四川省眉山市彭山区2022-2023学年高二上期入学考试英语书面表达讲评课件(13张ppt)

(共13张PPT)
高24届高二上期入学考试
书面表达
1，要点不全。
很多同学没有写“其他建议”！
2，要点错误。
存在问题
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推荐城市，不是推荐省！
3，开头和结尾不完整，不准确。
4，关键单词写不起，会造成要点不被认定。
推荐
5,注意地名的书写。
6，语言错误多。
7，书写差。
tell , give , share, introduce,...都不准确！
recommend
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Chengdu , Beijing, Heilongjiang
人名：Li lei , Han Meimei
假定你是李华。你的英国好友Jim 打算暑假来中国旅游，发来邮件请你推荐两个目的地城市。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1 推荐城市及理由 2 其他建议
注意：
1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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一、看要求
假定你是李华。你的英国好友Jim 打算暑假来中国旅游，发来邮件请你推荐两个目的地城市。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1 推荐城市及理由 2 其他建议
注意：
1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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一、看要求
二、审题
1，格式/体裁
2，时态
3，人称
4，要点
回信
一现
第二、三人称
1、恰当的开头和结尾
2．推荐城市一及理由
4．其他建议
3，推荐城市二及理由
第一个要点：开头
Dear Jim,
I was pleased to receive your email, in which you’d like me to recommend 2 cities. Now I’ll do it as you wish.
I’m so delighted to know you’ll come to China for a trip in the summer vacation.Now I’ll recommend 2 cities as you wish.(Better)
三、打草稿
第二个要点：推荐城市一及理由
One of the cities you can’t miss is Beijing, the capital of China. In Beijing, you can learn about China’s rich and long history by visiting the Forbidden City , the Great Wall and other tourist attractions.
第三个要点：推荐城市二及理由
The other one you’d better visit is Chengdu. Located in the southwest of China, Chengdu is well-konwn for giant pandas and spicy hotpot, which are sure to leave a deep impression on you.
第四个要点：其他推荐( 最好写两个！)
什么是其他推荐
其他旅游目的城市？
最好是来中国旅游前或中要注意的事情：
学一些中文
提前做旅游计划
了解中国文化、当地风土人情
网上支付
天热，防暑
......
可以，但最好不！和前面“推荐城市”重复了。
过渡句
Here I have other suggestions for you.
If possible , you can also go to Xi’an, Guilin, Lhasa etc. where you’ll know more about Chinese culture.
Paying online is so popular in China at present that you’d better get prepared ahead of time.
It’s a great idea for you to learn some spoken Chinese in advance,which can make your trip in China more convenient and comfortable.
结尾
不应该是 Looking forward to your reply !
应该是
表达对对方来中国旅游的期待和祝愿旅游愉快！
Looking forward to your arrival and wish you a pleasant trip in China.
改错，分段，加过渡词，过渡句，变高级表达！
最好三段！
Dear Jim,
I’m so delighted to know you’ll travel in China in the summer vacation.Now I’ll recommend 2 cities as you wish.
The 1st city is Beijing, the capital of China. In Beijing, you can learn about China’s rich and long history by visiting the Forbidden City , the Great Wall and other tourist attractions.The other one is Chengdu. Located in the southwest of China, Chengdu is well-konwn for giant pandas and spicy hotpot, which’re sure to leave a deep impression on you.Besides, I have other suggestions for you.Paying online is so popular in China that you’d better get prepared and it’s a great idea for you to learn some spoken Chinese in advance.
Looking forward to your arrival and wish you a pleasant trip.(125)
Yours,
Li Hua