人教版（2019）选择性必修三： Unit 5 Poems 　Writing 课件(共8张PPT)

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Section Ⅳ　Writing
英 语
如何改写诗歌
Unit 5
写作指导
诗歌既是语言的精华,也蕴含着丰富的哲理。改写必须忠于原作的中心思想,不能任意想象。可以将诗歌中精练的词句扩展成具体的景象,形成一篇与主题相关的文章。
[基本框架]
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,具体为:
第一段:简要介绍诗歌的内容及作者。
第二段:详细论述诗歌的主题。
第三段:启迪与感想。
常用句式
1.开头常用句式——介绍诗歌及作者
The poem entitled...is written by...,which enjoys great popularity among...
2.主体常用句式
(1)Young as we are,we come to realise that as long as we try,nothing is impossible.
(2)She often encourages me to face everything,sad or happy.
(3)Remember:the best love is to love others unconditionally rather than make demands on them.
3.结尾常用句式
(1)I am deeply moved by...
(2)We should call on people all over the world to change our living ways before all hopes have gone.
针对训练
下面是唐代诗人李绅的名作《悯农》,请写一篇100词左右的短文介绍一下诗的意思及其中蕴含的诗人的思想感情。
The peasants (Ⅱ)
Li Shen
At noon they hoe up weeds;
Their sweat drips on the soil.
Who knows the rice that feeds
Is the fruit of hard toil!
参考范文
The poem entitled The peasants (Ⅱ) is written by Li Shen in the Tang Dynasty,which enjoys great popularity among Chinese readers.
It goes like this:Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time,the farmers are still working in the fields.They are wet all over with their sweat frequently falling into the soil,where the crops grow.But who on earth knows exactly all the delicious dishes on our table come from the hard work of the farmers
Li Shen wrote this poem in order to remind people of the importance of the farmers’ hard work.Nowadays,many young people waste a lot of food.I think it’s of great importance that the young generation today should understand the poem and treasure every grain.
写作提示
1.审题
首先确定本文为诗歌,写作时,应该使用第一和第二人称。全文使用一般现在时。
2.构思
第一部分:诗歌的作者为唐代诗人李绅。这首诗歌深受读者的欢迎。
第二部分:介绍诗歌所表达的内容。
第三部分:诗歌的写作意图及现实意义。