(共11张PPT)
Writing
新外研必修Book 1
Unit 3 Family matters
如何写记叙文?
Look and answer:
1 What brought back the author's lovely memory
2 What happened in the author's memory
3 Why is it a lovely memory
Because it shows the love between the author and her mother.
记叙文是通过对人物的描写和对事件
的叙述使读者了解人物和事件的一种文体。内容一般包括记叙文的六要素,即who, when, where, why, how, result。
An old photo.
The author wanted to surprise her mother with
home-made scrambled eggs on her mother's birthday. Unluckily, the eggs were burnt, but they ended up laughing about it and eating them all anyway.
明确体裁话题
确定时态人称
布局文章架构
列出核心要点
Write a short story about this memory.
首段:旧照片引出回忆
中段:回忆十年前妈妈生日
尾段:今年妈妈生日的期许
记叙文: 旧照片的回忆
一般过去时为主;第一人称为主
1. 一张旧照片引发回忆
2. 回忆往事:妈妈生日我为她做摊鸡蛋失败妈妈依然开心
3.今年到来的生日我要好好做摊鸡蛋
remember, unforgettable,
suddenly, happen,
come across, experience,
later on;
话题词汇
Some useful expressions
叙述故事的时间、地点
On my way to.../When I was..., I came across...
I was... on Monday morning.
回忆往事,叙述经过(did)
Last night I was busy... when I...
3. 介绍故事的结果或感想(did/do/does)
...is an unforgettable experience.
I learned from the experience that ...
Tired as we are, we still felt quite
happy.
回忆类记叙文话题句式
There is a small bike lying quietly in our garage. It is quite old and I can no longer ride it, but I still keep it there, as it brings back a sweet memory.
Many years ago, it was a Sunday morning on my sixth birthday. My father bought me a new bike. I could not wait to get on it and learn how to ride, so I begged my father to teach me in the garden. After I sat on the new bike, my father helped me put my two hands on the handlebars and my feet on the pedals.
Sample(1)
Then, he pushed the bike so that the pedals started to move. I was scared! But my father kept encouraging me. I could cycle around the garden shortly after my first try. It was amazing. But unluckily, I was so busy waving at him that I didn't see a small tree in front of me. I hit it and fell off the bike. It hurt a lot and I started to cry. My father encouraged me to stand up, be brave and try again. Gradually, I was able to ride the bike more skillfully.
I kept riding the bike until it was too small for me. It is still one of my most precious possessions, for not only was it my first bike, but a symbol of my courage as well as my father's love. And I learnt that love has great power.
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I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. Thank you for so many years of my education and training. I'm very grateful to you for taking care of me.
In my heart are many beautiful memories. I always made you angry, but you were always very understanding. When I was sick, you were always in every possible way taking care of me. When I failed
the examination, you always encouraged me to
cheer up and not to lose heart.
You always encouraged me to
help others who are in trouble.
When I did good deeds, you
were always thinking highly of
me.
I am really thankful to you
for your teaching me how to be
“a real person”.
Sample(2)
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