外研版（2019）必修第一册 Unit 4 Friends forever Developing ideas writing 课件（19张PPT）-

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Developing ideas — writing
Unit 4 Friends forever
Read Bob’s story after he was released from jail and answer the questions. (P47)
Para. 1
How did Bob feel when he finally got out of jail
A happy ending
A sad ending
A surprising ending
An open ending
2. What kind of ending is this More than
one description may be suitable.
3. Do you like this
ending Give your reasons.
settings
characters
actions
Read the ending in Activity 5 again. Find the expressions that describe:
Tip
time, location and descriptions of the environment or surroundings help your readers picture the scene.
Tip
introducing characters means describing both appearance and personality.
Tip
characters’ actions, or their behaviours drive the plot forward and create a particular atmosphere
settings：
characters：
out of jail; cold wind; dark night
58, lost and helpless; a young man with familiar-looking in his thirties
actions：
stepped out of the jail, smiled bitterly, long for an answer
heard the voice, turned around, was surprised, replied, unfolded, shaked, finished reading
shouted in surprise, smiled
Pre-writing: basic elements of a story
Who
When
Where
After twenty years
Bob, a young man named Bob
a cold, dark night
out of jail
Pre-writing: basic elements of a story
What
Why
How
After twenty years
The young man waiting outside the jail gave a note to Bob. After reading it, Bob shouted in surprise.
The young man was Jimmy’s son, who was told to meet him when he was stepping out of jail.
A happy ending
Pre-writing: Read for the structure
The beginning
Climax
The ending
Not knowing where to go; Stepped out of jail; Smiled bitterly
Heard a voice; a familiar-looking man; a note for Bob; Finished reading
The young man smiled; Shouted in surprise
What were the feelings of Bob
Pre-writing: emotion line (adj and adv)
lost and helpless
surprised
doubtful
astonished
moved
Come up with your own ending to Jimmy and Bob’s story, twenty years after Bob was arrested. Answer the questions to help you.
What type of ending will it be
Do you want to introduce other characters in the ending If so, who are they
Where will the ending take place
What has happened to Bob and Jimmy over the
past twenty years
How will the story end
Useful expressions
Linking words for coherence
Share your story with the class.
Presentation (Activity 9)
It was a cold winter night when Bob came out of jail. After twenty years behind bars, he felt like a stranger to the city and everyone in it. Lost and helpless, he didn’t know where to go or whom to go to. A year after he had been arrested, his wife had left him and taken their daughter with her. Former good friends had cut all contact with him.
A sample story
Introduction
A sample story
Development
“Is there anyone here who still thinks of me ” he wondered bitterly. Recalling the night twenty years earlier that had completely changed his life, he wandered blindly through the streets. In the dim light of a streetlamp, he noticed an old man sitting on a bench. “Another lonely man, just like me,” he thought to himself.
Post-reading: A sample story
Climax
“Bob”, the old man looked up. Although twenty years had passed, he could still recognise that face — Jimmy’s face. “I’m here for our meeting, though I don’t know if you still want it. Anyway, welcome home, buddy!”
Post-reading: A sample story
Ending
“Long time no see,” murmured Bob, his voice trembling. The uncertainty was gone. He now had a home.
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