北师大版（2019） 必修第一册 Unit 2 Sports and Fitness Writing Workshop 教案

Unit 2 Sports and Fitness
Writing Workshop 教学设计
科目：英语 课题：Writing Workshop 课时：1课时
教学目标与核心素养：
知识目标：让学生理解如何写私人书信。
能力目标：掌握私人书信的写作方法，完成私人书信的写作和展示。
情感目标：提升学生的写作兴趣。
教学重难点：
教学重点：让学生学习私人书信的写作方法。
教学难点：让学生完成私人书信的写作。
课前准备：多媒体，黑板，粉笔
教学过程：
一、Pre-class
1. Greeting
2. Leading-in
GET READY FOR WRITING
学生活动：Pair Work
You are going to write a true story to share with the class. Discuss the questions with your partner.
1 Who is your story about
2 Why do you want to write this story
Ask students to think and share their answers.
二、While-class
READ FOR WRITING
学生活动：阅读文章，回答问题。
Read the story "The Final Sprint". Answer the questions.
1 Who were the main characters
2 Where and when did it happen
3 How did the story develop
4 What was the result
(Suggested answers:
1 Ismael Esteban and Agustin Navarro.
2 The Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain, 300 metres from the finishing line.
3 Esteban was in third place with only 300metres to the finishing line — Esteban got a puncture, threw his bike over his shoulder sand raced towards the finishing line — Navarro caught up with him — Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him.
4 Esteban won the bronze medal and tried to give his medal to Navarro. But Navarro refused.)
FOCUS ON STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE
1. 学生活动：阅读文章，完成表格。
Read the story again. Take notes in the first column.
The Final Sprint My Story
Setting the final sprint of the Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain
Characters
Development
Climax
Ending
(Answers:
The Final Sprint My Story
Setting the final sprint of the Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain
Characters Ismael Esteban, Agustin Navarro
Development Esteban's bike got a puncture. Esteban threw his bike over his shoulders and raced towards the finishing line.
Climax Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him. The two cyclists reached the finishing line with Esteban ahead on foot, Navarro just behind him.
Ending Navarro let Esteban finish in third place, while he came fourth.
2. 学生活动：完成练习。
Write 2–3 sentences for your story. Use the Sentence Builder to help you.
3. 教师活动：介绍私人书信的写作方法。
英文书信一般分为商业信函（Business Letters）和私人书信（Personal Letters）两种。高考英语试题中的书面表达一般要求写私人书信。私人书信是指亲朋好友或同事之间的来往信件。它通常包括四部分，即称呼、正文、结束语和签名，各部分的具体内容如下：
1. 称呼：自成一行，顶格写。常用的称呼有Dear Sir/ Madam/ Manager/ Editor/ friend/ Bob等，称呼之后一般用逗号。
2. 正文：信件的主体部分即信的正文。正文写在称呼的下一行，段首要留有适当的空白。正文通常包括三个部分，即开头段、主体段和结尾段。
正文的开头语常用"Thanks for your last letter asking about...""I'm glad to..."等。
正文的结尾是正文的一部分，常常另起一行，常用表达有"I'm looking forward to your reply." "Best wishes." "Wishing you a pleasant journey."等。
3. 结束语：结束语与正文的结尾不一样，它要写在结尾的下一行，通常位于书信的右下角，后面用逗号。常用的结束语有"Yours sincerely/ faithfully/ truly," "Sincerely/ Truly yours," "Yours,"等。
4. 签名：签名写在结束语的下一行，签上写信人的名字。
5. 写作模板
（1）邀请信
Dear _____________,
There will be a _____________（内容）at/ in _____________（地点）on _____________ （时间）. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at _____________（具体时间）.This will be followed by a _____________（进一步的安排）. At around _____________（时间）, _____________（另一个安排）.
I really hope you can make it before _____________（通知你的最后期限）.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
（2）安慰信
Dear _____________,
I was really shocked and sad to hear of _____________（不好的事情）. The following is my advice for you.
First, you should _____________（第一条建议）. Second, _____________（第二条建议）. By doing this you can _____________（这样做的好处）. Third, _____________（第三条建议）because _____________（这样做的好处）.
What's more, please don't hesitate to contact me if there is anything else I can do for you.
I do hope you will soon get well again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
（3）感谢信
Dear _____________,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for _____________（感谢的原因）. If it had not been for your assistance in _____________（对方给你的具体帮助）, I fear that I would have _____________（没有对方帮助的后果）.
Everyone agrees that it was you who _____________（给出细节）. Again, I would like to express my many thanks to you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
（4）建议信
Dear _____________,
I'm so glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _____________（在哪方面）.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to _____________（第一条建议）, as you'll _____________（这么做的好处）. Then, it also helps _____________（第二条建议）.
Furthermore, it should be a good idea to _____________（第三条建议）. Because _____________（给出理由）. You can also _____________（第四条建议）. I'm quite sure that _____________（预测可能的结果，给对方以信心）.
I'm looking forward to _____________（表达愿望）.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
三、After-class
COMPOSE YOUR WRITING
1. 学生活动：Outlining
Discuss your sentences with a plete "My Story" column in Activity 3.
2. 学生活动：Drafting
Use your outline and the Writing Help to write your first draft.
3. 学生活动：Editing
Edit your story in pairs. Then share what you have written in class.
Does the writer introduce the setting and character(s) at the beginning of the story
Does the writer describe the details of the story
Does the writer write the story in time order
Does the writer include a comment of the story
四、Summary
重点词汇：sight, amazed, response
重点句型：with的复合结构；形容词作定语的用法；“let+宾语+do sth.”结构
总结私人书信的写法。
五、Homework
假定你是李华。你的笔友林涛来信说，因学习忙、锻炼少，最近经常生病，影响学习。请根据提示写一封英文回信。要点包括：
1. 锻炼的重要性；
2. 锻炼有利于学习；
3. 提出锻炼的建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Lin Tao,
Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Lin Tao,
Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now. You have studied so hard that you have no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health. It would be of great benefit to your health if you could spare some time to take more exercise in future, such as jogging and playing basketball.
Time spent in exercise is never a waste of time. Actually, exercise can improve your physical condition and ease your mind. Only when you are in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.
Therefore, I suggest that you take at least one-hour exercise every day. I would be very pleased to see you have a stronger body.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua