[Unit 6 Section B (3a-3b) 单元主题写作]
Ⅰ.高频短语
1.尽力去做某事
2.从事
3.代替
4.如此……以至于……
Ⅱ.经典句型
5.你认为这个故事怎么样 (think of)
6.他一直在尝试,没有放弃。(keep; give up)
7.他对读书感兴趣。(be interested in)
8.从前,山里住着一位老人。(once upon a time)
典型例题
根据下图写一篇90词左右的小短文。
写作思路
经典范文
One day in the summer holiday, Tom found a waiter was needed in a restaurant. He was interested in the job and went for an interview. Tom was taken on and started working in the restaurant.
A few days after Tom got the job, a young man came to the restaurant with his wife. They ordered some food and talked happily at the table. They stayed for a long time, enjoying themselves.
After the restaurant was closed, Tom began to do the cleaning. Suddenly, he found a wallet under the table where the man and his wife had sat. He opened it and found, to his surprise, lots of money. Tom telephoned the police and told them about it. The young man and his wife were found and they came back to the restaurant. They were very thankful to Tom. Tom was also very happy because he had helped others.
名师点评
本文使用了一般过去时,思路清晰,语言简练, 叙述了Tom在餐馆打工拾金不昧,寻找失主的故事。
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友 Tom 在昨天的 e-mail 中告诉你,最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣,希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。请你根据下面所给图画,给 Tom 回复一封80词左右的 e-mail,向他讲述这一经典故事,并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法。
Sima Guang hit the tank(缸)
答案
[Unit 6 Section B (3a-3b) 单元主题写作]
基础预热
Ⅰ.1.try to do sth. 2.work on
3.instead of 4.so…that…
Ⅱ.5.What do you think of the story
6.He kept trying and didn’t give up.
7.He is interested in reading books.
8.Once upon a time, there lived an old man in the mountains.
模拟演练
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. Well, let me tell you a famous one called “Sima Guang hit the tank”.
Once Sima Guang was playing hide and seek with several children in the backyard. There was a large water tank in the yard. It was full of water. While the kids were playing, one child accidentally fell into the tank. Other children were so frightened that they started to run, crying for help. However, Sima Guang was different. He thought it over and then had an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank. The tank broke and the water ran out.With Sima Guang’s help, the kid was saved.
Do you like the story What do you think of Sima Guang I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua