外研版九年级上册Module 6 Problems 写作课件(共15张PPT)

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Module 6 Problems
【模块写作目标】
能描述自己或他人在学习与生活中所遇到的问题，并向他人
提出解决问题的建议。
1. 能用含 “If” 的条件状语从句表达建议。
2. 写作微技能：语言丰富性策略的运用——不同句式表达相同含义(二)。
【作品赏析，以读促写】
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jane写信告诉你因过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑万分(test anxiety)。请你给她回复一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。
Dear Jane,
①Nice to receive your letter. I am sorry to hear that you are always upset about exams. Here are my suggestions. I hope that they can help you out.
②First of all, it’s common to be upset before exams. Exams are important to every student. You need to have a right attitude toward exams. You should go over your lessons before you forget what you have learnt. Try to be confident. Second, you are supposed to pay much attention to learning process instead of the results. Just try to make your learning process perfect, then you can do well in your exams. What’s more, you can do something to relax yourself before exams. For example, it is a good idea to listen to some music and do some sports to reduce your pressure. Last but not least, you’d better have good sleep and a balanced diet before an exam. In this way, you can avoid your worries.
◆赏结构
段落①
开门见山描述Jane的问题——be upset about the exams。
段落②围绕问题，提出具体的建议。
③Generally speaking, you can benefit a lot from exams. If you don’t worry about them, you will certainly get good results. I strongly believe that you can deal with it.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
段落③结论段落，起着点题收尾作用。
本习作的结构体现问题与建议的文本结构特点，即首段为问题，第二段为建议，尾段为总结。
◆赏内容和赏语言
在内容上，作者根据写作要求，主体部分通过考试的
作用、学习过程的重要性、考前放松以及睡眠与平衡饮食等方面，对Jane考试焦虑问题的解决起到很大的帮助。内容选取合理，且能精准、清晰描述了具体建议，具有很强的内容逻辑。
◆赏内容和赏语言
在语言上，通过不同句式表达建议，体现了语言的丰富性。同时，运用了合理的衔接词，增加了文本的逻辑性。递进类的衔接词有：firstly, secondly, thirdly... 或first, second, what’s more, besides, in addition, furthermore, last but not least。
表达建议的句式有：You should/had better/need to/are supposed to/...; It is a good idea to do...; It is important /necessary... to do...; What/How about... Why not/Why don’t you... If you..., you will...等。
表达问题的句式有：I am bad at/have difficulty in/have trouble in/have problems in...; It is difficult for me to...; have some trouble with sb.等。
【写作微技能强化训练】语言丰富性策略在写作中的运用——不同句式表达相同含义(二)
“不同句式表达相同含义” 具体概念在模块5话题写作提升中已经描述，这里不再赘述。请运用不同句式表达相同含义策略，根据表格中的信息，完成下面问题与建议小片段。
▲Problems:
Name Problems Name Problems
Lucy read very slowly Tom can’t get on well with others
Betty can’t remember new words Tony always feel tired
As teenagers, we have lots of different problems.
▲Suggestions:
I am sorry to know that
words. Here are my suggestions. I hope that they can help her out. Firstly, listen to the tape and read the words aloud every day. Secondly, it is a good idea to read different kinds of books. Thirdly, she can keep a diary.
trouble in reading. She reads very slowly. It’s difficult for Tom to get on well with others. Betty is bad at English. She has difficulty in remembering new words. Tony always feels tired.
For example, Lucy has
Betty has difficulty in remembering new
【话题写作语料库】 一、问题表达
1. I have got a problem with my study. I need your help.
2. There was a difficult question which I couldn’t do it.
3. Miss Li can’t sleep well. She dreams a lot. Sometimes she can’t sleep all night. She feels really anxious.
4. I have difficulty/problems/trouble in getting well with my classmates. I am looking forward to your advice.
5. Remembering new words is my biggest problem, which makes me so worried.
6. My biggest problem is that... Could you give me a hand
7. I feel upset about my English learning.
二、建议表达
1. I heard that... Here are my suggestions.
2. It is important to eat a balanced diet.
3. There is no need to do...
4. If you do homework carefully instead of playing computer games, you will get good grades.
5. You should get into the habit of doing homework first instead of doing other things after school.
6. Don’t worry! If you work harder, you will do better next time.
二、建议表达
7. It is necessary to keep healthy by doing sports and having good eating habits. Enough sleep is also important too.
8. In my opinion, Steve should tell his father the truth to show that he is honest.
9. Hobbies can help you increase your knowledge of the world. But you need to consider what the most important thing is.
10. It is bad enough that you used your father’s computer. And it is even worse that you didn’t tell him about it. If you tell him the truth now, he will be angry, but at least you will show you are honest.
11. You should say sorry to your father and pay the bill to repair the computer.
【实战演练】
假如你是解决青少年问题的专家Diana，一位中学生Jane写信向你求助。请根据Jane给Diana的邮件，用英语给Jane回复一封信，帮助她解决问题。
要求：1. 词数：110词左右； 2. 文章逻辑严密，问题解决合理。
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和人名等信息。
Dear Diana,
I enjoy doing sports a lot. I play basketball in my school team and I take part in lots of basketball matches. So I miss many lessons and I fail in exams sometimes. My parents are really worried about me. They decide to stop me from playing sports. What should I do
Yours,Jane
过程写作指导 (审、列、扩、连、查、抄)
1. 审 (审意图与内容)
写作意图为 _______________________________________________________________。
仔细阅读题目要求，确定写作内容为 ___________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________。
2. 列提纲：根据意图与内容，确定段落以及段落的要点。
3. 扩与连：运用“1+1或1+2”内容拓展策略进行扩写，并用适当的连词连接成段。
Beginning 导入写作主题(融入问题与主题句)
Body提出合理的建议
Ending 点题收尾
4. 查：请根据以下内容对文本进行检查。
□1.内容维度：检查是否包含所有要点。
□2.语言维度：检查是否运用了不同句式表达。
□3.逻辑维度：检查是否运用合理的连接词。
□4.语法维度：检查是否运用正确的时态等。
□5.本模块写作微技能：是否运用了句式多样性策略。
5. 定稿 (抄：书写规范，不随意涂改)
Dear Jane,
I am very glad that you choose to ask me for help when you are facing such a difficult situation. Keeping the balance between study and hobby has always been a problem for teenagers. Here are my suggestions.
First, it’s bad enough that you fail your exams sometimes. In my opinion, it’s necessary for you to play basketball less and pay more attention to your study. After all, studying is also important for the growth of teenagers and taking lessons is one of the main approaches to get knowledge. Second, you can make a plan to manage your time well so that it can help you study better.
Last, communication is always a good way to keep good relations between parents and children. You should tell your parents your thoughts and promise them that you will study harder.
I hope my suggestions can help you out. Do not worry! I am sure you will solve the problems soon.
Yours,
Diana