(共17张PPT)
Unit 2
Reading for Writing
Leading-in
1. For foreign visitors, Which city in China may attract them most
2. Xi'an is always a popular destination for tourists. For a foreign tourist, Xi'an is a must-go place in China. What do you think is special about Xi'an
Please read the page about the Terracotta Army from a travel brochure and tell us what amazes you most.
What aspects of the travel plan does the email address
where to go
when to go
why
how
with whom
what to do
Paragraph Main idea Detail
1 main purpose for the trip go to Xi'an to see the Terracotta Army
2 other plans for the trip go to the Shaanxi History Museum, visit the Xi'an City Wall and a few other famous sights
3 transport the train
4 final thoughts write again, send photos, hear from Xiao Li
When we share our travel plans with our friends, what do we usually talk about
destination, main purpose for the trip, reasons for the trip, transport, accommodation, length of the trip, activity, other details (passport, visa, weather, credit card, shopping. . . )
【写作思路】(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)
(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题体裁:应用文—告知信
主题:给Richard回信,告诉他自己的假期旅行计划及安排。
(2)二定:确定时态和人称(与体裁和主题息息相关)
时态:一般将来时(对于即将到来的旅行的计划)
一般现在时(一般描述)
(3)三明确:明确写作要点
要点:①对Richard的来信做出评价和反馈
②具体的旅游计划(交通方式、旅游景点、旅行的目的和意义)
③旅游的心得体会
(4)四分段(与写作要点息息相关)
结合写作要点,整体分为三个段落,其中第二段为主体部分,详细叙述。
题目要求:
假定你是英国的Jack,打算来中国旅行,请你给你的中国笔友李华写封信,要点如下:
1.你的旅行计划:北京→泰山→杭州;
2.征求他的建议并询问他是否愿意充当你的导游。
注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:紫禁城the Forbidden City;
泰山Mount Tai
Dear Li Hua,
I'm glad to tell you that I'm going to visit China. My arrangements are as follows. First, I am planning to visit Beijing, the capital of China, where I am looking forward to enjoying the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks. Then I intend to go to visit Mount Tai in Shandong province. I've heard that it is one of the most famous mountains in China and I can' t wait to enjoy the amazing sunrise there. After that, I am also going to Hangzhou. It is said that it is a beautiful modern city with breathtaking natural sights among which the West Lake is a well-known tourist attraction.
What do you think of my travel plan Will you act as my guide and be ready to offer help whenever I need it Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Jack
如何写关于“旅行计划”的书信
本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用体类别中的“书信”
具体是写一份旅行计划。这种题目要求我们就去某地旅游给朋友写一封信,谈论--下自己的旅行计划,时态上应用现在进行时表示将来,也可使用一般将来时。其基本框架为:
1.开头(beginning)一开门 见山地指出旅游目的地和想参观的景点。
2.主体(body)一_交 代动身时间、所乘坐的交通工具、停留时间以及其他计划等。
3.结尾(ending)一自 己的想法和对对方的期待或要求。
常用句型
1.My travel plan is as follows.
2.Here/Below is my travel plan.
3.Winter holiday is coming. I have a plan for it.
4.I am going to take advantage of my holiday to take a tour.
around the town.
5.The scenery there is amazing that no one should miss.
一、旅行计划开头:交代时间和目的地。
1.This month,I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends, which is supposed to be a seven-day trip.
这个月,我要和两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游,这应该是一次七日之旅。
2.I’m planning to travel to Suzhou, a city called Eastern Venice.
我计划去苏州一个被称为东方威尼斯的城市旅游。
3.The May Day is coming,and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery.
五一节就要来了,我要去上海欣赏其美景。
二、主体段落:交代动身时间、所乘坐的交通工具、停留的时间等。
4.We will set out on 10th June.
我们6月10日出发。
5.I will stay there for about three days.
我打算在那儿待大约三天。
6.I'm planning to go there by train and come back by bus.
我计划乘火车去那儿,乘公共汽车回来。
7.I am also going to visit the Summer Palace besides visiting the Forbidden City.
除了参观故宫,我还打算参观颐和园。
三、旅行计划的结尾:自己的想法和对对方的期待或要求。
8.Do you have any plans for the coming May Day holiday?
对于即将到来的五一假期,你有计划吗?
9.Look forward to hearing from you soon.
盼望着尽快收到你的回信。