读后续写（新高考专用）
模拟题10
1.(2022江苏·苏州市苏州高新区第一中学一模)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开
头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Snowflakes dancing in the sky,it was an awfully cold winter.Mary felt as gray as the sky
outside.She struggled to get by the tough winter because her bills went up while her income went
down.
Her refrigerator sat empty.Her only food consisted of peanut butter,bread and bananas,only
enough for two sandwiches.Worse still,it would be four days before she got paid.As Mary
prepared to sit down and eat half of her remaining food,she heard a knock at the door.Who could
it be on such a freezing night Robbery scenes from films flashed across her mind.Then Mary
shook her head and laughed at her foolish thought-no robber would choose her as a target.
Opening the door,she saw a stranger standing outside,body trembling with cold.
"Madam,sorry to disturb you,but I'm lost and get stuck in the snow.Could you please spare
a piece of bread "the stranger asked cautiously and politely in a weak but deep voice.
“T'm afraid not,,”said Mary,“but I could make you a peanut butter and banana sandwich.”
"That sounds wonderful,"the stranger answered."Mind if I wait here on the porch "
"Yes,I do mind,"Mary replied,"but you could come in and eat it at the table."
Not expecting both food and warmth,the stranger entered the house eagerly.Mary hurried off
to the kitchen for the last four pieces of bread,peanut butter,and bananas.In a few minutes,she
returned and invited him to sit down to eat what she could offer.After eating,the man thanked and
said goodbye to her.
Looking outside,Mary hesitated a moment and said,"If you don't mind,you can sleep on the
sofa.""That would be good enough,"responded the man gratefully.
Mary went into her room,and locked the door.The next morning,when she woke up,she
remembered the man."How will I tell him I have nothing for breakfast "she asked herself.She
dressed,unlocked,and opened the door slightly.读后续写：八步创意模板写作
Part1::八步法详解…
Part2:高考真题实战演练
实战演练1：读后续写浙江卷
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实战演练2：读后续写浙江卷
Prt3:高考真题再现…1小
真题1：2022.6新高考1卷（身残志坚的男孩)
Part1:八步法详解
(1)情绪：消极情绪
(2)细节：进一步解释描写
(3)转折：个人的努力或借助外界
(4)转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
(5)失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
(6)新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
(7)结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折
(8)总结：点题，呼应前文
详述：
(1)消极情绪
典型表达是：
感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非
谓语动词形式和介词短语)
l.a flush of(表情绪的名词)=a wave of..=a feeling/sense of..一阵..
2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrass
ment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)
3.(表情绪的名词)flooded over sb=swept over sb
因…颤抖
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear,panic excitement,rage...)
(2)进一步细节描写
典型是：流泪；心里想…
流泪：
l.泪水模糊了眼睛Tears blurred one's eyes.
2.眼睛模糊了One's eyes got misty.
3.泪眼模糊One's eyes misted/.dimmed with tears.
4.几乎要哭了.be close to tears
5.泪水落下tears(roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)
心里想
L.从句，内心的声音告诉某人.An inner voice told
sb that 2....thought/said to oneself
(3)转折（个人努力或借助外界）
典型是：鼓起勇气或另外一方的鼓励：毫不犹豫
pluck up/take/gather/one's courage (to do...)
毫不犹豫：
l.某人迫不及待地想做某事sb could hardly wait to do
sth
2.不假思索，毫不犹豫without a second thought
