牛津译林版八年级上册Unit 7 Seasons单元话题满分范文必背（含解析）

Unit 7 Seasons
单元话题满分范文必背
1．你最喜欢哪个季节？为什么？请以“My favourite season”为题写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的季节。
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【答案】参考范文：
My favourite season
My favourite season is autumn. Because the weather isn’t too hot or too cold, and there is cool wind every day. When the leaves fall from the tree, the view will be very beautiful. The Mid-Autumn Day is in autumn. All of my family members often have dinner together, we often enjoy ourselves on that day.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。题目要求是根据提示要点，请你以“My favourite season”为题，介绍你最喜欢的季节，并说明喜欢的原因。
2.写法指导：本文主要时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称展开介绍，写作时，首先要介绍自己最喜欢的季节；然后阐述喜欢的原因；文章要紧扣题目要点，内容要完整，表述要准确，语言的表述要符合语法结构，造句要符合英语表达习惯。
2．假如你是 Jenny,你将要参加学校英文报举办的以“ My Favourite Season”为题的征文活动,请根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你喜欢的季节—春天。
天气：气候温暖,树叶变绿,鲜花盛开
活动:
1.野餐、聚会
2.其他活动 (请你补充)
作文要求：
1. 词数60左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入词数);
2.在作文中不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
My Favourite Season
Different people like different seasons. For me, spring is my favourite season….
【答案】例文
My Favourite Season
Different people like different seasons. For me, spring is my favourite season. I like it because the weather is usually warm. It's not too cold or too hot. The leaves turn green and the flowers come out, so the air in spring is fresh. Spring is also a good time for picnics and parties.
In spring, I usually go hiking with my family or friends. And I also enjoy flying kites in the park. Spring makes me feel happy and relaxed. I really like it!
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇记叙文，假如你是Jenny，将要参加学校英文报举办的以“My Favourite Season”为题的征文活动，要求根据提示内容介绍自己最喜欢的季节—春天。写作时，要根据提示内容，紧扣主题，写出春天的特点；要注意主谓一致、时态呼应、用词贴切等。
2.例文分析：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。开篇首先点明主题，然后阐述了喜欢春天的原因，以及在春天自己喜欢的活动，最后再次与开头呼应，表明自己喜欢春天。
3.高分亮点：
短语：turn green，come out，go hiking。
句型：I like it because the weather is usually warm. 我喜欢它，因为天气通常是温暖的。这里是because引导的原因状语从句。
It's not too cold or too hot. 它既不太热也不太冷。too…to…太而…不能…。
And I also enjoy flying kites in the park. 我也喜欢在公园里放风筝。enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事。
3．写一篇以“The Weather in My Hometown”为题的短文，介绍你家乡的天气。
注意：1. 书写工整，语句通顺，连贯。2. 字数80字左右。
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【答案】例文
The Weather in My Hometown
Hello, everyone! I’m from Nanchang. Do you know what the weather is like here Let me tell you!
In spring, the weather changes a lot. Sometimes it’s warm, and sometimes it’s cold. In summer, it’s hot. But I like hot weather because I like swimming. Autumn is very nice. It is not too hot or too cold. I usually go climbing in such weather. In winter, it’s cold and sometimes it is snowy. I often make snowmen with my friends when it snows.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The Weather in My Hometown”为题，介绍自己家乡的天气。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可以从四季不同的天气来描述，介绍四季的不同以及自己的偏爱并说明原因。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
4．每个季节都有其独特的美丽，在不同的季节我们感受着不同的风景，体验着不同的乐趣。请以“My favourite season”为题，写一篇作文。
要点:1.季节的名称; 2.这个季节的天气、景色; 3.在这个季节中能做的活动; 4.感受(80词左右)。
My favourite season
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【答案】Autumn is my favourite season.I like it because autumn is so beautiful.
In the autumn,the weather is cool.There are lots of good things,fruits,crops,vegetables …and so on.Autumn is a harvest season,a golden season.
I like autumn because the Mid-Autumn festival is in it.This year the Mid-autumn festival is almost coming together with our National Day.I’m so happy and so excited,I can eat moon cakes again.I can receive the presents from my father,too.On this Mid-autumn festival,I will go hiking,I will eat moon cakes with my father and we can stay with my family.Oh,what a wonderful season!
In the golden season,we have begun the new term,I believe that I can get a good result.
I like autumn,what about you
【解析】
这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如lots of，and so on，so happy and so excited，go hiking，stay with my family，in the golden season等。而I like it because autumn is so beautiful./ I will eat moon cakes with my father and we can stay with my family. I believe that I can get a good result.等多种结构句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。特别是最后I like autumn, what about you ，让人倍感亲切。
点睛：这是一篇提纲作文。根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，将提示内容翻译成英文，同时进行适当的发挥，扩展成一个段落，最后连起来即可。
5．以“My favourite season”为题写一篇短文，内容包括:
最喜欢的季节 春天
天气 晴朗，万里无云；天气暖和；树叶变绿了 ，人们经常看到蜜蜂和蝴蝶在花丛中飞舞。
适合的活动 外出野炊的最佳时间，我们可以享受自然； 在有风的日子里我们可以放风筝，放风筝很有趣，并且能够帮助我们锻炼以保持健康。
节日 我喜欢每年的植树节(Tree Planting Day)。人们去打扫公园，植树。
感受 …（自拟一点）
My favourite season
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【答案】My favourite season
Spring is my favourite season. It’s sunny and there’s not a cloud in the sky. It is warm and the leaves turn green. People often see bees and butterflies flying among the flowers.
Spring is the best time to go on a picnic. We can enjoy the natural world. We can fly kites on windy days. Flying kites is interesting and it can help us exercise to keep healthy.
I like Tree Planting Day every year. People go to plant trees and clean up the park on that day.
Spring is the beginning of the year. Spring is wonderful.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以My favorite season为题，介绍自己最喜欢的季节—春天。题目中给出了具体的写作内容，包括春天的天气情况、适合做的活动、春天的节日等，其中最后一条需要学生们自己发挥想象力，介绍一下自己的感受。我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，要包括题目要求的所有信息，不要遗漏要点。首先经过审题，梳理出具体的写作提纲，如分几个主要内容，各个内容所占篇幅，应用的时态、人称等。通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要以一般现在时态、第一人称为主来叙述，注意使用谓语动词的正确形式。写作中需要注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐句翻译表格中的内容，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句为主，穿插使用并列句、复合句或其他复杂句式。选择适当的单词和短语，并使用正确形式，如注意名词的数、形容词和副词的基本用法等。另外语句之间注意使用连接成分，使文章形成一个逻辑的整体，上下文意思连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，作者根据题目要求介绍了自己最喜欢的季节—春天。首先短文内容完整，包含题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。文章中作者从春天的天气情况、适合做的活动、春天的节日以及自己的感受等方面做了介绍。内容充实、有条理，文章分成四段，每一段叙述一个方面，结构清晰、有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态为主，人称有第一人称和第三人称，注意了谓语动词的形式变化，并正确使用了名词、形容词、副词和介词短语等，语法规范，符合英语的表达习惯。句式完整，以简单句结构为主，句式简洁，表达准确。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如It is warm and the leaves turn green. 、People often see bees and butterflies flying among the flowers.、Flying kites is interesting and it can help us exercise to keep healthy.、People go to plant trees and clean up the park on that day等等。
6．请根据我格中的提示，以The Four Seasons为题，写一篇作文，可适当拓展。字数80字左右。
Spring 天气温暖潮湿，可以植树种花。
Summer 天气炎热，可以去游泳和吃冰淇淋。
Autumn 天气宜人，是旅游的好季节。
Winter 天气寒冷，可以玩雪和滑冰。
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【答案】例文：
The Four Seasons
It is usually warm and wet in spring. Spring is the best time to plant trees and flowers.
It is very hot in summer. The most popular sport in summer is swimming. And it feels good to eat ice cream in hot weather.
Autumn is my favourite season. The weather is pleasant. I like flying kites and travel around in autumn.
Winter is cold and snowy. It is very exciting to play with snow and make snowmen. Skating is very popular in winter.
【解析】
1.题干解读：根据表格提示写一年四季的天气特点和每个季节可以做的事情；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写一年四季的天气，用一般现在时态，注意主谓一致性，在某个季节用介词in，季节前不用冠词the。
7．请根据以下信息，以“The seasons of the year”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求： 1.不要写成诗歌，字数80左右；
2. 不要遗漏任何要点，句子表达正确，行文连贯。
春季 晴朗多风，放风筝，蜜蜂和蝴蝶在花间飞舞
夏季 炎热，游泳，吃冰淇淋
秋季 树叶变黄，农民收获
冬季 寒冷，穿厚衣服保暖，雪天堆雪人
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【答案】例文
The seasons of the year
In a year, there are four seasons: spring, summer, autumn and winter. Each season has its own characteristics.
Spring days are windy and bright. The kids enjoy flying kites. The bees and butterflies fly among flowers. It’s hot in summer. People often go swimming and enjoy eating ice-cream. In autumn, the leaves turn yellow and the farmers harvest. It’s cold in winter, people have to wear thick clothes to keep warm. The children can be happy to make a snowman.
I like different scenery all year round.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据表格提示的内容要点，写一篇短文介绍不同季节的特点，属于给材料作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三人称和一般现在时为主，以第一人称为辅展开叙述。写作时紧承表格提示的内容，先总说每个季节都有自己的特点，再具体描述春夏秋冬四季不同的风景和特点，最后表达自己的喜欢之情。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
8．根据以下提示，写一篇短文介绍一下中国的气候(climate)。
1．中国的气候类型很多；
2．在南部，夏季和冬季的气温变化很小；
3．北方的气温则大不相同：夏季穿的衣服很少，冬季要穿厚重的羊毛衣服或毛皮大衣；
4．西南地区冬季气候温和，而夏季则十分炎热；
5．东部地区，夏季炎热，冬季寒冷，春天温暖宜人，秋季凉爽。
要求：语言流畅，条理清晰，词数不少于70。
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Summers are usually hot, and winters are usually cold. Springs are comfortably warm and autumns are pleasantly cool.
【答案】China has many different kinds of climate. In the southern part of China, the temperature changes very little between summer and winier. But the temperature in the northern part is quite different. In those areas, people wear light clothes during summer,and they need heavy wool or fur clothing in winter. In the southwest, the climate is warm during the winter, but the summer is very hot.
In the eastern part of China, temperature in summer is very different from that in winter. Summers are usually hot, and winters are usually cold. Springs. are comfortably warm,and autumns are pleasantly cool.
【解析】
本文要求介绍中国的气候，动笔前要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织作文，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥。根据提示可知本文使用一般现在时。另外，注意标点符号以及大小写问题。
重点句型：1. But....is quite different: 但...是不一样的
Temperature in summer is very different from that in winter:夏天的气温与冬天的气温非常不一样
In those areas, people wear light clothes during summer,and they need heavy wool or fur clothing in winter. 在那些地区，人们夏天穿薄衣服，冬天穿厚厚的羊毛或皮衣。
重点短语：1. many different kinds of: 各种各样的
2.be different from:和...不同
9．请以 The Weather in China为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，要点如下：
1. 中国大部分地区的春天很冷，春天在二月份到来；
2. 夏天很热，持续（last）大约三个月，七﹑八月份最热；
3. 秋天在八月份到来，天气可能很暖和；
4. 冬天始于十一月份，一月份最冷，你需要穿很多保暖的衣服；
5. 来中国的最佳时间是春天或秋天。
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【答案】 The Weather in China
What’s the weather like in China Spring is cold in most part of China. It usually comes in February. Summer is often very hot. It lasts about three months. The hottest months are July and August. Autumn starts in August. The weather can be quirt warm in autumn. Winter starts in November. January is the coldest month. You need to wear lots of warm clothes in winter. The best time to come to China in spring or autumn.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达以“The Weather in China”为题，结合所给的写作材料，介绍中国一年四季的气候。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文章以“What’s the weather like in China ”问句开头，文笔活泼，直奔主题；文中in most part of China，in August，the coldest month，in autumn，The best time to come…, or等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密, 表达恰切，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。
10．假如你(Lingling)的英国笔友 Jim要来中国参观，向你询问有关中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你给你的笔友写一封80词左右的信，介绍一下中国的气候特点。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I'm very glad that you'll come to visit China. You aske me about the weather in China. There are four seasons—spring,summer,autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It's often rainy. Compared to other seasons,winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows,you can come at this time of year. But it depends on your interest. I think the best time to visit China is in spring or autumn because the weather is not too hot or too cold. It's very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China,such as the Great Wall,the West Lake,Mount Tai and so on. I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Lingling
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。向笔友Jim介绍中国的天气情况及来中国的最好时间等。
2.写作指导：本文以第二人称和第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。按照四季的情况来介绍中国的天气特点及来中国的最好时间。写作时要保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。