(新课标) Unit 10 If you go to the party, you'll have a . Section B 3a-Self check 写作课优质课课件(共40张)

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人教新目标版 七年级(上)
Unit 10 If you go to the party,
you’ll have a great time!
Period 4 Section B 3a-Self check
写作课优质课
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Learning aims
1.在听说活动中掌握下列词汇：possible, solutions, bring, project
掌握句型：
—What will you do if you visit an old people's home
—If I do that，I'll bring the old people some flowers.
2. 通过分析阅读文本，能够扩充内容，起草作文，能够综合运
用所学的知识来撰写他人的问题及解决办法的小短文。
3.通过练习题进一步巩固if引导的条件状语从句的法；使学生学，
会处理学习和生活中遇到的问题。
4.通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点，接纳建议并
修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
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Revision
Pre-writing
Look and say.
What are you going to do this weekend
go shopping
do my homework
I am going to go shopping.(I will go shopping)
If you are free,what will you do this weekend
--If I am free, I will go shopping this weekend.
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Lead in
Pre-writing
Look and say.
I don’t have many friends. What do you think I should do Can you give me some advice
If you join a sports team, you’ll make many new friends.
I think you should try to play
Games with your classmates.
I think you should join a club.
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Practice
Pre-writing
Look and say.
Do you have any worries or problems
What’s your biggest worries or problems
List the problems and worries you have in life.
I often get bad grades.
I feel sleepy
in class.
I can’t learn math well.
relationship problems
argue with parents
have trouble with friends
make teachers angry
physical problems
schoolwork
problems
too heavy
too short
poor eyesight
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Discussion
Pre-writing
Look and say.
How do you deal with your problems or worries
I usually keep them to myself.
I’m afraid to tell others.
I usually tell them to my teachers or
parents, I can get help from them.
I usually share them with my friends .
Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half.
I usually run away from my problems.
It’s not good. So I learn to try my best
to solve them.
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Talking
Pre-writing
Talk and find.
3a
Talk to someone you know. Find out his/her three biggest worries. Try to think of some solutions to the problems and write them down.
Problems Possible solutions
too heavy
eat less junk food and more vegetables, do more exercise
be always late for school
don’t stay up late, buy an alarm clock, ride your bike to go to school
physics is difficult
take notes in class, do more exercises, ask the teacher for help
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Writing
While-writing
Talk and find.
3b
Write about your friend’s first problem and the possible solutions.
Use the structures below to help you plan your writing.
My friend ______ has a problem.
He/She ______________________________________.
I think he/she should __________________________
____________________________________________.
If he/she _____________________________________，
he/she will ___________________________________.
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and learn.
分析3b中的作文提纲，可以看出。我们需写三个方面的内容就能轻松完成一篇小作文。
首先，写清楚朋友的名字及其现在存在的问题或困难。
然后，运用should写出自己给他的建议。并用if从句来进一步说明自己建议将会起到的作用。
最后，复读一遍作文来检查有没有错误。
写作指导
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Writing
While-writing
Talk and find.
3b
Write about your friend’s first problem and the possible solutions.
Use the structures below to help you plan your writing.
My friend ______ has a problem.
He/She _________________________.
I think he/she should _____________
_______________________________.
If he/she _______________________，
he/she will ______________________.
Framework(结构)
My
writing
Beginning
problem
Main
body
solutions
/advice
Ending
results
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Writing
While-writing
Talk and find.
3b
Write about your friend’s first problem and the possible solutions.
Use the structures below to help you plan your writing.
My friend ______ has a problem.
He/She ______________________________________.
I think he/she should __________________________
____________________________________________.
If he/she _____________________________________，
he/she will ___________________________________.
John
is too heavy.
eat less junk food and more
vegetables, and he should do more exercise.
does more exercise,
be healthier.
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Writing
While-writing
Look and write.
3c
Now write your advice for your friend’s second and third problem. Use the structures in 3b to help you.
My friend also has two other problems.
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
Do you know how to write a good composition
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
writing steps
1 审题
2 列提纲
3 用相关的连接词
find out what to write.
ending
beginning
main part
an outline
使用连接词
4 添加好词语
5 初写与美化
词语丰富
句式丰富，调整文章结构
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
审题2 语态
审题1 时态
审题 3 人称
审题4 要点
1.审题
第三人称
1 你的朋友的三个困难
2 您的建议
What to
write
一般现在时、主动语态
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
2：列提纲
Outline
beginning
My friend John has a problem
main point suggestions
I believe he should......
ending result
If he works hard,
he’ll be successful.
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
3：列出连词
表示时间和顺序
表示转折对比
表示总结的词语
表示递进
表示列举的词语
表示原因或结果
表示强调：
first second next
but ,however ,although
in one's opinion
in short，in a word
what's more
for example，such as，
because、 so
in fact
表示观点
4列出好词好句
Outline
1 It is +adj+(for/of sb)+ to do sth
2The worst thing is to do nothing.
3 Talking to people helps a lot.
8 have problems with
9 feel better/worse 10 keep doing
11 make a mistake
12 be halfway to doing
4 unless …5 if…
6 as soon as….
7 It’s best to do…
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
passage
美化一 杜绝语法和拼写错误
美化二 杜绝词语与句型错误
美化三 让词语与句型丰富
美化四 卷面整洁、字迹工整
5 美化
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
6：范文欣赏
My friend has one problem.
He is too heavy. I think she should eat less junk food and eat more vegetables and fruit. I think she also should get more exercise. If she eats more vegetables and fruit, she will eat less junk food. If she gets more exercise, she’ll be much thinner soon.
My friend also has two other problems. She is always late for school. I think she shouldn’t stay up late on weekdays. She should get an alarm clock. She should ride her bike to school. If she has an alarm clock, she will get up early. If she rides her bike to school, it will cost her less time to get to school.
She also thinks physics is too difficult for her. I think she should take notes in class. She should also do more exercises. She should ask the teacher for help after class. If she asks the teacher for help, she will get more helpful advice.
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Writing practice
While-writing
Look and write.
假如你是Li Hua， 你的朋友Alisa 最近很低落，受到很多事情的困扰。你们聊天后你了解了她最困扰的三件事。这时你收到了Alisa妈妈的求助信息，阅读信息并根据你了解到的情况，给Alisa写一封鼓励信。
Li Hua,
Could you give a hand Your friend Alisa looks upset these days. Can you talk to her and find out what worries her If you can think of some solutions, write a letter to encourage her. Thank you.
Alisa’s mother
Alisa’s mother
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写作步骤: 1. 审
审
审体裁 ________________
审人称 ________________
审时态 ________________
应用文
第二人称
一般现在时为主
Beginning
Development
Ending
outline
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写作步骤: 2. 抓
1. 表明对Alisa的关心和理解。
2. 指出她最困扰的三件事并给出建议。
3. 鼓励Alisa。
抓要点
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写作步骤: 2. 抓
Beginning
outline
I know ...
I can understand you and I think ...
your interview chart
I believe ... and I'll ...
Development
Ending
I know you are unhappy these days. I can understand you and I think I can help you.
your interview chart
I believe you will be happy again soon. And I’ll always be with you.
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写作步骤: 3. 扩
I know you _____________ these days.
I write to tell you that I can understand you and I think I can _____.
Beginning
Why do you write this letter
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写作微策略：
在模块帮助下写出内容。
Development
I know you have a problem about _______
I think you should ____________.
If you _____________, you will __________
Another problem is that __________
I think you should _______.
If you __________, you will ______
You’ll never worry about ____, either.
I think you should _______.
If you __________, you will ______
写作步骤: 3. 扩
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写作步骤: 3. 扩 Add more after reading.
写作微策略：以读促写。（寻找相关话题的文章）
Dear Merry,
These days, I have problems with my study. In school I can’t listen to teachers carefully because I always feel tired and sleepy. I don’t spend time with friends after class either, because I think it’s a waste （浪费）of time. I even miss writing some answers in the test.
At home, I can’t get my homework done every night. My parents don’t let me stay up. So I have to get up early the next morning to finish it. Lately, I even get a bad headache.
How can I solve these problems
Yours,
Liu Ya
can’t listen to teachers carefully
don’t spend time with friends after class
can’t get my homework done
get a bad headache
Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写作步骤: 3. 扩 Add more after reading.
写作微策略：以读促写。（寻找相关话题的文章）
Dear Liu Ya,
When you have problems listening to teachers carefully in class, you can ask your teachers or desk mates to remind you often. Then spending time talking about many different things with friends can make you happy. It’s not a waste of time.
As for homework, when it’s hard to get it finished, one thing you can try is setting goals for yourself. Ask your parents to help you. You must take a break if you don’t feel well. You might be surprised but a short rest can help you get more done! Lastly, if you don’t worry and have enough sleep, your headache will leave you.
Yours,
Merry
ask your teachers or desk mates to remind you often
spend time talking about many different things with friends
set goals for yourself
don’t worry and have enough sleep
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
What I can learn from reading
从内容中借鉴
problems
solutions
can’t listen to teachers carefully
don’t spend time with friends after class
can’t get my homework done
get a bad headache
ask your teachers or desk mates to remind you often
spend time talking about many different things with friends
set goals for yourself
don’t worry and have enough sleep
Presentation
Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写作步骤: 3. 扩 Add more after reading.
Dear Merry,
These days, I have problems with my study. In school I can’t listen to teachers carefully because I always feel tired and sleepy. I don’t spend time with friends after class either, because I think it’s a waste（浪费）of time. I even miss writing some answers in the test.
At home, I can’t get my homework done every night. My parents don’t let me stay up. So I have to get up early the next morning to finish it. Lately, I even get a bad headache.
How can I solve these problems
Yours,
Liu Ya
What I can learn from reading
增加解释和细节
because I always feel tired and sleepy
because I think it’s a waste（浪费）of time
My parents don’t let me stay up. So I have to get up early the next morning to finish it.
写作微策略：以读促写。（寻找相关话题的文章）
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写作步骤: 3. 扩 Add more after reading.
Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
Dear Liu Ya,
When you have problems listening to teachers carefully in class,
you can ask your teachers or deskmates to remind you often. Then spending time talking about many different things with friends can make you happy. It’s not a waste of time.
As for homework, when it’s hard to get it finished, one thing you can
try is setting goals for yourself. Ask your parents to help you. You must take a break if you don’t feel well. You might be surprised but a short rest can help you get more done! Lastly, if you don’t worry and have enough sleep, your headache will leave you.
Yours,
Merry
What I can learn from reading
变换句型句式
When … , you can …
Then spending …
As for … , one thing … is …
Ask …
You might …
Lastly, if … , … will …
写作微策略：以读促写。（寻找相关话题的文章）
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Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写作步骤: 4. 连
按逻辑顺序。
2. 连接词的使用。
写并列内容
1. First/Firstly, your _________.
2. Then/Second/Secondly/What's more, _________.
3. Lastly/Moreover, _________.
What’s your experience
Development
Presentation
Writing guide
While-writing
Look and write.
写作步骤: 5. 抄
策略：字母为首，间距为辅，压线保稳，倾斜最美。
Dear Alisa,
How are you these days I find something troubles you and makes you upset. I'm writing to help you.
When you have problems learning English, you can ask our English teacher or classmates for advice. Let’s join an English club and we can practice speaking English every day. Second, you become anxious easily before tests. Try to relax and tell yourself it doesn’t matter even if you get a bad grade. The aim of taking tests is to show what you know and what you don't know. As for your height, you are young and there’s still much time. If you jump and run more, you will get taller and taller.
Yours
Li Hua
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Practice
Post-writing
Ask and answer.
4
Your school is taking part in the project “We Can Help!” Add more items to the poster. Then talk about what you will do if you take part in the project.
We Can Help!
old people’s home visit___
school clean-up _______
children’s hospital visit__
____________________
____________________
A: What will you do if you visit an old people’s home
B: If I do that, I’ll bring the old people some flowers.
What will you do if you visit
an old people’s home
If I do that, I’ll bring the old people some flowers.
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Post-writing
Look and fill.
Self Check
If my family travels to a new country this summer,
I’ll send you a letter about my __________.
2. Will you watch the ______with me if you are free
this weekend
3. If the __________ stay out too late, their parents
will worry about them.
4. I’ll go to the ________ if it ends by 5:00 p.m.
experience
video
teenagers
meeting
1. Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.
meeting
teenagers
video
experience
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Post-writing
Self Check
Look and fill.
2. Complete the conversation with the words in the box.
if
are
will flight want sorry going
A: Hi, Sally. ____ you ____ to the party
tomorrow
B: I _____ to, but I can’t.
A: Oh! But _____ you don’t go to the party, you
_____ miss all the fun!
B: I know, but I got into a _____ with my parents.
A: Hmm… then you should just say _____ to your
parents.
B: I guess you’re right. I _____ talk to them
tonight.
Are
going
want
if
will
flight
sorry
will
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Post-writing
Self Check
Look and fill.
3. Use your information! What will you do if …
1. It rains all weekend
_________________________________
_________________________________
2. There’s an English test tomorrow
__________________________________
___________________________________
3. Your cousin decides to come and visit from another town
______________________________________
______________________________________
If there’s an English test tomorrow, I’ll go
over my books and notes.
If it rains all weekend, I’ll chat with my
friends online and play computer games.
If my cousin decides to come and visit from another town, I’ll have a party for him. And I’ll invite a lot of good friends to the party
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Emotion
Post-writing
Look and think.
Chicken soup
In our life, we often encounter(遇到)some problems and trouble. If you have problems, what will you do
If you have problems, you should never run away from them. We should always try to look for help and solve them. Please don’t forget that our parents have more experience than us, and are always there to help us.
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Class test
Post-writing
用括号内所给词的正确形式填空
1. I think she _______(be) a good teacher in five years.
2. There is more and more _______ (pollute) in that city now.
3. If it ___ (be) sunny, they ______( go) there by air.
4. Marry will get better grades if she ________ (study ) hard.
5. There ________ (be) a basketball match in our school tomorrow.
will be
polluted
is will go
studies
will be
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Homework
Your friend wants to invite you to his birthday party, please write a letter to your friend., and tell him if you go to the party, what will happen If you don’t go to the party, what will happen
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