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人教新目标版 八年级(上)
Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science.
Period 5 SectionB3a-Self check
写作课优质课
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Learning aims
1.学习本课新词汇: own，personal，relationship
掌握句型： Resolutions are promises to yourself. They may help to make you a better person and to make your life easier.
The first resolution has to do with my own personal improvement.
2.能用be going to，want to，hope to，expect to，be ready to，
plan to谈论未来生活的计划与愿望，内容包括未来想要从事的职
业或梦想及怎样实现梦想。
3.掌握以人物思想、情绪和行为为线索的记叙文写作方法。能
够写一篇谈论自己新年决心的英语文章。
4.能通过对未来话题的讨论，树立自己的生活目标和制订相应学习计划。
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Revision
Pre-writing
Ask and answer.
resolutions
① What are resolutions
They are promises to yourself.
At the beginning of the year.
③ Why do people make resolutions
To improve their life.
④ Are you going to make any new resolutions for the coming new year
Yes\No.
② When do people make resolutions
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Revision
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Look and say.
Talk about your resolution for 2023:
-What are you going to do next year -Next year I'm going to......
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Revision
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Next year, I’m going to …
I think ……is…./
I think it is important to … /
I think… can…
so I’m going to…
read for 30 minutes every day.
read 3 4 times a week
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How many kinds of resolutions do you know
What are they
Revision
Pre-writing
Look and say.
physical health
own personal improvement
do better at school
do better at home
improve the relationships
with family and friends
make more money
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Lead in
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Look and say.
Do you have any New Year’s Resolutions What is it
My New Year’s Resolution has to do with self-improvement. I’m going to take up violin. I’m going to take violin lessons every weekends.
My New Year’s Resolution has to do with physical health. I’m going to eat less fast food and get lots of exercise.
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New words
3.relationship n. 关系
I want to improve the relationship with my family.
relationship(s) with sb “和某人之间的关系”
1.own adj. & pron. 自己的；本人的
结构:（1）one’s own sth. “某人自己的事物”
（2）sth of one’s own.
Do you have your own room
你拥有你自己的房间吗？
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Do you have a room of your own
___health is necessary for this job. 做此工作需要健康身体。
2. personal adj. 个人的；私人的
This kind of dog can guide the blind . 这种狗能引导盲人行走。
名词 person (人) + al → personal 个人的
Personal
person
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Reading
3a
Pre-writing
Look and say.
Complete the first two paragraphs about resolutions with the words in the box.
take listen make is help learn are
Resolutions ____ promises to yourself. They may ____to make you a better person and to make your life easier. I am going to_____ four resolutions.
The first resolution has to do with my own personal improvement. Next year, or maybe sooner, I am going to ____ up a new hobby. I think singing ＿__a great activity so I am going to ＿＿＿to sing. I think this will also make my family happy because they love to ______to music and sing together.
are
help
make
learn
take
is
listen
Writing guide
首先，掌握方框中单词的含义；并阅读短 文，整体把握短文大意。
其次，分析有空格的每个句子，根据上下文意及固定搭配来确定空格处的意思，从而确定空格处所用的单词。
最后，再通读一遍短文，检查是否正确。
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Reading
Pre-writing
Look and say.
Read the first two paragraphs again and answer the following two questions.
Resolutions ____ promises to yourself. They may ____to make you a better person and to make your life easier. I am going to_____ four resolutions.
are
help
make
What are resolutions
Why are resolutions so important
Resolutions are promises to yourself.
Resolutions help to make you a better person and to make your life easier.
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Reading
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Look and say.
The first resolution has to do with my own personal improvement. Next year, or maybe sooner, I am going to ____ up a new hobby. I think singing ＿__a great activity so I am going to ＿＿＿to sing. I think this will also make my family happy because they love to ______to music and sing together.
learn
take
is
listen
What am I going to do to get my own improvement
Why am I going to do that
How am I going to do that
why
what
how
Next year, or maybe sooner, I am going to take up a new hobby.
I think singing is a great activity so I am going to learn to sing.
I think this will also make my family happy because they love to listen to music and sing together.
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Reading
Pre-writing
Look and say.
What is the structure of the passage
are
help
make
take
is
learn
listen
Beginning
Topic sentence
Plan
Reasons
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Writing
While-writing
Look and say.
My New Year’s Resolutions
Resolutions are promises to yourself. They may help to make you a better person
and to make your life easier.New Year is coming, so I’m going to make four
resolutions.
The first resolution is about my own personal improvement. Next year, or maybe
sooner, I am going to take up a new hobby. I think singing is a great activity so I
am going to learn to sing. I think this also will make my family happy because they
love to to music and sing together.
The second resolution is about improving my physical health.
________________________________________________________________
The third resolution is about improving my relationships with my family and friends.
_________________________________________________________________
The last resolution is about how to do better at school.
_________________________________________________________________
I hope my resolutions can come true in the coming year.
3a
3b
3c
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Writing
While-writing
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3b
Write your own resolutions under the following headings.
1. Ideas for improve my physical health
2. Ideas for improving my relationships with my family
and friends
3. Ideas for doing better at school
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
get more exercise, like running…
eat less junk food
have enough sleep
eat fruit and vegetables every day
spend time with my family and friends
show your love to them
care for them
help them more often
make a weekly plan for schoolwork;
finish homework on time
listen carefully in class
study hard every day
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Writing
While-writing
Look and say.
3c
Use your notes to write three more paragraphs about your resolutions. In each paragraph, write what you are going to do and why.
The second resolution is about improving my physical health.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
The third resolution is about improving my relationships with my family and friends.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
The last resolution is about how to do better at school.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
本文为写自己新年决心。因此在写句子时应用一般将来时态，用 be going to 结构。据3b中的要点提示，模仿3a中的写作方式，将自己的新年决心依次写在每个相关的决心里。最后，再通读一遍自己的短文，看是否通顺和正确。
写作指导：
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Writing
While-writing
Look and say.
How to write own’s new year’s resolutions
get more exercise,
play ping-pong
make me stronger
What
How
Why
1. Ideas for improving my physical health
____________________________________________________
I am going to get more exercise.
I am going to play ping-pong.
Because I think playing\it will make me stronger
The second resolution is about improving my physical health.
What are you going to improve your physical health
How are you going to do that
Why are you going to do that
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2. Ideas for improving my relationships with my
family and friends.
___________________________________________________
3.Ideas for doing better at school
____________________________________________
What
How
Why
What
How
Why
spend more time
with my family
take up a new
hobby together
make my family happy
make a weekly plan
for schoolwork
plan to work hard
at English
get good grades
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Writing
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Look and say.
3c
The second resolution is about improving my physical health.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
The third resolution is about improving my relationships with my family and friends.____________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
The last resolution is about how to do better at school.
____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
I’m going to get more exercise like running, playing ping-pong and I want to eat more vegetables and less junk food. I plan to have enough sleep . These will help me to become healthier.
I am going to spend more time with my family.
Maybe we can take up a new hobby together! Doing more things together with my family will make my family happy. I am also going to help my friends more. For example, I can help them with their English homework if there is anything they don’t understand. Helping my friends will show them that I care about them and that they are important to me.
I’m going to make a weekly plan for schoolwork. I plan to work hard at English and math and finish homework on time. In class I’ll listen to the teacher carefully. In this way, I can get good grades
Use your notes to write three more paragraphs about your
resolutions. In each paragraph, write what you are going to do and why.
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在新年来临之际，为了提高和完善自我，制定新年计划是有重要意义的。请你以“Our new year’s resolutions”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文来介绍你一家的新年计划。要求：
1. 内容合理，符合实际，可适当发挥；
2. 语句顺畅，行文连贯；
3. 文章不能出现真实姓名
4. 词数80词左右。
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Writing guide
While-writing
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1. 审题——想一想，填一填。
审题
体裁：_______________________
人称：_______________________
时态：_______________________
第一人称
一般将来时
记叙文
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While-writing
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2. 写作任务
Resolutions about
self-improvement
improving physical health
improving relationship with family and friends
doing better at school
How
Why
others
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Writing guide
3. 文章结构
Out line
Beginning
Main body
Ending
Next year, I am going to …
The … resolution is about
What
Why
These are my resolutions. I'm going to try my best to keep them and make my dream come true.
Resolutions are… They may… I am going to …
I think… because…
How
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4. 句型展示
To tell reasons:
Doing sth. is….
This will help me to…
It’s adj. to do sth.
In this way, I can…
Because…
To tell resolutions:
I’m going to …
I hope to …
I want to …
I plan to …
Beginning:
1. New Year is coming, do you have any resolutions
2. New Year is on the way, I want to make some resolutions.
3. Here are my resolutions for the New Year.
Ending:
1. All in all, I hope I can achieve my New Year's resolutions.
2. I will try my best to make my resolutions come true.
3. What are your resolutions Would you like to share them with me
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5. 范文展示
Hello，everyone. Here are our plans for the coming New Year.
At first, I'm going to study harder to get better grades. I'm going to make more friends and improve my relationships with my family. Then my sister wants to keep healthy，so she is going to eat healthier food and get lots of exercise. She is going to run and play tennis every morning to. Also，my parents have their New Year’s resolutions. My father likes playing the guitar，so he is going to take guitar lessons every weekend. As for my mum, she is going to do more reading to know what is happening around the world.
All in all, I hope we can achieve my New Year's resolutions.
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Summary
Post-writing
Look and say.
New Year’s
resolution
decide what to do next year
carry out the
resolution
check if we achieve
our resolutions
do exercises take up a hobby lose weight…
write down …
study harder…
Yes,I feel excited.
No, it’s too
difficult to keep
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Group work
Post-writing
Look and say.
Imagine you work for our city. It’s your
job to make it better( cleaner, more
beautiful, richer, etc.) What are you going
to do Discuss and write your plans.
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Practice
Post-writing
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We’re going to _____a new highway.
build
We’re going to _______________.
build more buildings
We’re going to
___________________.
plant more trees and flowers
We’re going to help
__________________
on weekends.
clean the streets and city parks
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We are going to
____________________
build a new shopping mall.
We are going to_________________.
protect the animals
We’re going to
__________________.
build a new subway
We’re going to go to school
or work __________.
by bike
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4
We’re going to make subway better. Then people don’t have to drive to work.
__________________________________
__________________________________
__________________________________
__________________________________
Imagine you work for your city. Think of plan to make it cleaner and greener.
We’re going to build a new highway.
We’re going to build more buildings.
We’re going to plant more trees and flowers around the city.
We’re going to help clean the streets and parks on the weekends
6. __________________________________________
We are going to build a new shopping mall.
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Post-writing
Look and say.
1 Match the jobs with the school subjects.
1.computer programmer medicine
2.engineer computer science
3.doctor math
4. basketball player science
5.scientist P.E.
Self Check
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A: What do you ________to be when you grow up
B: I want ________ a scientist.
A:Wow! That sounds cool. But it’s difficult. ____ are you ______ to do that
B: After I finish high school, I’m ____ to go to university.
A: ________ are you ____ to study
B: In Hefei. I’m ______ to study there for four years.
A: I think I want _____ a teacher. I’m ____ to teach in Wuhan.
2 Fill in the blanks in the conversation.
want
to be
How
going
going
Where
going
going
to be
going
Self Check
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3 Write about your plans.
Tomorrow, I’m going to_____________________
Next week, ______________________________
Next month, ______________________________
Next year, ________________________________
have an English lesson.
I am going to travel to Dalian.
I am going to visit my friend.
I am going to move to another city.
Self Check
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Emotion
Post-writing
Look and say.
Hold on to your dreams. They will come true one day!
坚持你的梦想，总有一天梦想会成真。
Where there is a will, there is a way.
有 志 者 事 竟 成！
We should make contributions
(做出贡献) to
Chinese Dream.
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Class test
Post-writing
I. 根据汉语提示完成句子。
1. My brother is studying _________ ________
(计算机科学)， and he wants to be a _____________
(电脑程序员).
2. Li Lei’s uncle is a ____________(专业的) engineer in
the factory.
3.I think he can become a good _______(飞行员).
4. Bai Yansong is a famous _________ (新闻记者)from
CCTV.
computer science
programmer
professional
pilot
reporter
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Class test
Post-writing
1. 上个月我成为了足球队的一员。
Last month I .
2. 不要忘记写下乔的房间号码。
Don’t forget to Joe’s room number.
3. 人到中年开始新的事业并不难。
It’s not difficult to a new career in midlife.
4. 我想这和天气有关。
I think it the weather.
5. 你应该尽全力完成这项工作。
You should finish the work.
II.完成句子。
made the soccer team
write down
take up
has (something) to do with
try your best to
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