山东省临沂市2019-2022学年高二下学期英语期末试卷汇编：读后续写（含答案）
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山东省临沂市
2019-2022学年高二下学期英语期末试卷汇编
读后续写
山东省临沂市2021-2022学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
第二节（满分25分）
47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jenny lived in a small village. When she was a child, what she liked to do most was watch the blue sky and enjoy birds flying freely in the sky. She always imagined that some day she could also fly in the sky like a bird.
When Jane was in the fourth grade, one day, her teacher asked them to write a report on what they wanted to be when they grew up. She poured her heart into her report and wrote that she dreamed to become an airline pilot in the future. She thought that she did a great job because she expressed her real idea successfully. However, to her surprise, her paper came back with an “F” on it. The teacher told her it was nothing but a “fairy tale”, which could never become true. Jenny felt completely disappointed and sad. In her heart, she didn't want to accept that a girl couldn't become a pilot. But as the years went by, Jenny was beaten down by the discouragement again and again from people around her. “Girls can't become airline pilots; never have, never will. You're crazy.” Finally, Jenny gave up her dream.
However, when Jenny studied in her senior year of high school, she met an English teacher called Marsha, who was a strict teacher with high standards but very kind. She often inspired her students to do something meaningful in the future. One day, Mrs. Marsha asked all the students to think about the question: “What will you do in the future ” At that time, Jenny hesitated for a while. She was worried that she would be laughed at again. But soon she felt a rush of the old enthusiasm, and with excitement she wrote down the very old dream of becoming a pilot right away.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右。
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next day, Marsha came into the classroom with a bright smile on her face.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The hurt and fear of years of discouragement disappeared.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
山东省临沂市2020-2021学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
第二节(满分25分)
47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Over the years, Linda has been annoyed at many strangers when they come knocking with the intention of selling things! But earlier this year, around Easter time, Linda had an experience that changed her mind towards these strangers.
Linda recently moved to a new neighborhood far from her hometown, so she had few friends or relatives here, housebound all week. What's worse, she had been suffering from a severe case of flu for several days. Early one morning, she sat in the courtyard by herself, doing nothing. Feeling a little lonely, she began to miss her family. It crossed her mind that the whole family circled the table, enjoying the delicious food cooked by her mother. The sweet smell of her mother—cooked chicken soup greeted her from time to time. She was buried in happiness when there was a loud knock on her front door. The knock pulled her back to reality from good memories. Very annoyed and disturbed, she walked slowly toward the door.
Looking out of the window, she saw two young ladies holding leaflets and a TV set model, and they were looking curiously inside. She knew of a large TV set establishment nearby and assumed a message was about to be gently delivered. This is the last thing I need today, she whispered to herself and hesitantly opened the door.
Coughing violently, she stuck her head out and informed them that she showed no interest in any TV. Furthermore, she added, she was feeling quite unwell, wishing not to be disturbed and abruptly shut the door hard. The ladies politely turned and left in silence! However, a few hours later, another knock happened. Linda glanced out the window and to her surprise, there at her door were the same two ladies, back again.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Really angry this time she opened the door.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Half an hour later, the ladies left with warm smiles.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
山东省临沂市2019-2020学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
第二节（满分25分）
47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
I handed the card from my school's help-wanted board to the man behind the counter of Mort's Deli （熟食店). Even before I opened my mouth, he was shaking his head.
It was September 1957, and my family had just arrived in California. My father only got work two or three days a week. Our poor savings were gone, and as the eldest boy of the family, I was the only one able to help.
''Let me work the rest of the week, and if you don’t like the way I do the job, don't pay me,'' I said. The tall man stared at me, and then nodded, ''I'm Mort Robin. What's your name ''
At Mort's, I worked very hard. Near the end of the day he called me up to him. ''How much did that card at school say this job paid '' he asked. ''One dollar an hour,'' I whispered. Actually I was willing to take less.
''That's not enough for someone who works as hard as you,'' Mort said. ''You start at 1.25.'' Over the next few weeks, I learned a lot about Mort. A few years older than my dad, he was from Chicago and had a daughter at my age. When things were slow, he often shared stories from his army days. Our store was closed on Sundays, so every Saturday evening Mort urged me to take home the leftover soup. It was a meal in itself, a treat for my struggling family.
One Saturday after work, I was about to step in my house when I saw a large bald man in my father's chair. He was shouting at my father. I quietly walked into the kitchen and listened through the door. The man wanted to take our car. I had been in Los Angeles just long enough to understand how essential a car was. Dad offered to make the three payments that were due, but the man demanded the entire sum - $325, or the car.
I slipped out of the door, thinking: Who might have $325 Who would even consider lending me so much money
Paragraph 1
The only person I could think of was Mort.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2
I calmly handed the man the money.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案：
山东省临沂市2021-2022学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
【答案】Para 1:
The next day, Marsha came into the classroom with a bright smile on her face. She praised all the students for what they had finished including Jenny. Mrs. Marsha told Jenny that her dream was wonderful and she was sure that Jenny would have the abilities and talents to make it come true if she tried her best. Besides, she also encouraged Jenny to keep on trying without worrying about others' opinions. Hearing the words, Jenny felt a relief from her heart and made up her mind to study hard to realize her dream.
Para 2:
The hurt and fear of years of discouragement disappeared. Encouraged and full of passion, Jenny began to pursue her dream with all her effort. In the following ten years，she studied hard and never gave up even when she was faced with all kinds of difficulties. Eventually, Jenny became a pilot of a famous airline company, realizing her dream of flying in the sky like a bird. All of us may meet different difficulties on our way to success, but if we keep on trying without giving up, we will make it come true.
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了珍妮在报告中写道梦想是将来成为一名航空公司飞行员，但是老师却给了她“F”，告诉她那不过是一个“童话”，不可能成为现实。结果在高中，珍妮遇到了一个叫玛莎的英语老师，再次表达了自己想成为飞行员的梦想，却得到了老师的鼓励，最终珍妮实现了自己的梦想。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天，玛莎脸上带着灿烂的笑容走进了教室。”可知，第一段可描写玛莎老师如何鼓励珍妮的，以及珍妮的内心感受。
②由第二段首句内容“多年的挫折带来的伤害和恐惧消失了。”可知，第二段可描写珍妮受到鼓舞，开始全力以赴地追求自己的梦想，最终实现了梦想。
2.续写线索：玛莎老师鼓励珍妮——珍妮感到轻松——珍妮追求梦想——珍妮实现梦想——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
赞扬：praise / compliment
鼓励：encourage/ inspire
遇到：meet /come across
情绪类
极好：wonderful /great
著名：famous /well-known
【点睛】[高分句型1] She praised all the students for what they had finished including Jenny. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Eventually, Jenny became a pilot of a famous airline company, realizing her dream of flying in the sky like a bird. (运用了现在分词作状语)
山东省临沂市2020-2021学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
【答案】Para 1:
Really angry this time, she opened the door. “Why are you two coming again ” Linda shouted at them angrily, trying to shut the door fast. With concerned looks on their faces, they explained to her that they purchased some medicine from a nearby drugstore and hoped that she could get a quick recovery. Witnessing the scene, she felt a surge of guilt with tears streaming down her cheeks. Linda took over the medicine and invited them in warmly. Being new to the area, she didn't know many neighbors or people who could assist her with shopping or doing other things. She sincerely thanked them and apologized to the ladies what she did before. Later, they merrily chatted a lot about what happened locally.
Para 2:
Half an hour later, the ladies left with warm smiles. They continued to knock the doors holding leaflets. At this moment , thinking about how touching this deed really was, Linda rose from the armchair, beginning to cheer up. She knew from the bottom of heart that she was not at all lonely with the care from strangers. She realized that thinking about others and showing kindness is the real essence of love. She also made a promise to herself; Do not refuse strangers easily and maybe they are helpers.
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了多年来，Linda一直对许多想推销东西的陌生人感到恼火。但今年早些时候，在复活节前后，Linda的一次经历改变了她对这些陌生人的看法。当时Linda搬到一个远离家乡的新社区，而且得了流感，两个推销电视的年轻女士却给她买了药，Linda意识到为他人着想和表现出善良是爱的真正本质。她也对自己许下了承诺，不要轻易拒绝陌生人，也许他们是你的帮手。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这次她真的很生气，打开了门。”可知，第一段可描写Linda打开门的反应，之前的两个女士给她买了药，Linda真诚地感谢她们，并为她之前所做的事向女士们道歉。后来，他们愉快地聊了很多当地发生的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“半小时后，女士们带着温暖的微笑离开了。”可知，第二段可描写Linda得到帮助之后的内心活动和感悟。
2.续写线索：Linda生气开门——发现对方给自己买了药——Linda真诚感谢并道歉——Linda感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
关闭：shut / close
购买：purchase/ buy
帮助：assist / help
情绪类
感谢：sincerely thank/ show one’s appreciation
生气：angry / angrily / mad
【点睛】[高分句型1] With concerned looks on their faces, they explained to her that they purchased some medicine from a nearby drugstore and hoped that she could get a quick recovery. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] She realized that thinking about others and showing kindness is the real essence of love. (运用了动名词作主语)
山东省临沂市2019-2020学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
【47题答案】
【答案】One possible version:
Paragraph 1
The only person I could think of was Mort. Without hesitation I headed for the store, knocked at the door and waited anxiously. After a while, the door opened and there stood Mort, confused. Before he could ask me anything, I poured out what my family was facing. ''So, could you possibly loan my father $325 '' I could feel my face hot. Beyond my expectation, he turned around, returned with $325 in an envelope and handed it to me directly, saying ''I'll take back half your wages until it's repaid.'' ''Thank you,'' I said in a trembling voice, trying to fight back my tears. Then I hurried back home.
Paragraph 2
I calmly handed the man the money. That night I was a hero to my family. But the real hero wag Mort Robin, who not only helped my family out, but also quietly raised my salary every month. By summer, I was earning $2.50 an hour, double the original wage. Finally, I paid off the debt. It was Mr. Robin who made the world a better place for me.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。
【详解】这是一篇记叙文，文章记叙了作者因为家庭经济困难而去一个熟食店打工，有一天家里遭遇困难时，打工店老板Mort Robin慷慨援助的故事。
续写部分分为2段，第一段的开头是：我唯一能想到的人是莫特。……，根据前文作者急需用钱而不知所措的描述可知接下本段要讲作者向莫特诉说了家里遭遇并借钱的经过，可适当增加细节描写。第二段的开头是：我平静地把钱递给了那个人。……，根据前文作者家遭遇这个人逼债的细节描写可知本段要着重写作者为家庭解除危机之后的状况以及最终他通过辛勤工作把从老板那里借来的钱还清等情况。
【点睛】续写部分以第一人称用一般过去时叙事，多处运用人物心理等细节描写，如：I could feel my face hot. /I said in a trembling voice, trying to fight back my tears.同时分词状语、介词短语等的添加使得人物的情绪更加饱满。如：Without hesitation./confused./Beyond my expectation,/trying to fight back my tears.
2019-2022学年高二下学期英语期末试卷汇编
读后续写
山东省临沂市2021-2022学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
第二节（满分25分）
47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jenny lived in a small village. When she was a child, what she liked to do most was watch the blue sky and enjoy birds flying freely in the sky. She always imagined that some day she could also fly in the sky like a bird.
When Jane was in the fourth grade, one day, her teacher asked them to write a report on what they wanted to be when they grew up. She poured her heart into her report and wrote that she dreamed to become an airline pilot in the future. She thought that she did a great job because she expressed her real idea successfully. However, to her surprise, her paper came back with an “F” on it. The teacher told her it was nothing but a “fairy tale”, which could never become true. Jenny felt completely disappointed and sad. In her heart, she didn't want to accept that a girl couldn't become a pilot. But as the years went by, Jenny was beaten down by the discouragement again and again from people around her. “Girls can't become airline pilots; never have, never will. You're crazy.” Finally, Jenny gave up her dream.
However, when Jenny studied in her senior year of high school, she met an English teacher called Marsha, who was a strict teacher with high standards but very kind. She often inspired her students to do something meaningful in the future. One day, Mrs. Marsha asked all the students to think about the question: “What will you do in the future ” At that time, Jenny hesitated for a while. She was worried that she would be laughed at again. But soon she felt a rush of the old enthusiasm, and with excitement she wrote down the very old dream of becoming a pilot right away.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右。
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next day, Marsha came into the classroom with a bright smile on her face.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The hurt and fear of years of discouragement disappeared.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
山东省临沂市2020-2021学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
第二节(满分25分)
47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Over the years, Linda has been annoyed at many strangers when they come knocking with the intention of selling things! But earlier this year, around Easter time, Linda had an experience that changed her mind towards these strangers.
Linda recently moved to a new neighborhood far from her hometown, so she had few friends or relatives here, housebound all week. What's worse, she had been suffering from a severe case of flu for several days. Early one morning, she sat in the courtyard by herself, doing nothing. Feeling a little lonely, she began to miss her family. It crossed her mind that the whole family circled the table, enjoying the delicious food cooked by her mother. The sweet smell of her mother—cooked chicken soup greeted her from time to time. She was buried in happiness when there was a loud knock on her front door. The knock pulled her back to reality from good memories. Very annoyed and disturbed, she walked slowly toward the door.
Looking out of the window, she saw two young ladies holding leaflets and a TV set model, and they were looking curiously inside. She knew of a large TV set establishment nearby and assumed a message was about to be gently delivered. This is the last thing I need today, she whispered to herself and hesitantly opened the door.
Coughing violently, she stuck her head out and informed them that she showed no interest in any TV. Furthermore, she added, she was feeling quite unwell, wishing not to be disturbed and abruptly shut the door hard. The ladies politely turned and left in silence! However, a few hours later, another knock happened. Linda glanced out the window and to her surprise, there at her door were the same two ladies, back again.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Really angry this time she opened the door.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Half an hour later, the ladies left with warm smiles.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
山东省临沂市2019-2020学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
第二节（满分25分）
47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
I handed the card from my school's help-wanted board to the man behind the counter of Mort's Deli （熟食店). Even before I opened my mouth, he was shaking his head.
It was September 1957, and my family had just arrived in California. My father only got work two or three days a week. Our poor savings were gone, and as the eldest boy of the family, I was the only one able to help.
''Let me work the rest of the week, and if you don’t like the way I do the job, don't pay me,'' I said. The tall man stared at me, and then nodded, ''I'm Mort Robin. What's your name ''
At Mort's, I worked very hard. Near the end of the day he called me up to him. ''How much did that card at school say this job paid '' he asked. ''One dollar an hour,'' I whispered. Actually I was willing to take less.
''That's not enough for someone who works as hard as you,'' Mort said. ''You start at 1.25.'' Over the next few weeks, I learned a lot about Mort. A few years older than my dad, he was from Chicago and had a daughter at my age. When things were slow, he often shared stories from his army days. Our store was closed on Sundays, so every Saturday evening Mort urged me to take home the leftover soup. It was a meal in itself, a treat for my struggling family.
One Saturday after work, I was about to step in my house when I saw a large bald man in my father's chair. He was shouting at my father. I quietly walked into the kitchen and listened through the door. The man wanted to take our car. I had been in Los Angeles just long enough to understand how essential a car was. Dad offered to make the three payments that were due, but the man demanded the entire sum - $325, or the car.
I slipped out of the door, thinking: Who might have $325 Who would even consider lending me so much money
Paragraph 1
The only person I could think of was Mort.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2
I calmly handed the man the money.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案：
山东省临沂市2021-2022学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
【答案】Para 1:
The next day, Marsha came into the classroom with a bright smile on her face. She praised all the students for what they had finished including Jenny. Mrs. Marsha told Jenny that her dream was wonderful and she was sure that Jenny would have the abilities and talents to make it come true if she tried her best. Besides, she also encouraged Jenny to keep on trying without worrying about others' opinions. Hearing the words, Jenny felt a relief from her heart and made up her mind to study hard to realize her dream.
Para 2:
The hurt and fear of years of discouragement disappeared. Encouraged and full of passion, Jenny began to pursue her dream with all her effort. In the following ten years，she studied hard and never gave up even when she was faced with all kinds of difficulties. Eventually, Jenny became a pilot of a famous airline company, realizing her dream of flying in the sky like a bird. All of us may meet different difficulties on our way to success, but if we keep on trying without giving up, we will make it come true.
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了珍妮在报告中写道梦想是将来成为一名航空公司飞行员，但是老师却给了她“F”，告诉她那不过是一个“童话”，不可能成为现实。结果在高中，珍妮遇到了一个叫玛莎的英语老师，再次表达了自己想成为飞行员的梦想，却得到了老师的鼓励，最终珍妮实现了自己的梦想。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天，玛莎脸上带着灿烂的笑容走进了教室。”可知，第一段可描写玛莎老师如何鼓励珍妮的，以及珍妮的内心感受。
②由第二段首句内容“多年的挫折带来的伤害和恐惧消失了。”可知，第二段可描写珍妮受到鼓舞，开始全力以赴地追求自己的梦想，最终实现了梦想。
2.续写线索：玛莎老师鼓励珍妮——珍妮感到轻松——珍妮追求梦想——珍妮实现梦想——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
赞扬：praise / compliment
鼓励：encourage/ inspire
遇到：meet /come across
情绪类
极好：wonderful /great
著名：famous /well-known
【点睛】[高分句型1] She praised all the students for what they had finished including Jenny. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Eventually, Jenny became a pilot of a famous airline company, realizing her dream of flying in the sky like a bird. (运用了现在分词作状语)
山东省临沂市2020-2021学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
【答案】Para 1:
Really angry this time, she opened the door. “Why are you two coming again ” Linda shouted at them angrily, trying to shut the door fast. With concerned looks on their faces, they explained to her that they purchased some medicine from a nearby drugstore and hoped that she could get a quick recovery. Witnessing the scene, she felt a surge of guilt with tears streaming down her cheeks. Linda took over the medicine and invited them in warmly. Being new to the area, she didn't know many neighbors or people who could assist her with shopping or doing other things. She sincerely thanked them and apologized to the ladies what she did before. Later, they merrily chatted a lot about what happened locally.
Para 2:
Half an hour later, the ladies left with warm smiles. They continued to knock the doors holding leaflets. At this moment , thinking about how touching this deed really was, Linda rose from the armchair, beginning to cheer up. She knew from the bottom of heart that she was not at all lonely with the care from strangers. She realized that thinking about others and showing kindness is the real essence of love. She also made a promise to herself; Do not refuse strangers easily and maybe they are helpers.
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了多年来，Linda一直对许多想推销东西的陌生人感到恼火。但今年早些时候，在复活节前后，Linda的一次经历改变了她对这些陌生人的看法。当时Linda搬到一个远离家乡的新社区，而且得了流感，两个推销电视的年轻女士却给她买了药，Linda意识到为他人着想和表现出善良是爱的真正本质。她也对自己许下了承诺，不要轻易拒绝陌生人，也许他们是你的帮手。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这次她真的很生气，打开了门。”可知，第一段可描写Linda打开门的反应，之前的两个女士给她买了药，Linda真诚地感谢她们，并为她之前所做的事向女士们道歉。后来，他们愉快地聊了很多当地发生的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“半小时后，女士们带着温暖的微笑离开了。”可知，第二段可描写Linda得到帮助之后的内心活动和感悟。
2.续写线索：Linda生气开门——发现对方给自己买了药——Linda真诚感谢并道歉——Linda感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
关闭：shut / close
购买：purchase/ buy
帮助：assist / help
情绪类
感谢：sincerely thank/ show one’s appreciation
生气：angry / angrily / mad
【点睛】[高分句型1] With concerned looks on their faces, they explained to her that they purchased some medicine from a nearby drugstore and hoped that she could get a quick recovery. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] She realized that thinking about others and showing kindness is the real essence of love. (运用了动名词作主语)
山东省临沂市2019-2020学年高二下学期期末考试试卷英语试卷
【47题答案】
【答案】One possible version:
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The only person I could think of was Mort. Without hesitation I headed for the store, knocked at the door and waited anxiously. After a while, the door opened and there stood Mort, confused. Before he could ask me anything, I poured out what my family was facing. ''So, could you possibly loan my father $325 '' I could feel my face hot. Beyond my expectation, he turned around, returned with $325 in an envelope and handed it to me directly, saying ''I'll take back half your wages until it's repaid.'' ''Thank you,'' I said in a trembling voice, trying to fight back my tears. Then I hurried back home.
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I calmly handed the man the money. That night I was a hero to my family. But the real hero wag Mort Robin, who not only helped my family out, but also quietly raised my salary every month. By summer, I was earning $2.50 an hour, double the original wage. Finally, I paid off the debt. It was Mr. Robin who made the world a better place for me.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。
【详解】这是一篇记叙文，文章记叙了作者因为家庭经济困难而去一个熟食店打工，有一天家里遭遇困难时，打工店老板Mort Robin慷慨援助的故事。
续写部分分为2段，第一段的开头是：我唯一能想到的人是莫特。……，根据前文作者急需用钱而不知所措的描述可知接下本段要讲作者向莫特诉说了家里遭遇并借钱的经过，可适当增加细节描写。第二段的开头是：我平静地把钱递给了那个人。……，根据前文作者家遭遇这个人逼债的细节描写可知本段要着重写作者为家庭解除危机之后的状况以及最终他通过辛勤工作把从老板那里借来的钱还清等情况。
【点睛】续写部分以第一人称用一般过去时叙事，多处运用人物心理等细节描写，如：I could feel my face hot. /I said in a trembling voice, trying to fight back my tears.同时分词状语、介词短语等的添加使得人物的情绪更加饱满。如：Without hesitation./confused./Beyond my expectation,/trying to fight back my tears.