人教版九年级全册英语 4.I used to be afraid of the dark.SectionB 3a-3b Self check 课件(共17张PPT)

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He studies harder than he used to.
In the past
At present
his parents could not take care of him; missed his
parents; felt lonely and unhappy; became less interested in study; was absent from classes; failed his examinations;was not able to make friends; found life there difficult;wanted to leave the school
more outgoing; made some good friends; joined the school basketball team; became active in many other activities; much happier now; works even harder; does well in school ;
knows his parents love him
Li Wen
What about you
short
have good eyesight
tall
wear glasses
quiet and shy
lazy
outgoing
friendly
watch TV
stay at home
hang out with friends
watch movies
outgoing, serious, funny, friendly, shy, kind, humorous, selfish, mean, hard-working, lazy, active, careful, creative, gentle...
watch cartoon,read books, play the piano, play football, run, swim, play computer games, traveling, hang out with friends, watch TV/movies, eat apples/ hamburgers...
tall, short, heavy, thin, straight/curly hair, long/short hair, wear glasses, a medium height, good eyesight, handsome good-looking, …
hobbies
personality
appearance
How I’ve changed!
★My life has changed a lot in the last few years.
★ Great changes have taken place in the past few years.
★ I’ve changed a lot so far.
★ I’ve already changed since I came to No.1 Middle School.
My changes: I used to … ,but/and now…
I was/did…,now…
I would/could…,now…
★ As you see, changes make me a better person.
★ It is the change that helps me get better.
★ In a word, everyone will change, but we know that we are sure to become better!
How I’ve changed!
Tip 1: Structure (结构）
Tip 2: Content(内容）
Tip 3: Linking words（连接词）
Tip 4: Correct grammar(语法）
Tip 5: Handwriting(书写）
My life has changed a lot in the last few years.
I used to be short and thin, but now I’m tall and strong enough. I used to feel lonely and unhappy because my parents went to another city to look for jobs, but now I’m more outgoing and make a lot of friends in school. I used to be less interested in studying. What’s more. I was even absent from school and failed my exams. After that, my parents talked with me in person. With my teacher’s help, I worked harder and got good grades. Now I like studying and become a good student.
The biggest change in my life was I finally understood even though my parents were busy, my parents were always thinking of me. This is the most important change because I can feel my parents’ love. Their love changed me.
As you see, changes make me a better person.
Tips for writing:
★ Structure (结构): Beginning Body Ending
★ Linking words(连接词)
★ Correct grammar(语法): Correct tense(正确的时态) Word spelling(单词拼写)
★ Good handwriting (书写): Clean and neat (干净整洁)
★ Content(内容) : General introduction The biggest change The reason
3b.Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like Which change is the most important one, and why
Try to write two paragraphs.
Paragraph 1: General introduction about
the changes in your life
Paragraph 2: The most important change
and how it happened
Structure(结构)
Beginning : △
Main body: △
Ending: △
Linking words
(连接词)
Missing words (漏词)
Mistakes(错误)
Content(内容)
General introduction
The biggest change
The reason
Structure
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Linking words
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Correct grammar
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Good handwriting
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总体评价
Excellent
More than 21
Good
More than 16
Come on!
Less than 15
Content
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Some useful linking words:
firstly/ to begin/start with; then; besides; after that; therefore(因此); although; even though in a word; furthermore(而且); what’s more; with sb.’s help all in all;
on the one hand, on the other hand; last but not least(最后但也是最重要的是);…
How I've changed
My life has changed a lot in the last few years.
I used to______________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Now I'm ______________________________________.
The biggest change in my life was _______________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________. This is the most important
because ________________________________________________
__________________________________________.
You see, changes make me a better person.
Structure(结构)
Beginning : △
Main body: △
Ending: △
Linking words
(连接词)
Missing words (漏词)
Mistakes(错误)
Content(内容)
General introduction
The biggest change
The reason
Structure
(结构)
☆ ☆ ☆
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Linking words
(连接词)
☆ ☆ ☆
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Correct grammar
(语法)
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Good handwriting
(书写)
☆ ☆ ☆
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总体评价
Excellent
More than 21
Good
More than 16
Come on!
Less than 15
Content
(内容)
☆ ☆ ☆
☆ ☆
Excellent
≥21
Good
≥16
Come on
＜15
To live is to change, and to be perfect is to change often.
-Newman
Thank you so much for coming to my class! I hope all the students sitting here today could change yourself to be a better person!
Thank you!!!