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山东省青岛市黄岛区
2019-2022学年高二上学期英语期末试卷汇编
读后续写
山东省青岛市黄岛区2021-2022学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
第二节 (满分25分)
67. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had a problem. Talent Night was coming up, but I had no talents.
Kate can make anything using origami (折纸). Tommy creates breath-taking beats on overturned plastic buckets. Olivia trains her petty dog to do tricks. And those are just my friends. My grade also boasts four dancers, a gymnast, two bakers, a yoga expert, six singers, and five artists, among others.
Every day my teacher asked if I’d decided what to do. And every day I reminded her that I had no talents.
“Nonsense, Benjamin,” she said. “You’ll think of something.”
“I’ll just have to be sick the day of the show,” I announced to my friends one afternoon. “If you get a cold, be sure to cough on me.”
“You must have a talent,” said Kate. “Let’s make a list. What are you good at ”
“Eating,” I answered. “Watching TV.”
Kate rolled her eyes. “Benjamin, be serious.”
“Tormenting (捉弄) my little brother.”
“Are you kidding me ” Kate looked at our friends. “Come on, guys. What are Benjamin’s talents ”
“He’s good with dogs,” said Olivia. “My dog adores him.”
“Oh, great,” I said. “I can sit on the stage while he licks my face. Benjamin Belinski, Human Dog Toy.”
“Benjamin’s funny and humorous,” said Tommy. He turned to me. “You could do a comedy routine.”
“Yeah. Every joke could be about how I have no talents,” I said.
“Benjamin,” said Kate, “maybe you don’t know how to juggle (变戏法), but your birthday parties are the best.”
“Yeah,” agreed Olivia, “and you always get us together to do stuff. Like having game nights or riding bikes after school—or when we held that yard sale. The week you had the flu we didn’t do anything fun.”
“You’re like the glue that holds us together,” added Tommy.
“Oh, great,” I said. “Benjamin Belinski, Human Glue Gun.”
But their comments got me thinking. Lying in bed that night, I came up with a plan so exciting that it took me two hours to fall asleep.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
In the morning, I couldn’t wait to tell my teacher.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
On the night of the big event, I felt so nervous that I had to force myself to eat dinner.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
山东省青岛市黄岛区2020-2021学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
第二节 (满分25分)
47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Paul and Marie lived in Hossegor, a fashionable seaside resort (度假村) on the Atlantic coast of southern France. They were both in their late fifties. She had dark eyes and black hair while he was a little taller, with gray eyes.
They started a small company when they were young. Through many years of hard work, they established themselves against strong competition. They always worked many hours every day together in their office, often until late into the night, even on weekends, knowing that only very good work would provide them with loyal customers and success.
After years, they were able to buy a pretty little apartment in a modern building with a balcony (阳台) overlooking a large and beautiful garden that featured a beautiful lawn, some decorative bushes all around, some trees here and there, a small pond in the middle, and even a decorative fountain.
Inside their apartment, everything was very tidy, yet a bit artistic. There were some nice pictures on the walls—dreams of beauty in nature—and on a glass shelf, Paul’s collection of toy locomotives (火车头), symbols of his dreams of exciting travel. Actually Marie had been interested in drawing and painting since she was a little girl, but she has no time to develop her talent because of her busy work.
Thus went week after week and year after year until a terrible accident happened to their company, causing a heavy financial loss to them. One of their ships, carrying a variety of goods, knocked into a floating iceberg on its trip to America. As a result, the ship got very badly damaged with all its goods and staff on board. When the couple heard the bad news about their ship they burst into tears. Paul became greatly depressed while Marie, who felt less desperate (绝望的) then, tried her best to calm him down by saying that everything would be all right as long as they didn’t lose heart. Gradually, Paul managed to calm himself down and began to face reality. Consequently, they had no choice but to close their company.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1:
It was not long before they had difficulty in supporting themselves.
Paragraph2:
One day they went to an art exhibit in town.
山东省青岛市黄岛区2019-2020学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
第二节 读后续写。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
47.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“It’s not looking too good, darling, I think you’d better pack a few things and go to your mother’s place. And you’d better take Rosie and Monty with you.”
Putting down the phone, Sara sighed. Tomorrow was her husband Tony’s birthday. She had planned to cook him a nice meal and then surprise him with the new mountain bike she’d bought for him. If she went to her mother’s house, Tony wouldn’t get his present for days.
However, her mother’s house was the best place to be right now. Being on higher land, it would be safe from the floods. It had been raining heavily for almost two weeks and the river near Sara and Tony’s house was rising higher and higher all the time. Tony and others from the village had spent the last two days putting sandbags along the side of the river to stop it from overflowing. Now they feared that their hard work had been useless and soon the whole valley would be flooded.
Sara dressed baby James in warm clothes and collected the things she would need for him over the next few days. She put the lead on the dog and went in search of Monty, the cat. It took her a long time, but eventually she found him safe and warm under the covers on her bed. She placed him in his cat basket and took him into the kitchen where James and the dog, Rosie, were waiting.
Just as she was reaching for the car keys, Sarah heard a sound like the noise bath water makes when you pull out the plug. She looked at the backdoor, water was flowing in underneath. Turning around, she saw dirty brown water fountaining out of the drain and filling the sink. Realizing that they were trapped by the flood and it became impossible for her to drive out, quickly she put James into her backpack and pulled onto her back. Calling to Rosie, she picked up the cat basket and ran to the front of the house and out into the front garden, where the car was parked.
注意:
1.所续写的短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
The water was already up to her knees, and Rosie was swimming beside her.
_____________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Sara, together with James, Rosie and Monty, was hungry and frightened on the roof of the house when a boat appeared in the distance.
_____________________________________________________________________________
答案：
山东省青岛市黄岛区2021-2022学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
【答案】In the morning, I couldn’t wait to tell my teacher. I zoom past my friends huddled together on the playground and run into the classroom. “That’s a marvelous idea, Benjamin,” she says.“Resourceful, original, and true to who you are.” I felt thrilled at my teacher's words. In the next few weeks, I write a zillion lists, make sure every item gets checked off, and ask a lot of people to do jobs. Kate agrees to make twelve origami centerpieces. I ask a variety store to donate lanterns. I get the principal's permission to cover the school's tables with blue and yellow paper.
On the night of the big event, I felt so nervous that I had to force myself to eat dinner. “The gym looks magical,” my teacher says. “This place has been completely transformed, ” I hear one visitor whisper. When the show begins, each person with an act knows his or her place in the lineup. Tommy wows us with his drumming. The singers stay in tune throughout their songs. The gymnast astonishes us with handsprings and back walkovers.
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了才艺之夜即将到来，但是Benjamin觉得自己没有什么才艺，朋友们给他一些建议，这引起了他的思考，想出了一个令人兴奋的计划。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“早上，我迫不及待地想告诉我的老师。”可知，第一段可描写Benjamin的想法，老师的评价及具体实施方法。
②由第二段首句内容“在那次大型活动的晚上，我感到非常紧张，我不得不强迫自己吃晚饭。”可知，第二段可描写Benjamin的想法对才艺秀的影响。
2.续写线索：冲进教室——实施——人们评价——影响
3.词汇激活
行为类
①冲进：run into/rush into
②写清单：write lists/make lists
③改变：transform/change
情绪类
①兴奋的：thrilled/excited
【点睛】[高分句型1]In the next few weeks, I write a zillion lists, make sure every item gets checked off, and ask a lot of people to do jobs.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句，省略了引导词that）
[高分句型2]When the show begins, each person with an act knows his or her place in the lineup.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句）
山东省青岛市黄岛区2020-2021学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
【答案】It was not long before they had difficulty in supporting themselves. In reality they were unable to afford some necessities in life such as food and clothes, let alone the luxuries that they had been used to possessing. Gradually Paul came up with an idea to sell their apartment to overcome the financial obstacles but it was rejected by Marie instantly. After all, the apartment meant a lot to them and selling it was apparently unbearable. However, what other ways could they find to solve the problem
One day they went to an art exhibit in town. There they saw a picture about a scene of their town but they agreed that it was not impressive. No sooner had Marie returned home than she set about drawing a picture about the same scene. Surprisingly Paul praised her for it and encouraged her to draw more, which greatly increased her confidence. What was more satisfying to them was that a friend offered to purchase it at a high price. It was then that the turning point of their life really arrived.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索。主要讲述了两人创办了一家小公司，每天努力工作，给他们带来了忠实的客户和成功，甚至还买带阳台的漂亮小公寓。因为工作，Marie都没有时间发展自己画画的爱好。然而，公司发生了一次严重的事故，他们的其中一艘载有各种货物的船在前往美国的旅程中撞上了浮冰山，给他们造成了沉重的经济损失。公司关闭，生活难以维持，他们如何想办法解决问题。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“没多久，他们就难以养活他们自己。”可知，第一段可描写他们公司关闭后艰难的生活。
②由第二段首句内容“有一天，他们去了城里的一个艺术展览。”可知，第二段可描写他们通过这次展览他们想出的解决问题的办法。
2.续写线索：生活难以度日——卖公寓——看画展获得办法——绘画作品——朋友购买——生活出现转机
3.词汇激活
行为类
养活自己：support themselves/ earn their living/feed themselves
增加信心：increased her confidence/ didn’t lose heart
情绪类
消极：desperate/upset
积极：satisfying/glad/desireable
【点睛】[高分句型1] In reality they were unable to afford some necessities in life such as food and clothes, let alone the luxuries that they had been used to possessing.使用了that引导限制性定语从句。高分词汇were unable to do，let alone。
[高分句型2] No sooner had Marie returned home than she set about drawing a picture about the same scene.使用了no sooner …than句型，“一……就……”位于句首倒装。
[高分句型3] What was more satisfying to them was that a friend offered to purchase it at a high price.该句前半句what引导主语从句，在从句中做主语。后半句that引导表语从句。
山东省青岛市黄岛区2019-2020学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
【答案】The water was already up to her knees. Rosie was swimming beside her. Knowing the water would soon be much deeper, Sara ran to the car and opened the doors. She threw the cat basket onto the roof of the car and pushed Rosie up beside it. Using the car seat as a step she climbed first onto the front of the car and then onto the roof. James, safely attached to her back, made no sound at all.Sara stared down at the water which was rushing past the car. It was already half way up the doors, and still rising.
Sara, together with James, Rosie and Monty, was hungry and frightened on the roof of the house when a boat appeared in the distance.They were extremely happy and shouted at the boat “here!here!”,but the boat seemed not to head for their direction. Roise was worried and anxious, then they four shouted at the boat together “help!help! here we are”. Luckily, the people on the boat replied to them. They were rescued and the warm—hearted people sent them to Rosie mother’s place. They showed their sincere gratitude to the people who helped them in need.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，由于洪水Roise不得不去妈妈家避难，但正在她准备带着孩子们上车时，洪水淹没了她们的家，她们被洪水困住了，由此展开后面的故事。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：水已经淹到她的膝盖了。罗西在她旁边游泳……所以接下来应该描述她们是怎么自救的。第二段开头是：萨拉、詹姆斯、罗西和蒙蒂在房顶上又饿又害怕，这时远处出现了一条船。本段应该写她们是不是得救了，远处的船是否过来帮助了他们。注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，情节完整且要符合逻辑。最后按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：be attached to，pushed sb up，together with等高级词汇；定语从句They showed their sincere gratitude to the people who helped them in need.以及动名词作伴随状语Using the car seat as a step she climbed first onto the front of the car and then onto the roof.，James, safely attached to her back, made no sound at all等高级句式。
2019-2022学年高二上学期英语期末试卷汇编
读后续写
山东省青岛市黄岛区2021-2022学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
第二节 (满分25分)
67. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had a problem. Talent Night was coming up, but I had no talents.
Kate can make anything using origami (折纸). Tommy creates breath-taking beats on overturned plastic buckets. Olivia trains her petty dog to do tricks. And those are just my friends. My grade also boasts four dancers, a gymnast, two bakers, a yoga expert, six singers, and five artists, among others.
Every day my teacher asked if I’d decided what to do. And every day I reminded her that I had no talents.
“Nonsense, Benjamin,” she said. “You’ll think of something.”
“I’ll just have to be sick the day of the show,” I announced to my friends one afternoon. “If you get a cold, be sure to cough on me.”
“You must have a talent,” said Kate. “Let’s make a list. What are you good at ”
“Eating,” I answered. “Watching TV.”
Kate rolled her eyes. “Benjamin, be serious.”
“Tormenting (捉弄) my little brother.”
“Are you kidding me ” Kate looked at our friends. “Come on, guys. What are Benjamin’s talents ”
“He’s good with dogs,” said Olivia. “My dog adores him.”
“Oh, great,” I said. “I can sit on the stage while he licks my face. Benjamin Belinski, Human Dog Toy.”
“Benjamin’s funny and humorous,” said Tommy. He turned to me. “You could do a comedy routine.”
“Yeah. Every joke could be about how I have no talents,” I said.
“Benjamin,” said Kate, “maybe you don’t know how to juggle (变戏法), but your birthday parties are the best.”
“Yeah,” agreed Olivia, “and you always get us together to do stuff. Like having game nights or riding bikes after school—or when we held that yard sale. The week you had the flu we didn’t do anything fun.”
“You’re like the glue that holds us together,” added Tommy.
“Oh, great,” I said. “Benjamin Belinski, Human Glue Gun.”
But their comments got me thinking. Lying in bed that night, I came up with a plan so exciting that it took me two hours to fall asleep.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
In the morning, I couldn’t wait to tell my teacher.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
On the night of the big event, I felt so nervous that I had to force myself to eat dinner.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
山东省青岛市黄岛区2020-2021学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
第二节 (满分25分)
47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Paul and Marie lived in Hossegor, a fashionable seaside resort (度假村) on the Atlantic coast of southern France. They were both in their late fifties. She had dark eyes and black hair while he was a little taller, with gray eyes.
They started a small company when they were young. Through many years of hard work, they established themselves against strong competition. They always worked many hours every day together in their office, often until late into the night, even on weekends, knowing that only very good work would provide them with loyal customers and success.
After years, they were able to buy a pretty little apartment in a modern building with a balcony (阳台) overlooking a large and beautiful garden that featured a beautiful lawn, some decorative bushes all around, some trees here and there, a small pond in the middle, and even a decorative fountain.
Inside their apartment, everything was very tidy, yet a bit artistic. There were some nice pictures on the walls—dreams of beauty in nature—and on a glass shelf, Paul’s collection of toy locomotives (火车头), symbols of his dreams of exciting travel. Actually Marie had been interested in drawing and painting since she was a little girl, but she has no time to develop her talent because of her busy work.
Thus went week after week and year after year until a terrible accident happened to their company, causing a heavy financial loss to them. One of their ships, carrying a variety of goods, knocked into a floating iceberg on its trip to America. As a result, the ship got very badly damaged with all its goods and staff on board. When the couple heard the bad news about their ship they burst into tears. Paul became greatly depressed while Marie, who felt less desperate (绝望的) then, tried her best to calm him down by saying that everything would be all right as long as they didn’t lose heart. Gradually, Paul managed to calm himself down and began to face reality. Consequently, they had no choice but to close their company.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1:
It was not long before they had difficulty in supporting themselves.
Paragraph2:
One day they went to an art exhibit in town.
山东省青岛市黄岛区2019-2020学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
第二节 读后续写。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
47.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“It’s not looking too good, darling, I think you’d better pack a few things and go to your mother’s place. And you’d better take Rosie and Monty with you.”
Putting down the phone, Sara sighed. Tomorrow was her husband Tony’s birthday. She had planned to cook him a nice meal and then surprise him with the new mountain bike she’d bought for him. If she went to her mother’s house, Tony wouldn’t get his present for days.
However, her mother’s house was the best place to be right now. Being on higher land, it would be safe from the floods. It had been raining heavily for almost two weeks and the river near Sara and Tony’s house was rising higher and higher all the time. Tony and others from the village had spent the last two days putting sandbags along the side of the river to stop it from overflowing. Now they feared that their hard work had been useless and soon the whole valley would be flooded.
Sara dressed baby James in warm clothes and collected the things she would need for him over the next few days. She put the lead on the dog and went in search of Monty, the cat. It took her a long time, but eventually she found him safe and warm under the covers on her bed. She placed him in his cat basket and took him into the kitchen where James and the dog, Rosie, were waiting.
Just as she was reaching for the car keys, Sarah heard a sound like the noise bath water makes when you pull out the plug. She looked at the backdoor, water was flowing in underneath. Turning around, she saw dirty brown water fountaining out of the drain and filling the sink. Realizing that they were trapped by the flood and it became impossible for her to drive out, quickly she put James into her backpack and pulled onto her back. Calling to Rosie, she picked up the cat basket and ran to the front of the house and out into the front garden, where the car was parked.
注意:
1.所续写的短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
The water was already up to her knees, and Rosie was swimming beside her.
_____________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Sara, together with James, Rosie and Monty, was hungry and frightened on the roof of the house when a boat appeared in the distance.
_____________________________________________________________________________
答案：
山东省青岛市黄岛区2021-2022学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
【答案】In the morning, I couldn’t wait to tell my teacher. I zoom past my friends huddled together on the playground and run into the classroom. “That’s a marvelous idea, Benjamin,” she says.“Resourceful, original, and true to who you are.” I felt thrilled at my teacher's words. In the next few weeks, I write a zillion lists, make sure every item gets checked off, and ask a lot of people to do jobs. Kate agrees to make twelve origami centerpieces. I ask a variety store to donate lanterns. I get the principal's permission to cover the school's tables with blue and yellow paper.
On the night of the big event, I felt so nervous that I had to force myself to eat dinner. “The gym looks magical,” my teacher says. “This place has been completely transformed, ” I hear one visitor whisper. When the show begins, each person with an act knows his or her place in the lineup. Tommy wows us with his drumming. The singers stay in tune throughout their songs. The gymnast astonishes us with handsprings and back walkovers.
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了才艺之夜即将到来，但是Benjamin觉得自己没有什么才艺，朋友们给他一些建议，这引起了他的思考，想出了一个令人兴奋的计划。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“早上，我迫不及待地想告诉我的老师。”可知，第一段可描写Benjamin的想法，老师的评价及具体实施方法。
②由第二段首句内容“在那次大型活动的晚上，我感到非常紧张，我不得不强迫自己吃晚饭。”可知，第二段可描写Benjamin的想法对才艺秀的影响。
2.续写线索：冲进教室——实施——人们评价——影响
3.词汇激活
行为类
①冲进：run into/rush into
②写清单：write lists/make lists
③改变：transform/change
情绪类
①兴奋的：thrilled/excited
【点睛】[高分句型1]In the next few weeks, I write a zillion lists, make sure every item gets checked off, and ask a lot of people to do jobs.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句，省略了引导词that）
[高分句型2]When the show begins, each person with an act knows his or her place in the lineup.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句）
山东省青岛市黄岛区2020-2021学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
【答案】It was not long before they had difficulty in supporting themselves. In reality they were unable to afford some necessities in life such as food and clothes, let alone the luxuries that they had been used to possessing. Gradually Paul came up with an idea to sell their apartment to overcome the financial obstacles but it was rejected by Marie instantly. After all, the apartment meant a lot to them and selling it was apparently unbearable. However, what other ways could they find to solve the problem
One day they went to an art exhibit in town. There they saw a picture about a scene of their town but they agreed that it was not impressive. No sooner had Marie returned home than she set about drawing a picture about the same scene. Surprisingly Paul praised her for it and encouraged her to draw more, which greatly increased her confidence. What was more satisfying to them was that a friend offered to purchase it at a high price. It was then that the turning point of their life really arrived.
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【分析】
本文以人物为线索。主要讲述了两人创办了一家小公司，每天努力工作，给他们带来了忠实的客户和成功，甚至还买带阳台的漂亮小公寓。因为工作，Marie都没有时间发展自己画画的爱好。然而，公司发生了一次严重的事故，他们的其中一艘载有各种货物的船在前往美国的旅程中撞上了浮冰山，给他们造成了沉重的经济损失。公司关闭，生活难以维持，他们如何想办法解决问题。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“没多久，他们就难以养活他们自己。”可知，第一段可描写他们公司关闭后艰难的生活。
②由第二段首句内容“有一天，他们去了城里的一个艺术展览。”可知，第二段可描写他们通过这次展览他们想出的解决问题的办法。
2.续写线索：生活难以度日——卖公寓——看画展获得办法——绘画作品——朋友购买——生活出现转机
3.词汇激活
行为类
养活自己：support themselves/ earn their living/feed themselves
增加信心：increased her confidence/ didn’t lose heart
情绪类
消极：desperate/upset
积极：satisfying/glad/desireable
【点睛】[高分句型1] In reality they were unable to afford some necessities in life such as food and clothes, let alone the luxuries that they had been used to possessing.使用了that引导限制性定语从句。高分词汇were unable to do，let alone。
[高分句型2] No sooner had Marie returned home than she set about drawing a picture about the same scene.使用了no sooner …than句型，“一……就……”位于句首倒装。
[高分句型3] What was more satisfying to them was that a friend offered to purchase it at a high price.该句前半句what引导主语从句，在从句中做主语。后半句that引导表语从句。
山东省青岛市黄岛区2019-2020学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
【答案】The water was already up to her knees. Rosie was swimming beside her. Knowing the water would soon be much deeper, Sara ran to the car and opened the doors. She threw the cat basket onto the roof of the car and pushed Rosie up beside it. Using the car seat as a step she climbed first onto the front of the car and then onto the roof. James, safely attached to her back, made no sound at all.Sara stared down at the water which was rushing past the car. It was already half way up the doors, and still rising.
Sara, together with James, Rosie and Monty, was hungry and frightened on the roof of the house when a boat appeared in the distance.They were extremely happy and shouted at the boat “here!here!”,but the boat seemed not to head for their direction. Roise was worried and anxious, then they four shouted at the boat together “help!help! here we are”. Luckily, the people on the boat replied to them. They were rescued and the warm—hearted people sent them to Rosie mother’s place. They showed their sincere gratitude to the people who helped them in need.
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【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，由于洪水Roise不得不去妈妈家避难，但正在她准备带着孩子们上车时，洪水淹没了她们的家，她们被洪水困住了，由此展开后面的故事。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：水已经淹到她的膝盖了。罗西在她旁边游泳……所以接下来应该描述她们是怎么自救的。第二段开头是：萨拉、詹姆斯、罗西和蒙蒂在房顶上又饿又害怕，这时远处出现了一条船。本段应该写她们是不是得救了，远处的船是否过来帮助了他们。注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，情节完整且要符合逻辑。最后按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：be attached to，pushed sb up，together with等高级词汇；定语从句They showed their sincere gratitude to the people who helped them in need.以及动名词作伴随状语Using the car seat as a step she climbed first onto the front of the car and then onto the roof.，James, safely attached to her back, made no sound at all等高级句式。