读后续写（新高考专用）
模拟题08
1.(2022河北邯郸一中模拟预测)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
The whole class burst out laughing as Mohi rushed into the classroom.He was a strange sight.
His half-buttoned white shirt revealed a red striped pajama top underneath,and instead of white
school shoes,he had on a pair of bright green sandals that were two sizes too big.The physics
teacher's hand froze in the middle of writing a formula on the blackboard.
Mohi mumbled,‘Sorry,teacher,'and scuttled(快步疾走)to his seat..Mr.Tan glared at the rest
of the students.The chuckles quickly faded away.Mohi's classmates always looked forward to
Mondays.Nine times out of ten,they would be entertained by Mohi'slate arrival and his odd
appearance which usually included inappropriate clothing.That day,it was the pajama top and
green sandals
Mohi lived just a street away from the school.He walked to school daily.Students passing by
in buses would yell his name in unison (just to see him jump and stop in his tracks.When
he spotted the merry bunch in the bus,he would wave good-naturedly.Although Mohi was likable,
he was too lost in his own thoughts to make friends.His classmates found him amusing but they
ignored him most of the time.Only Hamed,who sat next to Mohi,tried to be his friend.
The following Monday,Mohi did not turn up at school.His classmates were a little
disappointed but quickly forgot about him.After school,Hamed decided to walk over to Mohi's
house to check on him.As he approached the gate,he could hear violin music.Mohi must be
listening to music,he thought.The gate was not locked.Hamed let himself in.He called Mohi's
name a few times but there was no response.The music played on.Hamed peered in through a
window.His eyes widened in surprise.In the middle of the living room,Mohi was playing the
violin.His eyes were closed in concentration as he drew the bow over the strings expertly.He
played flawlessly(完美无瑕地)，so much so that it sounded like a recording.Hamed left quietly.读后续写：救人型
Part1:经典例文（铁轨救婴儿）…
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Part2:救人故事构造三部曲5
第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）
5
第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负)6
第三步：救人之后（感激+升华)…7
P阳t3:灵活应用8
例1：河中救人…
例2：海边救人10
读后续写很多时候会涉及自然灾害与防范、安全常识与自我保护的话
题，会经常涉及到危难之际，挺身而出救助他人的故事。在这个话题中有
时会写到危难之际，利用所学急救知识，成功救人脱离生命危险的故事：
有时会写到楼内突发火灾，警察/群众舍己救人的故事；有时会写到群众/
路人遇到有人不幸溺水，鼓足勇气跳入水中施救的的故事。
Part1:经典例文（铁轨救婴儿）
It was 7 a.m.on 12 May 1998.Mohr had already scanned several packages listing
dangerous materials aboard the train.The presence of gas would mean taking extra
precaution when braking the 6,200-ton train.With explosive gas on board,it would be
disastrous if the train came off the track.After a final inspection,Mohr jumped aboard.
He was heading east,into a sun that promised a beautiful day for their 276-km run to
Peru,Indiana.
At around noon that day,Marshall prepared to tackle some yardwork.It was a
beautiful day for it,she thought,gazing past the houses across the street.Some 45
meters away,railroad tracks shone in the sun.
Marshall began working in a patch (of soil.Sitting next to her,cheerfully
running her hands through dirt,was her 19-month-old daughter,Emily.For a while,
she kept turning to check on Emily,who played close at hand.Eventually,though,
Marshall's absorption in her work became total.
Mohr approached the town where Marshall lived at about 1:45 p.m.and slowed
the train to the 40-kmph speed limit.He activated the flashing lights and warning bell.
Mohr had been through the town hundreds of times,but he grew extra cautious
rounding the first curve.
As the train came out of the curve,Mohr noticed a small dot on the track about
200 meters ahead.He thought it might be a dog.Although it was against the rules to
do so in the town,he began lightly tapping his horn."Come on,puppy,move,"he
urged.
The toots(嘟嘟响)of a train whistle startled
(使受惊吓)Marshall from her yardwork.That's
odd,she thought.They don't usually blow the
whistle through town.She glanced over to check
her daughter,and her heart skipped.Emily was
nowhere in sight.
Now,as the train approached within 100 meters of the object on the rail,Mohr
narrowed his eyes,trying to make out what exactly was lying ahead.Then shock ran
through him like electric current.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右：
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1
"My God!"he yelled as a tiny face turned towards him."It's a baby!"
