牛津译林版八年级上册Unit 7 Seasons写作主题：季节与气候（含解析）

译林版七上Unit 7 Seasons 写作主题：季节与气候
一、话题分析
本单元的话题是“季节与气候”，要求学生能简单介绍一年四季或者某个季节，本单元写作要求同学们能根据相关信息提示简单地介绍季节与气候。内容包括特定季节的时间、气候、日常活动以及给人带来的感受等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点：
1. 能用含有-y的形容词介绍某个季节的天气；
2. 能用丰富的动词和句式结构描述季节特有的活动；
3. 能正确使用标点符号；
4. 能正确书写英语句子。
二、写作步骤
步骤一：确定介绍季节与气候的内容和顺序。
步骤二：列举介绍季节与气候的句型，多多益善。
步骤三：成段成篇，修改完善。
三、词汇积累
1 look cool 看起来很酷
2 the rest time to do sth. 做某事的最好时间
3 in summer 在夏天
4 go swimming 去游泳
5 be full of 充满……
6 forget to grow 忘记了生长
7 fly far away 飞往远方
8 play among flowers 在花丛中玩
9 turn brown 变黄
10 rhyme with 与……押韵
11 on a hot summer afternoon 在一个炎热的夏天下午
12 drop below… 下降到……以下
13 the lowest temperature 最低温度
14 stay above zero 在零度以上
15 a bit 有一点
四、句型积累
1 I bet you’ll look cool and feel cool with nothing on! 我赌你什么都不穿看起来会很酷并感觉很凉爽。
2 It’s the best time to play footfall outside. 它是户外踢足球的最佳时机。
3 The days of spring are windy and bright. 春天是风和日丽的时节。
4 What a perfect time to fly a kite! 是放风筝的绝佳时机！
5 How do people feel on a hot summer afternoon 在炎热的夏天下午，人们感觉如何呢？
6 This is Aunt Jane speaking. 我是简阿姨。
7 The temperature is usually below zero and it is often snowy. 这里的气温通常在零度以下，并且经常有大雪。
8 It is exciting to have big snowball fights. 打一场雪仗是很令人兴奋的。
五、写作训练
1．大自然赋予了我们四个美好的季节，每个季节都有很多快乐的事可做。请以"Seasons are my friends"为题，写出你对四季的感情。
要求：
1）写出四季的特点。
2）词数：80左右。
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2．
你所在的班级正在开展作文比赛，要求你以四季的气候以及你们在四季的户外活动写一篇短文。
提示：1)春天，风和日丽，是放风筝的好时节；蜜蜂和蝴蝶在花丛中飞舞；
2)夏天，最高温度可达38 ℃，懒散的下午，你喜欢坐在树荫下吃冰淇淋；
3)秋天，随着白天变短，温度下降了；农民们忙于收获庄稼；
4)冬天，比较冷，经常下雪，大家不得不穿上厚实衣服来保暖，但可以打雪仗，堆雪人
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3．根据以下提示，写一篇短文介绍一下中国的气候(climate)。
1)中国的气候类型很多；
2)在南部，夏季和冬季的气温变化很小；
3)北方的气温则大不相同：夏季穿的衣服很少，冬季要穿厚重的羊毛衣服或毛皮大衣；
4)西南地区冬季气候温和，而夏季则十分炎热；
5)东部地区，夏季炎热，冬季寒冷，春天温暖宜人，秋季凉爽。
要求：语言流畅，条理清晰，词数不少于70。
Summers are usually hot, and winters are usually cold. Springs are comfortably warm and autumns are pleasantly cool.
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4．请介绍一下你最喜欢的季节。你为什么喜欢这个季节？在你喜欢的季节里你进行哪些活动？
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5．简要写一写你所居住的地方的季节特点，告诉大家你喜欢的季节是哪一个，并说明你为什么喜欢这个季节。词数70左右。
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1．【参考范文】
Seasons are my friends
I have a lot of friends. Seasons are my friends too. Spring is the first season. It is warm and sunny, and sometimes it's rainy. Spring is very beautiful. Look, flowers are nice. Listen, the birds are singing. I like spring. Summer is very hot. I like to stay at home and eat ice cream. But my classmates like to go swimming in summer. Many people like autumn very much because autumn is the best season to harvest. It's cool and sunny. Sometimes it's cloudy. Winter is the last season. It's cold and sometimes it's snowy. So I can make snowmen and have snowball fights with my classmates. I think winter is more beautiful than spring.
【解析】这是一篇命题作文，要求以“Seasons are my friends”为题写出对四季的感情，开篇可以直接点题，说明四季是我的朋友，然后再从春夏秋冬的特点逐一介绍即可。注意文中时态应使用一般现在时态，以第一人称为主，适当使用一些连词会使文章更通顺。
【点评】考查命题作文。这是一篇优秀的范文，文章条理清楚，其中because autumn is the best season to harvest原因状语从句的应用让人看到了作者的英语知识掌握较为娴熟也是文章的一大亮点。
2．【参考范文】
Spring days are windy and bright. It's a perfect time to fly a kite. The bees and butterflies fly among flowers. The highest temperature in summer can be 38℃. We enjoy eating ice cream under the shade of trees on lazy afternoons. In autumn, as the days become shorter, the temperature drops. The farmers are busy harvesting crops. It's quite cold in winter. And it is always snowy. We have to wear thick clothes to keep warm But we can have snowball fights and make snowmen.
【解析】这是一篇提纲作文，要求以四季的气候以及在四季的户外活动写一篇短文。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【点评】这篇文章表达准确、逻辑清晰、上下文连贯，准确地使用了连词、副词、固定搭配等，使文章结构完整，层次分明。其中一些用法，如a perfect time to fly a kite；among flowers；can be；enjoy eating；the shade of；as the days become shorter；are busy harvesting crops；have to wear thick clothes；to keep warm；have snowball fights；make snowmen等，都是可圈可点之处。
3．【参考范文】
China has many different kinds of climate. In the southern part of China, the temperature changes very little between summer and winner. But the temperature in the northern part is quite different. In those areas, people wear light clothes during summer, and they need heavy wool or fur clothing in winter. In the southwest, the climate is warm during the winter, but the summer is very hot.
In the eastern part of China, temperature in summer is very different from that in winter. Summers are usually hot, and winters are usually cold. Springs. are comfortably warm, and autumns are pleasantly cool.
【解析】这是一篇提纲作文，要求介绍中国的气候，动笔前要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织作文，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥。根据提示可知本文使用一般现在时，人称为第三人称。另外，注意标点符号以及大小写问题。
【点评】这篇文章内容完整、语句通顺、上下文连贯，使用了固定用法，使文章条理清晰、层次分明。亮点句型：But....is quite different，但……是不一样的；Temperature in summer is very different from that in winter，夏天的气温与冬天的气温非常不一样；In those areas, people wear light clothes during summer, and they need heavy wool or fur clothing in winter，在那些地区，人们夏天穿薄衣服，冬天穿厚厚的羊毛或皮衣。
4．【参考范文】
There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn and winter. I think spring is very interesting, and I love spring best. Spring is neither cold nor hot. And in spring snow begins to melt, weather becomes warm, and the trees turn green. I'd like to play outside in spring. I can fly a kite. I can climb the hill. I can ...In a word, spring is my favourite season.
【解析】这是一篇记叙文，用一般现在时进行描述，内容突对最爱的季节的介绍，以及在最爱的季节里最爱的活动等个人信息，要适当运用连词，使文章关系紧密。
【点评】开篇即点明了主题， I think spring is very interesting, and I love spring best. 简单明了，全文的语法时态无误，并适当使用了连词 neither cold nor hot 和表示总结性的介词短语 In a word，全文覆盖了所有必要的信息。
5．【参考范文】
There are four seasons in a year in our city. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. In spring, it is warm. In summer, the weather is sunny and hot. In autumn, it is cool and windy. Winter is cold and snowy. I like winter best. It's my favorite season. Why Because I like to make a snowman with my friends
【解析】本文是一篇介绍季节的说明文，应该用一般现在时进行描述，内容突出你所喜欢的季节特点和原因，不要逐字翻译，要适当运用连词，使文章关系紧密。
【点评】开篇使用了先分散后总结的形式， 简单明了，全文的语法时态无误，并适当使用了连词和最高级，例如 I like winter best 和 Why Because I like to make a snowman with my friends ，全文覆盖了所有必要的信息。