Unit 1 Back to school
Period Ⅳ Writing
应用文写作专练
一、素材积累
常用词汇
in order to; the Students’ Union; decide; set up; basic training; after-class; physical activity; cycling trip; keep fit; relax oneself; be interested in
常用衔接词
1、表并列关系: and, as well as, not only ... but also..., both... and..., neither... nor...
2、表选择关系: or, either... or..., not... but...
3、表递进关系: besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more, furthermore, what’s worse (更糟糕的是)
4、表转折对比: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary (相反), despite, in spite of
5、表原因: because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to (由于)
6、表结果: so, as a result, therefore, thus
7、表时间: later, afterwards (后来), soon, lately, recently, from then on, at the same time, after a while, finally, at last, all of a sudden, from now on
二、典例分析
写作题目:
为了丰富同学们的课外活动,校学生会决定成立一个自行车俱乐部(cycling club)。假如你是学生会主席,请根据以下提示,用英语写一份书面通知。
1. 俱乐部的主要活动内容:每周一次的基础训练,有教师辅导,安排在课外体育活动时间;
2. 参加俱乐部的好处(内容自拟,至少两点);
3. 注意事项:器材自备,活动免费;
4. 如何加人俱乐部:9月20号前到5号大楼6 层602房间报名。
注意:
1. 通知应包括以上所有信息,可适当增加内容,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数100左右。
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第一步:审题谋篇:
写作要求是写关于成立自行车俱乐部的通知,写作时应注意下面几点:
1、确定文体:这是一篇应用文。写作时注意应用文的写作特点。
2、主体时态:文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3、主体人称:由于是写关于成立自行车俱乐部的通知,且假设你是学生会主席,所以人称应该以第一或第二人称。
4、谋篇布局:
第一部分:介绍成立自行车俱乐部的原因
第二部分:参加自行车俱乐部的好处
第三部分:如何加入自行车俱乐部
第四部分:呼吁同学们加人自行车俱乐部
第二步:核心词汇:
1. impress v.使印象深刻 2. opportunity n.机会,时机
3. basic adj.基本的,基础的 4. take advantage of 利用
第三步:连词造句
1、完成句子
(1)学生会希望我们的学校生活更加丰富多彩,因此决定成立一个自行车倶乐部。
The Students’ Union wants our school life __________ __________ __________ __________, and therefore has decided to __________ __________ a cycling club.
(2)我们每周有一次基本的培训,这将由老师来指导。
We will have basic training once a week, __________ will be instructed by teachers.
(3)如果可能的话,还会有一次户外自行车旅行。
There will also be an outdoor cycling trip __________ __________ __________ __________.
(4)如果你正遭受学习的压力,这将是一个放松 自己的好机会。
If you __________ __________ the stress from study, it will be a great chance __________ __________ __________.
2、句式升级
(5)用目的状语和make复合结构改写句(1)。
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(6)用省略句改写句(3)。
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答案:(1)to become more colorful; set up (2)which
(3)if it is possible (4)are suffering; to relax yourself
(5)In order to make our school life more colorful, the Students’ Union has decided to set up a cycling club.
(6)There will also be an outdoor cycling trip if possible.
第四步:连句成篇
【参考范文】
NOTICE
In order to make our school life more colorful, the Students’ Union has decided to set up a cycling club.
Our cycling club will have a lot of activities. We will have basic training once a week, which will be instructed by teachers. It will be arranged during the time of after-class physical activities. There will also be an outdoor cycling trip if possible. We are sure it will be an ideal opportunity for you to keep fit. Besides, if you are suffering the stress from study, it will be a great chance to relax yourself.
So, if you are interested in our club, you can come to our club in Room 602, on the sixth floor, Building 5, before September 20. By the way, you have to get the equipment ready by yourself, but the charge is free.
Don’t wait. Join us now! Thank you!
Students' Union
三、实战操练
著名英语口语俱乐部Toastmaster Club正在招 新,假设你叫李华,你想加入该俱乐部,请你用英文 写一封邮件咨询具体情况,邮件内容包括:
1. 表达你想加入该俱乐部的意愿;
2. 询问收费、具体时间安排、活动安排等事宜;
3. 期待对方尽快回信。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua