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Unit 6 Travelling around Asia
Module 3 Travels
目录
写作乐园
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课堂练习
02
第5课时 Writing
写作乐园
话题六 去某地旅行
【短文写作】
假如你是Li Hua,请你写一封信给你英国的笔友Paul,邀请他疫情之后来深圳旅游。80词左右。
要点:1. 问候并简单描述你的近况;
2. 介绍深圳的旅游特色(饮食、交通及特色景点等);
3. 邀请Paul疫情之后来深圳旅游。
提示词:流行病 epidemic
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【写作指导】
此篇作文以介绍深圳为主线,主要内容需从三个角度出发,即介绍发出邀请者自身的近况、深圳的旅游特色以及提出邀请。
写作内容渗透着本单元的话题和语言目标——环游亚洲。
在写作过程中要明确以下两点:
1. 按照要求从三个方面介绍深圳,可使用课文中的经典短语进行写作。
2. 结合话题,作文要结构完整,语句流畅。
【范文赏析】
Dear Paul,
How’s everything going I hope your life in England is getting better now. I am busy with my studies and I sometimes do sports to
keep fit. There are many things for you to enjoy in Shenzhen. First, you will have chances to eat different kinds of seafood. Second, the public transportation is very convenient here and you can go anywhere easily. Thirdly, there are many places of interest here, such as the China Folk Culture Village and Dapeng Fortress.
I would like to invite you to Shenzhen after the epidemic. I can’t wait to show you around this beautiful city.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
一、写作仿写
1. one of the+形容词最高级+复数名词+in / of短语 在……中最……之一
【例句】Shanghai is one of the largest cities in the world.上海是世界上最大的城市之一。
课堂练习
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)玛丽是我们班最刻苦用功的女生之一。
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(2)深圳是中国最美丽的城市之一。_____________________________________________________
Mary is one of the most hard-working girls in our class.
Shenzhen is one of the most beautiful cities in China.
2. in the centre of 在……的中心
【例句】There is a point in the centre of the circle. 圆圈中间有一个点。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)游泳池在花园的中心。
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(2)我们学校中央有一个操场。______________________________________________________
The swimming pool is in the centre of the garden.
There is a playground in the centre of our school.
3. if 引导的条件状语从句 如果……
【例句】The weather is getting warm. 天气渐渐变暖了。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)如果下周日下雨,我们就不去野餐了。 ______________________________________________________
(2)如果你做些运动,你就会感到更开心。______________________________________________________
If it rains next Sunday, we won’t go on a picnic.
If you play some sports, you’ll feel happier.
4. famous著名的;出名的
【例句】Lu Xun is a famous writer. 鲁迅是一位出名的作家。
【拓展】be famous for 因……而著名
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)长城是闻名世界的名胜古迹。
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(2)湖南因其美味的小吃而出名。
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The Great Wall is a famous place of interest in the world.
Hunan is famous for its delicious snacks.
5. have a wonderful time玩得开心
【例句】We had a wonderful time visiting Beijing.我们在北京玩得很开心。
【拓展】have fun / a great time doing sth. 做某事很开心
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)如果你游览深圳,你会玩得很开心。_____________________________________________________
(2)我们上周日打网球玩得很开心。
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If you visit Shenzhen, you will have a wonderful time.
We had a wonderful time playing tennis last Sunday.
二、书面表达
假如你是Li Hua,本周日由你组织社团同学去深圳东部华侨城游玩。请你根据下面的内容要点,用英语拟一份口头通知。
要点:1.集合时间和地点:上午9点,东部华侨城大门口;
2.欣赏中国茶文化及游览大侠谷;
3.自由活动1小时,可玩游戏或拍照;
4.请补充一至两点个人的想法或建议。
提示词:1.东部华侨城 OCT East 2.大侠谷 Knight Valley
要求:1.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数内;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
It’s so exciting that all our club members are going to the Shenzhen OCT East this Sunday. ________________________
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We are going to meet at
the gate of OCT East at 9 a.m. We are going to enjoy Chinese
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I believe that it will be an exciting tour and we will enjoy ourselves.
tea culture. Besides, we are going to visit Knight Valley. We will have an hour of free time to do something we like, such as playing games and taking photos. We should take care of ourselves all the time. If someone is in trouble, please call me. Most importantly, don’t forget to take all the things you need there.
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