天津河西区2019—2022学年第一学期期末高一质量检测英语应用文写作汇编
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2020-2021学年高一期末考试
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jim发来邮件询问你升入高中后遇到的最大挑战是什么。请给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 感谢Jim的关心;
2. 最大挑战及应对策略;
3. 向Jim征求建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
Glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2019-2020学年高一期末考试
假设你校英语学习报正在举办题为“My favorite sport”的征文活动,请你根据以下提示写一篇不少于100词的短文。内容要点如下:
What’s your favorite sport
Why do you like this sport
What benefits can you get from this sport
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2021-2022学年度第一学期期末考试
第二节 应用文写作(满分20分)
假设你是新华中学的高一学生李津,你的美国笔友Chris向你询问你校社团活动情况。正值你校社团纳新,请挑选一个你自己心仪的社团(戏剧社、音乐社、辩论社或羽毛球社),并用英语给Chris回复邮件。邮件包括以下内容:
1. 简要描述你校社团活动情况(社团种类;活动时间……);
2. 选择你要加入的社团并陈述原因;
3. 表达想要了解Chris学校社团情况的愿望。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:纳新take in new members 戏剧社 drama club
辩论社 debate club 羽毛球社 badminton club
Dear Chris,
Glad to hear from you again. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
LiJin
试卷第1页,共3页
111.Dear Jim,
Glad to hear from you. Thank you for your concern about my senior high school life.
Honestly speaking, the greatest challenge I have ever met since I entered high school is the English learning. Our English teacher speaks English the whole class, which is hard for me to follow. I knew I had to find a way out. So I referred to my deskmate’s notes after each class. At the same time, I spared some time every day to practise listening skills. To my relief, I have made some progress. Do you have any good suggestions for me
Yours,
Li Hua
112.One possible version (1)
My favorite sport
My favorite sport is football, which is a worldwide game. Everyone knows it and lots of people like it.
The reasons why I like it are as follows. First of all, it can fit my body. When I was young, I usually got sick, but after I played it, I became stronger than before. Secondly, I am fond of the feeling of high speed. While playing football, I have to rob the ball and run faster. Sometimes I can hear the sound of wind, I enjoy running in the wind. I feel so great. Last and the most important, playing football is my dream. I want to be a football player in the future.
In a word, playing football not only builds up my strength but also develops my personality. I believe one day my dream will come true.
One possible version (2)
My favorite sport
I like sports very much. But of all the sports I like playing basketball most, because I think playing basketball is very cool and interesting.
To begin with, playing basketball is a good way to make friends. We have common interests, so in my spare time, I often play basketball with my friends on the playground near my home. We have a good time when playing basketball together. Besides, the real reason why I like basketball is that I like NBA stars and the best basketball player in the history of the game I like is Michael Jordan. Last but not least, playing basketball is not only good for our health but also makes people excited.
Personally, it is easy to play basketball. I hope everyone love basketball, too. So we can play together, We can have a good time when playing football.
113.Dear Chris,
Glad to hear from you again. In your last letter, you asked me about our school clubs. It so happened that it was the right time for the clubs to take in new members. Based on my own interest, I have studied all the clubs and chose one favorite. Now let me introduce our school clubs first. There are many varieties of school clubs like debate club, music club, stage club and badminton club to satisfy our needs and interest. We often meet regularly on Tuesday afternoon, when we will have no other classes. That will be the most unforgettable time, I think.
As for me, I prefer music club. You know I have learnt piano for many years. And I want to learn more about music from others. What’s more, I can make more friends sharing the same interest with me. Life in senior high school is quite different. We are so busy every day. Therefore, that will be a golden opportunity for us students to relax ourselves.
Would you like to say something about your school clubs
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Jin
评分原则:
1. 本题总分为20分,按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于60从总分中减去2分,多写原则上不扣分。
4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文
的连贯性。
拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑
英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。如书写较差以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档 (17—20)分 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全完成了试题规定的任务。
第四档 (13—16分) 完成了试题规定的任务。 虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档 (9—12分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。 应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档 (5—8分) 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。 语法结构单调,词汇项目有限。 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档 (1—4分) 未完成试题规定的任务。 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。
0分 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判; 写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。