人教版（2019）选择性必修一： Unit 5 Working the Land 　Writing 课件(10张ppt)

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针对训练
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。续写词数应为150左右。
Sabrina and I were in gym class together.I was quiet and kind.She was a bully(仗势欺人者).She and her sidekicks(助手) enjoyed harassing(骚扰) me on a daily basis.
I was less than athletic.That day,we had played soccer.I not only embarrassed myself,but also made Sabrina mad—basically because she was on my team,and we didn’t win.So,in the shower,she threatened me! “I will meet you after class,” she sneered(冷笑).
As soon as class was over,I slipped out of the classroom and ran to my locker where Susan,my older sister,was already waiting for me,so we could walk home together.
“What’s up with you ” she asked,noticing the look of panic in my eyes.“Sabrina!” I choked.“We lost the soccer game in gym and it was my fault.”
“Oh,” Susan simply stated.“Well,” she said,“we will walk down Seventeenth South instead of Harrison.It’s out of the way enough that Sabrina won’t find us.”
Next day,in homeroom,Sabrina’s best friend passed me a note that stated,“At lunch,you will pay for running away!” I didn’t even look up,but I accidentally swallowed my gum and felt a severe pain in my chest.Mr McKonkie allowed me to go to the nurse’s office.
Walking down the hall,I felt a slight sense of relief and freedom.But suddenly someone hit me on the shoulder from behind.“You little chicken!” Sabrina sneered.I didn’t turn around.I started running down the hall.I had no idea what she was going to do and I was really freaked out(吓坏).
Sabrina was now chasing me.At last,she caught up with me enough to kick the back of my legs,trying to knock me down. In a panic,I swung around to the stairs.Sabrina was so close to me that my sudden shift in direction knocked her off balance and she fell down the stairs.I stood there watching her fall.
At first,I had a sense of sudden independence and victory.
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Sabrina never harassed me after that. __________________
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写作指导
1.理解全文,把握主线。文中主要人物是Sabrina和I,围绕着体育比赛后,作者如何处理与Sabrina的人际关系展开。
2.分析段首提示,发挥想象力进行合理推测。根据续写第一段提示语“At first,I had a sense of sudden independence and victory.”可以推测接下来作者的处境有了转机,面对Sabrina摔下楼梯的状况,作者内心有些纠结,但最后还是选择帮助她。根据续写第二段提示语“Sabrina never harassed me after that.”可知结局发生了令人意想不到的转变,作者赢得了Sabrina的尊重。
3.文章叙述的是过去的事情,所以确定时态为一般过去时。续写第一段主要介绍作者面对欺凌时以德报怨的具体做法。续写第二段介绍作者与骚扰者关系的缓和以及具体的转变。
写作模板
At first,I had a sense of sudden independence and victory. I sneered and was turning to run away when I noticed Sabrina struggling and attempting to rise.I thought 1._______________________ (我必须做点什么).I practically raced down the stairs and touched her shoulder.“Can I help you ” I asked gently.“I cannot walk.” she moaned,breathing hard.Then she looked up,and tears misted her eyes.Instantly,
I helped her into a standing position,2.___________________
_____________(把她的胳膊搭在我的肩上) and together we went to the nurse’s office.
I must do something
put her arm around
my shoulders
Sabrina never harassed me after that.We never became friends,but from that moment at the foot of the stairs, 3.__________________________________________(我确信我赢得了她的尊重).She still hated being on my team in gym class and flared up sometimes,4.________________________ (但是事情不一样了). Her best friend would still pick on me occasionally,but Sabrina would shake her head and quietly say,“5.__________________(别理她).”
I was convinced that I had earned her respect
but things were different
Leave her alone