(共12张PPT)
单元主题写作
本单元以“Feelings”为话题,谈论事物对我们情绪的影响。写作时要注意选择恰当的时态,准确地表达自己的感受。
[典型例题]
请你以“How to Make Our Life Happier?”为题,从好的生活习惯、健康的饮食习惯、良好的身体状况和保持乐观等方面写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1.条理清晰,语言流畅,用词准确,字迹工整;
2.词数:80左右。
[思路点拨]
[素材积累]
常用短语
1.保持健康_________________
keep/stay healthy
2.生活习惯__________________________
a living habit/living habits
3.熬夜_________
stay up
4.in one’s opinion _____________
在某人看来
5.build up one’s body ___________
强健体魄
6.be in good health ___________
身体健康
常用句子
1. In my opinion, keeping healthy will make our life happier.
在我看来,保持健康会使我们的生活更幸福。
2. If you often stay up, you will be in poor health.
如果你经常熬夜,你会变得不健康。
3.It’s necessary to know how to keep healthy.
了解如何保持健康是有必要的。
高分模板
How to Make Our Life Happier?
Different people have different ideas about happy life. ①In my opinion, keeping healthy will make our life happier.
②First, good living habits are necessary. We should get enough sleep and try not to stay up late. Second, we should have healthy eating habits. We’d better have the right kinds of food and stay away from smoking and drinking. Third, we should ③take more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, it’s important to keep happy every day.
④I hope by doing these we can be healthier and we can make our life happier.
名师点评
①作者用“In my opinion…”句式描述了自己的观点。
②此处的First和下文中的Second, Third, Finally相呼应,使第二段的结构更加清晰,层次更加分明。
③take more exercise和build up our bodies短语的使用,显示出作者良好的英语功底。
④该句是“I hope+宾语从句”句型,表达了作者的希望。
假如你是李华,你校校报Speak Out栏目正向全校征集关于“Something that made me happy or sad”的稿件,请你根据以下要点提示写一篇短文投稿。
要点提示:1.What’s the thing
2. When, where and how did it happen
3. How did it make you feel
4. What did you learn from it
要求:不少于100词,可适当发挥。
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One possible version:
Something that made me happy
Something that made me happy was winning the piano competition. It was held on September 20th in City Music Hall. On that day, I saw many people there. I was so nervous. I was worried I would make mistakes during my performance. Then I remembered what my father told me—always believe in yourself and you are the best. His
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(请把作文写到自己的练习本上吧!)
words made me feel much better. When it was my turn, I walked up to the piano with confidence and performed well. You wouldn’t believe how much I wanted to know the result. When I learned I won the first prize, I hugged my parents in excitement. This experience taught me that it is very important to have confidence in yourself.