Module 2 Science and technology Unit 4 Inventions第5课时 Writing 课件(共17张PPT)

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Module 2 Science and technology
Unit 4 Inventions
第5课时 Writing
目录
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课堂练习
写作乐园
写作乐园
话题四 谈论智能电器
【短文写作】
随着科技的发展，越来越多的语音助手进入我们的生活，阿里巴巴发布的天猫精灵（Tmall Genie）就是其中一款。假设你拥有一款天猫精灵，请根据下面的要点提示，写一篇文章介绍它。
要点：
外观 小且方便携带；色彩图案精美
功能 解答身边疑难问题；播放音乐及故事；语音提醒
评价 让生活变得更享受和多彩……
提示词：1. 服务 service2. 便利的 convenient3. 提醒 remind … of …
Hello, everyone! Here, I' d like to introduce my Tmall Genie.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作指导】　　
此篇作文体裁是提纲式的说明文，主要内容是向人们介绍一款智能电器——天猫精灵。 在写作过程中要明确以下几点：
1. 紧紧围绕主题展开叙述，确定时态为一般现在时。
2. 陈述所有要求的要点和信息，并适当发挥。
3. 说明文写作要注意事实正确、表达清晰、层次分明，要适当运用关联词及长短句。
【范文赏析】
Hello, everyone! Here, I' d like to introduce my Tmall Genie. It is so small that it is convenient to carry wherever I go. Also, both its colours and pictures are beautiful.
It can provide different kinds of services. Whenever I have problems, just speak to it and it will offer me help. In addition, the music it plays can make me relaxed after a
hard day' s study. Meanwhile, I' m easy to fall asleep by listening to the story that it tells. Also, it can remind me of the important things that I have to do.
In general, I have found my life more enjoyable and colourful since it came into my life. It is always with me like my closest friend. That is why I like it so much.
课堂练习
一、翻译句子
1. 空调是一个很有用的发明。（practical）
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2. 夏天待在空调房里很舒服。（comfortable）
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Air-conditioner is a very practical invention.
It is comfortable to stay in a room with air-conditioner in summer.
3. 现代城市的人们用空调代替扇子。（instead of）
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4. 我们常常可以在电视上看到不同空调的广告。（advertisement）
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People in modern cities use air-conditioners instead of fans.
We usually see different advertisements of air-conditioner on TV.
5. 我们可以一边吹空调一边看电视。（at the same time）
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We can enjoy air conditioning and watch TV at the same time.
二、书面表达
现代科技使得生活更加便捷，也让我们的身边有了很多的发明。请你以“The most important invention”为题，写一篇短文。要点：1. 介绍你认为最重要的发明；
2. 指出其用途和你喜欢的原因；
3. 分析它对你的生活的影响。
提示词： 1. 便利的 convenient 2. 科技 technology
要求：1. 80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
The most important invention
In our daily life，technology plays an important role. There are many inventions around us. But I think the most important invention is _____________________________
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the high-speed train. In the past，
it took me about 22 hours from Shenzhen to Beijing. But now it only takes me about 9 hours to get to Beijing. This saves me a lot of time. Moreover, it' s comfortable to take the high-speed train because it moves smoothly，
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and I can do some reading and watch movies without any problem. I can not only enjoy the view out of the windows but also have a relaxing time on the train. Many people choose to take the high-speed train because of the lower price than the plane. And it is very convenient. What a great creative invention!
【写作评价】
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