. 呼吁，恳请；上诉
appeal主要用作动词，意义比较广泛，如： 呼吁，恳求；上诉，申诉，诉请裁决；对……有吸引力，有感染力；启发，劝说，打动
He appealed to voters to go to the polls tomorrow.
他呼吁选民们明天去投票站。
We intend to appeal the verdict.
我们打算对此裁决提出申诉。
appeal用作动词时，后面常接to，构成短语appeal to，意为“呼吁；上诉；要求；对…有吸引力”。
On the other hand, the idea appealed to him.
另一方面，这个主意对他有吸引力。
His music is highly individualistic and may not appeal to everyone.
他的音乐很独特，可能不是人人都喜欢的。
The movie will appeal to adults as well as children.
这部电影除了将吸引儿童外，还会吸引成年人。
appeal也可用作名词，意为“呼吁，恳求；上诉，申诉；吸引力，感染力，魅力；启发，打动”。
They took their appeal to the Supreme Court.
他们上诉到了最高法院。
This morning's appeal was held in camera.
今天上午的上诉是不对外公开的。
Its new title was meant to give the party greater public appeal.
其新的名字意在给予该党更大的公众吸引力。
He has a message from King Fahd, believed to be an appeal for Arab unity.
他有个来自法赫德国王的口信，相信是对阿拉伯团结的呼吁。
【归纳拓展】
appealing adj. 吸引人的；动人的；引起兴趣的；恳求似的
There was a sense of humour to what he did that I found very appealing.
他所做的带有一种我发现很迷人的幽默感。
She gave him a soft appealing look that would have melted solid ice.
她向他投去一种会融化坚冰的温柔恳求的表情。
appeals n. 上诉；恳求（复数形式）
I hope that our appeals will not fall on deaf ears.
我希望我们的请求不会被当作耳边风。
Their appeals for an end to the violence had a hollow ring.
他们要求停止使用暴力的呼吁并无诚意。
【针对练习】
单句语法填空
(1)They have made generous responses to the _____________(appeal) for funds.
(2)There was an _____________(appeal) gravity to everything she said.
完成句子
(3)With the plan carried in our city，we ________ _______ _______ ________ people
to reduce pollution.
随着我们城市这一计划的实施，我们能够更好地呼吁人们降低污染。
Keys: (1)appeals (2)appealing (3)can better appeal to
2.(P18)There were people of all ages.
【翻译】有各个年龄段的人。
【用法详解】
People of all ages 意为“各年龄层次的人 ; 各个年龄层的人 ; 各个年龄的人”。
of all ages是固定短语，意为“古往今来的（事情）；老老少少的（人）”
Young people of all ages go there to meet.
不同年龄的年轻人都去那里聚会。
This is open to women of all ages, so bring along your friends and colleagues.
这对所有年龄的妇女开放，所以带你的朋友和同事一起来。
People of all ages, races, and socioeconomic backgrounds have participated this activity.
所有年龄段、不同种族和社会经济背景的人都参加过这个活动。
We're targeting girls of all ages — no matter whether they are 6 years old or 60
years old.
我们面对所有年龄段的女孩——不管她是6岁还是60岁。
【归纳拓展】
of all表示最不可能或最料不到的事例，通常翻译为：在所有…....中（偏偏，就连，居然），后面如果接的是可数名词，则该名词要用复数形式。
The court absolved him of all responsibility for the accident.
法院宣告他对该事故不负任何责任。
His face was drained of all colour and animation.
他面如死灰。
Her latest CD is a compilation of all her best singles.
她最新的激光唱片收录了她的所有最佳单曲。
The shop is well stocked with goods of all kinds.
商店里各色货物，一应俱全。
Alcohol is a contributory factor in 10% of all road accidents.
所有交通事故中有10%是酒后驾车造成的。
You didn't buy him a present ! Of all the nerve! That guy has always treated you well.
你没给他买礼物？！气死我了！他一直对你那么好。
【针对练习】
完成句子
(1)The film script is an amalgam ________________________.
这个电影脚本由三本书合成。
(2)The roads are crowded with vehicles ________________________.
马路上挤满了各种车辆。
(3)Roberto Baggio was set to become one of the greatest players ________________________.
罗伯特·巴乔有可能成为有史以来最伟大的球星之一。
(4)We're looking for people ________________________ who have performed outstanding
acts of bravery, kindness, or courage.
我们正在寻找各个年龄的、曾有过无畏、善良或英勇之举的杰出人士。
Keys:(1)of all three books (2)of all kinds (3)of all time (4)of all ages
句式解读
(P18)The weather was good, although it rained heavily in the morning.
【翻译】天气很好，尽管早上下了大雨。
【考点提炼】
although是个连词，引导了一个让步状语从句。
【归纳拓展】
although意为“尽管；虽然；但是；然而”。
表示对比，“虽然”。
Although he is not smart, he works harder than his classmates.
虽然他不聪明，但他比他的同学都要用功。
2. 表示惊奇或出乎意料，“虽然”。
He can do most of the housework, although he is only five years old.
虽然他才五岁，他会做大部分家务活。
3. 表示让步，“尽管，即使”。
My father is still working outside, although it is very hot.
尽管天气很热，我的爸爸还在外面劳作。
Although he was only grumbling, his choice of words made Rodney angry.
尽管他只是在咕哝，可是他的措词却让罗德妮恼火。
Although people sometimes buy property sight unseen, it's a remarkably bad idea.
尽管人们有时没看房就买了房，但这真是一个很糟糕的主意。
Although this recipe looks long, it is actually very quick to prepare.
尽管这个菜谱看上去很长，其实做起来很快。
4.表示转折，“不过;然而”。
I didn’t agree with him, although I didn’t speak out my opinion at once.
我不同意他的看法，不过我并没有马上说出我的想法。
【提升】
Although与though的区别：
1. 用作连词，表示“虽然”，两者大致同义，可换用，只是 although 比 though 更为正式。如：
Though/Although] they’re expensive, people buy them. 虽然它们很昂贵，人们还是买。
2. although 一般不用作副词，而 though 可用作副词，表示“可是”“不过”。如：
I expect you’re right—I’ll ask him, though. 我认为你说得对——我去问问他也好。
She promised to phone. I heard nothing, though. 她答应要打电话来. 可我没听到回信儿。
这样用的though通常位于句末，但有时位于句首的though也有这样的意思。如：
他说他要付钱，然而我认为他不会付的。
正：He says he’ll pay, though I don’t think he will.
正：He says he’ll pay; I don’t think he will, though.
3. 在 as though（好像，仿佛），even though（即使，纵然）等固定短语中，不能用 although代替though。如：
She treats me as though I were a stranger. 她待我仿佛我是一个陌生人。
He’s the best teacher even though he has the least experience. 他尽管经验最少，但教得最好。
4. 两者均可用于省略句，通常见于主句与从句主语相同，且从句谓语含有动词be的情形。
Although/Though (she was) in pain, she bravely blinked back her tears.
她虽然很疼痛，但还是硬把眼泪抑制住了。
5. 当though用于倒装形式，它不能换成although，但可换成as。
Successful though/as he is, he is not proud. 他虽然成功，但不骄傲。
Try though/as/ I would, I could not make her change her mind.
不管我多努力，也不能让她改变主意。
Surrounded though [as] we were by the enemy, we managed to march forward.
虽然我们被敌人包围着，但我们还是设法前进了。
Raining hard though [as] it is, I’m going out for a walk.
虽然正在下着大雨，我还是要出去散步。
注意，若倒装后置于句首的是名词时，其前习惯上不用冠词或其他限定词。如：
Expert though [as] he was, he failed. 他虽是专家，但还是失败了。
Big puzzle though [as] it was, it hadn’t got the better of Jim.
虽然是个大难题，但仍没有难倒吉姆。
6. 不要按汉语“虽然……但是……”的表达习惯，在 although 后连用 but。如：
虽然他只是个业余爱好者，但却是一流的高手。
正：Although he’s only an amateur, he’s a first-class player.
但是在强调时，although 可与 yet, still 等副词连用。如：
Though he seems happy, yet he is worried. 虽然他看起来很幸福，但他实际上很烦恼。
值得一提的是，在某些特定的语境中，although 与 but 连用的句子是可能的（注：but 引出的句子在 although 从句之前）。如：
But I didn’t know that then, although I learned it later.
但我当时的确不知道此事，尽管后来还是知道了。
He wanted to go abroad, but although he had some money he couldn’t afford it.
他想出国，尽管他有些钱，但还是负担不起。
【针对练习】
完成句子
(1)_______________________________________, it is very delicate.
珊瑚虽然看上去坚固，实际上非常易碎。
(2)_______________________________________, I couldn’t live with you.
我尽管很喜欢你, 却不能和你在一起生活。
(3)_______________________________________ he is going very grey.
尽管他还年轻他的头发却已变得灰白。
(4)_______________________________________, although the people were kindness.
我在那里从来没有真正高兴过，虽然那里的人们非常亲切。
(5)_______________________________________, they last forever and never go out of style.
尽管价格昂贵，但它们经久耐用，永不过时。
(6)_______________________________________, the engine is still in perfect order.
尽管是战前制造的，这台发动机仍然处于良好状态。
Keys:
(1)Although the coral looks hard (2)Much though /as I like you (3)Although/Though (he is) still young (4)although the people were kindness (5)Although they're expensive
(6)Although/Though (it was) built before the war
随堂知能小练
一、单词拼写
1.My dear Mother, why do you always _________(皱眉)
2.A sudden gust of cold wind made me _________(哆嗦).
3.His fridge was _________(空的) apart from three very withered tomatoes.
4.There was a sense of humour to what he did that I found very a_________.
Keys: 1.frown 2. shiver 3. bare 4. appealing
二、单句语法填空
1.Keep your office space looking good, ____________(particular) your desk.
2.A concert ____________(hold) at the invitation of the mayor.
3.People attending the conference were ___________(main) from the United Kingdom.
4.This month their lawyers filed the latest of several ___________(appeal) in an Atlanta court.
Keys: 1. particularly 2. was held 3. mainly 4. appeals
三、完成句子
1.There was a serious incident involving _______ _______ _______ youths.
有一起涉及一群年轻人的严重事件。
2.The exhibition _______ _______ _______ the audience across the country.
展览会将吸引全国各地的观众。
3.The pavilion is a fun and relaxed place for people _______ _______ _______.
对所有年龄段的人来说，澳大利亚馆都是一个娱乐和放松的好去处。
4.His comments were deeply offensive to _______ _______ _______ _________
single mothers.
他的评论严重触怒了众多的单身母亲。
5.I'm sure we will find _______ _______ _______ _________ choices available in school cafeterias.
我相信我们将会发现学校的自助餐厅里有多种多样的选择。
Keys: 1. a group of 2.will appeal to 3. of all ages 4. a large number of 5. a wide variety of
写作高效提升
话题短语
accredited journalist　　n.特派记者
advertisement　　广告
advance　　n.预发消息；预写消息
anecdote　　n.趣闻轶事
assignment　　n.采写任务
attribution　　n.消息出处；消息来源
back alley news　　n.小道消息
backgrounding　　n.新闻背景
Bad news travels quickly. 坏事传千里
beat　　n.采写范围
blank　　vt.“开天窗”
body　　n.新闻正文
boil　　vt.压缩（篇幅）
contributing editor 特约编辑
contribution n．(投给报刊的)稿件;投稿
contributor n．投稿人
copy desk n．新闻编辑部
copy editor n．文字编辑
correction n．更正(启事)
correspondence column读者来信专栏
cover vt．采访;采写
covert coverage 隐性采访;秘密采访
crop vt．剪辑(图片)
cut n．插图 vt．删减(字数)
cutline n．插图说明
daily n．日报
deadline n．截稿时间
话题佳句
【引人入胜的开头句】
Welcome to Our Views of the World. I’m ...
欢迎来到《我们看世界》。我是........
I’m ... here are today’s news titles.
我是........现在是今天的标题新闻时间。
【精彩纷呈的篇中句】
Danish Minister for European Affairs Nicolajwammen said on Tuesday that...
丹麦欧洲事务大臣Nicolajwammen在星期二说........
Jean-Luc Melenchon, French left-wing leader, said in a recent interview that...
法国左翼领导人Jean-Luc Melenchon，在最近的一次采访中说.......
【回味无穷的结尾句】
Currently, Asia’s richest man is ...., with a fortune worth $ ...b, according to Forbes.
《福布斯》称，目前亚洲首富是中国的.......，其资产达......亿美元。
“It is convenient and it gives me a sense of security because strangers can no longer get in and out of the build,” Zhao said, adding that she prefers to input her student number as she finds it “awkward” to speak to a machine.
赵同学说道，“这很方便，而且给了我一种安全感，因为陌生人再也无法进出宿舍楼了。”她还表示，自己更喜欢输入学号，因为她觉得对机器说话有些尴尬。
写作范例
【写作任务】
上周五早晨两个村庄发生了地震，，持续了一分钟多，十四套房子被破坏，一人死亡，九人受伤，二百多村民无家可归.....
请根据上述材料，展开合理的想象，写一篇新闻稿，对此作出相关报道。
要求：80词左右，语句通顺，表达连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作指导】
1. 明确体裁为新闻报道。
2. 因为地震已经发生了，文章的时态应该为一般过去时相结合。
3. 此篇新闻报道的结构框架为：
第一段：地震发生的后果；
第二段：想象并描述当时的情景及人们当初的反应；
第三段：灾后，官兵和村民们开始重建家园。
【学以致用】
重点词语
1.发生：_________________ 2.破坏：_________________
3.无家可归：_________________ 4.失踪：_________________
5.吓坏的：_________________ 6.摇晃：_________________
Keys: 1.hit 2. destroy 3.homeless 4.missing 5. terrified 6. shaking
重要短语
1.清晨：_________________ 2.持续：_________________
3.很大的噪音：_________________ 4.倒下：_________________
5.爬出来： _________________ 6.冲出去：_________________
Keys:1.early in the morning 2.last for 3.a loud noise 4.fall down 5. climb out
6.rush out
完成句子
1.二百多村民无家可归。
Over two hundred villagers _______________________.
2.一个农民说，地震发生在清晨，持续了一分多钟。
A farmer said the earthquake happened ____________________ and__________ over one minute. 3.当他爬出来以后，发现一个孩子不见了。
When they climbed out, he found that ________________________________.
4.他又爬了进去。
He went ___________________.
5.他发现失踪的那个孩子安全，但是惊恐未定。
He found the missing child, __________________________.
6.他们的房子开始摇晃。
Their house_________________________.
7.一位妇女说她丈夫刚好出去上班了。
A woman said that her husband __________________________.
Keys: 1.became homeless 2.early in the morning; lasted for
3.one of his children was missing 4.back inside 5. safe but terrified
6. started shaking 7.had just left for work
句式改写
8.用定语从句改写第5句。
____________________________________________________________________
9.将第6句和第7句合并为一个句子。
____________________________________________________________________
10.将第4句和第8句合并为一个句子。
____________________________________________________________________
Keys: 8. He found the missing child who was safe but terrified.
9. A woman said that her husband had just left for work when their house started shaking.
10.He went back inside and found the missing child who was safe but terrified.
【参考范文】
Last Friday an earthquake hit two villages and destroyed fourteen houses. One person was killed. Nine were badly injured. Over two hundred villagers became homeless.
A farmer said the earthquake happened early in the morning and lasted for over one minute.
He was in the kitchen with his family when they heard a loud noise.A few minutes later,some
parts of their house were falling down.When they climbed out,he found that one of his children
was missing. He went back inside and found the missing child who was safe but terrified. A woman said that her husband had just left for work when their house started shaking. She rushed out with her children,but they had no time to take anything. A few minutes later, the house
fell down.
After the earthquake, many soldiers went to the villages to help the local people to rebuild their houses.
写作练笔
6月14日，星期五，学生会组织了一个参观当地敬老院的志愿活动，许多学生都积极参与其中，该活动取得了巨大的成功。请你以此为题，写一篇80词左右的新闻报道，向校报投稿。要点如下：
1.此次志愿活动的宗旨；
2.此次活动的内容，如帮老人们洗衣做饭、谈心解闷，竭尽所能提供帮助；
3.此次活动取得了巨大成功，不仅仅对那些老人来说受益多多，对于参与的学生来说也是意义良多。
One possible version:
On June 14, Friday, a volunteer activity where many students took an active part in visiting the local Nursing House was organized by the Student Union and it turns out to be a big success.
　　The activity was aimed at encouraging students to visit the elderly at the Nursing House and help elderly people deal with their troubles both physical and psychological. Many students volunteered to participate in this good deed and were engaged in helping the elderly here out by making their meals, washing their clothes and chatting with them. When asked about those volunteers’ feelings about such an experience, all of them responded with a smile, saying “what a wonderful practice and I really appreciate this experience, for it makes me learn to care more for others in need.”
　　All in all, the activity turns out to be a success not only for the visited elderly but for those students involved.