牛津译林版八年级上册Unit 6 Bird watching 单元话题满分范文必背（含解析）
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Unit 6 Birdwatching
单元话题满分范文必背
1．假设你是Mary，你想加入助人为乐俱乐部，请根据以下提示，写一封80词左右的申请信。提示：
1.你在八年级二班。
2.喜欢帮助别人，举例说明。
3.加入该倶乐部的原因。
4.你的联系方式:0512-82312748。
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student from Glass 2 , Grade 8. My name is Mary. I would like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.
I am hard-working, and I work hard at all my subjects. I like helping others. I can get on well with my classmates and often help them with their problems. On my way home, I often help the old and the disabled cross the road. On the bus, I often give my seat to some people in need.
I hope to become a member of the club so that I can help more people in need. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. My telephone number is 0512-82312748.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，写一份申请加入俱乐部的申请信。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am……，I would like to…….，I like……，I often help……，I hope to…….，My telephone number is……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的名词和所在的班级，接下来介绍我的性格和想要加入俱乐部的原因，最后指出我的联系方式。此处would like to, work hard, like doing sth, get on well with sb, help sb with sth, on one’s way, give one’s seat to, hope to do sth, in need, look forward to, hear from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
2．假如你是一名观鸟爱好者，学校校报邀请你写一篇关于“保护动物”的英语短文，来呼吁大家了解更多关于鸟类的信息，采取行动保护野生动物，内容提示如下:
1.我喜欢观鸟，每年统计两次鸟的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面的变化;
2.现在我们也邀请其他同学来帮忙，我们需要更多的人帮我们统计鸟儿的数量;
3.但是现在，越来越多的鸟儿因为没有足够的生存空间而处于危险之中，它们中有许多已经死掉了;
4.我们正在竭尽全力保护这些濒危鸟类，我们希望……
注意:
1.短文80词左右，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.第4个要点的内容要用1～2句话作适当发挥。
【答案】I like birdwatching. We do a bird count twice a year to study the changes in their numbers. We're now inviting other students to help us. We need more people to help us count. But more and more birds are now in danger because they don't have enough living space. Lots of them have died. We are trying our best to protect these endangered birds.We hope this will help more people understand. It may make them take action to protect wildlife.
【解析】
【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like birdwatching，twice a year，more and more birds，be in danger，lots of them，try our best，make sb. do sth.等。而We do a bird count twice a year to study the changes in their numbers./ But more and more birds are now in danger because they don't have enough living space./ It may make them take action to protect wildlife.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。
点睛：这是一篇材料作文。根据提纲内容可知用一般现在时，可以把提纲提供的信息翻译成英文，然后在写作中进行适当性的发挥。
3．请根据下列对盐城自然保护区的描写写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点：1. 盐城自然保护区，地处华东的江苏省，是观鸟的绝佳地；
2. 保护区面积4, 500多平方米，是众多濒危鸟类的理想栖息地；
3. 食物丰富，有许多昆虫和多种植物；
4. 许多鸟类在这儿生活，最有名的是丹顶鹤，每年许多丹顶鹤飞来这儿过冬；
5. 自己的感想。（至少两点）
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【答案】Yancheng Nature Reserve is in Jiangsu Province in East China. It is a perfect place to watch birds. The reserve covers an area of more than 4, 500 square kilometers. It’s an ideal home to many birds in danger.
There are a lot of insects and many kinds of plants in the reserve. They provide birds with enough food. So Lots of birds live here. The red-crowned cranes are the most famous bird in Yancheng Nature Reserve. Every year, a lot of red-crowned cranes fly here to spend the winter.
Wetlands are perfect home to many plants, birds and animals. We must take action to protect wetlands.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇作文让考生介绍盐城自然保护区的情况，所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。用到的主要的短语有：Yancheng Nature Reserve，more than 4, 500 square kilometers，an ideal home，provide…with…，the most famous，take action
4．假定你是李华, 你的美国笔友Mary来信询问中国的濒危动物, 请你用英文回一封电子邮件, 简单陈述一下是哪种动物, 目前什么状况, 并如何拯救它等。
注意：1. 词数70左右；
2. 信的开头已给出, 不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
After reading your email, I know what you want to know about. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Dear Mary,
After reading your email, I know what you want to know about. Golden monkeys live only in China. They are protected by Chinese government. Their fur is golden and a bit grey. Their tails are as long as their bodies. Male golden monkeys are big and strong while the female ones are much smaller. Golden monkeys live in forests which are 2000-3000 meters above sea level. They like living in family groups. They eat fruit, nuts, tree leaves and so on. But now their number is getting smaller and smaller. Our government has built some nature reserves to protect them. We hope more and more people will understand the importance of protecting endangered animals. We also hope that people will stop hunting golden monkeys.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1、题干解读：题目要求你是李华，用英文回一封电子邮件, 简单陈述一下中国的濒危动物，目前什么状况，并如何拯救它等，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍濒危动物时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
5．假设你是Grace，Peter是你的美国笔友。他最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根据以下提示，给她回一封电子邮件。
内容：1.你的爱好和特长；
2.你的主要上学方式及其原因；
3.你对动物的看法；
4.这些天（these days）你正在做的事（一件即可）。
要求：1.60词左右（首句不计入字数）。
2.书写工整、规范。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your e-mail. I am happy to tell you something about myself. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your e-mail. I am happy to tell you something about myself.
I like to play the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning, I get up at six o’clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I get home at 5:00 p.m. I like pandas because they are cute and smart. But they are in great danger. These days, I am reading a book about pandas. I want to help and save them.
Can I know more about you I wish to get your e-mail soon.
Yours,
Grace
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，要求以Grace的名义给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍爱好及特长、日常生活习惯、上学方式及时间、对动物的爱好及看法、正在做的事，以上要点缺一不可。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称、一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意要点齐全，语句通顺有条理。
6．《同步英语周报》和动物保护协会正在联合招募观鸟协会会员，请你以陈泽的名义，根据下面的提示写一封申请加入观鸟协会的信。
提示：
1、你是阳光中学8年级学生，喜欢观鸟，想成为观鸟协会的一名成员；
2、你热爱大自然并理解保护野生动物的重要性，所以什么也不能阻止你加入该协会；
3、可拨打电话88833322或发电子邮件至chenze@联系你；
4、你加入该协会后的感受和做法。
要求：
1、短文应包括要点中所给信息，可以适当发挥；
2、句意连贯，语句通顺；
3、80个词左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Chen Ze
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a Grade 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. I love watching birds and I would like to join the Birdwatching Society. I love nature and understand the importance of protecting wildlife, so nothing can prevent me from joining the society. You can call me at 88833322 or email me at chenze@. If I join the society, I will not only take action to protect wildlife but also encourage others to do so.
Yours,
Chen Ze
【解析】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，也是书信作文。以陈泽的名义，根据提示写一封申请加入观鸟协会的信。
2.写作指导：本文主要是第一人称和一般现在时。应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。根据提示要点，安排段落内容，可先写自我介绍，然后写由于自己对鸟类十分热爱，所以想加入观鸟协会，留下联系方式后注意强调自己加入协会后会做些什么，让对方重视你的申请。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）和格式错误。
7．《同步英语周报》和动物保护协会正在联合招募观鸟协会会员，请你以陈泽的名义，根据下面的提示写一封申请加入观鸟协会的信。
提示：
1、你是阳光中学8年级学生，喜欢观鸟，想成为观鸟协会的一名成员；
2、你热爱大自然并理解保护野生动物的重要性，所以什么也不能阻止你加入该协会；
3、可拨打电话88833322或发电子邮件至chenze@联系你；
4、你加入该协会后的感受和做法。
要求：
1、短文应包括要点中所给信息，可以适当发挥；
2、句意连贯，语句通顺；
3、80个词左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Chen Ze
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a Grade 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. I love watching birds and I would like to join the Birdwatching Society. I love nature and understand the importance of protecting wildlife, so nothing can prevent me from joining the society. You can call me on 88833322 or email me at chenze@. If I join the society, I will not only take action to protect wildlife but also encourage others to do so.
Yours,
Chen Ze
【解析】
这是一篇材料作文，也是书信作文。以陈泽的名义，根据下面的提示写一封申请加入观鸟协会的信。首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，本文给出了写作的大致方向，动笔前要再次认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。本文主要是第一人称和一般现在时。应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
尊敬的先生/女士，
我是阳光中学的八年级学生。我喜欢看鸟，我想加入观鸟协会。我热爱自然，了解保护野生动物的重要性，所以没有什么能阻止我加入这个协会。您可以拨打88833322或发送电子邮件至chenze@。如果我加入这个社会，我不仅会采取行动保护野生动物，而且会鼓励其他人这样做。
你的，
陈泽
【点睛】
这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。学以致用，运用了本单元的重要句型和短语有：I love nature and understand the importance of protecting wildlife, so nothing can prevent me from joining the society.等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
8．假如你是Dreamland School的学生李华，你们学校即将创办一个新社团，为此向全校师生征集建议，请你从以下三个社团中选择一个社团，用英文写一封建议信给校长Mr. White，读一谈创办该社团的理由以及该社团可以开展的活动。
注意：（1）文中不可出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
（2）须涵盖所提供的内容要点，可适当发挥。
（3）词数90词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. White,
I’m glad to hear that there is going to be a new club in our school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. White,
I’m glad to hear that there is going to be a new club in our school. Among the Drama Club, Reading Club and the Animal Saving Club, I am interested in the Animal Saving Club.
We all know that animals are our friends. We live together on the same earth. We should live in peace. But now because of the serious environmental pollution, many animals are in danger. Especially, the number of wild animals is getting smaller and smaller. We must take action to protect them.
We can plant more trees and let more animals have their own homes. We can carry out garbage collection activities once a week to make everyone aware of the importance of protecting the environment. It also makes every student know that protecting the environment is not only protecting animals, but also protecting ourselves.
I sincerely hope that our school can set up the Animal Saving Club. Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，选择自己想要开设的社团，并写出创办该社团的理由以及该社团可以开展的活动，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
9．苏州太湖国家湿地公园将成立湿地观测站，现正在招募志愿者。请根据以下要点写一份申请信。
要求：
要点齐全；语言流畅规范；80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点如下：
介绍：李明，就读于金鸡湖学校八年级2班，出生于2006年10月3日。
理由：对了解不同类型的动物感兴趣，同情处境危险的野生动物；
曾是观鸟协会的一员；擅长……（自拟一条）；认为……（自拟一条）
计划：积极参加活动，……（自拟一条）。
联系方式：电话18912345678或电子邮箱liming@
Dear Chairperson,
I hear that you need some volunteers. I would like to join you.
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Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Chairperson,
I hear that you need some volunteers. I would like to join you. I am Li Ping. I was born on October 3rd, 2006 and now I study at Jinji Lake Middle School. I am in Class 2, Grade 8. I'm interested in all kinds of animals and I felt pity for the wild animals in danger.
I used to be a member of Birdwatching Society. I am good at knowing different kinds of birds. I think animals are in great danger because of hunting. I want to be a volunteer because I love the animals. If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer in your program, I will take an active part in all kinds of activities. I will tell people not to kill the animals for their fur. I will advise the government to make laws and build more nature reserves for the wild animals.
I am free every Sunday afternoon, so I can take part in activities on Sunday afternoon. Please call me at 18912345678 or email me at liming@.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求写一份申请志愿者的信件，注意根据提示要点要齐全，语言流畅规范，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍自己个人情况；第二段详细介绍自己的特长及想成为志愿者的原因，加入后的计划等；第三段收尾，说明联系方式。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
10．假如你是Sandy，请给观鸟协会写一封申请信，要求加入观鸟协会。包括以下要点：
1．我想成为观鸟协会的一员。
2．我是八年级的学生，我对了解不同的种类的植物、动物和鸟类很感兴趣.
3．我热爱鸟类，热爱大自然。人们砍伐树，鸟越来越少，想做些事情来保护鸟。
4. 我认为……（至少2点）。
5．每个星期天上午9点到10点可以参加活动。
6．联系方式：Tel: 0519-7088888. E-mail address: Sandy @
Dear Sir or madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Sandy
【答案】Dear Sir or madam,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
I am a grade 8 student,and I am interested in learning different kinds of plants,birds and animals.I love birds and nature,the birds are becoming fewer and fewer because people cut down trees.So I want to do something to protect the birds.
I think birds are useful to people/birds are our friends…(符合题意即可) I can take part in activities from 9 a.m. to 10 a.m. on Sundays.
I will be happy if I can become a member of the Birdwatching Society. You can call me on
0519-7088888 or email me at Sandy @
Yours sincerely,
Sandy
【解析】
试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，也是书信作文。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示：1．我想成为观鸟协会的一员。2．我是八年级的学生，我对了解不同的种类的植物、动物和鸟类很感兴趣.3．我热爱鸟类，热爱大自然。人们砍伐树，鸟越来越少，想做些事情来保护鸟。4. 我认为……（至少2点）。5．每个星期天上午9点到10点可以参加活动。6．联系方式：Tel: 0519-7088888. E-mail address: Sandy @ 认真审题，把提示内容要点写清，可适当发挥，文中内容要连贯，不要生硬地翻译，要适当地使用连词，用正确的熟悉的英语句子书写，本文主要时态是一般现在时。要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，最好使用我们熟悉和背过的句型，尽量不要使用复杂的从句，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。内容要点完整、应用词汇灵活准确，句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，上下文连贯。内容覆盖所有要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇，注意了连词和时态的使用，没有语言错误。
单元话题满分范文必背
1．假设你是Mary，你想加入助人为乐俱乐部，请根据以下提示，写一封80词左右的申请信。提示：
1.你在八年级二班。
2.喜欢帮助别人，举例说明。
3.加入该倶乐部的原因。
4.你的联系方式:0512-82312748。
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student from Glass 2 , Grade 8. My name is Mary. I would like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.
I am hard-working, and I work hard at all my subjects. I like helping others. I can get on well with my classmates and often help them with their problems. On my way home, I often help the old and the disabled cross the road. On the bus, I often give my seat to some people in need.
I hope to become a member of the club so that I can help more people in need. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. My telephone number is 0512-82312748.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，写一份申请加入俱乐部的申请信。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am……，I would like to…….，I like……，I often help……，I hope to…….，My telephone number is……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的名词和所在的班级，接下来介绍我的性格和想要加入俱乐部的原因，最后指出我的联系方式。此处would like to, work hard, like doing sth, get on well with sb, help sb with sth, on one’s way, give one’s seat to, hope to do sth, in need, look forward to, hear from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
2．假如你是一名观鸟爱好者，学校校报邀请你写一篇关于“保护动物”的英语短文，来呼吁大家了解更多关于鸟类的信息，采取行动保护野生动物，内容提示如下:
1.我喜欢观鸟，每年统计两次鸟的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面的变化;
2.现在我们也邀请其他同学来帮忙，我们需要更多的人帮我们统计鸟儿的数量;
3.但是现在，越来越多的鸟儿因为没有足够的生存空间而处于危险之中，它们中有许多已经死掉了;
4.我们正在竭尽全力保护这些濒危鸟类，我们希望……
注意:
1.短文80词左右，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.第4个要点的内容要用1～2句话作适当发挥。
【答案】I like birdwatching. We do a bird count twice a year to study the changes in their numbers. We're now inviting other students to help us. We need more people to help us count. But more and more birds are now in danger because they don't have enough living space. Lots of them have died. We are trying our best to protect these endangered birds.We hope this will help more people understand. It may make them take action to protect wildlife.
【解析】
【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like birdwatching，twice a year，more and more birds，be in danger，lots of them，try our best，make sb. do sth.等。而We do a bird count twice a year to study the changes in their numbers./ But more and more birds are now in danger because they don't have enough living space./ It may make them take action to protect wildlife.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。
点睛：这是一篇材料作文。根据提纲内容可知用一般现在时，可以把提纲提供的信息翻译成英文，然后在写作中进行适当性的发挥。
3．请根据下列对盐城自然保护区的描写写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点：1. 盐城自然保护区，地处华东的江苏省，是观鸟的绝佳地；
2. 保护区面积4, 500多平方米，是众多濒危鸟类的理想栖息地；
3. 食物丰富，有许多昆虫和多种植物；
4. 许多鸟类在这儿生活，最有名的是丹顶鹤，每年许多丹顶鹤飞来这儿过冬；
5. 自己的感想。（至少两点）
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【答案】Yancheng Nature Reserve is in Jiangsu Province in East China. It is a perfect place to watch birds. The reserve covers an area of more than 4, 500 square kilometers. It’s an ideal home to many birds in danger.
There are a lot of insects and many kinds of plants in the reserve. They provide birds with enough food. So Lots of birds live here. The red-crowned cranes are the most famous bird in Yancheng Nature Reserve. Every year, a lot of red-crowned cranes fly here to spend the winter.
Wetlands are perfect home to many plants, birds and animals. We must take action to protect wetlands.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇作文让考生介绍盐城自然保护区的情况，所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。用到的主要的短语有：Yancheng Nature Reserve，more than 4, 500 square kilometers，an ideal home，provide…with…，the most famous，take action
4．假定你是李华, 你的美国笔友Mary来信询问中国的濒危动物, 请你用英文回一封电子邮件, 简单陈述一下是哪种动物, 目前什么状况, 并如何拯救它等。
注意：1. 词数70左右；
2. 信的开头已给出, 不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
After reading your email, I know what you want to know about. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Dear Mary,
After reading your email, I know what you want to know about. Golden monkeys live only in China. They are protected by Chinese government. Their fur is golden and a bit grey. Their tails are as long as their bodies. Male golden monkeys are big and strong while the female ones are much smaller. Golden monkeys live in forests which are 2000-3000 meters above sea level. They like living in family groups. They eat fruit, nuts, tree leaves and so on. But now their number is getting smaller and smaller. Our government has built some nature reserves to protect them. We hope more and more people will understand the importance of protecting endangered animals. We also hope that people will stop hunting golden monkeys.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1、题干解读：题目要求你是李华，用英文回一封电子邮件, 简单陈述一下中国的濒危动物，目前什么状况，并如何拯救它等，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍濒危动物时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
5．假设你是Grace，Peter是你的美国笔友。他最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根据以下提示，给她回一封电子邮件。
内容：1.你的爱好和特长；
2.你的主要上学方式及其原因；
3.你对动物的看法；
4.这些天（these days）你正在做的事（一件即可）。
要求：1.60词左右（首句不计入字数）。
2.书写工整、规范。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your e-mail. I am happy to tell you something about myself. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your e-mail. I am happy to tell you something about myself.
I like to play the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning, I get up at six o’clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I get home at 5:00 p.m. I like pandas because they are cute and smart. But they are in great danger. These days, I am reading a book about pandas. I want to help and save them.
Can I know more about you I wish to get your e-mail soon.
Yours,
Grace
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，要求以Grace的名义给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍爱好及特长、日常生活习惯、上学方式及时间、对动物的爱好及看法、正在做的事，以上要点缺一不可。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称、一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意要点齐全，语句通顺有条理。
6．《同步英语周报》和动物保护协会正在联合招募观鸟协会会员，请你以陈泽的名义，根据下面的提示写一封申请加入观鸟协会的信。
提示：
1、你是阳光中学8年级学生，喜欢观鸟，想成为观鸟协会的一名成员；
2、你热爱大自然并理解保护野生动物的重要性，所以什么也不能阻止你加入该协会；
3、可拨打电话88833322或发电子邮件至chenze@联系你；
4、你加入该协会后的感受和做法。
要求：
1、短文应包括要点中所给信息，可以适当发挥；
2、句意连贯，语句通顺；
3、80个词左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Chen Ze
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a Grade 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. I love watching birds and I would like to join the Birdwatching Society. I love nature and understand the importance of protecting wildlife, so nothing can prevent me from joining the society. You can call me at 88833322 or email me at chenze@. If I join the society, I will not only take action to protect wildlife but also encourage others to do so.
Yours,
Chen Ze
【解析】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，也是书信作文。以陈泽的名义，根据提示写一封申请加入观鸟协会的信。
2.写作指导：本文主要是第一人称和一般现在时。应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。根据提示要点，安排段落内容，可先写自我介绍，然后写由于自己对鸟类十分热爱，所以想加入观鸟协会，留下联系方式后注意强调自己加入协会后会做些什么，让对方重视你的申请。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）和格式错误。
7．《同步英语周报》和动物保护协会正在联合招募观鸟协会会员，请你以陈泽的名义，根据下面的提示写一封申请加入观鸟协会的信。
提示：
1、你是阳光中学8年级学生，喜欢观鸟，想成为观鸟协会的一名成员；
2、你热爱大自然并理解保护野生动物的重要性，所以什么也不能阻止你加入该协会；
3、可拨打电话88833322或发电子邮件至chenze@联系你；
4、你加入该协会后的感受和做法。
要求：
1、短文应包括要点中所给信息，可以适当发挥；
2、句意连贯，语句通顺；
3、80个词左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Chen Ze
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a Grade 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. I love watching birds and I would like to join the Birdwatching Society. I love nature and understand the importance of protecting wildlife, so nothing can prevent me from joining the society. You can call me on 88833322 or email me at chenze@. If I join the society, I will not only take action to protect wildlife but also encourage others to do so.
Yours,
Chen Ze
【解析】
这是一篇材料作文，也是书信作文。以陈泽的名义，根据下面的提示写一封申请加入观鸟协会的信。首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，本文给出了写作的大致方向，动笔前要再次认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。本文主要是第一人称和一般现在时。应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
尊敬的先生/女士，
我是阳光中学的八年级学生。我喜欢看鸟，我想加入观鸟协会。我热爱自然，了解保护野生动物的重要性，所以没有什么能阻止我加入这个协会。您可以拨打88833322或发送电子邮件至chenze@。如果我加入这个社会，我不仅会采取行动保护野生动物，而且会鼓励其他人这样做。
你的，
陈泽
【点睛】
这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。学以致用，运用了本单元的重要句型和短语有：I love nature and understand the importance of protecting wildlife, so nothing can prevent me from joining the society.等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
8．假如你是Dreamland School的学生李华，你们学校即将创办一个新社团，为此向全校师生征集建议，请你从以下三个社团中选择一个社团，用英文写一封建议信给校长Mr. White，读一谈创办该社团的理由以及该社团可以开展的活动。
注意：（1）文中不可出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
（2）须涵盖所提供的内容要点，可适当发挥。
（3）词数90词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. White,
I’m glad to hear that there is going to be a new club in our school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. White,
I’m glad to hear that there is going to be a new club in our school. Among the Drama Club, Reading Club and the Animal Saving Club, I am interested in the Animal Saving Club.
We all know that animals are our friends. We live together on the same earth. We should live in peace. But now because of the serious environmental pollution, many animals are in danger. Especially, the number of wild animals is getting smaller and smaller. We must take action to protect them.
We can plant more trees and let more animals have their own homes. We can carry out garbage collection activities once a week to make everyone aware of the importance of protecting the environment. It also makes every student know that protecting the environment is not only protecting animals, but also protecting ourselves.
I sincerely hope that our school can set up the Animal Saving Club. Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，选择自己想要开设的社团，并写出创办该社团的理由以及该社团可以开展的活动，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
9．苏州太湖国家湿地公园将成立湿地观测站，现正在招募志愿者。请根据以下要点写一份申请信。
要求：
要点齐全；语言流畅规范；80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点如下：
介绍：李明，就读于金鸡湖学校八年级2班，出生于2006年10月3日。
理由：对了解不同类型的动物感兴趣，同情处境危险的野生动物；
曾是观鸟协会的一员；擅长……（自拟一条）；认为……（自拟一条）
计划：积极参加活动，……（自拟一条）。
联系方式：电话18912345678或电子邮箱liming@
Dear Chairperson,
I hear that you need some volunteers. I would like to join you.
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Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Chairperson,
I hear that you need some volunteers. I would like to join you. I am Li Ping. I was born on October 3rd, 2006 and now I study at Jinji Lake Middle School. I am in Class 2, Grade 8. I'm interested in all kinds of animals and I felt pity for the wild animals in danger.
I used to be a member of Birdwatching Society. I am good at knowing different kinds of birds. I think animals are in great danger because of hunting. I want to be a volunteer because I love the animals. If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer in your program, I will take an active part in all kinds of activities. I will tell people not to kill the animals for their fur. I will advise the government to make laws and build more nature reserves for the wild animals.
I am free every Sunday afternoon, so I can take part in activities on Sunday afternoon. Please call me at 18912345678 or email me at liming@.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求写一份申请志愿者的信件，注意根据提示要点要齐全，语言流畅规范，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍自己个人情况；第二段详细介绍自己的特长及想成为志愿者的原因，加入后的计划等；第三段收尾，说明联系方式。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
10．假如你是Sandy，请给观鸟协会写一封申请信，要求加入观鸟协会。包括以下要点：
1．我想成为观鸟协会的一员。
2．我是八年级的学生，我对了解不同的种类的植物、动物和鸟类很感兴趣.
3．我热爱鸟类，热爱大自然。人们砍伐树，鸟越来越少，想做些事情来保护鸟。
4. 我认为……（至少2点）。
5．每个星期天上午9点到10点可以参加活动。
6．联系方式：Tel: 0519-7088888. E-mail address: Sandy @
Dear Sir or madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Sandy
【答案】Dear Sir or madam,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
I am a grade 8 student,and I am interested in learning different kinds of plants,birds and animals.I love birds and nature,the birds are becoming fewer and fewer because people cut down trees.So I want to do something to protect the birds.
I think birds are useful to people/birds are our friends…(符合题意即可) I can take part in activities from 9 a.m. to 10 a.m. on Sundays.
I will be happy if I can become a member of the Birdwatching Society. You can call me on
0519-7088888 or email me at Sandy @
Yours sincerely,
Sandy
【解析】
试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，也是书信作文。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示：1．我想成为观鸟协会的一员。2．我是八年级的学生，我对了解不同的种类的植物、动物和鸟类很感兴趣.3．我热爱鸟类，热爱大自然。人们砍伐树，鸟越来越少，想做些事情来保护鸟。4. 我认为……（至少2点）。5．每个星期天上午9点到10点可以参加活动。6．联系方式：Tel: 0519-7088888. E-mail address: Sandy @ 认真审题，把提示内容要点写清，可适当发挥，文中内容要连贯，不要生硬地翻译，要适当地使用连词，用正确的熟悉的英语句子书写，本文主要时态是一般现在时。要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，最好使用我们熟悉和背过的句型，尽量不要使用复杂的从句，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。内容要点完整、应用词汇灵活准确，句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，上下文连贯。内容覆盖所有要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇，注意了连词和时态的使用，没有语言错误。