(共9张PPT)
Unit 11
话题作文指导
九年级英语人教版
授课人:***
英语课上,你们班的同学正在讨论暑假里如何去上海世博会(Shanghai Expo)参观一事,请根据下面的图表内容,以A(An)________ way to Shanghai为题,写一篇短文,陈述你们的讨论结果,并谈谈自己的看法。
注意:
1. 可以适当增减内容,要求意思、语句连贯;
2. 词数:80-100左右。
一、例文要求
一、例文要求
A(An)________ way to Shanghai
How to get to Shanghai
by train;
Comfortable;
make friends…
take a bus;
cheaper; enjoy the beautiful scenes…
your
opinion
c
二、技法点拨
1. 审题
1)语篇类型:事物介绍;
2)主题语境:未来规划;
3)人称:第一人称;
4)时态:一般现在时;
5)词数:80-100左右。
2. 列举写作要点
1)陈述一下可行的交通方式;
2)自己的观点及理由。
二、技法点拨
3. 列出关键短语和句型
1)summer vacation, the most comfortable
way, make friends, as well, take a bus, by
bike, keep healthy
2)I prefer to go to Shanghai by bike.
What’s more... Riding bikes can help us
keep healthy and make us much stronger.
A Green Way to Shanghai
My classmates and I have discussed how to get to Shanghai to visit the Expo during this summer vacation. Some of us think taking trains is the most comfortable way. We can make new friends and have more relaxing time as well. Others think it’s cheaper to take a bus.
I prefer to go to Shanghai by bike. Riding bikes is a green way. It can not only help protect the environment, but also let us enjoy the beautiful scenes on the way. What’s more, riding bikes can help us keep healthy and make us much stronger.
三、范文展示
根据要求完成小作文。词数:30词左右。
整洁的环境离不开环卫工人的辛勤付出。请你代表学生会为社区清洁工人们送去一张卡片,表达对他们的感谢和祝福。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
四、作业布置
Thank you for____________
__________________________
Students’ Union
五、参考答案
Thank you for making our community more beautiful. Your work makes the streets cleaner, the air fresher, the city tidier and the environment more beautiful. Without you, we can’t have such a beautiful environment.
Wish you healthy and happy every day!
Students’ Union
本课结束