九年级上册Module 3 Heroes 写作课件(共15张PPT)

(共15张PPT)
Module 3 Heroes
【模块写作目标】
能介绍自己所崇拜的人，包含其一生主要的经历，如成长、学业、事迹、成就等。
1. 能正确使用不同的时间表达方式。
2. 能正确运用含“because, so, so that” 的状语从句。
3. 写作微技能：段落写作策略(三)：主题句+支持句+结论句。
【作品赏析，以读促写】
你校要出一期话题为“My heroes”英语专刊，号召同学们学习榜样，积极向上。假设你是李华，请以“My hero”为题，用英语写一篇110词左右的文章，分享你心目中的英雄人物故事，来激励更多的同学。
My hero
①One of the great persons I admire is Yang Liwei because he is brave and hard working to become the first Chinese astronaut to fly into space. He is a true hero in my mind.
◆赏结构
段落①开门见山地表达了杨利伟成为作者心目中英雄的原因。
②We Chinese are all proud of Yang Liwei. He was born in Liaoning on June 21st, 1965. When he was young, his dream was to fly into the sky like a bird. At the age of 18, he entered university. He worked hard so that he could be an excellent pilot. Four years later, his dream came true. In 1998, he got the chance to become an astronaut. With a strong will, he trained very hard. As a result, he went into space in Shengzhou 5. I still remember he held our national flag in his hand while he was travelling in space. The Chinese people speak highly of him.
段落②根据时间顺序，描述了杨利伟的主要经历与成就，
段落写作：主题句+经历+结论句
③Yang Liwei is simply the best! He really sets a good example for all of us. We should learn from him—never give up!
段落③与首段相呼应，呼吁大家向杨利伟学习。
◆赏内容和赏语言
在内容上，作者围绕写作主题，直截了当告诉读者心目中的英雄人物。主体段落根据要求，介绍了杨利伟主要的成长经历与成就。结尾与首段呼应，并结合写作的要求，起到了很好的点题作用。
在语言上，总体丰富且流畅。本文运用了不同的方式来表达时间，见文中斜体字，值得我们借鉴。同时，文中的浓体字短语和表达也值得学习。请赏析以下句子并模仿造句。
1. One of the great persons I admire is Yang Liwei because he is brave and hard working to become the first Chinese astronaut to fly into space.
【One of the great persons I admire is... 意为“我崇拜的伟人之一是……”。其中I admire做persons的定语】
___________________________________________________________
2. The Chinese people speak highly of him.【speak highly of sb. 意为“高度赞扬某人”。】
___________________________________________________________
3. He really sets a good example for all of us.【set a good example意为“树立一个好的榜样”。】
___________________________________________________________
One of my great persons I admire is Deng Xiaoping because he helped Chinese people live a better life.
People around the world speak highly of Yuan Longping.
Ma Lin really sets a good example for all young people in a new age.
【写作微技能强化训练】段落写作策略(三)
根据下面的习作内容，给主体段落添加合理的主题句与结论句。
The hero in my heart
Talking of the hero in my heart, the person who appears in my mind at once is Helen Keller, who influences me a lot. _______________________________
____________________________ When Helen was young, she had a high fever. Unluckily, the illness was so serious that it made her eyes blind and her ears deaf. For her, the world was dark and silent. Facing the situation, she didn’t give up. With the help of her teacher and through her own efforts, she tried to
Helen Keller’s life was full of
difficulties but she had a strong will.
change everything. As the old saying goes, “Everything comes to him who wants.” As a result, she entered Harvard University. But she didn’t stop. Instead, she picked up her pen and began writing. Besides, she also gave speeches everywhere to do charity for the blind. _________________________
______________.
From her great spirit which touched me deeply, I really understand the meaning of “In the face of difficulties, be brave.”
What she did set a good example
for all of us.
【话题写作语料库】
一、导入话题类
1. Talking of the hero in my mind, I have to say something about...
2. ... is the person who has been my hero for a long time.
3. The person who influences me a lot is...
4. ... is a famous/great... who devoted his life to... 【devote one’s life to... 献身给……】
5. One of the great persons who I admire is... because...
二、经历类
1. She has won many world competitions, including four gold medals in the Olympics.
2. He invented special medical tools so that doctors could treat the wounded more quickly.
3. She is a good student as well as a good player.
4. In the end, he died of his wound/illness.
5. In fact, he trained so hard that he hurt his foot.
6. From then on, he suffered a lot from his foot problem, but he didn’t give up. 【suffer from 遭受……折磨】
7. It’s a pity that his foot problem stopped him from completing the 2012 London Olympic Games.
三、评价类
1. Whatever she does, she never gives up.
2. She isn’t cleverer than anyone else, but she has a very strong will.
3. She is simply the best. She is a true hero.
4. He is still a symbol of courage and success. 【a symbol of ……的象征】
5. It is she/he who makes me full of confidence.
6. His spirits influence me and teach me how to...
7. ... is so brave/helpful/selfless/responsible/optimistic that... 【responsible 负责的 optimistic 乐观的】
【实战演练】
每个人的成长都离不开榜样的力量。他们可能是名人，也可能是周围的普通人。他们的故事给我们以启迪，让我们积极面对生活。你校英文网站日前正在进行“My hero in my heart”为题的英语征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇110词左右的短文投稿。
过程写作指导 (审、列、扩、连、查、抄)
1. 审 (审意图与内容)
写作意图为 _____________________________________________________________。
仔细阅读题目要求，确定写作内容为 _____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________。
2. 列提纲：根据意图与内容，确定段落以及段落的要点。
3. 扩与连：运用“1+1或1+2”内容拓展策略进行扩写，并用适当的连词连接成段。
Beginning
Body 主题句：
支持句：
结论句：
Ending
4. 查：请根据以下内容对文本进行检查。
□1.内容维度：检查是否包含所有要点。
□2.语言维度：检查是否运用了不同的表达句式。
□3.逻辑维度：检查是否运用合理的连接词。
□4.语法维度：检查是否运用正确的时态。
□5.本模块写作微技能：是否运用了段落写作策略，即主题句+支持句+结论句。
5. 定稿 (抄：书写规范，不随意涂改)
【实战演练】参考范文
Yuan Longping, the father of rice, is the person who has been my hero for a long time.
Mr Yuan spent all his life searching for ways to produce more rice and solve the problem of hunger. He was born in Beijing on September 7th, 1930. At the age of twenty he entered Southwest Agricultural College and finished school three years later. At that time, hunger was a big problem for many Chinese people in the countryside. Since then, finding ways to grow more rice has been his life goal. He started a special study of rice in 1964. And after ten years, he
succeeded in developing a new kind of rice together with other people. In the 1980s, Mr Yuan travelled around the world and gave advice about growing rice. Because of his great achievement, he won World Food Prize when he was 74 years old. It’s sad to hear that he passed away on May 22nd, 2021. We Chinese always take great pride in him.
Yuan Longping did a lot to produce more rice and helped people around the world. He is a true hero. People both at home and abroad will remember him all the time.