(共27张PPT)
Unit 1 A new start
Writing
九寨风光
热带风情
North Pole北极风光
英伦风情
Writing——旅游日记
日记是以记叙一天生活中所见、所闻、所做或所思为内容的一种文体。写英语日记一般要注意以下几点:
1. 规范的格式:英语日记通常由两部分组成,即书端和正文。书端用于记载写日记的日期、星期和天气情况。它位于正文上面的第一行,日期、星期和天气写在第一行的右上角。
2. 正确的人称:日记是对生活的记录,是把自己一天中最有意义的事情记录下来所形成的书面材料,故写日记多用第一人称。
3. 正确的时态:日记一般记叙当天发生的事,因此多用过去时态。但如谈论个人感悟或说明客观事实、普遍真理时,可用现在时态。
假如你随一个中学生代表团去英国访问,期间你们参观了英国伦敦郊区的一个名叫Camden Town的小镇,请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。 1. 旅行的地点、人物、时间。
2. 你对小镇的印象; 小镇的建筑物。
3. 你的感受。
注意:1. 词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:leave a deep impression on pay a visit to参观 match搭配
第一步:布局谋篇很关键
审题
1. 确定体裁:本文为一篇____________;
2. 确定中心人称:本文主要人称为第一、三人称;
3. 确定主体时态:以______________为主。
构思
第一部分:概括今天过得很愉快,Camden Town给我留下了深刻的印象。
第二部分:_______________________。
第三部分:对旅行做出评价,谈谈自己的感受。
英文日记
一般过去时
记叙当天的参观过程
第二步:核心词汇想周全
1. ________________________ 给……留下深刻印象
2. ________________ 与……不同
3. ________________ 参观
leave a deep impression on
be different from
pay a visit to
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1. This morning, _________________________, we started to go to Camden Town by bus.
今天早上,吃过早饭后,我们乘公共汽车去了卡姆登镇。(时间状语从句)
2. _________________________________________
我们到达的时候是八点钟。
3. The town was clean and tidy. It was different from ____________________________________.
这个小镇干净、整洁,与我以前在其他地方见过的小镇不一样。
(what引导宾语从句)
after we had breakfast
It was eight o' clock when we arrived.
what I had seen in other places before
4. After a short break, ______________________________________.
短暂休息后,我们参观了这个小镇。(pay a visit to)
5. Strangely enough, ________________________________________.
You even feel __________________________.
奇怪的是,它们搭配得如此巧妙,你甚至感觉它们就像一幅油画一样。(match;宾语从句)
we paid a visit to the town
they match each other very well
they make a beautiful picture
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1. 用which引导的定语从句改写句3
The town __________________________ was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.
2. 用so...that...引导的结果状语从句改写句5
Strangely enough, they match each other ____________________________ they make a beautiful picture.
which was clean and tidy
so well that you even feel
第五步:过渡衔接连成篇
April 14th, Sunday Fine
第一部分,开篇点题,指出旅行的地点,人物,时间。
We had today. Camden Town left me.
第二部分,详细讲述,详细讲述所参观的景点及活动。
This morning, after , we started to . It was eight o‘ clock . The town was different from in other places before. The people here were . After a short break, . There are and . Strangely enough, they so well that you even feel .
第三部分,对旅行做出评价,谈谈自己的感受。
Although . By taking part in activities,
I developed .
佳作欣赏
April 14th, Sunday Fine
We had a wonderful time today. Camden Town left a deep impression on me.
This morning, after we had breakfast, we started to go to Camden Town by bus. It was eight o‘ clock when we arrived. The town which was clean and tidy was different from what I had seen in other places before. The people here were friendly and kind. After a short break, we paid a visit to the town. There are high buildings and old-style houses. Strangely enough, they match each other so well that you even feel they make a beautiful picture.
Although I was tired, I felt excited. By taking part in these interesting activities, I developed a deep interest in British culture.
为了使同学们的课外生活更加丰富多彩,让同学们更加了解平昌,热爱家乡,上周末,我们学校组织了一次到平昌驷马双城村(Two Cities)的文化之旅(cultural hiking),请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。
1. 旅行的地点、人物、时间。
2. 你对小镇的印象; 小镇的建筑物。
3. 你的感受。
注意:1. 词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:leave a deep impression on pay a visit to参观 match搭配
学生体验
平昌驷马双城村 Two Cities
Thank you
罗中立美术馆Art Gallery
Entertainment休闲娱乐
有很多高的和旧的建筑搭配得很巧妙,感觉像一幅美丽的画。