初中英语九年级写作

课件14张PPT。The early bird gets the worm .
---早起的鸟儿有虫吃Let’s share a good composition(作文)！初中英语九年级写作课 1. 审（search）
请你确定该文章的主题，确定体裁，划出要点
(key information) 国庆假期快到了，北京的Li Ping ，想给在上海的笔友Li Lei 写 一封信，邀请他来北京旅游，建议他放松一下。请在信中简单介绍一下北京，内容包含以下几点；80-100个词左右
要点：
1.北京是中国的首都，有着悠久的历史。
2. 有许多风景名胜，长城举世闻名，每年游客众多。
3.北京的烤鸭很美味.人们都喜欢吃。 2.列（list）
请根据文章要求用简单句子列出文章要点
(key information)
a.一封信
b.邀请他来北京旅游,放松
c.介绍北京 1…
2…
3 …
2.列（list）
请根据文章要求用简单句子列出文章要点
(key information)
1.北京是中国的首都，有着悠久的历史。
2.有许多风景名胜，长城举世闻名,每年游客众多。
3.北京的烤鸭很美味.人们都喜欢吃。
2.列（list）
(key information)
Beijing is China’s capital. It has a long history.
2. There are many interesting places in Beijing .
The Great Wall is famous. A lot of people visit it every year.
3. Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much .
3.加（add）
加首尾，注意首尾呼应。使结构完整。可以采取总分总的结构，开头要直奔主题！ Beijing is China’s capital. It has long history .There are many interesting places in Beijing. The Great Wall is famous. A lot of people visit it every year. Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much .
Dear Li Lei
Vacation is coming. I hope that you can come to Beijing. People who relax well work well. Welcome to Beijing.
Yours
Li Ping beginningbodyending中考作文评分标准
第五档：18-20分
包含所有内容要点；完全完成了试题规定的任务；有清晰的文本框架，较多的语法结构和词汇；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚；语言基本无误。
较多的语法结构和词汇；有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚；第四档：14-17分
基本包含所有要点；遗漏少量次要点，较全面地完成了试题规定的任务；有较清晰的文本框架，比较多样的语法结构和词汇；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚；语言有少量错误。
连接词（connection words）1.表示顺序：first, second, third, first of all, then, next, finally, at the same time, in the end, at last4.表示转折：though, although, but, however, 3.表示因果:so ,because, as a result2.表示举例：as for , such as, like, for example5.表示并列：and , as well as, both… and, what’s more, not only.. but also6 表示结论:as we know , in a wordLet’s have a try1._________________I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.Though/Although2.We like doing kinds of sports ,___________
swimming, running and hiking.like/such as3.__________,he stood up. Then he got out. ________,he went back. _________________, he smiled.FirstNextFinally/At lastt 4.连（connect） As we know, Beijing is China’s capital. It has long history .There are many interesting places in Beijing, what’s more, the Great Wall is famous. A lot of people visit it every year. As for food, Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much. 方法一：妙用连接词 People who relax well work well. Welcome to Beijing.
Yours，
Li Ping
Dear Li Lei
Vacation is coming. I hope that you can come to Beijing.
As we know, Beijing is China’s capital .
It has a long history .There are many interesting places in Beijing,what’s more, the Great Wall is famous . A lot of people visit it every year. As for food, Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much.
the capital of Chinawithplaces of interest善用高级词汇such as Beihai Park, Tian’an Men Square and the Palace Museum.巧用例子︷so︷thatEating Beijing duck is many people’s favorite..活用多种句型As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”巧用谚语5.美（beautify)
动名词短语作主语so…that 句型.a高分作文技巧技巧1.妙用连接词4.巧用谚语和例子2.善用高级词汇3.活用多种句型
中考链接书面表达（2013 绍兴）
在英语课上，同学们就自己喜欢的旅游方式展开了讨论，请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。
注意：1、文章必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节；
2、想法至少在两句以上；
3、开头已给出，不计人总词数，你只需接着写；
4、词数：80—100
参考词汇：团队旅游 travel with a group；个人旅游 travel alone；安排 arrange 自由地freely
Recently, we discussed the ways of travelling. Here is the result.

Dear Mike,
National Day is coming,…
Yours, 国庆假期快到了，请你给在美国的表弟Mike写一封信。邀请他来绍兴旅游。信中简单介绍一下绍兴的特色。内容包含以下几点，80---100个词左右。
要点：
1.绍兴是一美丽的城市，有着悠久的历史。
2.绍兴有许多风景名胜和特色美食，绍兴黄酒（wine）闻名中外。
3.绍兴名人辈出，人民非常友好。Don’t forget to show us wonderful sentences!Homework