人教版（2019）必修一Welcome to unit 写作课件（19张PPT）
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(共19张PPT)
welcome unit
应用文写作----申请信
A letter of application
假如你是某校高一 6班学生李华，学校英语社团现在要招聘新成员，你有意参加该社团，现在请用英文给社长Johnson写一封信，简单介绍一下自己。
内容提示如下：
1.写信目的（愿意参加）
2.个人情况介绍（兴趣，英语情况，技能，以往的经验）
注意:字数80 ，可以适当增加细节，使得行文连贯。
试题回顾
Dear Jonson
背景＋目的（申请）
申请理由1
意义，呼应上文，希望考虑
一般现在时
英语社社长（是否需要自我介绍）
应用文
申请信
词汇准备：
英语社团 English club
成员 member
我写信为了....... I am writing to
申请 apply for
1.愿意去做某事 be willing to do sth
2.对......感兴趣 be interested in
3.获得一等奖 win the first prize in
4.精通，非常了解 have a good knowledge of
5.与.....流利沟通 communicate with others fluently
6.有特殊技能 have special skills
7.比....有优势 have an advantage over others （in sth.）
8.在....方面有积极的作用 play an active part/role in
have a positive effect on
9.与....相处地好 get along well with others
10.最重要的是 above all
期待 look forward to
考虑 take .....into consideration /account
首段：(个人信息+)背景+目的
I am glad to know that new members are wanted in the
English club. I am writing to apply for it.
Learning/Knowing that new members are wanted in the
English club, I am writing to apply for it.
Delighted to hear that new members are wanted in the
English club, I am writing to apply for it.
Tip1：借助分词作状语结构表背景,写信原因
思考：What is your writing purpose
中段---申请理由
1.爱好方面:
对英语感兴趣，性格开朗
性格开朗，爱好运动，身材苗条
2. 学识方面:
获得过英语比赛一等奖;
精通掌握英语;
能流利用英语与他人沟通
3. 经历:
有12年的英语学习经历
有做英语家教的经历
√
√
√
√
√
Tip2：确保信息的相关性
单句准备：
1. 我很高兴听说那件事。
______________________________________________
2. 英语俱乐部需要新成员。
_______________________________________________
3. 自小时候起，我就对英语学习很感兴趣。
_______________________________________________
4. 我精通英语。
_______________________________________________
5. 我学英语已经十多年了。
_______________________________________________
6. 我能用流利的英语与他人交流。
_______________________________________________
7. 希望你能考虑我的申请。
______________________________________________
8. 期待被接受。
_______________________________________________
I am glad to hear that.
New members are wanted in the English club.
I have been very interested in English since I was young.
I have a good command /knowledge of English.
I have learnt English for more than ten years.
Hopefully, you could take my application into account
I can communicate with others in English fluently.
Looking forward to being accepted.
中段---推荐理由 (主要点1.---表达性格)
With humorous and easy-going characteristics, I can get along
well with others.
为人幽默，性格开朗，我能与他人融洽相处.
中段---推荐理由 (主要点2.---表达学识)
I have been interested in English since I was very young.
I have a good command /knowledge of English.
....因..........so that ..........果 (从属连词：so that)
I have been interested in English since I was very young so that I have a good command /knowledge of English.
I have been interested in English since I was very young and I have a good command /knowledge of English.
(并列连词：and)
Tip3：注意句中的逻辑关系，使句子表达紧凑连贯
中段---推荐理由 (主要点3.---表达经验)
我学英语已经有十多年。
我能用流利的英语与他人沟通。(翻译)
I have learnt English for more thatn ten years.
I can communicate with others fluently.
(用无灵主语和enable来改写)
____________of more than ten years English learning enables me to comunicate with others fluently.
____________in English after more than ten years' learning enables me to comunicate with others fluently.
Tip4：巧妙改变主语，使句子多样化。
Experience
Proficiency
尾段---豹子尾，简短有力
Hopefully, you could take my application into account.
Looking forward to being accepted.
Dear Jonson,
My name is Li Hua, a Class 6, Grade 1 student at Yangming High School. Learning that new members are wanted in the English club, I'm writing to apply for it.
With humorous and easy-going characteristics, I can get along well with others. Besides, I have been interested in English since I was very young so that I have a good command /knowledge of English.
Additionally, experience of more than ten years’ English learning enables me to communicate with others fluently. Therefore, I hold a firm belief that I will meet all your requirements.
Hopefully, my application can be taken into consideration. I will never fail to live up to your choice.
Yours,
Li Hua
欣赏: 1. 首段运用分词结构，引出写信背景。
2. 中段从性格,学识和经验三方面来讲诉李华的理由，运用了with 短语结构,分词结构作原因状语和结果状语。总结句用了同位语从句。句式丰富,结构清晰,内容覆盖所有主要点。 3.尾段用了被动句。
闪光点：
框架结构清晰
句式多样
1分词结构做状语
2.with 结构做原因状语
3.so that 结果状语
4.experience无灵主语
5.同位语从句
6.衔接副词无缝对接，行文流畅紧凑
7.被动结构 8. 双重否定
tip1：申请书写作的规范性自我评测表 称呼 Dear Jonson, (是否逗号，是否顶格写）
分段 是否是三段，比例如何（1-2;7;1-2）
介绍 定语从句？同位语？
背景 并列句？分词做状语？
目的 存在问题： 内容单薄
内容繁琐， 重复讲同一个方面
语言单调,句式单一（80个字，出现9-10个I)
解决办法：
内容丰富
条理清晰
句式多样
性格 特长 经验 期待
签名 Yours,Li Hua
错误改进
Hi，I am Lihua who is a student from class 6,grade 1.
I am Li Hua ,who is a student from Class 6,Grade 1.
错误改进
looking forward to hear from you.
Looking forward to hearing from you/your reply.
规范，地道
Hope you can take my application into consideration.
Hopefully, you can take my application into consideration.
welcome unit
应用文写作----申请信
A letter of application
假如你是某校高一 6班学生李华，学校英语社团现在要招聘新成员，你有意参加该社团，现在请用英文给社长Johnson写一封信，简单介绍一下自己。
内容提示如下：
1.写信目的（愿意参加）
2.个人情况介绍（兴趣，英语情况，技能，以往的经验）
注意:字数80 ，可以适当增加细节，使得行文连贯。
试题回顾
Dear Jonson
背景＋目的（申请）
申请理由1
意义，呼应上文，希望考虑
一般现在时
英语社社长（是否需要自我介绍）
应用文
申请信
词汇准备：
英语社团 English club
成员 member
我写信为了....... I am writing to
申请 apply for
1.愿意去做某事 be willing to do sth
2.对......感兴趣 be interested in
3.获得一等奖 win the first prize in
4.精通，非常了解 have a good knowledge of
5.与.....流利沟通 communicate with others fluently
6.有特殊技能 have special skills
7.比....有优势 have an advantage over others （in sth.）
8.在....方面有积极的作用 play an active part/role in
have a positive effect on
9.与....相处地好 get along well with others
10.最重要的是 above all
期待 look forward to
考虑 take .....into consideration /account
首段：(个人信息+)背景+目的
I am glad to know that new members are wanted in the
English club. I am writing to apply for it.
Learning/Knowing that new members are wanted in the
English club, I am writing to apply for it.
Delighted to hear that new members are wanted in the
English club, I am writing to apply for it.
Tip1：借助分词作状语结构表背景,写信原因
思考：What is your writing purpose
中段---申请理由
1.爱好方面:
对英语感兴趣，性格开朗
性格开朗，爱好运动，身材苗条
2. 学识方面:
获得过英语比赛一等奖;
精通掌握英语;
能流利用英语与他人沟通
3. 经历:
有12年的英语学习经历
有做英语家教的经历
√
√
√
√
√
Tip2：确保信息的相关性
单句准备：
1. 我很高兴听说那件事。
______________________________________________
2. 英语俱乐部需要新成员。
_______________________________________________
3. 自小时候起，我就对英语学习很感兴趣。
_______________________________________________
4. 我精通英语。
_______________________________________________
5. 我学英语已经十多年了。
_______________________________________________
6. 我能用流利的英语与他人交流。
_______________________________________________
7. 希望你能考虑我的申请。
______________________________________________
8. 期待被接受。
_______________________________________________
I am glad to hear that.
New members are wanted in the English club.
I have been very interested in English since I was young.
I have a good command /knowledge of English.
I have learnt English for more than ten years.
Hopefully, you could take my application into account
I can communicate with others in English fluently.
Looking forward to being accepted.
中段---推荐理由 (主要点1.---表达性格)
With humorous and easy-going characteristics, I can get along
well with others.
为人幽默，性格开朗，我能与他人融洽相处.
中段---推荐理由 (主要点2.---表达学识)
I have been interested in English since I was very young.
I have a good command /knowledge of English.
....因..........so that ..........果 (从属连词：so that)
I have been interested in English since I was very young so that I have a good command /knowledge of English.
I have been interested in English since I was very young and I have a good command /knowledge of English.
(并列连词：and)
Tip3：注意句中的逻辑关系，使句子表达紧凑连贯
中段---推荐理由 (主要点3.---表达经验)
我学英语已经有十多年。
我能用流利的英语与他人沟通。(翻译)
I have learnt English for more thatn ten years.
I can communicate with others fluently.
(用无灵主语和enable来改写)
____________of more than ten years English learning enables me to comunicate with others fluently.
____________in English after more than ten years' learning enables me to comunicate with others fluently.
Tip4：巧妙改变主语，使句子多样化。
Experience
Proficiency
尾段---豹子尾，简短有力
Hopefully, you could take my application into account.
Looking forward to being accepted.
Dear Jonson,
My name is Li Hua, a Class 6, Grade 1 student at Yangming High School. Learning that new members are wanted in the English club, I'm writing to apply for it.
With humorous and easy-going characteristics, I can get along well with others. Besides, I have been interested in English since I was very young so that I have a good command /knowledge of English.
Additionally, experience of more than ten years’ English learning enables me to communicate with others fluently. Therefore, I hold a firm belief that I will meet all your requirements.
Hopefully, my application can be taken into consideration. I will never fail to live up to your choice.
Yours,
Li Hua
欣赏: 1. 首段运用分词结构，引出写信背景。
2. 中段从性格,学识和经验三方面来讲诉李华的理由，运用了with 短语结构,分词结构作原因状语和结果状语。总结句用了同位语从句。句式丰富,结构清晰,内容覆盖所有主要点。 3.尾段用了被动句。
闪光点：
框架结构清晰
句式多样
1分词结构做状语
2.with 结构做原因状语
3.so that 结果状语
4.experience无灵主语
5.同位语从句
6.衔接副词无缝对接，行文流畅紧凑
7.被动结构 8. 双重否定
tip1：申请书写作的规范性自我评测表 称呼 Dear Jonson, (是否逗号，是否顶格写）
分段 是否是三段，比例如何（1-2;7;1-2）
介绍 定语从句？同位语？
背景 并列句？分词做状语？
目的 存在问题： 内容单薄
内容繁琐， 重复讲同一个方面
语言单调,句式单一（80个字，出现9-10个I)
解决办法：
内容丰富
条理清晰
句式多样
性格 特长 经验 期待
签名 Yours,Li Hua
错误改进
Hi，I am Lihua who is a student from class 6,grade 1.
I am Li Hua ,who is a student from Class 6,Grade 1.
错误改进
looking forward to hear from you.
Looking forward to hearing from you/your reply.
规范，地道
Hope you can take my application into consideration.
Hopefully, you can take my application into consideration.