天津市和平区2019-2022三年高三上学期英语期末试卷汇编
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天津市和平区2021-2022学年高三上学期期末质量检测英语试题(解析版)
第二节:书面表达(满分25分)
61. 假如你是晨光中学李津。你被选为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者。你的英国网友Chris来信对你表示祝贺,并询问你作为志愿者工作要做何准备。请根据以下要点,给他写一封回信。
(1)感谢他的祝贺和关心;
(2)志愿者工作要做的准备,至少提及两个方面。(如:传统习俗、语言、能力等方面)
(3)询问Chris对你的工作的建议。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
天津市和平区2020-2021学年高三上学期期末质量检测英语试题(解析版)
第二节:书面表达(满分25分)
61. 假如你是李响。由于招生人数的增加,你所在城市的很多高校需要扩建,但是苦于缺少用地,你看到班里来自澳人利亚的交换生Kingsley在他的blog里建议在城市南部的湿地(wetland)附近修一个大学城(university town)请你给他留言,说明你的观点。
(1)同意或者不同意他的建议;
(2)说明理由(如对环境的影响,对学生生活的影响等);
(3)你建议。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当增加细节使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Having read your suggestion in your blog,
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天津市和平区2019-2020学年高三上学期期末质量检测英语试题(解析版)
第二节:书面表达(满分 25 分)
61. 假设你是晨光中学的高三学生李津,最近你美国的笔友 Brown 来信说他的学校利用网络辅助老师教学和学生学习,深受师生欢迎。他想了解你的学校是否也有这样的网络教学。 请你给他回一封信,主要内容如下:
(1)学校有一个叫 SmartPage 的网站;
(2)师生如何利用网站以及对这种学习方式的看法(如:是否有助于学习等等);
(3)自己的体验和感受。注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)可以适当增加细节使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Brown,
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Yours,
Li Jin
答案:
天津市和平区2021-2022学年高三上学期期末质量检测英语试题(解析版)
【答案】Dear Chris,
I have heard from you. Knowing that you congratulated me on being selected as a volunteer for the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, I sincerely thank you. Thank you for your concern.
I have learned a lot about traditional customs around the world and in our country, which is very important for volunteer work. I have the ability to receive foreign guests. I am good at English and good at communicating with people. I can make better use of my spoken English.
I hope you can give me valuable advice on my volunteer work. I look forward to hearing from you again.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友Chris写封回信,感谢他对本人成为冬奥会志愿者的祝贺、介绍志愿者工作的准备并征求建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
收到……来信:get a letter from→hear from
擅长:do well in→be good at
口头的:oral→spoken
建议:suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Knowing that you congratulated me on being selected as a volunteer for the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, I sincerely thank you.
拓展句:When I know that you congratulated me on being selected as a volunteer for the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, I sincerely thank you.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that you congratulated me on being selected as a volunteer for the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, I sincerely thank you. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]I have learned a lot about traditional customs around the world and in our country, which is very important for volunteer work. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
天津市和平区2020-2021学年高三上学期期末质量检测英语试题(解析版)
【答案】Having read your suggestion in your blog. I totally agree with your idea that a university town should be constructed in the wetland in the south of the city. The reasons are as follows. First of all, it can make full use of the wetland, which will definitely bring great positive effect on the wetland and the areas around. Not only will it contribute to creating more jobs in relevant fields, but it will also promote the development of the whole city. What really counts is that it will bring a lot of convenience to the university students in terms of transportation and daily life services. In order to make the plan go smoothly, an in-depth research must be carried out. No damage to the environment should be the first priority.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文,要求考生就澳人利亚的交换生Kingsley在他的blog里建议在城市南部的湿地(wetland)附近修一个大学城(university town)发表观点。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:议论文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 同意或者不同意他的建议;
2. 说明理由(如对环境的影响,对学生生活的影响等);
3. 你的建议。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
agree with; as follows; make full use of; bring great positive effect on; contribute to; in terms of; carry out
第三步:连词成句
1. I totally agree with your idea that a university town should be constructed in the wetland in the south of the city.
2. The reasons are as follows.
3. First of all, it can make full use of the wetland, which will definitely bring great positive effect on the wetland and the areas around.
4. Not only will it contribute to creating more jobs in relevant fields, but it will also promote the development of the whole city.
5. What really counts is that it will bring a lot of convenience to the university students in terms of transportation and daily life services.
6. In order to make the plan go smoothly, an in-depth research must be carried out.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all
2.表并列补充关系: not only…but (also)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]:I totally agree with your idea that a university town should be constructed in the wetland in the south of the city.这句话运用了that引导的同位语从句。
[高分句型2]:First of all, it can make full use of the wetland, which will definitely bring great positive effect on the wetland and the areas around. 这句话运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句。
[高分句型3]:What really counts is that it will bring a lot of convenience to the university students in terms of transportation and daily life services. 这句话运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
天津市和平区2019-2020学年高三上学期期末质量检测英语试题(解析版)
【答案】Dear Brown,
I am very delighted to receive your letter, asking about whether we have Internet Assisted Teaching. Now, I'd like to share with you some detailed information about it.
Actually, we do have a specially designed website called Smartpage for both teachers and students. Teachers are able to do some office work on it, including assigning homework, and carrying out tests while students have free and easy access to the digital resources of the library, which seems very convenient and beneficial to their academic work.
By taking full advantage of it myself I have been making great progress in my studies, especially in English and Chinese, which brings me a lot of hope and confidence. I really hope more teachers and students can make full use of Smartpage to improve their work and studies.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信, 给笔友(pen friend)Brown介绍自己学校的网络教学的使用情况及个人感受。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:文章主要介绍自己学校对网络教学的使用情况,所以时态用一般现在时。
结构:总分法。总说自己学校有使用网络教学,之后分说师生如何利用及其优点,最后表达自己的体验和感受。
第二步:列提纲(可能用到的词汇和短语)
be delighted to do, share with, be able to do, office work, assign homework, carry out tests, have free and easy access to the digital resources, convenient and beneficial, taking full advantage of, make great progress, hope and confidence,
第三步:连词成句
I am very delighted to receive your letter.
I'd like to share with you some detailed information about it.
We do have a specially designed website called Smartpage.
Teachers are able to do some office work on it.
Students have free and easy access to the digital resources of the library,
It seems very convenient and beneficial to their academic work.
I have been making great progress in my studies,
It brings me a lot of hope and confidence.
第四步:连句成篇
1. 用现在分词作状语表达句式:I am very delighted to receive your letter, asking about whether we have Internet Assisted Teaching.
2. 用连词while合并句子:Teachers are able to do some office work on it, including assigning homework, and carrying out tests while students have free and easy access to the digital resources of the library.
3. 用非限制定定语从句:
(1)which seems very convenient and beneficial to their academic work
(2)which brings me a lot of hope and confidence
4. 用现在完成进行时:
By taking full advantage of it myself, I have been making great progress in my studies.
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。篇章中句式多样,显示了作者对词汇和句式应用的熟练。如范文中词汇用到了:have free and easy access to the digital resources, convenient and beneficial, taking full advantage of;句式使用了(1)现在分词作状语表达句式:I am very delighted to receive your letter, asking about whether we have Internet Assisted Teaching. (2)用连词while合并句子:Teachers are able to do some office work on it, including assigning homework, and carrying out tests while students have free and easy access to the digital resources of the library.(3)用非限制定定语从句:①Which seems very convenient and beneficial to their academic work. ② Which brings me a lot of hope and confidence.(4)用现在完成进行时:By taking full advantage of it myself, I have been making great progress in my studies.因而,写作中丰富的词汇和变化多样的句式对优秀的写作无疑是起锦上添花的作用。