山东省青岛市黄岛区2019-2022学年高三上学期英语期末试卷汇编：读后续写（含答案）
文档属性
| 名称 | 山东省青岛市黄岛区2019-2022学年高三上学期英语期末试卷汇编：读后续写（含答案） |  | |
| 格式 | doc | ||
| 文件大小 | 24.7KB | ||
| 资源类型 | 教案 | ||
| 版本资源 | 外研版（2019） | ||
| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2022-11-24 12:56:54 | ||
图片预览
文档简介
山东省青岛市黄岛区
2019-2022学年高三上学期英语期末试卷汇编
读后续写
山东省青岛市黄岛区2021-2022学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题
第二节；（满分25分）
47. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I just want a normal birthday party,” April told Bailey as they walked home from school.
Bailey knew what April meant. April’s parents loved the environment. And because April happened to be born on Earth Day, all her parties had an Earth Day theme. “Remember when you turned seven ” Bailey said.
“How could I forget the Throw-Out Blowout ” said April.
“We helped out at your garage sale and donated the money to charity. And when you turned eight—”
“It was a Tree Spree,” finished April. “We planted maples.”
“Last year, we all collected newspapers to recycle,” said Bailey.
“The Print Sprint ” April groaned.
Bailey giggled. “I thought it was fun.”
Later that night, as April loaded the dishwasher, she said, “I’d like to plan my own party this year.”
“Sure,” said Mom, “We could have a Compost(堆肥) Carnival.”
“Great idea!” said Dad.
April cleared her throat “Pd like to go to Maze Craze(疯狂迷宫) instead.”
“Really ” said Dad, surprised.
“I guess we could do that,” said Mom.
April couldn’t wait for her birthday! She and her friends would have so much fun. And they wouldn’t have to think one bit about the earth.
The following weekend, everyone gathered in the parking lot outside of Maze Craze. “Thanks for coming,” said April “I’ve been so excited about my party. No shovels. No collecting recyclables. Nothing earthy about it.” She shifted her feet. “Then I got here this morning and saw this parking lot.”
April’s friends glanced around. Plastic bottles bounced across the cement. Newspapers and fast-food sacks blocked the storm drain. Shopping bags rustled in the trees.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Looking at the mess, April frowned(皱起眉头).
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
April looked at the bags with bottles, cans and paper to recycle and smiled.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
山东省青岛市黄岛区2020-2021学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题
第二节: 读后续写（满分25分）
47. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Devin was 16-year-old, who was a most hardworking boy. He took things seriously and always went all out for what he was doing. Recently, he had led his soccer team to the big game--Championship game, which was scheduled on Thursday afternoon.
For Devin, Thursday would be huge--the big soccer game in the afternoon, and the school’s autumn concert in the evening. Ms Poltis had chosen him to sing a brief solo. Devin couldn’t wait till Thursday.
As the team gathered after daily training on Tuesday afternoon, Coach said ”Be here by 6:30 on Thursday to warm up”. “Six thirty ” Devin asked. That didn’t sound right. Coach explained that it would be a night game and that they would play under the lights.
Devin’s heart sank. The concert was at 7:00, which was almost the same time as the game. He couldn’t possibly do both. He sat on the bench, pulling off his cleats (球鞋). His teammates were super excited. They were on the edge of a champion, and Devin was a big reason why. He led the league in scoring, and his soccer knowledge made him like a coach on the field. He couldn’t let his team down by skipping the game.
Devin frowned (皱眉). He would tell Ms Poltis in the morning. There were other kids could sing the solo. He wasn’t the best singer anyway, and he knew it.
That night, Devin lay in bed, staring at the ceiling. “No matter how hard the struggle, I will never let you down…”. The lyrics of the solo flew into his mind. The solo was only four lines in the middle of a song that the entire choir would sing, but every time he sang the song, he would be full of strength to carry on. His team was counting on him. The soccer game was a perfect excuse. But so was Ms Poltis. It was a long time before he fell asleep.
续写要求：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph1:
In the morning, hardly eating any breakfast, Devin went to school and straight to the music room.
Paragraph2:
Big day came and so many people came to watch tonight.
2020届山东省青岛市黄岛区高三上学期期末学业水平检测英语试题
第二节: 读后续写。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
47.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The McDonnells lived in a small brick house in Larchmont, a suburb of New York City. Jim was foreman of mail carriers at the post office where he had worked for 25 years. Married in 1960, he and Anne were childless.
On the evening of the eleventh anniversary of their marriage, carrying out the garbage, Jim McDonnell slipped on icy steps, and struck his head. A few days later, driving to work, he lost control of the car, hit a telephone pole, and banged his forehead against the windshield. The following day he fell off the stairs, and again he banged his head. Found unconscious, he was hospitalized for three days with a cerebral concussion (脑震荡). One day in the same month, Jim borrowed a friend’s station wagon and drove to Kennedy Airport to pick up Anne’s brother and family. When he returned the borrowed car at 10 p.m., he was unaware that the wallet containing his identification had slipped out of his pocket onto the floor of the car. After that, he was never seen again.
So what really happened to Anne’s husband During his walk home, Jim had indeed blacked out (昏厥), losing all ability to remember who he was and where he lived. What happened then is unclear. The next thing he knew was that he was in downtown Philadelphia, a city he had never visited before. Seeing signs advertising the services of a James Peters, a real estate broker, Jim adopted James Peters as his own name. He had no past; his only reality was the present. James Peters got a Social Security card, which could be obtained at that time without showing a birth certificate, and took a job in a health club. He next worked at a cancer research institute, cleaning out animal cages. He also got a night-shift job at the P&P luncheonette, where he became well known for his omelets (煎蛋卷), as well as his kindness and good humor.
注意：1．所续写的短文的词数应为150左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1：
About a month before Christmas 1985, colleagues noticed that Jim had grown unusually quiet and depressed.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
Anne had just returned home from Christmas Mass, where she lit candles and prayed for Jim.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案：
山东省青岛市黄岛区2021-2022学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题
【答案】Looking at the mess April frowned(皱起眉头). Though she had been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday, it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess. She turned around to her friends, “How about picking the trash first ” Her proposal was quickly approved by others and soon they were in business. April’s mum grabbed some gloves from the trunk while her dad managed to remove those shopping bags in the trees. With the bags , April and Bailey collected scattered bottles. By the drain, Josie and Tyler made great efforts to clear the blockage . Many hands make light work . In a short while, three bags were filled with cans and newspapers to recycle.
April looked at the bags with bottles, cans and paper to recycle and smiled. Then she looked up at her friends. Their neat clothes for the birthday party were soaked with sweat, but their faces glowed with satisfaction. It felt so good to do something for the earth. “Happy Earth Day, everyone,” said April. “How we are ready for Maze Craze.” “Happy Birthday, April!” shouted her friends.
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了April过生日在疯狂迷宫玩时，看到外面有很多垃圾，于是建议朋友们先捡垃圾，他们为参加生日聚会而穿的整洁衣服被汗水湿透了。但他们的脸上洋溢着满意的神情，能为地球做点事的感觉真好。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“看着这一团乱，April皱起了眉头”可知，第一段可描写April建议朋友们先捡垃圾，描述他们捡垃圾的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“April看着那些装着瓶子、罐子和废纸的袋子，笑了”可知，第二段可描写April对捡垃圾的感受以及朋友们的感觉。
2.续写线索：April皱眉——April建议捡垃圾——大家设法捡垃圾——April和朋友们感觉为地球做点事真好。
3.词汇激活
行为类
渴望：long for/desire
支持：approve/support
努力做某事：make great efforts to do sth. /take pains to do sth.
情绪类
困难：difficult/tough
良好：good/great
【点睛】[高分句型1] Though she had been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday, it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess.（由连接词Though引导让步状语从句）
[高分句型2] April’s mum grabbed some gloves from the trunk while her dad managed to remove those shopping bags in the trees.（由并列连词while引导并列句）
[高分句型3] Their neat clothes for the birthday party were soaked with sweat, but their faces glowed with satisfaction.（并列连词连接并列句，且句中使用一般过去时的被动语态）
山东省青岛市黄岛区2020-2021学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题
【答案】Paragraph1:
In the morning, hardly eating any breakfast, Devin went to school and straight to the music room. Noticing Devin looked worried, Ms. Poltis let him sit down and asked if he was nervous for the concert. Devin looked up at her, eyes filled with tears. Ms. Poltis smiled warmly and told him it was no secret that several other choir member had better singing voice than he did, but she chose him because he worked hard, like the person in the song. “Don’t be nervous. Be proud.” Ms. Poltis cheered him up.
Paragraph2:
Big day came and so many people came to watch tonight. Devin had made a difficult choice. He liked the song and he appreciated how kind Ms. Poltis always was. There would be other Championship games. He told Coach he had to miss the game and gave advice to his teammates on how to work together. The bright lights came on. Devin stayed calm, singing with confidence. “No matter how hard the struggle…” Devin finished the solo and smiled at Ms. Poltis. He was proud of the choice he made.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了主人公Devin在周四需要参加一场足球比赛和一场音乐会，他将在音乐会上独唱一曲。但是他发现足球比赛和音乐会将几乎在同一时间开始，他很苦恼。最后他在老师的鼓励下选择了参加音乐会。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“早上，Devin几乎没吃早饭，就去了学校，然后直接去了音乐室。”可知，第一段可描写Devin和音乐老师进行了一次谈话，老师鼓励了他。
②由第二段首句内容“大日子来了，这么多人来观看今晚的比赛。Devin做了一个艰难的选择。”可知，第二段可描写Devin选择参加音乐会并向足球教练解释。
2.续写线索：交谈——鼓励——选择——解释——独唱——骄傲
3.词汇激活
行为类
①注意到：notice/perceive
②选择：choose/select
③鼓励：cheer up/encourage
情绪类
①紧张：nervous/stressed
②骄傲：be proud of/take pride in
【点睛】[高分句型1]Noticing Devin looked worried, Ms. Poltis let him sit down and asked if he was nervous for the concert. （现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]Devin looked up at her, eyes filled with tears. （独立主格结构）
2020届山东省青岛市黄岛区高三上学期期末学业水平检测英语试题
【答案】About a month before Christmas 1985, colleagues noticed that Jim had grown unusually quiet and depressed. Something seemed to be turning in his mind. On December 22, Jim had fallen and banged his head. The next day at work he seemed distracted, and late that afternoon he had fallen again, striking his head. On December 24, he awoke feeling confused, yet delighted. After almost 15 years, he knew who he was! He was James A. McDonnell, Jr., of Larchmont, New York. His wife’s name was Anne.
Anne had just returned home from Christmas Mass, where she lit candles and prayed for Jim. A light snow was falling, and she was in a hurry to leave for Christmas dinner at her sister’s before the roads grew slick. Then the doorbell rang. "Oh my," she thought, "this is not a good time for a visitor." Anne opened the door — and saw a man with a full white beard. Immediately she recognized Jim. She couldn’t speak.
To Jim, Anne looked a little older, but prettier too. His heart overflowed.
“Hello, Anne,” he said.
【解析】
【分析】
本文为续写作文。续写作文首先要认真读懂所提供的材料，弄清整篇文章的中心，然后围绕文章中心，联系生活，运用想象，补续事情的发展和故事的结局。人物和事物要与原文保持连续性和一致性，融为一体。续写的文章要有明确的中心，重点要突出，详略要得当。
【详解】本文为读故事续写作文。根据提供的文章开头，续写成文，写出故事的延续。续写文章时要注意，一是根据所提供的文章开头、结尾或其他线索，明确续写的方向和路子。二是续写时，情节的发展要合乎逻辑，人物的思想要前后一致，叙述的语气上也要一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。续写短文的词数应为120左右。
【点睛】本文能围绕文章的中心，联系生活，运用想象，续写的内容非常生动，容与原文能保持了连续性和一致性，融为一体。续写的内容中心明确，重点突出，详略得当。故事情节的向后延续发展也非常合乎情理。文章中直接引语和间接引语相结合，句式以简单句为主，也恰当地运用了一些较高级的句式，如复杂句A light snow was falling, and she was in a hurry to leave for Christmas dinner at her sister’s before the roads grew slick。其中复合句最为灵活，如that引导的宾语从句...colleagues noticed that Jim had grown unusually quiet and depressed和 由what引导的宾语从句he knew who he was；由where引导的非限制性定语从句Anne had just returned home from Christmas Mass, where she lit candles and prayed for Jim。文中还有非谓语作状语... late that afternoon he had fallen again, striking his head等，这些语法结构的运用，使得所续写的部分与原文不仅一致，还生动形象。
2019-2022学年高三上学期英语期末试卷汇编
读后续写
山东省青岛市黄岛区2021-2022学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题
第二节；（满分25分）
47. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I just want a normal birthday party,” April told Bailey as they walked home from school.
Bailey knew what April meant. April’s parents loved the environment. And because April happened to be born on Earth Day, all her parties had an Earth Day theme. “Remember when you turned seven ” Bailey said.
“How could I forget the Throw-Out Blowout ” said April.
“We helped out at your garage sale and donated the money to charity. And when you turned eight—”
“It was a Tree Spree,” finished April. “We planted maples.”
“Last year, we all collected newspapers to recycle,” said Bailey.
“The Print Sprint ” April groaned.
Bailey giggled. “I thought it was fun.”
Later that night, as April loaded the dishwasher, she said, “I’d like to plan my own party this year.”
“Sure,” said Mom, “We could have a Compost(堆肥) Carnival.”
“Great idea!” said Dad.
April cleared her throat “Pd like to go to Maze Craze(疯狂迷宫) instead.”
“Really ” said Dad, surprised.
“I guess we could do that,” said Mom.
April couldn’t wait for her birthday! She and her friends would have so much fun. And they wouldn’t have to think one bit about the earth.
The following weekend, everyone gathered in the parking lot outside of Maze Craze. “Thanks for coming,” said April “I’ve been so excited about my party. No shovels. No collecting recyclables. Nothing earthy about it.” She shifted her feet. “Then I got here this morning and saw this parking lot.”
April’s friends glanced around. Plastic bottles bounced across the cement. Newspapers and fast-food sacks blocked the storm drain. Shopping bags rustled in the trees.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Looking at the mess, April frowned(皱起眉头).
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
April looked at the bags with bottles, cans and paper to recycle and smiled.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
山东省青岛市黄岛区2020-2021学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题
第二节: 读后续写（满分25分）
47. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Devin was 16-year-old, who was a most hardworking boy. He took things seriously and always went all out for what he was doing. Recently, he had led his soccer team to the big game--Championship game, which was scheduled on Thursday afternoon.
For Devin, Thursday would be huge--the big soccer game in the afternoon, and the school’s autumn concert in the evening. Ms Poltis had chosen him to sing a brief solo. Devin couldn’t wait till Thursday.
As the team gathered after daily training on Tuesday afternoon, Coach said ”Be here by 6:30 on Thursday to warm up”. “Six thirty ” Devin asked. That didn’t sound right. Coach explained that it would be a night game and that they would play under the lights.
Devin’s heart sank. The concert was at 7:00, which was almost the same time as the game. He couldn’t possibly do both. He sat on the bench, pulling off his cleats (球鞋). His teammates were super excited. They were on the edge of a champion, and Devin was a big reason why. He led the league in scoring, and his soccer knowledge made him like a coach on the field. He couldn’t let his team down by skipping the game.
Devin frowned (皱眉). He would tell Ms Poltis in the morning. There were other kids could sing the solo. He wasn’t the best singer anyway, and he knew it.
That night, Devin lay in bed, staring at the ceiling. “No matter how hard the struggle, I will never let you down…”. The lyrics of the solo flew into his mind. The solo was only four lines in the middle of a song that the entire choir would sing, but every time he sang the song, he would be full of strength to carry on. His team was counting on him. The soccer game was a perfect excuse. But so was Ms Poltis. It was a long time before he fell asleep.
续写要求：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph1:
In the morning, hardly eating any breakfast, Devin went to school and straight to the music room.
Paragraph2:
Big day came and so many people came to watch tonight.
2020届山东省青岛市黄岛区高三上学期期末学业水平检测英语试题
第二节: 读后续写。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
47.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The McDonnells lived in a small brick house in Larchmont, a suburb of New York City. Jim was foreman of mail carriers at the post office where he had worked for 25 years. Married in 1960, he and Anne were childless.
On the evening of the eleventh anniversary of their marriage, carrying out the garbage, Jim McDonnell slipped on icy steps, and struck his head. A few days later, driving to work, he lost control of the car, hit a telephone pole, and banged his forehead against the windshield. The following day he fell off the stairs, and again he banged his head. Found unconscious, he was hospitalized for three days with a cerebral concussion (脑震荡). One day in the same month, Jim borrowed a friend’s station wagon and drove to Kennedy Airport to pick up Anne’s brother and family. When he returned the borrowed car at 10 p.m., he was unaware that the wallet containing his identification had slipped out of his pocket onto the floor of the car. After that, he was never seen again.
So what really happened to Anne’s husband During his walk home, Jim had indeed blacked out (昏厥), losing all ability to remember who he was and where he lived. What happened then is unclear. The next thing he knew was that he was in downtown Philadelphia, a city he had never visited before. Seeing signs advertising the services of a James Peters, a real estate broker, Jim adopted James Peters as his own name. He had no past; his only reality was the present. James Peters got a Social Security card, which could be obtained at that time without showing a birth certificate, and took a job in a health club. He next worked at a cancer research institute, cleaning out animal cages. He also got a night-shift job at the P&P luncheonette, where he became well known for his omelets (煎蛋卷), as well as his kindness and good humor.
注意：1．所续写的短文的词数应为150左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1：
About a month before Christmas 1985, colleagues noticed that Jim had grown unusually quiet and depressed.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
Anne had just returned home from Christmas Mass, where she lit candles and prayed for Jim.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案：
山东省青岛市黄岛区2021-2022学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题
【答案】Looking at the mess April frowned(皱起眉头). Though she had been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday, it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess. She turned around to her friends, “How about picking the trash first ” Her proposal was quickly approved by others and soon they were in business. April’s mum grabbed some gloves from the trunk while her dad managed to remove those shopping bags in the trees. With the bags , April and Bailey collected scattered bottles. By the drain, Josie and Tyler made great efforts to clear the blockage . Many hands make light work . In a short while, three bags were filled with cans and newspapers to recycle.
April looked at the bags with bottles, cans and paper to recycle and smiled. Then she looked up at her friends. Their neat clothes for the birthday party were soaked with sweat, but their faces glowed with satisfaction. It felt so good to do something for the earth. “Happy Earth Day, everyone,” said April. “How we are ready for Maze Craze.” “Happy Birthday, April!” shouted her friends.
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了April过生日在疯狂迷宫玩时，看到外面有很多垃圾，于是建议朋友们先捡垃圾，他们为参加生日聚会而穿的整洁衣服被汗水湿透了。但他们的脸上洋溢着满意的神情，能为地球做点事的感觉真好。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“看着这一团乱，April皱起了眉头”可知，第一段可描写April建议朋友们先捡垃圾，描述他们捡垃圾的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“April看着那些装着瓶子、罐子和废纸的袋子，笑了”可知，第二段可描写April对捡垃圾的感受以及朋友们的感觉。
2.续写线索：April皱眉——April建议捡垃圾——大家设法捡垃圾——April和朋友们感觉为地球做点事真好。
3.词汇激活
行为类
渴望：long for/desire
支持：approve/support
努力做某事：make great efforts to do sth. /take pains to do sth.
情绪类
困难：difficult/tough
良好：good/great
【点睛】[高分句型1] Though she had been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday, it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess.（由连接词Though引导让步状语从句）
[高分句型2] April’s mum grabbed some gloves from the trunk while her dad managed to remove those shopping bags in the trees.（由并列连词while引导并列句）
[高分句型3] Their neat clothes for the birthday party were soaked with sweat, but their faces glowed with satisfaction.（并列连词连接并列句，且句中使用一般过去时的被动语态）
山东省青岛市黄岛区2020-2021学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题
【答案】Paragraph1:
In the morning, hardly eating any breakfast, Devin went to school and straight to the music room. Noticing Devin looked worried, Ms. Poltis let him sit down and asked if he was nervous for the concert. Devin looked up at her, eyes filled with tears. Ms. Poltis smiled warmly and told him it was no secret that several other choir member had better singing voice than he did, but she chose him because he worked hard, like the person in the song. “Don’t be nervous. Be proud.” Ms. Poltis cheered him up.
Paragraph2:
Big day came and so many people came to watch tonight. Devin had made a difficult choice. He liked the song and he appreciated how kind Ms. Poltis always was. There would be other Championship games. He told Coach he had to miss the game and gave advice to his teammates on how to work together. The bright lights came on. Devin stayed calm, singing with confidence. “No matter how hard the struggle…” Devin finished the solo and smiled at Ms. Poltis. He was proud of the choice he made.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了主人公Devin在周四需要参加一场足球比赛和一场音乐会，他将在音乐会上独唱一曲。但是他发现足球比赛和音乐会将几乎在同一时间开始，他很苦恼。最后他在老师的鼓励下选择了参加音乐会。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“早上，Devin几乎没吃早饭，就去了学校，然后直接去了音乐室。”可知，第一段可描写Devin和音乐老师进行了一次谈话，老师鼓励了他。
②由第二段首句内容“大日子来了，这么多人来观看今晚的比赛。Devin做了一个艰难的选择。”可知，第二段可描写Devin选择参加音乐会并向足球教练解释。
2.续写线索：交谈——鼓励——选择——解释——独唱——骄傲
3.词汇激活
行为类
①注意到：notice/perceive
②选择：choose/select
③鼓励：cheer up/encourage
情绪类
①紧张：nervous/stressed
②骄傲：be proud of/take pride in
【点睛】[高分句型1]Noticing Devin looked worried, Ms. Poltis let him sit down and asked if he was nervous for the concert. （现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]Devin looked up at her, eyes filled with tears. （独立主格结构）
2020届山东省青岛市黄岛区高三上学期期末学业水平检测英语试题
【答案】About a month before Christmas 1985, colleagues noticed that Jim had grown unusually quiet and depressed. Something seemed to be turning in his mind. On December 22, Jim had fallen and banged his head. The next day at work he seemed distracted, and late that afternoon he had fallen again, striking his head. On December 24, he awoke feeling confused, yet delighted. After almost 15 years, he knew who he was! He was James A. McDonnell, Jr., of Larchmont, New York. His wife’s name was Anne.
Anne had just returned home from Christmas Mass, where she lit candles and prayed for Jim. A light snow was falling, and she was in a hurry to leave for Christmas dinner at her sister’s before the roads grew slick. Then the doorbell rang. "Oh my," she thought, "this is not a good time for a visitor." Anne opened the door — and saw a man with a full white beard. Immediately she recognized Jim. She couldn’t speak.
To Jim, Anne looked a little older, but prettier too. His heart overflowed.
“Hello, Anne,” he said.
【解析】
【分析】
本文为续写作文。续写作文首先要认真读懂所提供的材料，弄清整篇文章的中心，然后围绕文章中心，联系生活，运用想象，补续事情的发展和故事的结局。人物和事物要与原文保持连续性和一致性，融为一体。续写的文章要有明确的中心，重点要突出，详略要得当。
【详解】本文为读故事续写作文。根据提供的文章开头，续写成文，写出故事的延续。续写文章时要注意，一是根据所提供的文章开头、结尾或其他线索，明确续写的方向和路子。二是续写时，情节的发展要合乎逻辑，人物的思想要前后一致，叙述的语气上也要一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。续写短文的词数应为120左右。
【点睛】本文能围绕文章的中心，联系生活，运用想象，续写的内容非常生动，容与原文能保持了连续性和一致性，融为一体。续写的内容中心明确，重点突出，详略得当。故事情节的向后延续发展也非常合乎情理。文章中直接引语和间接引语相结合，句式以简单句为主，也恰当地运用了一些较高级的句式，如复杂句A light snow was falling, and she was in a hurry to leave for Christmas dinner at her sister’s before the roads grew slick。其中复合句最为灵活，如that引导的宾语从句...colleagues noticed that Jim had grown unusually quiet and depressed和 由what引导的宾语从句he knew who he was；由where引导的非限制性定语从句Anne had just returned home from Christmas Mass, where she lit candles and prayed for Jim。文中还有非谓语作状语... late that afternoon he had fallen again, striking his head等，这些语法结构的运用，使得所续写的部分与原文不仅一致，还生动形象。