九年级上册Module 1 Wonders of the world 课件(共19张PPT)

(共19张PPT)
【模块写作目标】
能描述你曾经游览过的一处自然景观或人文景观。内容包含地理位置、外观、历史、旅游经历、感受与评价等。
1. 能用“wide, deep, high, tall”等形容词描述某个景点的外观。
2. 能用形容词“huge, wonderful, great”等词表达对某个景物的看法。
3. 写作微技能：段落写作策略(一)：主题句+支持+结论句。
Module 1 Wonders of the world
【作品赏析，以读促写】
假如你是来自英国的Jenny, 在刚结束的暑假期间，你曾经去过西湖旅游。请你根据下面的问题提示，写一篇有关游西湖的日记。记录这一天的旅游经历。
Where is it and what is it like
2. When did you visit it
3. What did you see and do
4. How did you feel
July 8th Sunny
①The city of Hangzhou is famous for its West Lake, I had a visit to it with my parents today.
②The West Lake, which lies in the west of Hangzhou City, is one of the best-known sights in China. It covers an area of 6.5 square kilometers. It is very big. Around it are green hills and a busy downtown. It’s famous for the two famous causeways, Bai Causeway and Su Causeway. There are lots of historic stories about them. So the West Lake is a natural wonder with a long history and rich culture.
◆赏结构
段落①快速导入介绍西湖。

段落②描述西湖的客观事实。
③We had a great time in the West lake. First, we rode bikes around the lake, enjoying the beautiful sights along the way. Then we took a pleasant boat ride. The boat trip on the river is relaxing. The beauty is beyond my words. We lost ourselves in it. In the following two days, we visited the Tea Museum and had a taste of the local tea. It was so delicious that you can’t miss it if you have a chance to visit it.
④My trip to the West Lake was like walking into a paradise. I am willing to go there again.
段落③描述自己在西湖的旅游经历与感受。




段落④点题收尾。
◆赏内容
在内容上，作者围绕写作主题，开门见山，收尾点题简练而到位。主体段落根据要求，通过两个自然段描述西湖。在描述西湖客观事实时，将自然景观与人文景观完美融合。描述自己旅行经历时，同样将自然与人文融合。
内容选择策略小贴士：通过头脑风暴，罗列与西湖相关的信息，再选取最需要的，从而使内容精准符合题目要求。
◆赏语言
在语言上，得体使用观点的形容词，如：famous, pleasant, beautiful, delicious, relaxing和表示事实的形容词，如：big, long, rich等。总体丰富且流畅。文中的浓体字值得借鉴。
请赏析并模仿以下句子。
1. The West Lake, which lies in the west of Hangzhou City, is one of the best-known sights in China.
【which引导的是非限制定语从句，对前面的内容起到补充说明的作用。】
模仿 ______________________________________________________________________________________
Guilin, which lies in the south of China, is a great place to visit.
2. The beauty is beyond my words.【beyond my words 意为“无以言表”。】
模仿 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. We lost ourselves in it.【lose oneself in 意为“陶醉其中”。】
模仿 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4. It is really worth visiting.【be worth doing 意为“值得做……”。】
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Standing at the top of the tower, you can have a bird’s-eye view of the whole city. For me, its beauty is beyond my words.
I lost myself in the beautiful sights when I stood at the top of the mountain.
Guilin is really worth visiting.
【写作微技能强化训练】段落写作策略(一)
一、段落的构成：主题句+支持句+结论句
The West Lake, which lies in the west of Hangzhou City, is one of the best-known sights in China. (主题句) It covers an area of 6.5 square kilometers. It is very big. Around it are green hills and a busy downtown. It’s famous for the two famous causeways, Bai Causeway and Su Causeway. There are lots of historic stories about them.(支持句) So the West Lake is a natural wonder with a long history and rich culture.(结论句)
二、请用模仿上面的段落，介绍一处景观。(主题句+支持句+结论句)
The Great Wall is one of the wonders in the world.(主题句) It lies in the north of China. It’s more than 8,851 kilometres long and 25 feet high in average. It is said that you can see it from the space. (支持句) It is so amazing that we Chinese are really proud of it. (结论句)
【话题写作语料库】
一、话题主题句语料
1. The Palace Museum is one of the most popular attractions in Beijing.
2. The Great Wall which is a symbol of China, is certainly popular with people from all over the world.
3. ... is a great place to visit because there are many exciting things to see and do there.
4. I had a special travel experience in ... last year.
二、话题主体部分语料
▲景观客观事实语料
1. The West Lake lies in the west of Hangzhou City.
2. The Three Gorges Dam is about 23,000 metres long, 185 metres high and 15 metres wide at the top.
3. The Giant’s Causeway runs for several hundred metres on the eastern coast of Northern Ireland.
4. The Taj Mahal covers an area of about 174,000 square metres.
5. ... is a magic land of trees, flowers, strange rocks and waterfalls.
6. ... is famous for its clean water and beautiful sights.
7. Hangzhou is the most wonderful city in the world with its modern buildings and rich culture.
▲旅游经历语料
1. When I arrived, it was early morning and it rained.
2. The sun was going down when I arrived at the ground floor of the Jin Mao Tower Building.
3. In the dark, there was no sign of the Grand Canyon, and it was silent.
4. Suddenly, the rain stopped and the clouds cleared. The sun rose behind me and shone on the rocks.
5. Standing on the top of the mountain, you can have a bird’s eye view of the whole city. For me, the beauty is beyond description.
三、话题结论句语料
1. It is certainly easy to understand why so many tourists visit the Palace Museum.
2. In my opinion, the best place to visit is ...
3. There is no doubt that I will never forget the time I spent in ...
4. If natural beauty is what you are looking for, Guilin is the perfect place to visit.
5. My trip to Hangzhou was quite tiring because of the long journey but it was really educational and enjoyable.
【实战演练】
某英文报刊为了让更多的外国友人了解中国景观与文化，正组织英文游记征文比赛。假设你是李华，请你根据下面的提示，用英文写一篇游记，参与此次征文比赛。
问题提示：1. Where is it
2. What are interesting/amazing/exciting/... facts
3. What is your travel experience And how did you feel
要求：1. 内容包含以上问题，可以适当拓展；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名；
3. 词数110词左右。
过程写作指导 (审、列、扩、连、查、抄)
1. 审 (意图与内容)
写作意图为 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________。
仔细阅读题目要求，确定写作内容为 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________。
2. 列提纲：根据意图与内容，确定段落以及段落的要点。
3. 扩与连：运用“1+1或1+2”内容拓展策略进行扩写，并用适当的连词连接成段。
Beginning

Body (根据写作要求，可以分两个段落描述) 主题句：

支持句：




结论句：

主题句：

支持句：



结论句：

Ending

4. 查：请根据以下内容对文本进行检查。
□1.内容维度：检查是否包含所有要点。
□2.语言维度：检查是否运用了不同句式表达。
□3.逻辑维度：检查是否运用合理的连接词。
□4.语法维度：检查是否运用正确的时态。
□5.本模块写作微技能：是否运用了段落写作策略，即主题句+支持句+结论句。
5. 定稿 (抄：书写规范，不随意涂改)
There is a famous saying, “He who doesn’t reach the Great Wall is not a true man.” This morning, I got up early to visit the Great Wall with my classmates.
The Great Wall, which lies in the north of China, is one of the greatest wonders in the world. It’s more than 8,851 kilometres long and 25 feet high in average. It is said that you can see it from the space. It is so amazing that we Chinese are really proud of it.
We enjoyed ourselves on the Great Wall. When we arrived, we were really amazed at the wonderful sights. We couldn’t help taking lots of photos. Then we started climbing the wall. We kept climbing until we got to the top of the Great Wall. We lost ourselves in the amazing sights and we remained there for half an hour. Its beauty is beyond our words.
The Great Wall is really worth visiting. If you visit Beijing, don’t miss it!