(共26张PPT)
Writing
九年全一册
person
Appearance
Personality
Hobbies
Who is he
Lu Han
!
How have you changed
Personality(性格)
Appearance(外貌)
Hobbies(爱好) & Activities(活动)
How to describe changes
Tips:
I used to be…
But now…
I used to have…
But now…
I used to like…
But now…
Can you say some changes about your appearance, personality or hobbies
appearance
(外貌)
personality
hobby
habit
…
learning
lifestyle
hair
build
height
How I have changed!
(性格)
shy outgoing
serious friendly
quiet active
appearance
(外貌)
personality
hobby
habit
…
learning
lifestyle
hair
build
height
How I have changed!
(性格)
shy outgoing
serious friendly
quiet active
Lucy used to be short, but now she is tall.
Talk about the pictures and talk about Lucy’s changes.
Make a survey on how your classmates
have changed. Then report it to the class.
A B
Past Now Past Now
Appearance
Personality
Hobbies
A used to be short, but now she/he is tall. A used to be quiet, but now she/he is outgoing. B used to have long hair, but now she/he has short hair. B used to play soccer, but now she/he plays tennis.
Report.
... used to … but now…
现在你已经是一位九年级的学生了,你感觉自己和以前有变化吗?请根据自己的体会,多角度,多方面谈谈自己的变化。请以 “How I have changed!”为题写一篇文章 。
要求:
1. 至少谈3个方面的变化;
2. 语句通顺、连贯;
3. 词数约80左右。
(评价)
Score 7-9
Add a good beginning and ending.(加1-2分)
Cover all the focal points. 覆盖要点
Use proper conjunctions. 连接词(加1-2分)
Add some details and English sayings.
Score 9-11
Score 10-13
Score 13-15
有细节描写和美句(如谚语等) (加1-2分)
Writing Assessments
Make your sentences beautiful.(加1-2分)
Beginning 开头
1. My life has changed a lot in the last few years.
2. I have changed a lot in the last few years. My life is different.
3. Time flies. My life has changed a lot as time goes by.
1. I used to be…
2. I used to have …
In the past:
3. I used to like…
Body 正文
But now:
4. I am …
5. I have …
6. I like …
Ending 结尾
1. The biggest change in my life was..
2. This is the most important change because …
3.What great changes I have!
How I’ve Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the past few years.
I used to ___________________, but now I ________________________.
I am + Comparative Degree(比较级)+than+I was+ two years ago.
When I was young, I used to_______.
In the past, I _________,now I _______.
Appreciating & Evaluating
欣赏与评价
Help each other
Cheer each other
Love each other
And win together
互助 互勉
互爱 共赢
You are the most special one.