人教版（2019）必修1 Unit 4 NATURAL DISASTERS 单元写作全解 课件（30页PPT）
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Unit 4 NATURAL DISASTERS
单元写作全解
人教版（2019）必修1 高一（上）
目 录
目录
Ⅰ写作任务
Ⅱ写作思路
Ⅲ素材整理
Ⅳ高分作文
Ⅴ佳作背诵
Ⅵ话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
Ⅰ写 作 任 务
写
作
任
务
Ⅰ
Ⅰ自然灾害与保护环境
假定你们要开一个以“Protecting Our Environment”为题的主题班会，请你写一篇介绍环境保护的发言稿，要点如下：
①我们正遭受越来越多自然灾害的侵害；
②我们应采取措施保护环境。
注意：①文章应包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
②词数80左右。
Ⅰ写 作 任 务-运动与健康
Dear fellows,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ⅱ 写 作 思 路
写
作
思
路
Ⅱ
Ⅱ 写 作 思 路
确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文-演讲稿
主题：保护环境
1. 一审
2. 二 定
确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息相关）
时态：一般现在时（叙述一般的情况）
人称：第一人称（we）
Ⅱ 写 作 思 路
明确写作要点：开篇点明主题，环境保护势在必行→如何保护环境→呼吁大家行动起来
3. 三明确
2. 二 定
Ⅲ 素 材 整 理
素
材
整
理
Ⅲ
Ⅲ 素 材 整 理
（1）关键词语
suffer, disaster, the damaged environment, make efforts to,breathe fresh air, attach importance to, reduce air pollution,affect the society
（2）完成句子
① 众所周知，随着经济的发展，由于环境的破坏，我们正遭受越来越多的灾难。（due to, damaged）
As we all know, with the development of economy, we are suffering more and more disasters __________.
Ⅲ 素 材 整 理
②到必须采取必要的方法来保护我们的环境的时候了。
（It＇s high time that...）
__________ necessarymethods should be taken to protect our environment.
③首先，我们应该努力保护树木、河流和海洋，以防止洪水、干旱等。（make efforts to）
To begin with, we're supposed to _____trees,rivers and seas to prevent floods, droughts and so on.
Ⅲ 素 材 整 理
④ 更重要的是，为了能够呼吸新鲜空气，我们应该重视减少空气污染。（breathe，attach importance to）
What's more, inorder to _____ we should _____ reducing air pollution.
⑤作为学生，我们应该多注意保护我们的生活环境，只要每个人都做一点小事，就一定会在很大程度上影响社会。（be aware of，as long as）
As students, we should _____ and _____ everyone makes a small move, we are sure to affect the society largely.
Ⅲ 素 材 整 理
Keys:① due to the damaged environment；
② It's high time that；③ make efforts to protect；
④ breathe fresh air, attach importance to；
⑤ be more aware of protecting our living environment, as long as
Ⅳ 高 分 作 文
高
分
作
文
Ⅳ
Ⅳ 高 分 作 文
Dear fellows,
As we all know,with the development of economy, we are suffering more and more disasters due to the damaged environment.
It's high time that necessary methods should be taken to protect our environment. To begin with, we're supposed to make efforts to protect trees,rivers and seas to prevent floods, droughts and so on. What's more, in order to breathe fresh air, we should attach importance to reducing air pollution.
As students, we should be more aware of protecting our living environment and as long as everyone makes a small move,we are sure to affect the society largely.
运用了较多的复杂句式，如非限制性定语从句 as we all know；固定句式 It＇s high time that.. should..，该句式用虚拟语气；条件状语从句aslong as everyone makes a small move
高级词汇和重点短语运用得也较好。如due to由于；are supposedto理应；makeefforts做出努力； attach importance to 重视；be more aware of 多注意
本文衔接也较自然。如 to begin with..what＇s more...
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
佳
作
背
诵
Ⅴ
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
Passage 1
在我们身边，经常有自然灾害发生。假定四川某城市发生强烈地震，造成很大损失。学校号召全体师生向灾区捐款。请你拟一篇80词左右的发言稿，主要内容应包括：
①对灾区情况的简要介绍；②捐款的意义；③ 如何捐款。
注意：①文章应包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
②词数80左右。
Dear teachers and students,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
One possible version:
Dear teachers and students,
As we all know,a terrible earthquake happened in the city in Sichuan, in which many buildings were destroyed and lots of people were injured. In order to calm the survivors and help them rebuild their hometown from ruins, our school has called on everyone to donate money to the earthquake-stricken area. The donation is voluntary. We hope that our aid can be delivered to shelters and warm up victims' hearts.
Thank you!
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
Passage 2
假如你是李华，你的笔友Peter想了解一些关于自然灾害的知识，请你根据下面的汉语提示写一篇介绍洪水的信件。
①成因：连续数周的大雨、台风、飓风、海啸等；
②特点、后果：来势凶猛，水位上升，河水咆哮着逼近人们，吞没居所。
注意：①文章应包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
②词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
Passage 2
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about floods.__________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
Passage 2
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about floods.Floods are one of the worst natural disasters,which can cause great damage to property and people's lives.
The heavy rain for weeks can cause floods,and typhoons,hurricanes and tsunamis can also bring floods. Before they come,you can see the river is rising higher and higher. Then you will hear a loud noise, which grows to a terrible roar with strong power. Lastly,the water will bury everything before you realise it. So we should take action to protect ourselves from floods.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
话题写作词汇
与佳句背诵
Ⅵ
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
hurricane n.飓风；tornado n.龙卷风；earthquake n.地震；flood n.洪水
thunderstorm n.雷暴；eruptv.（火山）爆发；shake n.＆v.摇动；震动
ruin n.＆vt.破坏；毁坏；destroy vt.摧毁；毁灭；shock vt.（使）震惊n.震惊
disaster n.灾难；damage vt.破坏；损坏；typhoon n.台风；drought n.旱灾
fire n.火灾；storm n.暴风雨；tsunami n.海啸；phenomenon n.现象；
写作词汇
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
burst v.爆发；爆炸；injure vt.损害；hopeless adj.没希望的
rescue n.＆vt.救援；bury vt.埋葬；frightened adj.害怕的；
suffering n.痛苦；苦难；
shelter n.避难处；居所vt.保护；掩蔽vi.躲避；
thunder and lightning 雷电交加；weather forecast天气预报；
greenhouse effect 温室效应；global warming全球变暖；
blow down 吹倒；burst out 爆发；lead to／contribute to 导致；
in ruins 严重受损；破败不堪；dig out 挖掘；
take shelter from 躲避；be shocked at对······感到震惊；
写作词汇
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
break down 垮掉；crowd in 涌入
in harmony with 与······和谐；
take measures／steps to do sth.采取措施做某事
do damage to对······有害；对······造成损害
get rid of 消除；摆脱掉；除掉
take on a new look 呈现新面貌
写作词汇
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
1.This has been the worst earthquake in the past decade/ten years.
这是十年来最严重的一次地震。
2. It was estimated that the economic losses were more than 9.7 billion dollars．
估计造成经济损失达97亿多美元。
佳句背诵
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
3.Tens of thousands of people lost their precious lives owing to the strong earthquake.
由于大地震，成千上万的人失去了宝贵的生命。
4. The rescue work is going on/is under way.
救援工作正在进行。
佳句背诵
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
5.The government called on the whole nation to support the places hit by the disaster.政府号召全国支援被这次灾难袭击的地区。
6.Fortunately,international societies offered their helping hands shortly after the earthquake-donating clothes,food and medicine.
幸运的是，地震后国际社会立即伸出援助之手，捐衣服、食品和药物。
佳句背诵
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
7.The country has provided food and clothes for the homeless people in the disaster-stricken areas.该国为受灾地区的无家可归者提供了食物和衣服。
8.It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful town，full of life.
令人十分惊奇的是，这个曾经被毁灭的地方现在已经变成了一个漂亮的城镇，生机勃勃。
佳句背诵
谢谢
21世纪教育网（www.21cnjy.com)
中小学教育资源网站
兼职招聘：
https://www.21cnjy.com/recruitment/home/admin
Unit 4 NATURAL DISASTERS
单元写作全解
人教版（2019）必修1 高一（上）
目 录
目录
Ⅰ写作任务
Ⅱ写作思路
Ⅲ素材整理
Ⅳ高分作文
Ⅴ佳作背诵
Ⅵ话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
Ⅰ写 作 任 务
写
作
任
务
Ⅰ
Ⅰ自然灾害与保护环境
假定你们要开一个以“Protecting Our Environment”为题的主题班会，请你写一篇介绍环境保护的发言稿，要点如下：
①我们正遭受越来越多自然灾害的侵害；
②我们应采取措施保护环境。
注意：①文章应包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
②词数80左右。
Ⅰ写 作 任 务-运动与健康
Dear fellows,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ⅱ 写 作 思 路
写
作
思
路
Ⅱ
Ⅱ 写 作 思 路
确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文-演讲稿
主题：保护环境
1. 一审
2. 二 定
确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息相关）
时态：一般现在时（叙述一般的情况）
人称：第一人称（we）
Ⅱ 写 作 思 路
明确写作要点：开篇点明主题，环境保护势在必行→如何保护环境→呼吁大家行动起来
3. 三明确
2. 二 定
Ⅲ 素 材 整 理
素
材
整
理
Ⅲ
Ⅲ 素 材 整 理
（1）关键词语
suffer, disaster, the damaged environment, make efforts to,breathe fresh air, attach importance to, reduce air pollution,affect the society
（2）完成句子
① 众所周知，随着经济的发展，由于环境的破坏，我们正遭受越来越多的灾难。（due to, damaged）
As we all know, with the development of economy, we are suffering more and more disasters __________.
Ⅲ 素 材 整 理
②到必须采取必要的方法来保护我们的环境的时候了。
（It＇s high time that...）
__________ necessarymethods should be taken to protect our environment.
③首先，我们应该努力保护树木、河流和海洋，以防止洪水、干旱等。（make efforts to）
To begin with, we're supposed to _____trees,rivers and seas to prevent floods, droughts and so on.
Ⅲ 素 材 整 理
④ 更重要的是，为了能够呼吸新鲜空气，我们应该重视减少空气污染。（breathe，attach importance to）
What's more, inorder to _____ we should _____ reducing air pollution.
⑤作为学生，我们应该多注意保护我们的生活环境，只要每个人都做一点小事，就一定会在很大程度上影响社会。（be aware of，as long as）
As students, we should _____ and _____ everyone makes a small move, we are sure to affect the society largely.
Ⅲ 素 材 整 理
Keys:① due to the damaged environment；
② It's high time that；③ make efforts to protect；
④ breathe fresh air, attach importance to；
⑤ be more aware of protecting our living environment, as long as
Ⅳ 高 分 作 文
高
分
作
文
Ⅳ
Ⅳ 高 分 作 文
Dear fellows,
As we all know,with the development of economy, we are suffering more and more disasters due to the damaged environment.
It's high time that necessary methods should be taken to protect our environment. To begin with, we're supposed to make efforts to protect trees,rivers and seas to prevent floods, droughts and so on. What's more, in order to breathe fresh air, we should attach importance to reducing air pollution.
As students, we should be more aware of protecting our living environment and as long as everyone makes a small move,we are sure to affect the society largely.
运用了较多的复杂句式，如非限制性定语从句 as we all know；固定句式 It＇s high time that.. should..，该句式用虚拟语气；条件状语从句aslong as everyone makes a small move
高级词汇和重点短语运用得也较好。如due to由于；are supposedto理应；makeefforts做出努力； attach importance to 重视；be more aware of 多注意
本文衔接也较自然。如 to begin with..what＇s more...
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
佳
作
背
诵
Ⅴ
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
Passage 1
在我们身边，经常有自然灾害发生。假定四川某城市发生强烈地震，造成很大损失。学校号召全体师生向灾区捐款。请你拟一篇80词左右的发言稿，主要内容应包括：
①对灾区情况的简要介绍；②捐款的意义；③ 如何捐款。
注意：①文章应包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
②词数80左右。
Dear teachers and students,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
One possible version:
Dear teachers and students,
As we all know,a terrible earthquake happened in the city in Sichuan, in which many buildings were destroyed and lots of people were injured. In order to calm the survivors and help them rebuild their hometown from ruins, our school has called on everyone to donate money to the earthquake-stricken area. The donation is voluntary. We hope that our aid can be delivered to shelters and warm up victims' hearts.
Thank you!
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
Passage 2
假如你是李华，你的笔友Peter想了解一些关于自然灾害的知识，请你根据下面的汉语提示写一篇介绍洪水的信件。
①成因：连续数周的大雨、台风、飓风、海啸等；
②特点、后果：来势凶猛，水位上升，河水咆哮着逼近人们，吞没居所。
注意：①文章应包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
②词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
Passage 2
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about floods.__________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅴ 佳 作 背 诵
Passage 2
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about floods.Floods are one of the worst natural disasters,which can cause great damage to property and people's lives.
The heavy rain for weeks can cause floods,and typhoons,hurricanes and tsunamis can also bring floods. Before they come,you can see the river is rising higher and higher. Then you will hear a loud noise, which grows to a terrible roar with strong power. Lastly,the water will bury everything before you realise it. So we should take action to protect ourselves from floods.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
话题写作词汇
与佳句背诵
Ⅵ
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
hurricane n.飓风；tornado n.龙卷风；earthquake n.地震；flood n.洪水
thunderstorm n.雷暴；eruptv.（火山）爆发；shake n.＆v.摇动；震动
ruin n.＆vt.破坏；毁坏；destroy vt.摧毁；毁灭；shock vt.（使）震惊n.震惊
disaster n.灾难；damage vt.破坏；损坏；typhoon n.台风；drought n.旱灾
fire n.火灾；storm n.暴风雨；tsunami n.海啸；phenomenon n.现象；
写作词汇
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
burst v.爆发；爆炸；injure vt.损害；hopeless adj.没希望的
rescue n.＆vt.救援；bury vt.埋葬；frightened adj.害怕的；
suffering n.痛苦；苦难；
shelter n.避难处；居所vt.保护；掩蔽vi.躲避；
thunder and lightning 雷电交加；weather forecast天气预报；
greenhouse effect 温室效应；global warming全球变暖；
blow down 吹倒；burst out 爆发；lead to／contribute to 导致；
in ruins 严重受损；破败不堪；dig out 挖掘；
take shelter from 躲避；be shocked at对······感到震惊；
写作词汇
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
break down 垮掉；crowd in 涌入
in harmony with 与······和谐；
take measures／steps to do sth.采取措施做某事
do damage to对······有害；对······造成损害
get rid of 消除；摆脱掉；除掉
take on a new look 呈现新面貌
写作词汇
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
1.This has been the worst earthquake in the past decade/ten years.
这是十年来最严重的一次地震。
2. It was estimated that the economic losses were more than 9.7 billion dollars．
估计造成经济损失达97亿多美元。
佳句背诵
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
3.Tens of thousands of people lost their precious lives owing to the strong earthquake.
由于大地震，成千上万的人失去了宝贵的生命。
4. The rescue work is going on/is under way.
救援工作正在进行。
佳句背诵
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
5.The government called on the whole nation to support the places hit by the disaster.政府号召全国支援被这次灾难袭击的地区。
6.Fortunately,international societies offered their helping hands shortly after the earthquake-donating clothes,food and medicine.
幸运的是，地震后国际社会立即伸出援助之手，捐衣服、食品和药物。
佳句背诵
Ⅵ 话题写作词汇与佳句背诵
7.The country has provided food and clothes for the homeless people in the disaster-stricken areas.该国为受灾地区的无家可归者提供了食物和衣服。
8.It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful town，full of life.
令人十分惊奇的是，这个曾经被毁灭的地方现在已经变成了一个漂亮的城镇，生机勃勃。
佳句背诵
谢谢
21世纪教育网（www.21cnjy.com)
中小学教育资源网站
兼职招聘：
https://www.21cnjy.com/recruitment/home/admin